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PostPosted: Mon Jun 25, 2007 12:37 pm


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Username: Sola84
First timer (y/n): Y

Character's name: Ryan Johnson
Creature: Manticore
Category: Human faced
Elemental type: Fire, Shadow, Magnetism.


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PostPosted: Mon Jun 25, 2007 12:40 pm


About the character


Name: Ryan Johnson

Age: 28

Gender: Male

Ethnicity: British, white

Height: 5'8"

Weight: 15 stone

Eyes: Grey

Hair: light brown

Occupation: Horror novel writer and delivery driver for Parcaline

Likes: Writing, horror, thriller, slasher movies and books; as long as it has plenty of blood and gore, books and documentries about real serial killers (although this is purely for research basis), cats (has 2), Sci fi movies, writing, storytelling, one of his books being published, most music except pop; such as Lincoln park, Queen, Gorillaz, fast food, his mum's home cooking, computer games like Doom, GTA, Conflict Desert Storm,

Dislikes: Ignorance, vampire and werewolf novels, queues, children, romantic movies/chick flicks and books, dogs, diets, how anime has been so generic

Fears: Plagiarism, never to publish any books, his imagination, being helpless, irrating biting bugs, getting alzheimer's disease, going bald, dying slowly.

Habits: Ryan isn't a big drinker, he'd go out and get drunk with mates, but not every weekend and since starting writing, not as often as he used to. Smoking never really caught on with Ryan either, he used to smoke as a teen, but kinda grew out of it and only smoked on social nights out with a beer, but only because most of his mates around him smoked. With illegal drugs, Ryan stays way clear of the hard stuff as it scares him how dangerious it could be and isn't willing to take a risk. Ryan has smoked a joint once or twice, but he wasn't fond of the taste and again only smoked it if it was on offer.

Appearance: Ryan has a stocky build, but obviously isn't into exercise as he's also overweight and has a beer belly to boot. He is in desperate need of a hair cut; it's very scruffy and unkept, apparently the 'in' thing, although he's had the same hair style (if you could call it that) when it was 'out' and no doubt will still have it when it's been 'in' and 'out' again. His chin is just as neglected, although whenever he feels inclined he does have a shave, but not until he starts resembling an obese Shaggy look-alike. (which is most of the time) Clothes wise, Ryan goes casual, but he does take pride in what he wears. Dark shades is a must, for whenever he goes out. An open loose light brown or plait shirt over a black T-shirt with dark jeans and white trainers is his current fashion trend. Although he does have a red shirt too.

Personality: Ryan can be self centred and thinks of his own wants or needs before others, this can mean he's quite selfish and have no empathy towards other people's feelings, although it's not usually on purpose and he does have it in him to be nice. He can be quick to temper, but never violent towards anybody, the door or wall usually takes the brunt if he's really upset, otherwise he'll shout and make snide comments before sulking. Ryan can be quick witted when he's on the game, and is sometimes seen as morbid in his sense of humour with an edge of sarcasm. He can be seen as controlling, wanting people to do what he says because quite frankly, he believes he's right, and when he's not, well it's difficult for him to see when he is wrong so doesn't take that into consideration most of the time. He can see, however, when someone seems to know what they are talking about and although it clashes with his controlling side, he does prefer not to be seen as a leader of a group and would rather do his own thing or mooch on the sidelines offering guidance or criticism. Ryan also has a suspicious streak and always beleive people do things because there's something in it for them. There is no such thing as charity for nothing in his mind.

With his writing, Ryan enjoys coming up with 'creative' ways of his characters killing others. He emerges himself into all his characters, victims, police and killers, even the nonessential characters as that is how he believes make his stories realistic. He loves the feel of power when one of his creations is hunting and torturing another, he loves how he can hear his own heartbeat and feel a cold sweat when he is writing about the victims fear and pain as if they were his own. Hours can be lost, but pages are made and the memories of his feelings during writing still linger on the edge of his mind, tantalizing him. Although he feels high when writing about these things, he knows its something that will always stay locked away in his mind, like a beast in a cage only to be let out on paper. He has no desire to become like his creations, no matter how appealing it may seem in fiction.

History:
Unlike most writers, Ryan hasn't been writing all his life or most of his childhood, he played sport mainly in his spare time or played computer games, writing just wasn't appealing at that time. It wasn't until his later teen and early young adult years did he need to scratch the creative itch and found himself writing one boring winter night about a girl taking revenge on her bullies by kidnapping the main bully and using a knife to disfigure her face and torturing her until leaving her to starve to death tied up in the middle of now where. Very immature and still makes Ryan cringe at such terrible writing, but that was the spark he needed and more ideas came to his pen, some were good, but most were terrible, although that didn't stop him.

