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this hazs a couple added characters but mostly it uses the characters from Inuyasha!!!

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This story is told in the voice of Nobunaga Oda, a main character in the following story, not the voice of the author of this story.

In the lone space of the closet in the basement of my house, the rotting corpse that was once Inuyasha, the half-demon dog, lay… dead by the hand of the treacherous Orochimaru… Or so he thought!!!

As I slept, Orochimaru stowed the body of Inuyasha in the closet. What Orochimaru didn’t know was that I had a couple Sacred Jewel Shards in there, because I felt like it, not knowing what they were at the time. Their power combined with Inuyasha’s own demonic power restored him to life.
As he awoke, I was working on a project, a special halberd with indestructible powers in the right hands. I heard a banging in the closet and opened the door. There stood Inuyasha.
“HOW DID YOU GET IN THERE?!!” I shouted. Inuyasha grabbed me by the neck of my shirt, choking me.
“All right,” he asked demandingly, “Where is he?”
“Where is who?” I asked, unable to know who he was talking about.
“Don’t lie to me,” he said, “I can smell him in here.”
“WHO?!!” I demanded.
“Orochimaru,” he shouted. He threw me aside and started trashing my basement enraged. He found my halberd.
“What is this?” he asked.
“Oh…” I replied, “This is a halberd I’m working on.”
“A what?”
“A halberd is a weapon that is very difficult to master.”
“Oh…”
“So what are you doing here, so far away from Kagome?”
“KAGOME!!!” Inuyasha shouted, realizing he had forgotten all about Kagome, “I got to go find her.”
“Relax,” I said, trying to calm him down, “I’ll help you.”
“You?” he responded, “You look like you couldn’t help yourself.”
“Looks can be deceiving…”
“What does that mean?”
“You’ll see soon enough.”

“I wonder where Inuyasha is,” Kagome asked herself, “He said he’d meet me right here at the well.” Suddenly, two mysterious figures burst out of the forest, weapons drawn. “Inuyasha,” she said surprised, “You’re here. Who’s this?”
“I’m the guy that just helped your dog friend find his way back here,” I said defensively.
“Inuyasha,” Kagome whispered. “He has three Sacred Jewel Shards… all in his halberd.”
“Really?” Inuyasha asked.
“Yeah,” she replied. I stood where I was, wondering what they were whispering about.
“What are you two whispering about?” I asked finally.
“Nothing,” Kagome replied pleasantly. Out in the distance, 4 small figures came flying up to the trio.
“We sensed a demonic aura,” Shouted Miroku, a womanizing, perverted monk,” We came as fast as could to see if you were all right.”
“We’re fine,” Kagome shouted back, waving her hand at them. As Miroku, Sango, a demon hunter, Shippo, a small fox demon, and Kirara, a cat demon that is normally small, but when threatened or needs to fly, grows bigger in a burst of fire, landed, they were getting ready to defend Kagome while glaring at me.
“Why are you glaring at me like that?” I asked, feeling like I had done something to offend them.
“You’re a demon,” Miroku said.
“Of course, I am,” I said defensively, “I’m a Basilisk demon.”
“Basilisk,” Shippo said, “Aren’t they supposed to be a myth?”
“I thought they were just in storied that parents and grandparents told their children to help them sleep at night,” Kagome added.
“Apparently not, “Sango said, in a tone like she didn’t care very much.
“Why do you think I never met your eyes?” I exclaimed.
“Because you’re a liar and a deceiver,” said Inuyasha. I looked down at the ground, sheepishly.
“Inuyasha,” Kagome said, sounding suspiciously pleasant.
“Y…yeah?” Inuyasha said, scared.
“SIT, BOY!!!” Kagome exclaimed. Inuyasha’s head slammed into the ground because of the necklace that Kiyko, Inuyasha’s love, gave him 50 years in the past.
“Why do you keep doing that?!!” Inuyasha demanded.
“Because you needed it, you big jerk!” Shippo shouted, only to receive a punch in the head from Inuyasha. “OWW!!” he exclaimed. I stood there, confused on what was going on. Then, I sensed a strong demonic aura. Apparently, so did they. We had sensed it particularly long before we actually saw it. ‘It’ turned out to be a big, ugly spider demon, a very big and ugly spider demon.
“Give me your Sacred Jewel Shards if you wish to live,” it said in a very deep and commanding voice. It had obviously been practicing or had done this before.
Being the show-offy type, I transformed into my favorite battle-form, which was a gigantic black cobra with needle-sharp fangs, razor-sharp claws (yes I had hands), and piercing, red eyes that had the power to turn any misfortunate person who looked straight into them into stone. I slammed my tail on the ground as a challenge, shaking the earth within a 45t-kilometer radius. We met eyes. Then, I suddenly started laughing (by the way, it was like a snake laughing).
“What’s so funny?!!” demanded the spider demon. Still chuckling, I pointed downward, meaning “look at your feet.” It looked down and started screaming. Its feet had turned to stone. The demon started struggling, though there was no hope of escape. The stone started to rise up its legs, rising to its knees and beyond.
Kagome, Sango, and Shippo turned away, frightened. All the color had completely drained from Inuyasha’s face. He had gone paler than a ghost. Miroku just stood there, not because he was oblivious to it, but because he couldn’t move at all. He was too paralyzed with terror. He was shuddering beyond control.
The spider demon’s screams of pain and terror could still be heard after it had completely turned to stone. I swung my mighty tail at the now statue spider demon and destroyed it, turning it into thousands of pieces of rubble. Later, I turned back into my favorite disguise, an average-looking human with no particular talent.
I stood there allowing them time to recover from what they had just witnessed.
“What was that?” Inuyasha asked.
“That…” I replied, “…was not even a fraction of my full power. Some would call it evil and cruel. I call it easy and effective.” I smiled, revealing two rows of sharp teeth and a pair of 7inch fangs.


