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Application Rules:

o1. The application form, found in the following post, must be filled out completely.
o2. You may not post in designated RP threads until your application has been approved by proper moderators.
o3. Moderators reserve the right to reject any application for any reason.
o4. Do not PM moderators asking for their attention regarding your application.
o5. You may have more than one character in this roleplay if you plan to use them all, and if no plot monopolization takes place.
o6. Because this RP is many years after the canon series, mentions of historical events are allowed, but try to create your own Star Wars legacy.
o7. Your initial character may be aliged with any of the major factions.
o8. Jedi relatives are allowed, but discouraged.
o9. All role-play applications must be written in third-person omnipotent.
1o. If you posted your app but are not finished put "UNDER CONSTRUCTION" at the top, if you do not the application will be graded as is.
11. No non-canon material allowed. All races, planets, technology etc. must be pre-approved by a mod, who have all authority to allow or disallow.

Application FAQ:
o1.
Q: How do I know if a mod has OK'd my application?
A: The moderator will edit a message at the bottom of your application. It is not their responsibility to notify you when they've accepted or rejected your application, so check it from time to time.

o2.
Q: What if my Application is not accepted?
A: If your application is turned down the mod that left the message will tell you why you failed and what you need to do to pass. Once you have corrected it put a note below the mod's first note and the same mod will look over it again.


o3.
Q: i want 2b a mandalorianz!!
A: The reason we don't like Mandalorian characters is simply because the race itself was wiped out. In the Old Republic, some warriors followed the Mandalorian way, but were not flesh-and-blood Mandalorians. In the same way no character is allowed to be a Sith, no character is allowed to be a Mandalorian.

o4.
Q: Why can't I have an X-wing?
A: You can, but it would be horrifically out of date. One's character could mod it out, I suppose. Imagination is the best guide.

o5.
Q: Everyone wants to be a Jedi! Won't their numbers alone be enough to end your plotline?
A: Trust me when I say no. <3

o6.
Q: Can I use my old RP character?
A: No. That character is too well-developed for the new system.

o7.
Q: Can my character be a Jedi Master?
A: Everyone starts at the as a padawan or dark apprentice and has to work your way up. Characters who begin at a higher level must be okayed by a moderator.

o8.
Q: Can I start with a lightsaber?
A: No. A lightsaber can only be gained durring your training as a Jedi or Dark Jedi.

o9.
Q: Can my characters relatives be used in the roleplay?
A: Yes.

10.
Q: When does the roleplay take place?
A: This roleplay takes place approximately 100 years after the Legacy comics, i.e. 237 ABY. That's more than 240 years since many ships you're familiar with, like the Imperial Star Destroyer and X-wing, first saw service.

11.
Q: What are the factions in the roleplay that I can roleplay as?
A: There are many available factions, so let's go ahead and talk about them.

For one, there's the Galactic Empire. They're essentially still the same Empire from the movies, after having gone through a good many reforms and reorganization. Also, they're not evil.

Then there's the Galactic Alliance. These are basically the guys who made up the New Republic, and before them, the Rebel Alliance. They used to be the dominant government, but have since fallen in disfavor with the people of the galaxy.

There's of course the Jedi, who typically serve as the force users and arbiters of the Light Side.They're typically loyal to the Galactic Alliance.

Then, there's the Imperial Knights. These guys were founded shortly after 40 ABY, and serve as a group of force users loyal to the Empire, but who follow the Light Side.

The Sith, are as always, your typically evil guys. Dark Side followers, red lightsabers, black robes, etc.

The Oronar are a band of Grey Jedi created for this roleplay, who usurped control of the galaxy from the Empire, and serve as the primary enemy in the roleplay. Unlike the Imperial Knights, they follow both Light and Dark doctrine.

