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Subobo

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PostPosted: Wed Jun 20, 2007 7:49 pm


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Username: Suboshi-sama
First timer (y/n): Yes

Character's name: Alena Garber
Creature: Beast of Gevauden
Category: Canid
Elemental type: Shadow, Mind
PostPosted: Wed Jun 20, 2007 8:07 pm


Name: Alena Garber
Gender: Female
Age: 17
Height/Weight: 5'4"/142
Birthday: April 27
Hair: Dark brown, reaches to shoulder blades. Slightly curly
Eyes: Hazel
Distinguishing features: Scar on right knee from falling off of a bike.
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Personality: Quiet, withdrawn, shy. Liable to let others choose things for her to avoid conflict.
Likes: Music, reading, quiet, libraries, running, cooking
Dislikes: Large amounts of attention, being ignored, being teased, artichokes, the smell of bleach.
Occupation: Student, waitress at local restaurant

Family: Mother, Father, One older brother, various aunts/uncles/cousins.

Alena is the sort who blends in to the crowd and prefers it that way. Not one to draw attention to herself, she can usually be found in an out of the way corner reading some book she had pulled out. When approached by one who is not a close acquaintance, she will usually stutter out her half of the (usually brief) conversation, blushing furiously the whole time. Since she doesn't have much of a social life, she spends most of her time reading and studying, and has learned a variety of things (most which would seem useless unless you happened to find yourself on a trivia show).

Her parents are at work for most of the day, leaving when she goes to school and returning home a few hours before she goes to sleep. Her brother is one of those loud, outspoken people who seem to be the life of the party and the center of attention, and this seems to be one of the major factors behind her introvertedness. Due to his loud nature, he tends to draw whatever attention is around to himself, and away from his sister, even if she had originally been then one people were focusing on. This trend grew partially from her own shyness, for she never tried in earnest to get people's attention back to her, and the cycle continued. He was never necessarily mean to her, just behaved as any other sibling would, teasing her when he could, offering small bits of encouragement here and there, but he was older and was in a completely different social circle than her, and didn't spend much time with her after he became of the age when being with siblings was Not Cool.

Most of her relatives live within the same area of each other.....which happens to be a rather far distance from where Alena lives. She mainly sees them during holidays, and isn't very close to many of them.
She has few friends, but most of them are close ones, which gives her relief from the (from her point of view) seemingly endless time alone.

The lack of attention at home and at school gives her much time to herself, and while that did lead to her interest in reading and learning, it also lead the way to thinking. And having so much time alone to think about how she felt that life was unfair, and that over the years built it's way up to a slow anger that festered in the back of her mind. It was something that she never really acknowledged, but it was still there. Deep down, she has the thought that is probably present in every person at some point 'They will pay for this', though who 'they' are still remains ambiguous, the thought does seem to be stuck in there rather firmly.

However, despite her shy exterior, the thoughts that race through her mind are anything but. A deep-set longing to be accepted wars with her nature of remaining hidden. On the rare moments where the two conflicting urges become too much for her to handle, or when she is under a great deal of stress, she becomes irritable, snappish, and even more reclusive than she was previously until she can get her mind back in order.

These, while frequent in most people, seem to unnerve Alena, as they seem to make her realize how deeply she feels, and how deep her anger runs. After these outbursts, she manages to stammer out an apology and (sometimes literally) runs off back to solitude. Lately she has been reading books about relaxation and stress relief to see if they would help her any.

Aside from that, she is a generally calm person, though she can be a bit hard to find at times, and even harder to keep in place. She almost always has an excuse to wriggle her way out of social situations at hand, and very rarely is seen in a group of people on her own will.

Subobo

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Subobo

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PostPosted: Wed Jun 20, 2007 8:12 pm


The Beast of Gévaudan

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Origin: Gévaudan, France, 1764-1767

Appearance: The appearance of this creature seems to vary with each account, though there are a few constants (seen in two or more sources):

- Reddish fur
- The size of a calf/cow
- Large paws (clawed-often reported as having six claws)
- Greyhound-like muzzle
- Black stripe along back (?)
- White stripe on chest/ white chest
- Head darker than body
- Long, thin tail with white tip

Sound: Often made a sound more like a horse neighing than a wolf howling. Growls - Howls like those of a mean dog, or one in pain or distress.

Behavior: "She could flatten herself on the ground almost to invisibility, when she was said to look no bigger than a fox. Her pounce was like tat of a cat rather than the rushing up and biting of a dog or a wolf. People did escape by climbing trees, which she was never known to do."

"La Bete killed for food. She ate from 90% of her victims, and even when disturbed, would take time to tear off an arm or leg from the living or dead body and carry it away."

"Sometimes she supposedly tortured sheep and goats to lure their keepers out of hiding and be attacked. She was also seen forcing animals to play with her. High intelligence was a peculiarity of La Bete but the taller tales must be assessed for truth against a background of rumor and panic in a superstitious population."

"Her sense of humour was satanic. She enjoyed paralyzing strong men with terror by pouncing, playfully throwing them to the ground, and then leaving without using her teeth or claws on them. Perhaps it was just to show she could eat them if she wanted to..."