Orochimaru was kneeling to a dark figure.
“Everything is going exactly as you predicted, my Master,” he said.
“Excellent,” hissed the dark figure, “Soon, this world will be mine!!!” The dark figure started laughing manically. Orochimaru started laughing with the dark figure, uncertainly. “SILENCE!!!” the dark figure ordered.


As we stayed at Kiyko’s sister’s house, I forget her name, I was eating some fish, while the others were eating some strange items, flat bread in a shiny bag, “ninja food” as Inuyasha calls it, and bubbling water in small metal barrel. Kagome was explaining that she was from another era and the portal from here to there, and vice versa, was a well.
“So you’re saying that you’re Kiyko’s reincarnation?” I inquired.
“Yes,” Kagome replied.
I have a hard time believing that.” I started.
“How dare you say that Kagome’s lying,” Inuyasha retorted.
“I’m not saying that,” I said defensively, “I just have a hard time believing it. “I turned to Kagome. “Have you considered neutering Inuyasha?” I joked, “It would make him less rowdy.
“I have,” Kagome laughed, “but I thought it would’ve been mean.”
“What are you two talking about?” asked a very confused Inuyasha.
“Nothing,” Kagome said.
“So,” Miroku interrupted, sensing that a fight was about to break out, “you said that you are a Basilisk demon?”
“Yes,” I replied, “Yes, I did.”
“I thought that basilisks were only in fairy tales and legends, to put children to sleep.”
“That’s because we basilisks are very good at blending in, you know transforming our shape and form, that sorta thing.”
“Really?” Miroku said, obviously thinking perverted thoughts.
“Don’t even think about it, monk,” Sango threatened.
“I would never,” Miroku contradicted.
“He’s hopeless,” Shippo said, shaking his head.

After we were rested and ready, we set out to get the Sacred Jewel Shards from Naraku. I decided to tag along since I had nothing better to do. We met several people and helped them with all sorts of ridiculous tasks, getting a cat out of a tree, farming, etc. WE did meet with many powerful and weak demons as well. I got some of them, but I let the others handle the rest of the demons.
“Hi,” said Edward Elric, an alchemist from another story.
“Hey!!!” Inuyasha shouted, “You aren’t even supposed to be here!!! Get out!!! This is my story!!!”
“This isn’t even your story,” Edward Elric said, “This is the writer’s story, HI, MR. WRITER!!!”
“WTF,” thought the writer.
“Brother,” Edward Elric’s brother, Alphonse Elric, said, “Get out of there!! We’re supposed to be playing a prank on Ichigo!!”
“Coming,” shouted Edward,” Bye.”
“Yeah, get out of my story!!” Inuyasha said.
“Ooooooookay,” I said, confused once again.
“Meow,” exclaimed Kirara.

After the disturbing event, we continued on our way. I was talking to Sango about the demon slayers. She was reluctant to talk about why she was the last demon slayer left. We talked about the different kinds she had experienced and the demon slayers’ techniques. Kagome and Inuyasha were setting the scene for another argument with Shippo and Miroku trying to keep them from fighting. Kirara was chasing some leaves that were blowing away in the wind.
“So what is the strongest move you can do?” Inuyasha asked.
“If I told you, then I would have to destroy you,” I replied, threateningly, “no one can know how truly powerful I am… That’s what makes it fun.


Meanwhile, back at the dark and scary room,
“Everything is in place,” said Orochimaru.
“Perfect,” the dark figure said, “Time to put the gears in motion.”
“Yes, master.”


