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 Posted: Sun Jun 10, 2007 10:48 am
Quester Info Username: Hres First timer (y/n): Y Character's name: Sven Delgado Creature: Thunderbird Category: Birds Elemental type: Chaos, Fire 
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Posted: Sun Jun 10, 2007 11:54 am
Criminal File for Prisoner #655478 Delgado (An Introduction)04.23.2005 Sven Delgado and comrade Jeremy Fox tried in court - Delgado found guilty of manslaughter. Fox found guilty of murder in the first degree. Delgado sentanced to 13 years. Fox receives life sentence.
04.24.2005 Delgado arrives at the California State Prison, Corcoran. Puts up little to no resistance against prison guards.
5.30.2005 Delgado refuses to talk to anyone but behavior remains good.
6.15.2005 Delgado strikes another prisoner after an odd display of screaming. Booked for psychological analysis.
6.22.2005 Delgado refuses to talk to the psychologist.
7.03.2005 Delgado put in solitary confinement for two days. Reason: Fighting with another prisoner.
7.20.2005 Delgado put in solitary confinement for five days. Reason: Fighting with another prisoner.
8.06.2005 Delgado agreed to speak to psychologist. See psychological analysis below.
9.25.2005 Delgado taken for emergency treatment due to a large facial wound. Believed to be caused by prisoner #654783 Shoar who was also treated for leg wound. Both refused to speak.
10.24.2005 Delgado put in solitary confinement for five days. Reason: Fighting with another prisoner.
10.30.2005 Delgado put in solitary confinement for seven days. Reason: Attacking a prison guard.
11.15.2005 Delgado put in solitary confinement for five days. Reason: Fighting with another prisoner.
11.21.2005 Delgado put in solitary confinement for five days. Reason: Fighting with another prisoner.
On 11.27.2005 Delgado was put on restriction from contact with other prisoners after repeated offenses relating to fighting and intent to cause injury. No date of release set.
02.14.2007 Delgado released from solitary confinement after extensive psychiatric evaluation. No further offenses noted.
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Posted: Sun Jun 10, 2007 1:07 pm
Psychological Analysis of Prisoner #655478 Delgado Name: Sven Delgado
Age: 27
Birthplace: California, USA
Ethnicity: Hispanic
Height: 5'9"
Weight: 120 lbs
Hair Color: Dark Brown
Eye Color: Brown
Known Languages: English and Spanish
Right or Left Handed: Right
Birthday: August 13, 1979
Appearance: In terms of looks Sven can't say he really stands out in the crowd - until he was injured in a fight with an inmate and received a rather large scar across his left cheek. Aside from the scar he is a fairly average looking man, a little scrawny but not overly so, he can still put up a good fight. His hair is dark brown and thin, though there isn't much to say about it as he usually has a buzz-cut. His posture is abysmal, he walks with his shoulders slumped, head looking down, and hands in his pockets if what he's wearing currently has any. Sven isn't the cleanest of people either, often having dirt under his nails and messy, unkempt clothing. If he wasn't wearing a prison uniform he'd be wearing a cheap t-shirt and pair of jeans he most likely bought at Wal-Mart or a thrift store.
Personality: In school his teachers referred to him as the unrepentant devil. This nickname was accurate - he would get into trouble and he just wouldn't care. He'd be punished and though he put up a fuss about it he'd never admit to feeling guilty for whatever it was that he did, which usually meant bullying or stealing from another student. Brutish in manner and without the slightest hint of class, people often decided to avoid him altogether. He would only hang out with one person, his best friend Jeremy Fox, and just seemed to regard everyone else as nobodies.
He was always an aggressive person and didn't really know how to cope with negative emotions. He took out his anger, his fears, his sadness, on other people and often in a physical manner. When he was alone, he would hurt himself by punching walls or breaking things. He just could not face up to his own inner demons and deal with his problems in a constructive manner so he resorted to bullying in hopes that in the heat of the moment he could forget his worries.
His behavior in prison was a result of the immense guilt he began to feel for the betrayal of Jeremy Fox. Though he knew it was his fault his friend was serving a life sentence he didn't have the guts to get himself in trouble in order to save Jeremy. Instead of admitting his own guilt and freeing himself from his conscience he became more aggressive than ever, starting conflict upon conflict with other prisoners. His nickname among the inmates was "Loose Cannon".