History: In the mid 18th century, the town of Gévaudan, France was terrorized by a beast, which had claimed around 100 people before disappearing. This beast attacked humans more often than livestock (seeming to avoid cattle most of the time) and more often than not attached the head of the victim, unlike other predators which might have been responsible.

Her existance is still debated today. Some are convinced that La Bête was simply a rabid wolf, but that really doesn't explain the numerous eye-witness accounts that said otherwise, nor does it explain the almost calculated way that La Bête killed almost 100 people.

Despite many hunter's attempts to kill the beast, none succeeded. Though in several cases, success seemed to be theirs when they shot her several times, one even shooting her in the head, only to have her get up and run off. In 1767 several large wolves were killed, and it was said that the beast was dead, but after her supposed death, there were more outbreaks of killings at the hands of a beast which was described as being identical to La Bête.

"You can, of course, choose to dismiss La Bête as merely a large wolf but you will find those two very uncomfortable words ‘and yet’ keep coming to mind."

"Her cunning, skill and mobility, even her very existence, were completely beyond human understanding."
-Abbé Pierre Pourcher

Images:
http://www.linternaute.com/sortir/sorties/nature/lieux-mysterieux/gevaudan/diaporama/images/3.jpg
http://www.linternaute.com/sortir/sorties/nature/lieux-mysterieux/gevaudan/diaporama/images/11.jpg
http://www.linternaute.com/sortir/sorties/nature/lieux-mysterieux/gevaudan/diaporama/images/12.jpg
http://www.linternaute.com/sortir/sorties/nature/lieux-mysterieux/gevaudan/diaporama/images/13.jpg

Sources:
http://labete.7hunters.net/description.htm
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Beast_of_Gévaudan
PostPosted: Wed Jun 20, 2007 8:53 pm


Ze Pukka

A bookmark. A simple enough thing for a book work to own. This one, made of carved wood, is the one most frequently seen sandwiched between the pages of a book Alena is reading. This particular specimen was fount among the bookshelves in her school library, and, upon asking the librarians if they knew who's it was (for it was a very nice bookmark) she came into possession of it after no one claimed it after the prerequisite two weeks in lost and found.

Upon receiving it, it was hurriedly shoved into a book (for she got it on her way to one of her classes and was going to be late) and didn't look at it again until she was at home, and took out her book to read....

It was a strange bookmark. It made her feel funny for some reason when she looked at it...

Subobo

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Subobo

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PostPosted: Wed Jun 20, 2007 8:55 pm


Why La Bête?

Much like the beast, Alena is reclusive and unwilling to show herself unless she needs to. When confronted and provoked, however, she can show a more vicious side in her attempts to escape. Both are intelligent and show extreme signs of perseverance and the ability to hold up under stress.

Her thoughts and nature, though, may lie close to the beast than it appears, as both seem to have the mindset of something that is being pursued or confronted against their will.

By transforming into the beast, Alena will be able to drop the shy facade that she has built around herself, and allow the truth of her inner mind to show through, for better or for worse.
PostPosted: Wed Jun 20, 2007 8:57 pm


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Username: Suboshi-sama
Character's name: Alena Garber
Creature: The Beast of Gévaudan
Quest Thread: La bête du Gévaudan


Approved! good character, well developed and nice choice of mythological creature
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8O Yaaay~ <3

Subobo

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Subobo

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PostPosted: Wed Jun 20, 2007 9:03 pm


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8D Kay, that should be it~
PostPosted: Thu Jun 21, 2007 6:28 am


I think you you've done well on picking your mythological creature

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PostPosted: Thu Jun 21, 2007 11:48 am


Tres Bien! I like this character, but why this myth for the girl? Would the pukka be in lost and found for a while and then when given to her wait until she was alone?


On a side note have you ever seen Brotherhood of the Wolf. Their depiction was...interesting to say the least.
PostPosted: Thu Jun 21, 2007 12:19 pm


x3 I'm working on fixing up those two bits at the moment~

=O No I haven't! But it looks rather interesting. Must try and see it sometime ninja I actually first heard of it from the boardgame Atmosfear xD (awesome gammmee!) where Gevaudan was one of the characters you could play.

Subobo

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Ieeko

PostPosted: Thu Jun 21, 2007 8:29 pm


XD I'm pleased to see someone stalked this myth and decided to use it. It's incredible, right? I mean. Wow. The mayhem behind it.

I'm liking the character so far, although there are some things I'm just a bit curious about. Mostly her anger. Is it simply nappish? Or is it an amazing issue? Does she lash out and throw tantrums and such - is it distinctly conflicting with her life and does it make her nervous to have such anger? What is her relationship with her brother that would drive her to be introverted because of his outspoken-ness? Does he criticize her? How does her family life weigh on her? What of her ambitions?

Just a few things I'd like to see elaborated on, but I think she's an interesting character - and I do think the Beast is an awesome choice for a concept. xD Way to go, Subo!
PostPosted: Mon Jun 25, 2007 4:39 pm


=D Thanks, Iee! <3 I've worked on 'em abit, but there's still some that can use some tweakage x3

Muahaha, and then there's a mule 8D

AlenaGarber


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PostPosted: Mon Jun 25, 2007 4:51 pm


Congradulations.
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