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Posted: Sat Jun 09, 2007 5:12 pm
Okay I am going to try my hand at a horror. It my beslow getting up but it will get better as it goes. Hope that you like it so here we go...
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Posted: Sat Jun 09, 2007 5:44 pm
Prelude: Death at the Bella Muerte
The Bella Muerte was a wonderful place to stay, well that was until the accident. But lest start with the history first. Well the Bella Muerte was made by a Count. He made it for his love Izzabella. But tragically before constriction on the mansion was compleated she died, wale giving birth to there first child. THe child lived she was scarred, but beautiful. The Count moved the girl to live with him in the Bella Muerte. That was when things started to go wrong, eventhow the child Sofia could not talk people believed that she could do other things. Like talk to thing that you or I could not imagine, talk to thing beyond this world. After five years of living at the Bella Muerte the Count went mad. He took his own life on the day of his loves death and the birth of his child. Sofia only being five inherited the mansion and all of the Counts money. She lived a live covered in mystery. After she got married we lost track of what happened to her. After years of not having an owner the Bella Muerte went into a bad state. It was then that a family found her and turned her into a motel. But after thing started to happen, they were forced to close it. You can still stay at the Bella Muerte to try to find out why, but under one concision you can check in but you can not CHECK OUT.
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Posted: Sat Jun 09, 2007 6:11 pm
Sounds interesting. Do go on...
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Posted: Sat Jun 09, 2007 7:18 pm
Chapter One: No Checking out of the Bella Muerte.
I looked at my pamphlet for the 'Most Haunted Mansion.' I know that it is wrong for a young man to believe in ghost, but what could I say. I suddled down into my seat when a spit ball hit me. "Frank, why did you spit that at me?" "Hey, why do you think that it was me?" I looked at him he was holding a straw and paper. But I forgot about that when I saw her the Bella Muerte. Ray pulled into a parking spot. When we came to a stop I quite literally jumped over my baby brother. "Look at her." I said flabbergasted ("Sorry I love that word." Me) "Looks old." Bob said hitting me lightly. We grabbed the bags and started walking to the mansion. There were going to be other girls there, but we had not seen them. There was a crash and Frank was down for the count.
(Frankie's POV)
I was walking to the 'Most Haunted Mansion.' or so Gerards pamphlet said. It lied it should have read 'The Best Way To Waste Your Winter'. Then it hit me, or more like it she hit me. "Morgan!?" "Is that a question or are you yelling at me?"We got up and she hugged me. She adn her friends knew all about the Bella Muerte. I pushed her away to get a better look she had long blond hair the want to her hips with black under. She was verry skinny but healthy looking but pale. "When did you get that?" Mikey asked breaking my trance. "What?" She said looking confused. Mikey pointed to her eyebrow. "Oh after I heard that Frankie got a new tattoo." "Can we please...PLEASE get going?!" Gerard pleaded.
Chapter Two: An Uneasy Feeling
(Elizabeth's POV)
"Bout time you people got here." "Were is Jessica?" Morgan asked me. "She is inside getting a feel for the place and looking at all the rooms." I let them in, but pulled Morgan to the side. "Do you want to tell them?" "Can you? I do not think that they will take what I say to heart." "Ya I will." Morgan looked worried I patted her an the back and we walked into the front room. Getting up on one of the couches I yelled to get everyone to stop talking. "Quite!!!" Everyone shut up and Jessica came running. "Oaky I have to put down some ground rules. First off if you are going to go anywere after dark you have to have a person with you at all times. If you get past the gates this dose not count. But if you are in Bella Muerte or on her grounds you better do it. Second, if you hear talking or singing and you do not know who it is, do not go to it. If you see something or someone that you do not know or can not explane do not go to it, but do tell the rest of us. If you keep on hearing it or it is following you run like hell. So do I have any questions?" Frank raised his hand. "Yes" "Are you in YOUR right mind?" "Ya, I am you just do not know the history or the thing that this house can do. So you do the things that I have told you or you pay, so wich one is it going to be?" Frank grumbled but suttled down.
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Posted: Sat Jun 09, 2007 8:06 pm
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Posted: Sat Jun 09, 2007 8:13 pm
You seem to be the only person reading it.
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Posted: Sun Jun 10, 2007 5:25 am
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Posted: Sun Jun 10, 2007 6:08 am
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Posted: Sun Jun 10, 2007 4:29 pm
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Posted: Sun Jun 10, 2007 11:24 pm
Oooooo!!! You added my character's name!!! Awesome!!!
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Posted: Mon Jun 11, 2007 12:20 pm
ZodiacStarrs Oooooo!!! You added my character's name!!! Awesome!!! O.o
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Posted: Mon Jun 11, 2007 12:22 pm
X-akissgoodbye-X ZodiacStarrs Oooooo!!! You added my character's name!!! Awesome!!! O.o...You didn't know that my character's name in my fanfic.... I'm gonna go sit in this corner and be emo now....
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Posted: Mon Jun 11, 2007 12:58 pm
ZodiacStarrs X-akissgoodbye-X ZodiacStarrs Oooooo!!! You added my character's name!!! Awesome!!! O.o...You didn't know that my character's name in my fanfic.... I'm gonna go sit in this corner and be emo now.... Do not feel bad I have a short turm memmory loss. Now I feel emo.
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