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Posted: Fri May 11, 2007 7:56 pm
~This will no longer be updated!I have lost interest in this story, and it's causing me to write bad...D: Sorry. Maybe later I will...but not now.------------------------------------------------------------------ The young trainers info: Pokemon & Character info Name: Dawn Age: 14 Trainer since: 4 years ago Dream: Become a great pokemon trainer.
 Twin #1 Name: Ella Age: 10 Pokemon: Piplup Dream: Become a top coordinator
Twin #2 Name: Emma Age: 10 Pokemon: Mudkip Dream: Become a top coordinator
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 Pokemon #1 Species: Charizard Gender: Female Level: 80 Nickname: Ember This was Dawn's very first Pokemon. In Sino, all three of the starter Pokemon had been claimed by other new trainers. This Pokemon was a back-up in case something like this happened.
 Pokemon #2 Species: Milotic Gender: Female Level: 75 Nick Name: Aurora Hailey was fishing one day, and luckily happened to come across a Feebas she caught. Later, this Pokemon had evolved into a Milotic with all the training. This is one of Hailey's favorite pokemon to enter in beauty contests.
 Pokemon #3 Species: Pikachu Gender: Female Level: 69 Nick Name: Sparky This was a very tricky Pokemon to catch. It took her a few attempts, but luckily was able to take it down. This pokemon is one her only pokemon she'll allow to walk out of the ball. Dawn likes having company when traveling, and Sparky hates being in a pokeball if she can help it.
 Pokemon #4 Species: Mew Gender: Female Level: 90 Nick Name: Mew This Pokemon was found and captured through one of Dawn's major events. This Pokemon had to be captured in ordered to be saved. Dawn was very happy about catching a mew, and mew was happy she had a friend.
 Pokemon #5 Species: Beautifly Gender: Female Level: 56 Nick Name: Glory This pokemon was a banded as a Beautifly by its original trainer, and Dawn found it lonely. Long story, but they came to be friends so Dawn adopted it as her own. They came to be great friends.
 Pokemon #6 Species: Tyranitar Gender: Female Level: 86 Nick Name: Shade This pokemon was one of the ones Dawn caught. It leveled up to be very powerful. It has a stubborn attitude sometimes, but it learned how to control it. This pokemon was a hard one to trade, but in the end; it was worth it.Intro PostThis was just another ordinary day for a young Pokemon trainer named Dawn. She had already beaten the 8 gym battles, and was destined to beat the elite 4 once the time was right. For now, she had decided to continue her career entering beauty contests. She's already won 2 thanks to her Milotic and Mew, but it's a very hard thing to accomplish. There's so many trainers with beautiful Pokemon. This girl has already went through lots of events young trainers would dream of doing. All the horrific scenes, the sad scenes, the excited scenes, she's seen it all. From death to birth. This next role was going to be her greatest.
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Posted: Fri May 11, 2007 8:32 pm
Chapter 1
Dawn had just woken up in the morning, just like her usual days were. She'd go to the springs and refreshen up, before getting ready to train her Pokemon as usual. All of her friends were busy this time of year, Summer was a hectic season for this town. People were busy watering flowers, shopping, talking, vacations, traveling, anything you could think of this town does.
Hailey was just about to go and refreshen up, when she got an urgent phone call from her Professor. Being sleepy, she slowly lifts up the cell phone to turn it on.
"Helloooo," says Dawn yawning. "Hi, we need you to come to our lab right away. Bring all your stuff, it's an emergency!" "Wha... 'com on, can't it wait. It's so early!" "Dawn...you're one of our top trainers we can depend on. We beg of you!" "Fineeee. But this better be important!" "Oh..it sure is...thank you!" "Yeah, yeah, yeah, I'll be over in just a sec."
Hailey hangs up the phone, and then walks over to the lab to see what's up. She has no clue about how serious this actually is. Being young and stubborn, she thinks she has to save a Pokemon from a tree or something; not like that isn't important though.
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Posted: Fri May 11, 2007 9:02 pm
Chapter 2
When Dawn arrived on her bike, there were 3 professors waiting for her outside. The professor's had her follow them into the lab, towards a table room where they could discuss this to her. The main professor was there, the others that lead her in was just his assistant's. As they acquainted themselves on the chairs, Dawn blurts out,
"So why did you need me here this early? Spill the beans already!"