Gaia Name: Guilyn
Character Name: Kari Railyn (Car-E, Ray-Lin)
Gender: Female
Age: 17
Race: Human
Character Description: Kari is a well built girl for her age; 5'7 with white, silver hair that doesn't make it all the way down to her shoulders. Her hair is normaly parted right down the middle, with a few shorter hairs in front. Kari is unsure about why she is so fit, when she never does hard physical work; and even less of an idea of her hair color. Her blue eyes are the only thing about herself that she finds normal, they seems to stand out even more due to her hair color.

She is a shy girl, however always wanting to be around other just not knowning how. She questions herself on everything, even though when she has spent alot of time thinking before she acts. Though Kari is shy she does find that she has a temper from time to time, but she has worked hard so keep it under all her other emotions. At moments though she can always feel the bubble about to pop.

Relations: Unknown
Character History: The planet of Kari's birth is unknown to her. She has no memory of her parents, if she ever had any. Her first memories are of the Orphanage she lifed in for many years. Life there was hard, the Orphanage was under staffed and under paid. Kari lifed there until she was 7 when she was moved into a fauster home.

Her foster parents David and Betty weren't much better then the Orphanage, they had only taken Kari in to gain the money the Orphanage gave them. However David and Better had a Daughter of their own named Sara who was the same age as Kari and they quickly grew to be the best of friends. Sara's parents didn't treat her much better then Kari, they cared little for kids and made them take care of themselfs most the time.

Sara and Kari were a perfect pair: Kari was shy and scared to be around other, but she was smart able to get herself out of many problems but always unsure of herself. Sara was strong she knew what she wanted and she took it, to Sara, Kari was more like her little sister always protecting her and keeping people from picking on her.

Sara had told Kari stories of people called "Jedi" who were really strong and fast so they could never be hurt by others. This idea helped give Kari hope through the many years of her life; though she never could see herself that way. Kari wanted to be like Sara and wanted to be stronger, but she would get scared and be unsure what to do; Sarah was always there to protect her.

At the age of 16 Sara and Kari had been planning to run away for some time now to find these "jedi." With crime becoming more and more uncontrolled Kari always stuck by Sara more and more. They knew they would need money and had been stealing small amounts of money for some time now, saving for when they would leave. However Sara would never get to leave the planet.

One day when David and Betty had taken them to go into town a small gang had jumped them to take whatever they had bought from town. Kari in her panic ran from the gang of men and was able to get away, but the sounds of blaster fire brought her to a stop. Kari went back to see Sara, and her parents dead; Sara's face frozen with a look of terror and shock, with her eyes glaring into Kari's soul. This sight still haunts Kari to this day.

Kari ran filled with the panic and fear left the planet with all the money they had saved. Kari traveled from planet to planet looking for these "Jedi" Sarah had told her about. As she traveled the pain in her heart started to turn to hate, hate for those who killed her; but she was far to scared and weak to go back and fight them. finally after a good deal of time, she has arrived on Korriban; where she hears some kind of "Jedi" live. Kari's hope is to learn to be strong, just like Sara.

Personal Belongings: None
Alignment: Dark Jedi, but is truly unsure about it
Occupation: Just another force hopful
Skills: Problem solver, thinks an issue through before taking action.
Flaws: Shy, little to no cofidence, Tends to question herself and her actions, no matter how much thought was put into it.

Roleplay Sample:

The four of them walked down the street quickly. The cities were not safe these days and David, Sara's father did not want to be here longer then they had to. Kari walked quickly behind them, holding onto Sarah's arm as she walked. Her heart beat began to quicken as well as the eye of everyone seemed to be fallowing them.

Kari continued to hold Sara's arm as they walked faster down the street, then a number of people in front of them looked to be walking at them. David attempted to not notice and went to walk around them which they quickly moved in front of him. David looked back to see they there were a few behind them as well. The men were so close and now they were trapped, Kari's Heart began to beat faster and faster as each second passed and she had to start breathing hard to keep up with it.

What do you want? David demanded.

Not much old man just whatever you got in those bags, the young man said pointing at the bags Betty was with his blaster.

