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 Posted: Tue Jul 10, 2007 8:50 am
Prologue
I never thought I would be here. Here in the court with SM Company fighting for a one little song. I never knew that, I would be in this situation.
There is a good thing and a bad thing.
The Good thing is that I won the trial. The Company owes me 2 million dollars.
The bad thing is that I might lose someone I love. I don’t know if I want these 2 million dollars now.
Probably every girl in Asia must hate me because SM Company is no more. Since some fan girls were kind of disappointed to hear they stole a young girl’s song.
How did this all happen? Here’s what happened.
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Posted: Tue Jul 10, 2007 9:00 am
Chapter One.
It’s a perfect day for fishing, swimming, canoeing but I’m not allowed to do those things. I’m the in the hospital right now staring out the window.
As I stared I saw little kids running around with a smile. Then I heard a knock on the door. I smiled as I turned my head quickly to see the person who had knocked on the door, five children.
“Hey guys.” I greeted them with a smile.
“Unni,” A young girl ran up to my bed side. “How are you feeling?” she asked.
“I feel fine. All I had was a heart failure. It’s nothing big.” I told the young girl.
Then a boy came up, “Nuna. We miss your cooking. Ajuma’s cooking is terrible.” He whined.
“Yeaaaah.” The four children nodded as they agreed with the boy.
“Well…..next week when I come back out of the hospital I’ll cook you guys something good including desserts.” I told them with a promising smile.
“Really?!” they yelled.
“Yeah, really”, I answered them with a grin.
“Well get better okay?” they asked.
“I will.”
“Oh yeah!” another boy yelled. The oldest one from the five.
“We, and the kids from the orphanage and the Ajumas made a get well soon card.” He said proudly. “it was my idea.” He said handing me a card.
“Thank you. I will get better soon with this card.” I answered with a smile.
“Unni GET WELL SOON!” The two girls yelled.
“NUNA GET WELL SOON!” The three boys yelled and disappeared with the two girls.
I smiled at their cheerful reaction. Yes, I live with the orphanage kids. Why? I was almost adopted but the little kids were so adorable and cute. I refused many times not to get adopted. Finally one of the Ajumas who worked there adopted me now I help around. Recently…like few months ago I found out that my heart was very weak.
I sighed and turned on the TV to hear some music. It was summer now. The kids were running around town like crazy maniacs.
Then I heard a song that I knew. My eyes widened. “M-m-my song!” I yelled. It was called Summer Love. I stared; SM Town was the celebrities who were singing it. You see I don’t know who SM town is. How? The orphanage does not have a TV cable. So we watch videos that were donated.
How was the possible? I stared at the celebrities. I knew one of them. Park YooChun. What I think of him is my business. He never got to know me really. He was known as the, ‘cute/romantic’ guy. But that’s all a rumor. He was so cruel to me it wasn’t even funny. He was a school flirt. When he didn’t want to be with a girl, he made up an excuse like. “I have a girlfriend. She won’t let me go.” Then they would ask who and he would answer, “Park JiHyun.” And I wopuld always get bullied for no reason. They would just yell at me, “GET AWAY FROM HIM!” then they would throw stuff and then run away.
I sighed as I stared at the screen of the TV. He had gotten really cute….arrgg! I mentally started to slap myself. I stared then clicked it off. I needed to do something, I had no witness. Wait…I did, the whole orphanage. They always heard me sing it while playing it on the piano or the violin.
Haha. Oh yeah I have cyworld. How? I go to a internet café no duh. I had a laptop since a nurse gave it to me for entertainment. I looked up at my thing. I went to visitors and saw one of the hidden ones where no one else to read it. I looked at the name. Park YooChun, I stared for a while. Then went to his cyworld and wrote in hidden message.
I wrote:
Yah! Park YooChun. I want to see you in a week. At the Bubble mania. I’ll be wearing a white shirt with ‘Nobody is perfect.’ And then in the corner it will be saying. ‘I am Nobody.’ You better be there.
Then I looked over to my cyworld to write something in the journal section.
I wrote:
June 30th, 2oo7
Today, I am in the hospital once again for my daily check up. But this time was different since I had a heart failure. I almost went into heaven but something made me stay. Maybe the orphans’ voices and cries. Now I am in the hospital hoping to get out before the day after tomorrow.