"We need you to go on a mission. An important one."
"Okay...and what do I do?"
"In the city of Eterna, there's a Legendary Pokemon in a cave. We believe it's a Rayquaza. We've had a Pokemon fly towards the cave, and record the sounds. The sounds of a Rayquaza is pretty hard to get mixed up with another pokemon. We don't know much about it though...but we believe something terrible has gone wrong."
"Go on ... go on!!!"
"The Rayquaza is hurting all the Pokemon in the cave of Eterna. We've seen hundreds of Pokemon come out of the cave, parallelized. In critical condition...it's horrible."
"Wow..that sounds bad."
"Indeed, it's. This is why we have come to you. You're the only trainer we believe that can take down a Rayquaza. This won't be an easy task. But we need this quest to be started on, as soon as possible. If all the Pokemon leave the cave, the Rayquaza might decide to leave...and then try to take over the whole world."
"I'm on it, professor! You can count on me!"
"Hang on Dawn. Take this ultra ball"
The professor takes out a shiny, new, ultra ball, and hands it to Dawn. "We need you to catch it, and tame it. Show it it's not alone."
"Yes sir! But why not a master ball? I'd just have to throw it as soon as I see it, and it'd be caught."
"We need to prove to it, that it's not the strongest. We need you to injure it. Throwing a master ball and catching it would prove nothing. Do you understand?"
"Okay. Will I get to keep the pokemon in the end?"
"You may if you want. It's your decision. Only time can tell."
"Okay, I'm outie now. Thanks professor!"
"Wait! Take this Pokemon Navigation system, with the special features included on it; it should provide to be very useful."
"Thanks professor"
Dawn reaches out to take the Pokemon Navigation system, and puts it in her book bag.
"Good luck, Dawn. We hope you can put an end to this, and tame it."
"Thanks professor!"
Dawn runs out of the lab, all the way back to her house to tell her mom the news. Her house is not that far from the lab, so it doesn't take her that long. While riding back, she thinks about what's happening down at the cave. It starts to worry her, but she's always wanted to do an important mission. This really was an important mission.
Dawn arrives back at the house, and runs looking for her mom. She spots her in the kitchen, and tells her the whole story of what happened. After she told her the mission, her mom worries that a 14 year old can't handle it. She's not mature enough.
"Mom, I want to be a Pokemon master. This is just another step to the top. I need to do this, or the whole world could be in danger!"
"But Dawn, you are my whole world. Please, leave this to the pro's. I can't believe of all people, they'd ask you to do it."
Dawns twin sisters came running out from where they were eavesdropping, both excited about the news. They are both 10 year olds, with their own dreams of becoming coordinators. They each have their own Pokemon. One is named Ella. She carries a Piplup. The other is named Emma. She carries a Mudkip. One thing in common about them is that they both like water pokemon.
"Heyyyyy! We wanna come too! We never get to go on adventures, it's so not fair!"
Dawn looks at them surprised, and replies "it's too dangerous for you guys."
"Dawn's right, hunny," says her mom.
"If you don't let us go...will hate you forever! You also get to have fun, and where always stuck here wishing we could come too. Please Dawn, we beg of you!"
"Well...I'd take you, but..." says Dawn. She stares at her mother.
'NO ELLA. NO EMMA. YOU STAY HERE," says their mother in a panic.
"Mom...it's about time you start letting them have their own adventure. They're 10, right when I started mine. I'm sorry, but we are getting older. We're not your little daughters anymore."
Her mother looks at the ground, and almost gives the most saddest face anybody has ever seen.
"Well..I suppose your right. I can't keep you locked up here. Dawn, I ask of you, please keep an eye on them...," says her mom.
"I will"
"Thankyou, I'll miss you guys"
All three of them hug their mom as they wave good - bye. While bicycling away, they could see their mom in tears. But they both knew her mom would never let go of them, no matter how old, so they didn't look back. Dawn had a mission, and nothing would hold her back from saving the world. Her sisters were just there for the adventure, and Dawn actually liked having company for once.
