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devilboy12342000

PostPosted: Mon Jun 18, 2007 2:36 pm


why is it when i try to do something,
it turns around and back fires?
why is it when i try to get with someone,
they say no and walk away?
why is it when i try to think good thoughts,
they always come out bad and depressing?
why is it when i think about giving up,
my "friends" tell me dont?
why is it when i walk away,
they just follow and pretend?
why is it when i tell them,
they listen but forget?
why must i go on?
PostPosted: Tue Jun 19, 2007 11:20 am


I find it more ofa rant than a poem.

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luna_luv_manga

PostPosted: Tue Jun 19, 2007 5:16 pm


it's okay. the meaning of the poem is great but sometimes i can't understand what your trying to get at.
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