Kari's heart was now in her throat, she wanted more then anything to move, to run but she could move no matter how hard she tried. Her fear was starting to turn to panic as she was scared for her life, and Sarah's. One of the meant reached out to grab the bags but David quickly pushed him away without thinking about it. This caused everyone of the meant to gang in at once, this sudden rush of movement gave Kari feeling back in her legs and she ran; she ran as far ans as fast as she could.

The sudden sound of a few blaster shots caused Kari to stopped running a few blocks away. Kari's heart, kept beating faster and faster in her throat. Kari stood in the street not moving, she could hear the gang members running but unsure of where they were going. Kari slowly turned and forced herself to talk back to where she was to find Sara.

As she turned the last corner slowly she saw three people laying in the street; Kari looked around and quickly moved over to Sara, who was clearly dead. The look of terror frozen on her face for all time burned deep within Kari's mind, much deeper then anything she had ever seen. Sarah's eyes seemed to be glaring right into Kari's soul, it took everything Kari had to keep the puke in her throat along with her heart.

The tears began the flow as the great fear became total panic, unsure what to do or wear to do she just stood looking deeper into Sara's eyes. The more she wanted to look away the harder it was, she hadn't helped her sister the one time she was needed and now she was dead. Kari's panic hit it's peak.

SARA! Kari yelled as stood for a moment or two more before she began to run. The destination of her runing was not in her mind, only to get far far away. Kari rand for what seemed like a life time, she ran and ran. She Took all the money Sara and her had and ran and found a way off the planet, just another way to run.

Wootness I was the first to post blaugh

//UNDER CONSTRUCTION

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Roleplay Sample:

Gaia Name: Armageddon
Character Name: Geddon Alypse
Gender: Male
Age: 20
Race: Arkanian
Character Description: Geddon stands 5'6" somewhat tall for his short native race. Geddon bears a very skinny body, but with the vigourous training of the imperials, Geddon's muscle mass and athleticism makes up more than its fair share for his physical short comings. Geddon sports a short cropped haircut, that is deep red. A small amount of freckles spread across his face giving a decivingly darker complexion then what Geddon actually is. His dark brown iris's almost camoflauge with his black pupils giving the illusion of jet black eyes.

Geddon though nice and always willing to help is very closed in and untrusting. Dealing with computers has given Geddon much patience and acceptance to being prideful of his work. Not ready to jump at the excitement of a relationship, friend or something more, Geddon keeps conversations and acquaintances to a professional and distant manner.

Relations: Geddon's family ties fall to several generations served for the Imperials, wether this line of service started with forced slavery or was voluntary is unknown. His immeaditly family is stationed somewhere undisclosed to Geddon, a further cause to his social dilemma.

Character History: Geddon was born in an Imperial Infirmary. Shortly afterwards, Geddon was enlisted in Infant Prep, a militarylistic program prepping infants to young children in the art of war and several other subjects that would eventually be finely tune to the Imperials needs.

Being enrolled in Strategic warfare like his family before him, Geddon slowly progressed to much dismay of his mentors. During a failed lesson on Aerial COmbat Deployment, Geddon was sent to the Data rooms. Being around the computer systems instantly comforted Geddon. Beginning to fail lessons purposely for more time with his new found enjoyment. His ability to communicate and natural knack for using the computer did not come til a year later when a security breach almost turned disastorous.

In an effort to wipe out a remaining Republic force deep in Imperial terroritory several Starships were sent to deal with issue quickly and easily. Unbeknownest to the Imperials a rebel was amongst them. A slicer, by trade, the rebel began to sabotage the mission, acting as a commanding officer, Mission objectives and strategies were mixed and orchastrated to give the Republic an upper hand.

During a "time-out' in the data rooms, Geddon mindlessly gazed at the code streaming before him. Hearing a voice, Geddon believed a student or Teacher was calling for him. After finding himself mistaken, Geddon found himself intiating in a conversation with the computers, being informed of the slicer, Geddon began to infiltrate and reverse the damage the highly expierenced slicer had caused. LIttle did ethier slicer know another was watching with growing interest.