Dawn let Sparky out of the pokeball, and onto her shoulders while bicycling. She likes having a Pokemon to keep her company.
They all head to the nearest Pokemon Center for the night, it's getting dark and they need their energy. Tomorrow will be a big, long, day for the three of them.
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Posted: Fri May 11, 2007 9:03 pm
Chapter 3
Twenty minutes later, and they arrive at the Pokemon center for the night. They park their bikes right next to the Center. Ella and Emma have never been in a center before, they both stare in awe at how fancy it's.
They go to the Pokemon Center's Cafe for dinner, they're starving. Dawn orders a grilled cheese, while Ella and Emma both order a hotdog and fries.
"Do you always order the same food," questions Dawn. "No," says Ella. "We just have the same similarities."
When the food arrives, all three of them stuff themselves full. The food was very good compared to their usual meals. After dinner, they all head to their room to sleep in during the night.
The next morning, they decide to head out. They can't just eat the Cafe's food everyday, they have to get used to their own. It'll be a long trip to Eterna City. When they exit the center, they look around for their bikes. All their bikes ... they are missing! Dawn looks around frantically. This can not be happening, she tells herself. Dawn kicks a pebble into the air really hard.
"Our bikes are missing...somebody stole them!" exclaims Dawn. "Probable our mom" says Ella.
Ella becomes very angry about this, she was hoping she'd get to travel on bike. It's what she's always wanted to do.
"Oh well," says Emma.
After there search with no luck, they all head out on foot. Was a miserable day for them. While walking, they run into bunches of wild pokemon, nothing out of the unordinary. Later, Dawn decides to travel by Pokemon.
"Come out charizard!" says Dawn.
A big flash appears, and then a few seconds later, a Charizard appears.
"Ember, we need you to fly us as far as you can." says Dawn.
Ember grunts, and shakes its head no.
"Please, I beg of you!"
Ember looks around at her 2 sisters and Sparky, then shakes its head yes steadily. It's not happy about the idea, but if it has to, then it will. Ember lays its back on the ground, waiting for everybody to get on.
"Ella and Emma, you two first and hang on tightly" says Dawn.
"Okay," they both exclaim.
They both hop on Ember, followed by Dawn with her Pikachu. Ember then lifts off into the air, soaring as fast as possible. Emma and Ella both hold onto Ember very tightly, they're terrified about falling off. Dawn notices, but doesn't say anything. They wanted to come, so they have to be prepared for anything. The sky is very peaceful, Dawn can feel her hair flying in the wind. Suddenly, Ember starts to fly lower. Its been flying for 2 hours, it needs a break.
"Ember, fly down now, you did a good job!" says Dawn.
Ember stubbornly continues to fly, she doesn't want to show she's a weakling.
"Ember, if you DONT't STOP, then you will prove you're a WEAKLING! NOW STOP!"
Ember floats down after being yelled at by her owner, coming in with a very uncareful landing. The two twins both jump off as soon as they can, and literally start to jump around because they're back on the ground.
"Ember, return!"
A light appears from the air, and then the pokemon is placed back into its pokeball.
"Emma...Ella...listen..." "I knew you were afraid of flying since the minute we lifted off. That is by far the least scariest thing we're going to do. I need you two to be prepared for anything, okay? Have your Pokemon follow you if you need to. Prove to me you have what it takes to be at the top."
Ella was about to fight back, she took that statement seriously to her. But then she decides to keep her mouth shut. Better to keep quiet then make her sister mad at her.
After walking for a mile, Dawn prepares Dinner. They need to rest soon, so they better stuff themselves for tomorrow. Tomorrow, they will have to travel on foot to the cave. And to top that off, they're nowheres near closeness yet.
"Thanks Dawn...but no offense, your food sucks!" exclaims Ella. Emma was thinking the same thing, but didn't say anything. One thing different about her is that she's shy.
"Then you cook it, gosh!" says Dawn.
"I can't cook, and you know that!"
"THEN SHUT UP AND EAT WHAT YOU'RE GIVEN." says Dawn.
"Fine, jerk!" cries Ella. She can't stand being yelled at.