Five years later and Ryan has 4 novels almost finished, one a sequel and one published to his delight. It had taken over two years to get something published and now, unless it was fantasy based or for children and young adults or both, it was difficult to get anyone interested. Now he had a contract to write two more books in three years. Ryan is already half way through his second book and the third is still in planning stages.

Family wise, Ryan moved out of his mum's home when he turned 18, he has no brothers or sisters and his dad left his mum two years previous. He doesn't visit often, but will phone her every once in a while out of the blue, last he checked she was in a serious relationship. His dad hasn't made contact since leaving, Ryan doesn't care about him one bit either. Ryan had no plans to go to university, but did go to college for an ICT course and got bored halfway so quit, obviously game designing wasn't for him. Ryan drifted from job to job, had several girlfriends, but none of it was overly serious. It just wasn't what he was looking for and he couldn't decide what career he wanted.

It wasn't until he published his first book, did he realise his calling, but stayed working as a delivery man to keep the bills paid. Now he aspires to become as rich as J.K.Rowling and as well known as Steven King (but of course better). So far his books sales are steady.

The Pukka:
Ask Ryan what a Pukka is and he'd say some Japenese chocolate or sweet. He'd never believe you, if you said that the old leather bound journal he found in a car boot sale was one. It was a good deal too, it looked old and the red leather snakeskin that protected the yellow blank pages looked as though it should've been worth more then a pound fifty (looked as though it was a very big snake too). It was completely unused, there was no marks, no writing and no logo to say who made it except for a small red gem in one of the center scales on the front. Ryan has been carrying it around with him, not sure whether to use it or what, he feels some sort of connection to the old journal, a type of fondness, but he can't put his finger on why and can't bring himself to use it like a regualar notebook for his ideas.

What he takes with him:
Luckily he was snatched away when he was outside, so was fully clothed (sorry ladies) and was carrying his old, fabric brown 'man bag' satchel which contained:
Car and house keys
Black wallet with his debit card and credit card and various other plastic cards that have no real use
Driving license
£15
The red leather bound journal (which was really in his hand when he was transported but has a home in here)
A blue pen
Mobile phone (cellphone)
Chocolate lion bar
Packet of walker crisps (like potato chips but tastes 100% better)
Half a bottle of Dr. Pepper
Notebook three forths filled with short stories, ideas and some drafts of his current book.
The manuscript of the current book he's trying to get published.

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sola84

PostPosted: Mon Jun 25, 2007 12:41 pm


About the Manticore


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Appearance:
The manticore has the head of a man, with horns, grey eyes, three rows of iron shark-like teeth that stretch from ear to ear and a trumpet/pipe like roar. Its body is a lion, often covered in red fur and has a tail of a dragon or scorpion, which may shoot venomous spines or hairs to incapacitate its prey. Some have bird wings and can fly a short distance. Like the stag it is extremely swift.

Origins:
Manticore orginates from Persia and means 'man-eater'. Nowadays, the manticore is said by the natives to inhabit the forests of Asia, particularly Indonesia.

Diet:
Although it preys upon other animals, it kills and devours a greater number of human beings. The manticore can kill instantly with a bite or a scratch and will then eat the victim entirely, bones, the clothing and possessions. Whenever a person disappears completely, it is said that the locals consider it the work of the manticore.

Natural weapons:
It fights with both its claws and stings, which can grow again after they have been discharged. If it is attacked from a distance, it sets up its tail in front and discharges its stings as if from a bow; if attacked from behind, it straightens it out and launches its stings in a direct line to the distance of a hundred feet. The wound inflicted is fatal to all animals except the elephant. The stings are about a foot long and about as thick as a small rush.

Why the Manticore?
The Manticore is a ruthless killer and devouring humans is the main focus of this mythical beast. As Ryan is interested in murders and cannibalism in the most bloodiest and goriest ways, becoming something that feasts on human flesh and enjoys it would appeal to and appaul him and would be torn between fighting his new instincts and enjoying the power and bloodlust that he has been harbouring deep down and only released onto paper.

My ideal form:
The traditional look would be my ideal form and becoming ginger too (i.e red), no wings at all, but no spines to shoot at people either as I feel he would be dangerous enough without needing them. His bites, scratches and poison in his sting won't be fatal either as I feel that would limit my character with conflicts; physically and mentally, but he will be into eating everything of a victim (be it human or beast) but may leave off eating possesions... mostly.