Several ships of the Imperial army were lost that battle, not nearly as many if Gedon had not intervened. Coincidentally Geddon was transfered to Computer Technology. His path of Insanity and Destiny began.
Personal Belongings:

Alignment: Imperial
Occupation: Slicer/ Computer Systems
Skills: Geddon is extremely gifted in computer technology, a knack discovered at a young age, his apparent ability seems almost telekinetic with the machines.
Flaws: Having the ability to 'communictate' with computers Geddon has become severly anti social. He has also developed a mild case of schizophrenia, including conversations with himself. Interestingly showing he is aware of his 'second self' His second self is more cocky and short tempered.

Roleplay Sample:

The dull gray transperisteel glowed faintly red, the reinforced plated panels rattled from revirbaration of the sounding alarm, indicating a unfound intruder. Occassional patterned footsteps crossed the data room, simultaneously a pair of white plastic claded boots stepped on a loose floor panel causing an annoying shudder that echoed continously. Geddon sat cross legged peering at the data screens before him, mesmerized by the orcheastra of lights parading across the screens. In harmonious rythm L.E.D.s lit up like a song being hummed. Closing his eyes Geddon fell into a trancelike state. "The intuder has entered the security systems, Geddon. Maybe you should do something." Snapping awake cold beads of sweat dripped from his brow, wiping it; he stood up, wincing at the soreness of his legs from his earlier cramped position. Looking around Geddon attempted to find the source of the monotonous voice. Convincing himself it was a dream, he posistioned himself into his meditative state, only to be harrassed once more by the droning voice. "Sitting there wont help, now would it?" The question posed, startled Geddon to the point his heart skipped as beat.

Knowing he could not find the location of the ones voice, he called out speaking out loud, hoping he was not insane. "And what is it that I am suppose to do?" Geddon implyingly asked praying an answer came, that would ensure his sanity. "Enter my mainframe and redirect power to the ships shield. Such an action would merit an award and promotion from this dead end job." Geddon sat dumbfounded, at first he did not understand the request that was given to him, until the word MY stuck out. He contemplated momentairily, then figured the computer must have an onboard voice chip allowing conversation and command inputs. Fleetingly accepting this fact, he once again became suspicous. "How do you know my name?" A question that would ethier prove the most likely, the computer had an onboard I.D identifier, or the computer knew his name some other way. "Geddon, I've know you for a long time. As you have known me, we can read each others mind."

Just need a Roleplay sample to grade the app, remember any made up story with your character in it. It will not affect the roleplay ~ Guilyn

Done, let me know if i need to tweak anything. Arm.

Gaia Name: Tehkoala
Character Name:Lashi'Nar
Gender:M
Age:15
Race: Kel Dor
Character Description:Lashi was a young kel dor on the planet of dorin. He was always picked on by the other kids. He was always the small one, nobody liked him. He was a smart boy though. He read his school studies everyday. One day this Bully in the courtroom at school was messing with young lashi. Lashi decided to fight back and try and attack the bully. He killed the bully with an unknown power he couldent control. After the event, he was banished from his own town. He was forced to become a freelancer and ride with smugglers to get places. Well one day he came to the planet of Tatooine were he saw a child being bullyed around by some thugs. He confronted the bullys and they tolerated by throwing some punches. With a swift of his hand he pushed them all back with this unknown power he had once time before. A Jedi nearby had noticed this event and came over to the young Lashi and told him what he could be. He was taken back to a temple on a planet he does not know. Were he will continue his training as a young jedi knight.