Dawn just ignores her, no need to get into a hissy fight with her. She starts to have second - thoughts about whether she should have been taken along. Maybe her mom was right, she thought. Oh well, nothing I can do about it now.
The three of them finish the meals quietly, and then set - up their tents. Dawn helps Ella and Emma with their tents, they tried to make it but ended up doing more harm then good. Being young, they still don't know much about traveling. After all the tents are properly set - up, they all get some shut - eye for tomorrow. With all the walking, they're going to need it.
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Posted: Fri May 11, 2007 9:10 pm
Chapter 4
Finally, the morning appears. The morning shine started to shine on Dawn; which is probably what woke her up so early. Dawn looks into the sun, stretches her arms, and lets out a big yawn. Sleepily, she prepares breakfast for her sisters and herself. In her bookbag; she takes out a box of cereal, three bowls, and a gallon of milk. Before she prepares the breakfast, she takes out a blanket and spreads it on the ground. Then she takes the bowls and puts it on the blanket. After that, she pours cereal into each of the bowls; followed by milk. After everything is prepared, she goes to wake up her sisters.
"Emma, Ella, wake up!" says Dawn while tapping them. No movement is made from them, so she starts to push and shove them. They awake and look at her, but then drop back onto the ground and fall asleep.
"Okay...no more mister nice person." she sneers. She looks at Sparky on the ground. Dawn nods her head at her Pikachu, which gives Sparky the message to shock her sisters.
"Piiiikkaaachuuuuuuuuuuu!" says the Pikachu, while sending out electric zaps at them. Ella and Emma are both stricken from the zaps, they quickly arise from their sleep to find a pikachu zapping them. From just awaking from their sleep, they assume it's a wild pikachu just messing with them. In an instant, they both get up and chase the Pikachu. Sparky quickly hops onto Dawns shoulders, and gives them the "innocent" look.
"Spa...Sparky?' says Emma confused. "What the...." says Ella. "I thought that was a wild pikachu, why would Sparky hurt us?" Ella looks up to see Sparky almost about to cry.
"She shocked yous' 'cause I told her to. You didn't get up, so thats what you get." exclaims Dawn cheerfully.
"WHY YOU!" the both of them yell together.
"Next time...get up and I won't have to. We are on a tight schedule, now no more chitter chatter!" says Dawn.
The both of them look down to see breakfast already prepared. They look up at Dawn with a confused look.
"I actually take the time to get stuff done, instead of being lazy. Now come on and eat." says Dawn.
Ella, Emma, and Dawn all go to pick their dish. Emma tried to take the biggest bowl, but Dawn took it away from her. She made it, so she gets first choice. Ella doesn't care what bowl she gets, she isn't really hungry.
"Ella....eat up." says Dawn. "You're going to need your energy." She sees Ella pick at her bowl. "Is there something wrong?"
"No!" says Ella quickly. "Well...actually..."
"Spit it out, whats on your mind?"
"Are we going to die?"
This makes them all go silent for a quick moment. "No, we're just on a journey. Everything's going to be all right." Dawn gets up to do a giggle kind of dance, putting a cheer back on Ella's face. Emma gets up to dance with Dawn, she wants to help Ella.
"Okay guys, everybody finished?" asks Dawn. "Time to hit the roads."
Dawn gets up to put everything away. It took her 10 minutes, and then she finally was ready. With sparky at her side, Ella and Emma behind her, she sets out on the open road. This time, the twin's pokemon are out walking next to them.
After walking for three long hour's, a trainer pops into view. A young boy, who looked about age 13, had walked right into Dawn's side. He must of been aiming to hit her, considering he was the one that walked into her on purpose.
"HEY, YOU, WATCH WHERE YOUR GOING." says the young boy, who is named Eric.
"Why don't you." says Dawn. Ella and Emma hide behind Dawn, they start to predict a fight is going to break out. In which case they're right though...
"OH YEAH...I've heard about you on T.V. You look like a noob type of trainer, time to put an end to your success!"
"A noob trainer?" questions Dawn. "Well, you sir sound like a internet NERD!"
"MY NAME IS ERIC, NOT SIR. Now shut UP!" yells Eric. Right after, he throws his one and only Pokemon into the field. A Blastois appears in the ground, and rearing for a battle.
