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RPC Name: Byakko Shaeri
Age: 17
Race: albino Kitsune
Gender: female
Elemental Power(s): fire ,light
Sub Elemental Power(s):ice, flying
Secret Power: Can call and command animals( both mythical and real)
Bio: Her childhood wasn’t good and so she is shy and refuses to talk about her past. She lived with her siblings and her mother. She was made fun of because of her red eyes. She is naturally talented in magic, using fire and ice most of the time, but (usually as a last resort) can use powerful light moves. She has multiple forms, but mainly uses her fox forms and her human from
RPC Appearance: Sometimes has wings, they are pale tan
main form
human form
full fox