Relations:Outcasted (Not much Rememberance)
Character History:
Personal Belongings: Always Carrys around his Tenloss Disruptor Rifle

Alignment: Republic
Occupation:Jedi in training
Skills: Very Powerful, Sets his mind more on lightsaber skills then with his force powers.
Flaws: Easily tempered. Likes do to things his own way. Not very social, he likes to work by himself or with his master( Only person he really trusts)

Roleplay Sample:

Even though I can see your not done I'm going to give you a few tips. First the character description is to tell how he acts. Is he angry, sad, stronge, weak? That along with his looks go in the description. Character History is for his past, where has he been and what has he been through. I would change a few things, mostly about using the force. Anakin was the "Chosen One" (no debate here, at this time plz) and the most he could do with the force was have fast reflexes; so I change that 3nodding . Other then that just a roleplay sample like everyone else and your doing fine so far ~ Guilyn

Gaia Name: Hakino-chan
Character Name: Ai Lin
Gender: Female
Age: 15
Race: Human
Character Description: Ai is 5'4" tall, and is slender, though her slim figure hides an inner strength and dexterity. Her hair descends a small ways past her shoulder; a brown color, a small strand of it is tied off in ponytail, as tradition dictates for a Padawan learner. Her eyes are a deep blue color, her skin, a fair tone. She wears the traditional clothing of a Jedi; her outfit typically consisting of looth cloth tunics and trousers, white in color. She ocasionally wears the outer brown robe, though only rarely. If not for her conspicuous clothing and the lightsaber that constantly hangs from her waist, it would likely be difficult to suspect that this girl is anything more then your average citizen. Ai ((Just to note, art isn't mine. Excellent artist known as aimo on Deviant Art. Secondary note; ignore the dual sabers. xD))

Relations:
Father - Kain Lin, 40. Currently living on Corellia.
Mother - May Lin, 35. Deceased.
Sister - Vareena Lin, 10. Living with Father.




Character History: Ai was born to a very ordinary family; one who lived in Coronet, in a middle-class sector of the large city. Her father designed starship engines for a living, and the family enjoyed a comfortable existence, free from much worry of any sort. They liked this simple existence, however, to their like or dislike, it was ultimately fated to change. When Ai turned three years of age, odd occurences seemed to take place around her. It all started when, one day, Ai was wandering through her father's garage. She was stumbling about aimlessly when she walked under a counter, bumping into the wall. This simple knock shook
the shelf loose, causing it to fall - and a heavy crate along with it. The objects, should they have made contact with her, would've surely been fatal; however, she somehow managed to dodge to the side in time, showing incredible reflex for one her age..

Her parents were horrified at the thought of their daughter's close call with death, and were glad she'd managed to escape such a fate, of course. However, they couldn't shake off the feeling that they'd witnessed something that wasn't quite...normal. Both of them knew that, given the circumstances, there was no way either of them would've been able to avoid being by the falling debris. They put the thought behind them, though, for a while...but this was not the last strange occurence to involve Ai. Sometimes they would walk in on their daughter to find her sitting alone on the floor of her room, her toys and dolls floating slightly off the ground around her. Another time, they witnessed her leap over a five-foot wide ditch; something no child her age should have the normal capability to do.

One day, they received an unexpected visitor; at their front door was a man claiming to be a Jedi Knight. He was a Twi'lek named Tal Fortuna who had simply been walking through their neighborhood, when he sensed a person in-tune with the force nearby. They allowed him in their house, unsure of what to think of the stranger, and watched as he moved through their residence. Eventually he seemed to find the source; a source they didn't expect, yet somehow knew of in their hearts. The source was Ai. Tal asked to do a test for her midichlorian count, and her parents consented. When the results came back, they were all quite a bit surprised; her midichlorian levels were quite high, even in comparison to other Jedi. The young Twi'lek Knight asked to bring her back to Coruscant with him. It took quite a bit of convincing, but Kain and May eventually gave in to his desire, and allowed him to take Ai away. She whimpered at first, but somehow she felt...right going with him. At her young age, she couldn't fully understand it, but something seemed to be guiding her path.