Hailey takes out her navigation system. One unique feature on this is that it can tell the pokemon's level, and everything else about it. Hailey takes the system, and like a pokedex, aims it at the pokemon. Words then start to appear on the screen... Blastois. Male. Level 44. Outgoing nature.
"What are you doing?" questions Eric.
"Nothing," sneers Dawn. After that, Dawn sends out her Pikachu. "Get ready for a battle Sparky!"
"Pika!" Sparky then takes position, ears and tail both straight out.
"Blastois, water blast!" says Eric. The blastois starts to aim at the Pikachu, and lets out an enormous water blast.
Sparky, being speedy and all, dodges it. Right after, Sparky beings to use a quick attack right at the Blastois.
With the blastois looking dumbfounded, Dawn adds, "Now hit it with a thunderbolt!"
Sparky sends out an enormous thunderbolt, and the blastois gets hit. Thunder being a critical attack to water types, the blastois faints.
"Good job Sparky!" says Dawn excitedly. The pikachu runs back to Dawn to rest on her shoulders.
"You won't hear the last of me!" says Eric. Quickly, he runs away like the scared coward he's.
"Ella, Emma, that is one thing you have to realize about journeys. You have creeps like that. Just rely on your Pokemon, and there should be no harm done to ya."
Silently, they both nod their heads. They're still stunned about the battle, and how Dawn had won it so easy. That blastios wasn't necessarily weak. Is Dawn really that strong, they thought. Could our sister one day be the top leader?
Dawn quickly knocks away the silence, "come on now...we have more walking to do! If we head on, we can get to a Pokemon center before midnight."
They all head to the Pokemon Center, hoping to get there in time...
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Posted: Fri May 11, 2007 9:12 pm
Chapter 5
Finally, night time has come and they had found a Pokemon Center. While rushing, they run into the center and almost run into nurse Joy. They all topple over the counter, messing up all the equipment on top of it.
"I'm sorry Joy...I'll fix it." says Dawn, while talking in a quiet voice.
"No...that's okay....thanks though..." says Joy, with a smile on her face. She was about to burst into laughing, it's not normal to see people running like that in this part of town.
After checking in the center, Dawn decides to check in her room while her sisters explore the center alone. The room is organized as usual, with a flowery scent in the air. The windows has some flowery - looking curtains around it. Through the window, they can see tree's swaying back and forth. Dawn closes the curtains before her sisters could arrive in. If she didn't close them, she'd already know that her sisters would freak. All they ever talked about were ghosts, something they were afraid of. I should catch a haunter to show them, she thought with a chuckle.
It was growing late, and the twins still had not come into the room. Are they lost, she thought. Dawn was just about to leave the room when Nurse Joy came into her room.
"I heard screams outside, so I went out to check. I'm so sorry, but your sisters has been captured!" cried Nurse Joy.
Dawn almost passed out after she heard that, but quickly replied "NO WAY. NOT THEM. There's no way it's them!"
"Hurry..come outside!!!"
Dawn quickly zooms past Nurse Joy, leaving her standing behind watching her. Nurse Joy decided to stay out of the troublesome event, she decides it's between Dawn and her sisters, not her. Joy worries, but there's nothing she can do for them.
Dawn gets to the front door, and hears screams outside. She quickly runs outside, and sees her sisters tied up inside a balloon screaming. Inside the balloon, she sees three people and a talking meowth. Quickly remembering the wanted sign's she saw outside, she recognized three of the four in it. Jessie, the girl with long hair and a belly shirt. James, the boy with blue hair. Meowth, their talking pokemon. The fourth was a blur, until she saw his face. It was the same person she battled before, Eric. That's team rocket, she thought.
"HEY YOU, STOP RIGHT THERE!" screamed Dawn in tears.
Team Rocket looks down to see a young girl screaming at them. They knew she was the older sister of the twins, quickly they repeat the motto.
"Prepare for trouble!" "And make it double!" "To protect the world from devastation" "To unite all people within our nation." "To denounce the evils of truth and love." "To extend our reach to the stars above." "Jessie!" "James." "Team Rocket, blast off at the speed of light." "Surrender now, or prepare to fight!" "Meowth! Thats right!"