The Changed version:
Ryan will be a large size, simular to a liger but with red fur. He won't have a mane, but his hair on his head will be long and unkept, and a dark red in colour. His mouth will stretch from ear to ear, with three sets of teeth and a jaw that can open like a large snake. The jaw bone is attached to his skull with muscle unlike most beast's jaws. It is also split into two which makes it open wider and like a snake can 'walk' his prey into his mouth.

He walks on all fours and can slightly manipulate things with his front paws better then a normal feline, but cannot grip very well. His tail has spines coming out of it and are vemonous, causing his victim to feel anything from nausious, dizzy spells, to unconciousness and sickness depending how many spines they get in them and how deep it goes. Once his victim is mostly or partically inmobile, he devourers them whole, prefably head first. Antlers or horns are chewed off first. His stomach is very tough and can withstand most sharp objects, plus it produces very strong acid to digest anything he eats in short work, whether it's leather, flesh, bone or even some metals.

He can eat anything that is half his size and sometimes bigger, so will feast on deer, sheep or goats mostly. A meal like that can keep him going for over a week or two, so does not eat often. Smaller prey need to be eaten more frequently. For the first 12-24 hours of devouring a large prey he is almost helpless, bloated and sleepy. Only wanting to sleep it off and is pretty slow moving, due to the huge stomach which can expand many times bigger then it's normal size.

He can fling them with a swing of his tail and can control how many he lets off, otherwise he can launch them from a still position for defense. Although his aim is usually off. They can grow back within a couple of days or longer.

He can be fast, but is more of an ambush predator so doesn't like running too much if he can spring a surprise attack instead.

Links:
http://www.theoi.com/Thaumasios/Mantikhoras.html
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Manticore
http://users.vianet.ca/grizelda/fur/MFC.html

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PostPosted: Mon Jun 25, 2007 12:44 pm


Art & funds


Just enough to buy a flat sale if character is accepted smile

A quick sketch of Ryan
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The feared Manticore, Ryan at 100% (almost didn't fit on the scanner)
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 26, 2007 12:05 pm


Reserved
PostPosted: Thu Jun 28, 2007 7:46 am


Open for crits or comments ect

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PostPosted: Thu Jun 28, 2007 3:18 pm


God it's like our characters could be siblings...lol it's neat. I like the concept and the creature, sounds like there will be two human faced characters with lion somewhere in the creature.
PostPosted: Thu Jun 28, 2007 4:31 pm


Haha! Thanks, I usually go for the nice, quiet characters, but I never got anywhere with them and felt they were missing something. I try for a jerk and he feels completed lol

I was thinking they'd make an interesting couple, especially changed xd He'd be the disowned younger brother as there's nothing blue about his blood lol

I really enjoyed reading about your character, she seems well thought out and I'm sure she'd be given a pukka in no time.

I just liked the sound of the manticore and most people are going for dragons, griffins and other popular and well known mythicals, I thought it'd be cool trying for a mythical that isn't so common or popular smile It's a complex I have.

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sola84

PostPosted: Fri Jun 29, 2007 2:48 pm


Started an rp, anyone is welcomed to join, so far nobody has joined emo
It starts...
PostPosted: Sat Jun 30, 2007 8:00 pm


My first thought was she was going to be a basilisk, it was out there and not really chosen often. But the creature just didn't click with her.

I don't think anyone is going to rp in your thing because we're suppose to rp our character's reaction when we get there. I think the rp section is a kinda what they did before thing. To get a hang of your character and give them a bit of background. Try setting it up in the modern world and see what happens like in a mall or something I dunno.

It would be funny if they ended up together but I think it will either be a I hate you first impression or a I love you we have so much in common kinda thing. My character will be a Ahem witch but for the most part it was because of her rearing. Once the world crashes down around her you watch her attitude change...though she will still be a bit of a jerk she won't turn away help or stick her nose up and refuse to ask for it. Though there will be some major pride swallowing there.

I hope I see your character on the Island. And I hope I make it there myself! Good luck and Bless ya (any way ya want to be blessed).

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sola84

PostPosted: Sun Jul 01, 2007 2:56 pm


Yeah I think a sphinx does suit her, I've always thought of them with superiority complex lol

Maybe about the rp, I've come from the Island of Dr Moreau and the majority of rps are done on island to

Haha, yeah if they ever get together I think it would be 'you're turning into a girl lion, I'm turning into a boy lion, uh mostly...' xd I think they'd hate each other, they're too much alike but you can never know with these things ^^ I think Ryan would actually turn away help and be more aggressive, with 'what can you do to help anyway!?' but would probably be feverish with trying to find a cure though.

And thanks biggrin Hope your gets accepted ^^
PostPosted: Sun Jul 15, 2007 3:30 pm


heart twisted

Ryan Johnnson

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