When she began her training at the academy, she began to show alot of promise. The young woman was a virtual sponge, soaking up everything her master's taught her. Whenever she learned something new, she would practice it over and over, never stopping until she was satisfied with herself. The girl rarely got sleep, spending many nights studying endlessly, and causing her teachers no end of worries. It was because of this devotion, however, that she soon pulled ahead of most of the other initiates at the Academy. She only slowed down briefly when, at the age of ten, she learned of her mother's abrupt passing due to illness. She grieved for a time, but soon found comfort once more in the teachings of the Jedi, and learned to let go of her mother.

Now she is ready to progress beyond initiate, and is waiting to become a Padawan. She only needs complete a few remaining trials, and then find herself a Master...

Personal Belongings: Lightsaber, and not much else, besides clothing, and various holodiscs that contain historical information.

Alignment: Jedi
Occupation: Padawan
Skills: A good diplomat, skilled at lightsaber combat, and has a selfless nature.
Flaws: Often goes too far out of her way to help others, and can get distracted from her actual mission while trying to do good deeds. Too trusting of others.

Roleplay Sample: The room was almost eerily silent; there was no noise, save for the breathing of pupil and master. Ai sat in the center of the darkened room, which still had a certain sheen to it; the smooth metal surface of the floor and walls reflecting even the slightest trace of light. Closing her eyes, the young Jedi-in-training slowed her breathing as well, concentrating on the object in front of her; a giant crate, filled to the brim with lead weights. Though his lips did not move, she could hear her teacher's voice in her mind, 'Focus, young one. Detach yourself from this world; let there be only you, and the Force.'

She let out a breath, and began to focus on the box before her. The large container began to rattle violently, almost looking as though it were struggling to break itself free of gravity. 'Lift...lift...' Ai pleaded in her mind; and it seemed as if the crate might do just that. However, as it just barely started to hover off the ground, it crashed back down with a large thud. "Ah.." Ai groaned, rubbing her temples. "I cannot do this, master...it is far too heavy for me."

Her instructor shook his head, "Your wrong, Ai. There is nothing you cannot do, for the Force is your ally; and there are no limits on what the Force can accomplish. Now, try again...but this time, do not pressure yourself so. Let the Force be one with you...use it as an extension of yourself. Do not force it." "I will try - ...I will do it, Master." She responded, closing her eyes once more.

This time she didn't try so hard; she calmed herself, letting the force flow through her, likening it to the image of a calm, slow-moving river in her head. And then, without even trying, the crate began to float off the ground. It raised a good three meters in the air, before setting down on the floor once more, so softly that it barely made a noise.

The teacher smiled. "Good. Very, very good..."

It's very rare to see such a well made application on someones first post. You did a great job showing how far she has come in her life this far; and in showing how little skill she has with the force. One of the best Applications I have seen in a long time. Accepted ~ Guilyn

Gaia Name: Burningfur
Character Name: Scott Woods
Gender: Male
Age: 24
Race: Human
Character Description: Scott is 5'5" and of average weight. His brown hair (no style) falls over his green eyes. His camouflaged pants, black t-shirt, and trench coat look out of place in the city. Scott looks like a thug, simple and plain. A DC-15A Blaster rifle is swung over his back, while a vibrodagger is hidden behind his right calf. Finally two DC-15s Side Blasters are at his right and left side sitting in holsters awaiting his quick hand.

Relations:
Sister - Diana Woods 11 Deceased
Father - Franklin Woods 56 Deceased
Mother in Law - Sarah Woods 43 Deceased


Character History: Scott came from the dense under city of Coruscant. The city that is not in any of the tourism advertisements. Scott was an only child until his father remarried and Diane was born. Scott didn't have success in school and joined an unsavory crowd. He became what his father didn't want him to be, a hoodlum.

Scott didn't want to live as a reprobate outside of the law anymore, he gave his gang up to the police. Within three hours, the majority of the gangs in the district were arrested, dead, or running in one of the most bloody battles of the street.