After they ended the song, Dawn gives them a really weird look. She can't believe that people would actually sing in front of people and not feel embarrassed. Idiot's, she thought to herself.
"Now give me back Ella and Emma, they didn't do anything to you!"
"Give us your Mew first, and then will give you your twins!"
"HELL NO!"
"Are your pokemon more valuable then your sister? Fine, will keep them. I can finally have my own person slaves. Muhahahaha!"
"Oh YEAH!"
"YEAH! Thats right fool, you keep on screaming!"
"If you want mew, go get her!" Quickly, Dawn sends out Mew.
"Mew, no time for questions! Attack Team Rocket!"
But before anybody could call any attacks, Team Rocket had sent out a mechanical arm that grabbed Mew. Right after, the mechanical arm began giving out shocks to what it was holding; which was Mew. Mew cried in pain, but could not get away, and finally... it fainted.
"Mew! Ella! Emma! Nooooo! You have Mew, give me back my sisters! Girls, jump, I'll catch you! Come on!"
"They are asleep and tied, they can't jump. Plus, we have a pokemon guarding them. If they awaken, they just go back to sleep. Man, I love the sing attack! Well, we have what we want, so good bye now. Thanks for everything, sweety! And don't try to follow us!"
"No! Please!!!"
And with that, Team Rocket took off in their balloon. Dawn couldn't use her charizard, it was still recovering from the last time. Beautifly could help track it down, but what good would that do if it couldn't carry somebody. Mew...well, she was captured. Pikachu can't fly. Tyranitar is a slow walker. Slowly, Dawn walked back into the Pokemon Center. But this time, she had a plan. I need Ember, she thought.
"Hi Dawn, did you rescue them?" asked Joy.
"No...."
"......"
"No? What happened?"
"They took my mew! They took my sisters! My charizard is too tired to help, and the rest can't do anything!"
"....."
"Oh..."
"Can you please heal my Charizard? Give it a full recovery, I'm willing to pay for this!"
"It's free, right this way." said Nurse Joy.
"Thankyou." Right after, Dawn followed Joy to the recovery room.
"1 hour and your Charizard will be recovered."
"Thankyou"
And with that, Joy left to help her other patients.
Dawn was left in the room alone, but starts to get down in an emotional break - down. It's my fault, she thought. If I didn't let them come, I never would of been in this mess. Emma... Hailey... Mew... please be okay. A slight tear drops from her eye's. I can't feel sorry for myself, I have a job to do. I have to rescue them! Finally, the bell goes off. Charizard has been fully recovered. Dawn takes the pokeball and heads to the front desk.
"I'm going now, thanks for everything!"
"Sure, and good luck."
Dawn opens the doors quickly, and looks up into the breezy sky. I will save them, she thought. My journey will have to wait, my sisters and pokemon come first! They are what inspire's me! Quickly, her arms out side by side and Sparky on her shoulders; she sets off on one of the most challenging and most emotional journey's ever.
"My name is Dawn, I'm not giving up. I come from the Sinno Region. I've come too far to lose, especially not to a bunch of idiots! Team Rocket will pay. Big time."
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Posted: Fri May 11, 2007 9:14 pm
Chapter 6
Dawn had just set out to look for her siblings. She took out her Poke' Nav, and pin pointed the excact location of a hot air balloon. But no balloons were spotted near by. They must of landed, she thought with a sigh. Quickly, Dawn took one of her pokeball's and let out a Beautifly. The Beautifly started to fly around, and then looked at Dawn.
"Glory, go look above for a hot air balloon in the shape of a Meowth. If you find any, please let me know."
Beautifly nodded, and quickly flew up in the sky. It started to head North, and then stopped near a waterfall. Right after that, she zoomed back to Dawn. When she arrived back, she quickly flew around Dawn to try to get her to come. Dawn nodded her head, and the Beautifly started to fly where it last was.