Though he has the ability to feel for others he is ultimately a selfish being. His stay in solitary confinement seems to have driven him inward into becoming a complete recluse, but in reality he is still enraged and tormented. He seems to be waiting for the next good opportunity to force his anger upon the world...
What Really Happened?
In March of 2005, Jeremy suggested to Sven that, just for kicks, they try breaking and entering into someone's house. He had heard that a certain very rich family had gone on vacation and that nobody would be home. When they got there, however, Sven and Jeremy got a rather unwelcome greeting from the woman who had been hired to stay and take care of the house while the family was away. Unprepared for this and having very poor judgment skills, Sven pulled out a gun and fired, hitting and fatally injuring the woman. Jeremy, cursing and screaming, dragged a shocked Sven back to the car where he sped away and because he wasn't looking, crashed the car and fatally wounded a pedestrian.
Though Jeremy should've been charged with manslaughter and Sven with murder, the investigative team mixed them up and he went along with it and neglected to say anything.
Misc. Facts:
-The only person he ever considered to be a real friend was his 'partner in crime' Jeremy Fox.
-He has a sort of respect for fellow inmate Christopher Shoar after they both managed to brutally wound each other in a fight.
-His favorite singer is Leonard Cohen.
-Due to his lack of motivation to try he never managed to graduate high school.
-His family is lower middle class, but by the way he dresses he looks a lot poorer than he actually is.
-He drinks, but doesn't smoke and has oddly never experimented with other drugs.
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Posted: Sun Jun 10, 2007 1:08 pm
Pukka  Some prisoners could do just about anything with a nail file. Sven got much more than that.
He was in the fenced-off prison yard, walking around the outskirts alone as has became a habit of his lately when he saw something shiny on the ground. Thinking a guard might have dropped something he rushed over only to find a small butterfly dagger.
Though reporting it to a guard would get him time off for good behavior as he looked around he noticed that no one was watching him at all. Smiling, he folded up the knife and slipped it into his shoe.
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Posted: Sun Jun 10, 2007 1:14 pm
The Thunderbird Thunderbirds are giant predatory birds of Native American mythology. Traditionally, they look similar to gigantic eagles, but with multicolored bodies (usually consisting of blues, purples, and reds), two curling ram-like horns, and sharp teeth within their beaks.
The Thunderbird is about the same size as it's greatest rival, the Killer Whale. The wings of the Thunderbird crackle with lightning and make the noise of thunder when clapped together. Though it usually doesn't go out of it's way to terrorize others, the wrath of a Thunderbird can be so fierce that to anger one could cause chaos.
Thunderbird has also been linked to trickster-type figures in the Native culture. Tricksters - or clowns - were said to have a chaotic, backwards, mysterious nature, much like that of the Thunderbird.
The Thunderbird is a carnivore, preying on anything from large fish to mammals to even humans.
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Posted: Sun Jun 10, 2007 1:16 pm
Reserved just in case. You may start posting now!
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Posted: Sun Jun 10, 2007 1:49 pm
its a really good start i love the fact you have a prisoners log it makes it more realistic
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Posted: Sun Jun 10, 2007 1:58 pm
Good stuff. I'm thinking harpy for the creature, though, traditionally harpies are female...
His personality just reminded me of one.
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Posted: Sun Jun 10, 2007 2:08 pm
Maybe a Roc, then? Similar concept, but can be both genders.
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Posted: Sun Jun 10, 2007 2:17 pm
That's a good idea. I think it encompasses the fire and chaos aspects nicely. You could also try a firebird, though. One like in Fantasia 2000...
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Posted: Sun Jun 10, 2007 6:49 pm
Okay, I've narrowed it down to these four... Roc - A massive man-eating bird said to attack ships at sea. Thunderbird - A large bird much like the Roc, but often portrayed with ram-like horns and teeth within it's beak. Said to cause lightning and thunder when it flaps it's wings. Nightmare - A dark horse said to torment others in dreams. Kraken - Giant sea squid that attacks ships. Dang, it's so hard to choose. XD
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Posted: Sun Jun 10, 2007 7:35 pm
if you cant figure it out make a poll
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Posted: Sun Jun 10, 2007 7:42 pm
Haha, I've already picked...Went with Thunderbird.
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Posted: Sun Jun 10, 2007 7:44 pm
Hres Haha, I've already picked...Went with Thunderbird. ah those are also thought to be real i read a lot of weird newjersy but i always thought they were cool well good luck with your quest
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Posted: Sat Jul 07, 2007 11:58 am
Got the seal of approval, woohoo!
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