We were just finishing off the last of Naraku’s demon and poison insect army when we hear a scream from the village we had just passed through. Inuyasha started sniffing the air.
“What is it?” asked Miroku.
“The scent of spilled human blood,” Inuyasha answered.
“Yeah,” I added, “I can taste in the air as well.”
“You can?” asked Kagome.
“Snakes have this special gland called the “Jackson’s Gland” (or something like that) that turns the scents captured by the tongue into tastes,” I replied.
“Let’s go see what’s wrong,” said Sango. When we got to the village, we found everything in ruins. Demons were everywhere.
“Let me handle this,” I said, “I’ve been itching for a fight.”
“No,” shouted Inuyasha, “I want to fight.”
“I said let me handle this,” I hissed.
“Inuyasha, let him,” Kagome said.
“Fine,” Inuyasha said reluctantly.
“Good,” I said. I walk up to the horde of demons so that they could see me. They all came at me with the same blood-thirsty glint in their eyes. I started rotating on the spot, creating a whirlwind of stones.
I shouted, “Stone Whirlwind!!!” The winds had become so strong that the stones that I had created and the rocks picked up by the whirlwind became like swords, cutting the horde of demons to bits.

When the whirlwind had weakened, bits of demons were raining down on me as well as the demons’ blood. The village people that were left came out of hiding.
“Thank you,” the village elder said, “We are forever in your debt. May we first ask for your name so we may thank you more properly?”
I smiled, “Nobunaga Oda.”
“Thank you, Nobunaga Oda,” the village elder said,” as a token of our gratitude, please stay for the feast.”
“We would be delighted,” Miroku cut in, eyeing the women.

As we ate, Inuyasha was complaining that we were wasting time… and that the curry was too spicy. Miroku was doing the usual stuff, palm-reading and asking the ‘beautiful’ women to bear his child. A very jealous Sango was glaring so viciously at Miroku that I swear flames could have shot out of her yes any minute. Kirara was sitting next to Shippo, eating some fish. Then, out of nowhere, a green rabbit latched onto the back of some guy’s head, ate his brain, and turned him into a zombie. The rabbit looked at me. I looked at it in the eyes and it turned instantly into stone.
“What was that for?” asked Shippo.
“I don’t know,” I replied, “but it was pretty stupid.”
“I’ll say,” Shippo said.


Meanwhile,
“The rabbit was destroyed, but it succeeded in its mission.
“Perfect,” the dark and scary figure said, “now my victory is certain.”


After we left a very happy village, we set out in the direction we knew Naraku was headed last. We stopped in several villages. We defeated several more demons. I learned more about their travels, and themselves and they learned more about me, my powers, and my travels. I told them that I was summoned to this world by the Four Spirits. I told them all that I could remember…

The Four Spirits spoke together, “Arise and serve, O serpent of the Gods.” The pool that they had surrounded started bubbling intensely. I arose for the seemingly boiling waters. They didn’t stop. “Arise and serve, O tigress of the Earth.” The pool started bubbling again. Out from the waters came a tigress, not the average normal sized ones, but a huge one. “We have summoned you both here for one purpose and one purpose only; to bring back the Sacred Jewel,” the Four Spirits said in our heads.
“How do we do that?” Tigrea, the tigress, asked.
“You both will explore the physical world,” they replied, “find the Jewel, bring it back, and destroy those that stand in your way. You will have to disguise yourselves as humans and search, or else the villagers will become scared and chase you away. I transformed into the form Inuyasha and Co. saw me in, Tigrea, in the form of a beautiful woman then I turned away. I chose to wear a black samurai outfit. Tigrea wore a pink skin-tight kimono with green eucalyptus leaves on it.
“Now,” the Spirit of Courage said to both of us, “we send you off with the knowledge that we place our hopes on you two. Now be off” Tigrea and I disappeared in a flash of lightning.

