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Posted: Wed Jul 27, 2005 1:12 am
Hello everyone~ heart I've just finished another WoW request drawing for a player in my server. Still more requests to go. sweatdrop His name is Borland. (^^) Reference were his taken screenshots of his character, done in OpenCanvas. I tried to make him sorta smug and intimidating looking like, "What you lookin' at?" cause that's how the Human race in WoW kinda look like. xd Hope I succeeded. I also tried to make each drawing personal to the player and the races different in appearence and character.  Thankyou for your time. whee
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Posted: Wed Jul 27, 2005 3:11 am
I love the perspective, though his feet are a bit funky.
The only real problem, I think, lies in the face. His eyes are far apart, and overall, the face is not as compelling as the rest of the image. He also doesn't look particularly smug.
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Posted: Wed Jul 27, 2005 4:26 am
The Iconoclast I love the perspective, though his feet are a bit funky. The only real problem, I think, lies in the face. His eyes are far apart, and overall, the face is not as compelling as the rest of the image. He also doesn't look particularly smug. Thanks for comments! heart I'll see if I get touch it up or something. Problem is I already sent it to the character's owner. sweatdrop @_@
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Posted: Wed Jul 27, 2005 3:58 pm
Yah, same as Icono there. Feet is wonk, and face is wonk...
But here is why I am here- what method do you use to "ink" your pic? Are you like a pen ninja, or are you a tabet type?`
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Posted: Wed Jul 27, 2005 4:23 pm
Parade Yah, same as Icono there. Feet is wonk, and face is wonk... But here is why I am here- what method do you use to "ink" your pic? Are you like a pen ninja, or are you a tabet type?` I knew the feet was weird but the face? sweatdrop Any more elaborate critism please or is it just my art style on the way I draw faces that is a turn off? @_@ sweatdrop Nothing good about the drawing? This image I used a tablet. For the comic pages I drew in pencil and worked on with pen. I do not remember what pen I used though... I tend to just grab whatever is around and work on it. Like how those comic paper were taken from my school's printer. domokun
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Posted: Wed Jul 27, 2005 6:38 pm
catcarousel Parade Yah, same as Icono there. Feet is wonk, and face is wonk... But here is why I am here- what method do you use to "ink" your pic? Are you like a pen ninja, or are you a tabet type?` I knew the feet was weird but the face? sweatdrop Any more elaborate critism please or is it just my art style on the way I draw faces that is a turn off? @_@ sweatdrop Nothing good about the drawing? This image I used a tablet. For the comic pages I drew in pencil and worked on with pen. I do not remember what pen I used though... I tend to just grab whatever is around and work on it. Like how those comic paper were taken from my school's printer. domokun Well the eyes are a bit too far apart. And the sideburns don't seem to curve in the same way the face does. The shoulder pads sit a bit funky on him, and the feet are to blobby. The good things are the detail, and the position. Also The perspective. You did a great gob of achiving that look you wanted, and I like all of the swirilys you got on the aromours... or tabaurd. Grear JUB.
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Posted: Wed Jul 27, 2005 9:37 pm
Parade catcarousel Parade Yah, same as Icono there. Feet is wonk, and face is wonk... But here is why I am here- what method do you use to "ink" your pic? Are you like a pen ninja, or are you a tabet type?` I knew the feet was weird but the face? sweatdrop Any more elaborate critism please or is it just my art style on the way I draw faces that is a turn off? @_@ sweatdrop Nothing good about the drawing? This image I used a tablet. For the comic pages I drew in pencil and worked on with pen. I do not remember what pen I used though... I tend to just grab whatever is around and work on it. Like how those comic paper were taken from my school's printer. domokun Well the eyes are a bit too far apart. And the sideburns don't seem to curve in the same way the face does. The shoulder pads sit a bit funky on him, and the feet are to blobby. The good things are the detail, and the position. Also The perspective. You did a great gob of achiving that look you wanted, and I like all of the swirilys you got on the aromours... or tabaurd. Grear JUB. Thankyou for elaborating~ heart It just sucks when one is offered critism but all I get is "something is wrong" when I don't really see why till explained. 3nodding
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Posted: Wed Jul 27, 2005 9:44 pm
the left arm bothers me for reasons I can't quite explain. Possibly the fact that it looks too straight down, without significant "curves" that help define the arm itself. I am not sure if that makes sense...
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Posted: Wed Jul 27, 2005 9:47 pm
serial_experiments the left arm bothers me for reasons I can't quite explain. Possibly the fact that it looks too straight down, without significant "curves" that help define the arm itself. I am not sure if that makes sense... It makes sense. (^^) Thankyou for input~ heart
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