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 Posted: Fri Jun 29, 2007 4:08 pm
Here you can post poetry for other people to read and comment on...
ill post mine too:
Well s**t...i guess everyone will know my name...oh well
RULES:
1. Has to be your original work... no copied poetry from other places... i only want to see YOUR work in this thread
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Posted: Fri Jun 29, 2007 4:25 pm
11:00
Its 11:00 and I can't fall asleep
A song describing you repeats
Eyes closed and fingers crossed
11:11 wishing for you and me
That this feeling will never leave
And you and I will always be together
Closed your eyes and wish with me
Promise me you'll never leave
Grab my hand and hold it tight
So I know you're here tonight
Kiss my lips and hold me close
And whisper who you love the most
Your heartbeat somehow matches mine
Our footsteps now are lost in time
Wander on with hands and hearts entwined
Closed your eyes and wish with me
Promise me you'll never leave
Grab my hand and hold it tight
So I know you're here tonight
Kiss my lips and hold me close
And whisper who you love the most
(Whisper who you love the most)
(I Love You)
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Posted: Fri Jun 29, 2007 4:30 pm
I need you…...
I need you arms that hold me close, comfort me, and keep me safe.
I need you lips that kiss me amazingly. That fill me with the most wonderful fillings I've ever felt.
I need your hands that caress my body ever so gently, that hold my hands tightly, letting me know that you are there.
I need you eyes, so beautiful, that look deep into mine, making me oh so very happy just to be with you.
I need your love to keep me alive,
I need you,
My love,
I love you!
~always and forever~
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Posted: Fri Jun 29, 2007 4:34 pm
"Together in Love We Beat as One"
by: Jeremy Potts
distance cripples the loving heart
time may only wound it further
to not be with her
tears at the gash in my heart
i wish she could see
how much i truly love her
i want her here with me
she doesnt realize
how much it hurts to breath
the thought of life without her
when i look into her eyes
my stress is relieved
every blink a story
her every breath a miracle
soul of fire burns within
together in love we beat as one
the distance maims or lives
and i think of her all the time
if closer our hearts could be
i would do anything for it
the only cure to heal
the pain ive been dealing with
wishes of solutions
to stitch the heart
closer to her i need to be
together in love we beat as one
being with her is all i long
truly my one and only
she is to me
to close the distance
i would walk a million miles
right into her heart
and seal the wound i carry
into my loving arms
she will press herself
into the true lovers heart
our souls shall meld
till our last dieing breath
together in love we beat as one
I Truly Love You,
Jeremy Potts
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Posted: Fri Jun 29, 2007 4:35 pm
A World Called Darkness
by: Jeremy Potts
what's left after she's gone
when you find that your all alone
left to face the torment of heartbreak
to face the trials of life unconnected
when the world has swallowed you whole
to never feel what you've felt before
when everything around you is bright
but your vision is so dark and pale
nothing left for you lonely wanderer
except pain, dispair and regret
of thoughts of holding her again
still burned into your now tainted mind
welcome to the worlds true colors
there is no sunrise or sunset for you
no beautiful rainbows or butterflies
just dark and fog surround your sight
a fog so thick no light can penetrate
not ever the light from the shattered stars
the moon frowns as it can not find your lost soul
you will never see the sun light again
you are doomed to walk the rest of your life alone
in total darkness and solitude forever
the dead even seen reluctant to walk with you
noone wants to be near your pain
what you have is like a virus
it slowly consumes you whole being
the thoughts of escaping this darkness fade
you openly embrace the darkness and all its shadows
as it engulfs you, you look again to the sky
hoping to find one last beam of light to comfort you
but none appear to warm whats left of your soul
you have now joined the ranks of the lonely
your mind grows infected
your body turns cold
your personality is now corrupted
you hold your still beating heart for warmth...but it slowly dies
you then think your heart is dead
then you find out in the end
that SHE STILL LOVES YOU...and always will
but you still can not be with her at the moment
you then feel your heart begin to beat
your mind becomes active again
your body warms up and you can feel again
your vision becomes clear, better than before
Then you will see the light at the end of the darkness
if you work at it you could reach the light
and find your way out of the darkness
and back into your lovers arms....FOREVER
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Posted: Fri Jun 29, 2007 4:36 pm
Love is...
By: Jeremy Potts
waiting for the right person....
knowing who the right person is....
love is caring for her no matter what she does to you....
love is waiting for her to realize that she loves you too....
to reach far beyond your grasp to get her....
to do what it takes to keep her....
listening to her problems when you could be doing something else....
love is cuddling with her treating her with the respect she deserves....
to keep her warm when the world is cold and heartless...
to stay by her side no matter the consequences....
to be the best you can be for her....
doing the most pointless things to please her...
to remind her of her ever growing majestic beauty....
that feeling you get the longing to be by her side....
Love is giving her the world....
giving her your heart and soul...
Knowing that you would Gladly end your life...
So that she would never feel an ounce of pain...
talking on the phone at the wee hours of the night...
sneaking around so you don't get caught...
risking yourself to make her happy...
hearing her beautiful laughter...
seeing her smile at you...