Then I looked at the visitor and he had answered back,
He wrote:
Why? Do you missssssss me? And Fine I will only for few minutes though.
Then I went onto his cyworld once again to write.
I wrote:
Ew. No. You made my life miserable that’s not why I want to see you idiot. Its because of SM Town Company.
He wrote:
Haha….well okay…I guess. So how are you feeling….Is your heart okay and everything?
I wrote:
Yeah I’m fine. Well…see you in a week.
Then I was gone to sleep for more.
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Posted: Tue Jul 10, 2007 9:28 am
That story was amazing!!!! Easpicially when Yoochun said " Why? Do you missssssss me? And Fine I will only for few minutes though."
I started cracking up!!!
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Posted: Tue Jul 10, 2007 9:31 am
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Posted: Tue Jul 10, 2007 9:47 pm
Oooo This story has an interesting plot ^__^
Awww she has a weak heart crying
I can't wait until the next chapter
Is there anyway you can inform me when you update the next chapter?
Thanks ^_^
Please update soon !!
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Posted: Thu Jul 12, 2007 3:48 pm
Chapter Two.
So it’s been a week, I am now sitting in the Bubble Mania waiting for him to show up. I sat there sucking up the bubble tea with the huge straw in my mouth. I stared at the next person who came in, it wasn’t him. I sighed and started to finish the bubble tea.
I had finished about 2 bubble teas in an hour. He still hasn’t come…What was taking so long then another customer came in. And it was him in his hat he wore in our Junior High through High School days. I smiled shaking my head. He noticed me and sat down.
“What took you so long?” I asked hissing a bit.
“The manager wouldn’t let me go.” YooChun said with looking at me with a sigh.
“You haven’t changed at all.” I said staring at him.
“So…Why did you want to meet me?” he asked leaning back on his seat.
“Oh yeah, SM burger or whate---“
“SM Town.” YooChun corrected me as he took my bubble tea and drank it.
I rolled my eyes, “Whatever. All I can say is that….SM Town took my song.” I told him putting my fist on the table.
“Any proof?” YooChun asked raising his eyebrow.
“Yeah. The song called Summer love. I WROTE IT!” she said clearly and loudly and once against banged the table. She then took her paper out that she had composed and gave it to YooChun.
“Dear Grand—“YooChun started to read out loud but I cut him off by taking the paper.
“Wrong one.” I said taking my bag and shoving it into the bag. Then I couldn’t find it. “It was in here…” I said to myself. It was last week.
“Stop blaming the company JiHyun.” YooChun said staring at me with serious eyes.
“It is my song.” I said defensively.
“You have no proof JiHyun. I can’t believe you when you don’t have any.” He told me finished my bubble tea.
“Who was the composer?” I asked staring at him.
“It was a mysterious person. It mailed it to us and we send it some money for its hard work.” He said yawning.
Money….Who got more money than usual that I know of… I thought and stared at YooChun. “Help me.” Then I bit my lip thinking that I was asking the guy who made my school life miserable. “Get to the bottom of this.” I said quietly.
“I can’t do that. I’m against you.” YooChun said leaning back on his seat again.
“God! Can’t you help me for once instead of ruining my life?” I asked almost yelling once again.
“No.” YooChun said standing up.
“Please.” I said looking up at him.
“Sorry, JiHyun. I have to go now.” YooChun said putting his hat on tight since it was already on his empty head of his. He was gone after the bell rang that indicated that a customer had left.
I paid my bill and walked out. It was about getting to 11:00pm. I was out with my friends from college trying to figure out what had happened. They all believed me since they knew the song. I showed them once. For once my friend Song InHae was not with us. I heard she was sick and was in bed. I waved my hand to my friends indicating that I was saying goodbye until tomorrow then left. I walked towards the orphanage. I felt heat more and more. I heard noises, a lot of noises. I ran towards the heat and the noise. I saw it burn.
I saw it, I couldn’t breath. I quickly ran towards the orphanage yelling, “AJUMA! AJUMA!” but then a fireman grabbed my arm.
“Miss please. Do not go in there. We have the other firemen looking around the house for survivals.” He said to me.
My eyes filled up with tears. “AJUMA!” I yelled. “Please let go.” I said begging a bit, I was also shaking my arm to make the man let go of me but it didn’t happen.