That same night, Franklin Woods answered the doorbell and the last sound he heard was the pull of a trigger. Diana and Sarah ran to the nearby Jedi Covenant, as the vengeful gang were about to finish the job, Scott pulled out his father's DC-15A and killed 17 gang members, stabbing one of them in the face.

The sound of sirens filled the air, Scott and Diana took one last look at each other as the crossroads of life would pull them apart. Scott quickly grabbed the other weapons his father had bought as collectibles and fled the scene.

When Scott left the building, a massive explosion erupted where the Jedi Covenant had previously been. The flames lit the streets and pointed out dozens of thugs and hoodlums running to gang safe houses. Scott pulled out the two side blasters and started firing. And 'till this day he hasn't stopped.

Personal Belongings:
DC-15A
2 DC-15S
Vibrodagger
Backpack of Explosives
A-Wing


Alignment: Rebellion
Occupation: Mercenary
Skills: Killing, Luck, and Strategy
Flaws: Often just takes the simplest way instead of the best way, doesn't think before talking, smokes.

(If it's okay with you, I didn't change the rp sample to reflect him being non-force sensitive)
Roleplay Sample: Scott stepped onto the landing pad, he quieted his thoughts and feelings. Coruscant swarmed with Jedi, Scott quietly and quickly disallowed emotions. "Just for tonight, sir?" Scott jerked around and looked at the droid. "Yeah, take care of her." Scott made his way to a city transport.

"Jedi Covenant." The droid nodded and Scott made his way to the back of the bus. He sat down next to a sleeping Twilek dancer, the transport stopped again and Scott didn't like who he saw. Three thugs with nothing better to do at 1 a.m. in the morning but ride around doing things of scrupulous nature. They looked back at Scott. Scott smiled. They looked away. They looked back. Scott swore under his breath. The three hoodlums made their way to the back of the bus.

Scott crashed out the window, rolling to a stop under the city lights. The Transport also stopped, Scott had to focus his energy, it looked like the reunion would have to wait. With a focused mind, Scott leaped and kicked off of the side of a building and grabbed onto the top of the bus. Scott heard the twilek dancer scream, Scott got very angry, very quickly. Crashing through the side windows, Scott whips out his saber and slices through one torso and kicks another out the window. The Gammorean stabs at Scott and misses, Scott pulls out his side blaster and scores a hole through the Gammorean's head. The Twilek grabs Scott's boots and thanks him profusely.

Scott pulls sheaths his weapons, pulls out a deathstick, and puffs away. Thirty seconds later, a Jedi Knight enters the transport. Scott looks at him. The Jedi looks at Scott. Scott jumps.

Sarah and Diana sit in the visitor's section of the Jedi Covenant. A waiter steps to their table. "Do you want anything else to drink?" Sarah and Diana shake their heads, disappointed. "I will refill your drinks and be right back." The waiter walks over to the machine, behind him two dozen Jedi rush through the visitor's section and out the covenant. The waiter brings the drinks back to the table. "They're probably looking for Scott, he's already off the planet by now." Giving a nod, Sarah sighs. "He never was good with the police." The waiter sits at the table and pulls his hood down. Sarah and Diana hug the daylights out of Scott.

Scott got lucky.

*Beep* *Beep* *Beep*

Scott reached out and turned off the alarm clock. He slowly sat up in bed, thinking. "I did what they would've wanted me to do." Flicking open a lighter and walked towards the mirror, Scott has another long day ahead of him.

First I want to say you did a very good job on the application. The problem lies in who you made. Yes your character can be a Dark Jedi but no one starts with a lightsaber they have to be trained and then make one. Also that means you start with no force powers, again you need to be trained first. As for a sister, yes you can say you have a sister that is a jedi but because you can not have more then one character she could never apear in the Roleplay. Remember you need to be apart of the Jedi, Dark Jedi, Empire or Republic; thus you can't really be a freelance merc. However you could be a merc working for the Impiral Fleet or for the republic. I do look forward to reading your app after it is finish you have alot of skill 3nodding . Try again ~ Guilyn