Love is holding each other at night till you both pass into dream world...
knowing that you don't have to french her to be happy...
that a simple kiss is all there needs to be...
walking to her house to meet up with her...
even if you don't feel like walking...
Love is looking into her eyes and knowing everything is alright....
its not doing anything stupid to mess up your chances with her...
to learn to be mature even when you have ADHD....
to know when's the right time to say something funny...
and when to be serious....
Love is always giving her another chance...
even if you don't get another...
hope she will give you another chance...
Love is letting her go...
And hoping she will come back to you...
Love is WHEN SHE LOVES YOU BACK...
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Posted: Fri Jun 29, 2007 4:38 pm
REGRET
by: Jeremy Potts
Feeling of loneliness fill my mind
lots of words i stupidly said
sadness, sorrow and lots of regret
are just a few things filling my head
I wish that i could rewrite the past
and could of been better to you
no matter how much i pray and wish
theres nothing i can do
Im working out my issues
and learning less to play
i really want to see you
each and everyday
I miss you very much
and wish that you would come back to me
im sad and depressed without you
together lets be happy
Im learning when to shut my mouth
and when to speak my mind
things i say are more mature
but still their always kind
Yes i want to be your friend
but still I want to be more
even though we are still apart
your the only one i adore
Pleae give me another chance
and know these words are true
I've learned to use more self control
just to be the man for you
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Posted: Fri Jun 29, 2007 4:39 pm
FEELINGS
by: Jeremy Potts
What is this feeling
that has me down kneeling
this feeling that run through me
it makes me feel happy
the first time I saw you
it was to good to be true
when I looked in your eye
I wanted to fly
your beauty compels me
only you make me feel free
this passion we hold in our heart
ensure us never to part
trials of life have made you strong
but only for you I long
Your smile brings joy to all
without you I would surly fall
I believe in you
I know you are my one true
together we were created to be
together forever you and me
I feel my life's been just a test
but being with you I love the best
I try the best I can
to always be your perfect man
your always here by my side
my true self I do not hide
I change my life to make you see
all that I'd do to make you happy
your eyes tell me a story
how my time with you is never boring
to be with you is just sublime
and I think of you all the time
I wrote this poem just for you
just to say "I'm in love with you"
I Love You Dearest
Jeremy S. Potts
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Posted: Fri Jun 29, 2007 4:40 pm
WAIT FOR....
By: jeremy potts
wait for the girl who will be your best friend
the girl who will drop everything
to be with you at anytime of the day
no matter what the circumstances.
wait for the girl who makes you smile
like no other & when she smiles you know
that she needs you
wait for the girl, who wants to show you off
to the world when you are in sweats
and have not took a shower yet
most of all, wait for the girl
who puts you at the center of her universe
because obviously she'll be at the center of yours too
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Posted: Fri Jun 29, 2007 4:42 pm
"wilted love" or "unwillful deflowered"
by: Jeremy Potts
A rose dethorned
love that blossoms
a rose dethorned has no painful side-effects
like the pills you take to forget
the past and old lovers gone
feeling you long lost
the pain unfelt by you
oh numb one
unfeeling and cold
till the day is gone
and cold the night enters
will you feel the cold
as it enters your being
but like the rose you too will wilt
if tainted by cold
till your last petal falls
and you are left to shrivel
to fight the cold
skills you lack
plucked you were to early
unloved you are
taken advantage of your beauty
he did
and left you to wilt
unfeeling he was
towards your lack of sun and warmth
no water no love for you
oh dark and cold one
left on the floor
DETHORNED
unprotected and wilting fast
you take the dark as your escape
no help for you oh tainted one
the sun will never shine again
he will never love you
or take you into the light
leaving you cold
he does not care
he got what he wanted
to pluck the beauty away from you
and left you thornless
But i will save you
oh helpless one
i shall water you
and admire your beauty
you shall regrow your thorns
and your petals more splendid than before
into the sunlight with me
you shall come
rejuvenate yourself
follow me
for i shall show you the light
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Posted: Fri Jun 29, 2007 4:43 pm
"Loves Flames"
by Jeremy Potts
My love blossoms
like the flowers in spring
for you my heart aches
to belong next to you
the flower the feed on the sun
so i feed on your love for me
till the end we shall walk
to the corner of the earth
together you and me
hand in hand
the heat of passion
rages in our hearts
we are one together
molded together
like the clay we were created from
so shall we mold forever
unseperated, unchanged
the fire shall burn forevermore
until the fire of years is snuffed out
so shall i love you
the flowers of winter
are resistant to cold
so shall our heart resist
cold shall never enter
the fire shall keep at bay
the hate that shall not become us
forever you and me
till cold enters our body
keep me next to you
your heat warms my heart
closer you hold me
the closer to your heart
the stronger our flame
rage on the fires of love
to melt the hate of the world
but though the world shall envy our fire
we shall not stray
keep close to the fire
protect us from hate
for i shall love you FOREVER
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Posted: Fri Jun 29, 2007 9:37 pm
Time
Time Travels on forever
Time never pauses
Time can be blissful
But some times
You wish time can go back
Time controls all
Birth,
Age,
Death.
As time goes by
All pulls together
All makes scence
You relize that time
cannot be paused
It goes on and on
Forever~
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