I also saw a few celebrities passing by in their fancy cars for the next concert for INKIGAYO. I bit my bottom lip and snapped my arm. “AJUMA! YEDEULAH! (YeDeulAh! = GUYS!) AJU---” I stopped in front of the burning house as I felt nothing in me. No heart beat. My eyes widened slowly. I felt myself falling down onto the cold ground. The last thing I heard was. “PARK JIHYUN!” then I had closed my eyes….
Micky YooChun’s POV.
“PARK JIHYUN!” I yelled. I didn’t even know how I got in front of the burning house yelling her name.
I was on my way with the guys to InKiGaYo for our Jung Ban Hap performance. On the way I saw the burning house and saw her yelling and in firemen’s arm. I decided to let it go but when she broke free I stopped the driver and ran out the car. She had fallen onto the ground.
That’s how I ended up here, beside the girl who was blaming the SM Company without any proof. “Yah. Wake up.” I said shaking her.
Then I heard an ambulance as they came one of the doctors spotted me holding JiHyun. “Is that Park JiHyun-ssi?” he asked me walking over.
I stood up holding her in my arms. “Yes.” I answered.
As I felt her body go cold I shivered, why did she suddenly faint…why did she look so pale? “Uh…Doctor…Do you know her?” I asked looking at the man in a white lab coat looking thing.
“Yes. She ran away from the hospital today when she was suppose to stay for another week for her treatment.” The doctor said looking at me and adjusted his glasses with his index finger.
“…Her heart failure?” YooChun asked.
The doctor nodded, “We need to take her now.” He said taking JiHyun into his arms and ran towards the ambulance taking other survivals in the home with him. There were many little children coughing.
“Hyung?! Why the hell did you stop the car like that?” ChangMin asked, he was youngest one from the group.
I stared at ChangMin blankly. So she wasn’t joking…about the heart disease in her cyhome. I’m so stupid. “Sorry.” I said shaking my head, “I just..heard an old friend of mine…screaming…guys….can you guys just do the performance without me?”
“ARE YOU KIDDING ME YOOCHUN?!” YunHo yelled, the leader of the group. “You already wasted our time by just stopping the car and running out on us. We can’t find a sub now. Come on.” He said pulling me towards the car again with the rest of the group.
After the concert I sat in the dressing room with my other members in the group. I stood up. “Guys, for tomorrow tell Manager Hyung that I won’t be doing anything tomorrow. Tell him that I have to see a friend in the hospital.” I told them.
“YooChun, if you were to meet your friend at the hospital do you know what will happen? The guests in the hospital will come after you.” JunSu said standing up.
“But…” I said trailing away from the talking. “I’m going anyways.” I said taking my jacket. “Good Night.” I told them then left.
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Posted: Thu Jul 12, 2007 5:16 pm
Ah, so interesting. This is kinda my first time reading like this all summer. Have anymore?
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Posted: Thu Jul 12, 2007 7:54 pm
Thank you for PMing me ^__^
Ahhh What happen next?
Awww Micky is worried ^__^
Please update soon ^__^
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Posted: Thu Jul 12, 2007 8:40 pm
I'm stilling writing chapter three. :33
Thank you
<333 comments make me happy and keep writing :33
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Posted: Thu Jul 12, 2007 8:52 pm
Good, keep writing. ^^
Very interesting...but dont overwork yourself, okay?
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Posted: Thu Jul 12, 2007 9:02 pm
Sarangmida! <3
I read this earlier in the other guild. Thank you so much for chapter two!
SM BURGER?! LOL.
I hope Jihyun doesn't die. D;
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Posted: Thu Jul 12, 2007 9:08 pm
Toolazy to post in my guild.
xDDD
I think its dead xP
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Posted: Fri Jul 13, 2007 3:52 pm
Wow!!!
Chapter 2 is even more better!!!
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Posted: Sun Jul 15, 2007 3:30 pm
Chapter 3
YooChun’s POV
I was at the hospital now. A few nurses didn’t seem to notice me because of the accident that happened right now. So many kids were in the stretcher being rolled in to the emergency room.
I went to the receptionist. “Excuse Me. Do you know where the patient Park JiHyun is?” I asked. The nurse looked up from the file and stared at me.
“Ah…Uh…Yes…She’s in room 101.” The nurse said slowly.