Later that same day, a thunderstorm had hit Inuyasha, Kagome, Shippo, Sango, Miroku, and Kirara.
“This storm seems unusually strong,” Kagome said.
“I agree,” Sango said, “It does seem a little stronger than usual. Lightning flashed.
“Ehhh,” Shippo shivered, “What was that?”
“It was just the storm,” Kagome said, reassuringly. Lightning flashed more fiercely and the thunder roared terribly. Kagome screamed. Inuyasha ran outside to see lightning strike near where the well was.
“That was near the well!!!” shouted Miroku.
“Well, duh,” Shippo said, matter-of-factly, “The narrator just said that…”
“Ohh…” Miroku replied, “Why didn’t I hear it then?” They ran to the well. When they got there, they saw me and Tigrea crouching next to the well.
“What are you doing to the well?!!” demanded Kagome, aiming an arrow at us. We just crouched there. “I said, what ar-“
“Don’t bother, Kagome,” Inuyasha said, “they’re obviously not going to answer.” He drew the Tetsuseiga. Inuyasha prepared to use the Wind Scar.
Tigrea looked at me, and then nodded. I nodded back, knowing what she had meant. I got up, smiling. An unnatural gleam shone from my fangs, almost a hellish glow. The wind started to collect and swirl around the Tetsuseiga. I raised my hand, arm outstretched with my palm facing Inuyasha. A dark glow appeared around my hand.
“I don’t like the looks of this,” Sango said. A black fireball, the size of a house, shot from my hand. It raced across the field like a bullet. It impacted with Inuyasha, who was smirking. The fireball separated on impact into tow separate halves. One raced towards a screaming Kagome, the other towards Miroku. Inuyasha rushed to save Kagome. Miroku just used his Wind Tunnel. While they were busy, Tigrea and I silently disappeared into the night.
“Where’d they go?!!” shouted Inuyasha to no one in particular, “Where are they?!!”


I finished my story. They were sitting there, disbelieving.
“That was you?!!” exclaimed Shippo.
“Yeah,” I replied.
“So what happened to Tigrea?” Kagome inquired. My face turned ghostly pale.
“That’s a story for another time,” I replied hesitantly.
“What did she look like,” Miroku said, looking… umm… it looked weird okay!!! Sango glared at him.
“I know what you’re thinking, monk,” Sango said threateningly, “Don’t try it.”
“What?!!” Miroku exclaimed, trying to put on an air of innocence, “You know me better than that!!”
“He’ll never learn,” Shippo said to himself.


“I’ll be back in a couple of days,” Kagome shouted.
“Bring back more of that ninja food,” Inuyasha shouted to Kagome, his hands cupped over his mouth like a megaphone, but Kagome had already gone back to here era.
“Why are Kagome and Inuyasha the only ones that can go through that portal?” I asked.
“Well, Kagome is Kiyko’s reincarnation,” Sango replied, “We don’t know why Inuyasha can though…”
“Well, that’s depressing…” I said sarcastically, pretending to be depressed about the answer I got.
“Don’t feel bad,” Shippo said reassuringly.
“Sarcasm is a foreign language to you, isn’t it?” I said to Shippo, “Well, since Kagome’s gone, I might as well split, too. See ya later.” I leaped into the trees. There was a small rustling in the leaves and then there was nothing, but silence.
“Now what,” Miroku asked.


When Kagome got back, she passed out a lot of strange foods (Inuyasha calls them ‘ninja food’) and devices. She gave Shippo a colored sphere on a stick connected to a blue thing with a button that made the candy spin when you pushed the button. Miroku got a small, metallic barrel that seemed to contain a drink. Inuyasha got a colorful bag with fried sheets of potatoes with unusual tastes. I was in such deep thought that I didn’t notice Kagome walking up to me.
“Here,” she said pleasantly, startling me. “Sorry,” she added. She held up a white box that was emitting loud and terrified squeaks. I opened the box to find several live mice in it clawing at the walls of the box in a desperate attempt at freedom.
“Thank you,” I said hesitantly. To be honest, I didn’t really know how to react. The only person that gave me stuff, mostly food when I couldn’t catch any, was Tigrea, but se was like me, only a tigress.
“You’re welcome,” Kagome replied. I sat there still a little surprised with the box of squeaking mice.
“What do I do with them?” I asked, trying to sound pleasant. My question seemed to throw Kagome off for a moment. She regained her composure before answering.
“I got them for you to eat, since you’re a basilisk,” she said, “after all, basilisks are snakes.”
“Ohh…” I said. I started eating the mice, swallowing them whole. Kirara, being a cat demon, came up, and sat down, all while staring at the box of mice with eager enthusiasm. “You want some, Kirara??” I asked.
“Meow,” Kirara replied, with emphasis.
“I’ll take that as a yes,” I said. I dropped one of the frightened mice on the ground. It ran a couple of feet before Kirara pounced on it. The mouse squeaked for the last time before Kirara began eating it. I continued to share the mice with Kirara. When we finished, I started chatting with Kirara, using telepathy.
“I wonder what they’re saying…” Kagome said.
“Yeah, me too,” Inuyasha agreed.

“The zombie army is almost complete, my lord,” Orochimaru said.
“Excellent,” the dark figure stepped out of the shadows. Tigrea laughed, “

You shouldn't use that person when writing, you should write like you are writing about another person all the way to the end. The way you write makes it sound more like a recollection then a story.

also would some double spacing kill you? it hard to read all that with no spacing between lines.

i find it very easy to read 3nodding 3nodding so there evil

It was a good story. The only thing I wished that you didn't give abackground story evertime a character appeared. Other than that it was good.