“Thank you.” Then I left heading for the room 101. I opened the door slowly and saw her on the bed connected to so many things to her. I stared at her cold, pale, lifeless body. I touched her hand slowly, “Yah. DaeJi-Yah.” I said quietly hoping to get her to wake up. Her eyes didn’t even twitch.
I stared, the next thing I knew my eyes had filled up with tears. Before I could wipe them some gave me a tissue. I looked up to see Song InHae. Song InHae was the girl I had gone out with in Junior High. But she broke up with me because I was a flirt and caused too many problems using Park JiHyun. Which was partly true….okay the truth.
“Song. InHae?” I asked staring up at her.
“YooChun-ah…” InHae said pulling a chair to sit beside me. She stared at JiHyun, “JiHyunnie…She had a heart problem. She never told anyone about it until end of Junior High. She didn’t even tell me about it. When she told me she was crying because she was afraid that she’ll die…” she said staring at JiHyun, her eyes were filled with tears but the tears never fell from her eyes.
“What?” I asked, ever since I knew JiHyun she was always so energetic…now that I hear she was having a heart failure I noticed that she was only energetic a few times.
“JiHyun-Ah…Wake up…” InHae said crying now. “JiHyun-Ah!” she yelled.
I stared; I never knew this would happen. I never thought this would happen to a girl who would threaten me everyday in junior high if I didn’t stop using her name. I bit my bottom lip as if I was about to bleed.
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A few hours later I found myself sleeping beside InHae. InHae’s eyes were red and puffy as she slept. Her head was on my shoulder. I looked towards the bed and she was gone. I shook InHae violently, “InHae-Yah!” I yelled, “JiHyun’s gone!” he yelled.
After yelling ‘JiHyun’s gone’ InHae quickly woke up. She looked at the bed, “Where would she go?” she asked standing up quickly causing the chair to knock down.
Soon the doctor came in “Doctor Lee. She’s gone!” I yelled.
“No, no, she’s with the children in their room. She’s fine.” The doctor said with a smile. “She’s resting with them...” he said taking the heart meter away.
InHae and I sighed in relief. It was a good thing she woke up quickly. But what would happen if this happened again?
“Doctor…What happens if JiHyun get another…heart failure?” I asked staring at the doctor.
InHae grabbed my hand tightly as if the answer was going to be a bad news. I knew that InHae knew already since she and JiHyun are still friends.
The doctor looked up, “Well…If she were to get another heart failure...she might never open her eyes again…but that’s her choice to make. It always has been the patients’ choice to choose death over life…” he said looking at me and InHae.
I looked away and took InHae towards the room where JiHyun was. I looked into the room and saw JiHyun smiling.
JiHyun’s POV[/v]
After I woke up I saw two doctors and YooChun and InHae. I looked at the doctors and told me that I should take everything easy.
“What happened to everyone in the orphanage?” I asked worriedly.
“Atleast 20 children survived…but the older ladies...couldn’t make it...I’m sorry.” One of the doctors told me.
“Can I see the children?” I asked.
The two doctors looked at each other and nodded smiling.
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Then I ended up here…in the children’s room smiling and looking at the kids.
“Unni! Are you okay?” One of them asked as I entered the room.
“Of course…it was you guys who scared me…” I told them slowly.
“Can you sing a song for us?” a small boy asked in his bed clutching the sheet over his face.
“Of course,” I said with a smile and started to sing. But as soon as the children turned their head towards the door I stopped and looked. I saw YooChun and InHae.
InHae smiled slowly getting wider and ran over to me, she gave me a tight embrace, “I-InHae-yah.” I said patting her back.
“I thought you were gone forever you idiot!” InHae yelled.
“No...I would never…” I told her with a smile.
“Unni, where are we going to live?” A small child asked who had just woken up.
“We’ll be staying at…”
I was interrupted when YooChun said, “In a big apartment. I’ll pay for it.”
I looked at him with widen eyes.
He just smiled.
I knew he was only doing it because he felt sorry for me. I just knew…
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Posted: Sun Jul 15, 2007 4:53 pm
Thank you for the PM again ^__^
Yay!! JiHyun woke up ^__^
She's so nice to the children
Yoochun is so nice to offer the big apartment!
I can't wait until Chapter 4
Please update soon ( but don't stress over it ) biggrin
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