On the ground, it seemed like it took a lot longer to get there. In the air, it could fly there in an instant. But on ground, it had to watch out for trees and plants, pokemon and humans, and even other weird objects it passed. With the darkness still their, it was even harder then imagined. Beautifly could easily see with the darkness, but humans aren't blessed with good visions during night time. Finally, they arrived at a waterfall. Right next to the waterfall, they had spotted a meowth - shaped balloon. However, Team Rocket was gone. Dawn knew about Team Rockets dig pits, so she decides to get to the balloon by using Ember.
"Thanks Glory, return now." A light is then flashed, and seconds later Glory is returned back into her ball.
"Come out Ember, and don't make any noises!" Just like before, a light is exposed again. But this time, a Charizard is placed onto the ground after the light.
"Ember, I need you to fly me to the balloon over there."
Her Charizard looks at the balloon, and starts to chuckle about why she needs her to take her there. It's only a foot away. Dawn must be lazy, she thought. Slowly, the Charizard shakes its head in shame with a "no." Why should it have to do something that her owner is capable of doing by herself.
"Ember...they could have a dig pit that I could fall in...please..."
Ember, being stubborn and all, ignores her desperate cries. She thinks there's no way that there's any buried pits.
"EMBER!" "..." "..." "..." "..." "FINE! I'll risk danger."
And with that, Dawn slowly walks up to the balloon, careful with each step. Six inches away from the balloon, and she starts to feel the ground crumble. Quickly, Dawn stops still. Ember's laughing at Dawn acting so scared at walking, she doesn't suspect a thing about the ground. With the final step, Dawn is plunged 5 feet into the ground.
"AHHH, POO! I KNEW IT!" screamed Dawn.
Right after that, Team Rocket launches from the bushes and tries to put a steel plate on top of the hole. With Ember in shock, she launches at them and tackles Team Rocket. Jessie, the one holding the plate, drops the steel plate back in the bushes. With Team Rocket stranded on the ground, Ember quickly dives into the hole to rescue Dawn. Quickly, Ember carries Dawn back up the ground and sets her down gently. As soon as she let go of Dawn, Eric had sneakily popped up from the bushes and thrown a net at them.
"Let us out of here!"
"Hmm...then my effort will go to waste...nope."
"YOU LOWLIFE!"
"Say all you want. You're the one that's caught."
"Where's Mew? Where's Emma? Where's Lisa?"
"Safe and sound in the balloon, for now." sneered Eric.
"Okay, good. Come out Shade!"
Dawn knew if she sent out a huge pokemon, the net would break letting them escape. A Tyranitar had appeared in the net, and like Dawn had expected; it broke the net and set them free.
"Good job Shade!"
When the net broke, Shae just sat there and looked confused. It had no idea what was going on, but it quickly gets into action. While they were stuck in the net though, Sparky had hopped into the balloon and set everybody free.
"Sparky, you rescued them yet? If you did, pop out with me now!"
Out of the bushes, Sparky jumped out with Mew, Emma, and Ella. All of them ran to Dawn and hugged her tightly. Daylight had started to come, their day was getting better.
"Yessss, your all here!" cried Dawn in delight.
"I MISSED YOU" cried Emma and Ella together.
"I missed you tooooo!"
"OH NO YOU DON'T!" screamed Jessie, James, Meowth, and Eric.
"Guys, get behind me! Quickly!"
Emma and Ella got in the back of Dawn, both sitting on the floor. In their lap was Sparky and Mew.
"Ember...teach these loser's what it's like to loose!" "Use fly!" "Go now!"
Ember the Charizard had flown right at all four of them, and grabbed them in her arm before they could do anything. Right after, the Charizard lifted them all the way into the air. They couldn't do anything. If they tried to escape, they'd fall with a crud. If they let Charizard carry them, they'd still end up injured. Ember hurled them into circles, and then came flying down at full force. Ember smashed them into their own balloon when she got to the ground.
"Good job Ember!" "Now, go Sparky! THUNDERBOLT THE BALLOON!"
Sparky jumped up from Ella and Emma, and leaped at the balloon throwing a thunderbolt at the head of the balloon. The meowth head popped with a explosion, sending the balloon sailing high in the sky with Team Rocket.
"LOOKS LIKE WERE BLASTING OFF AGAINNNNNNNN!" screamed Team Rocket.
Dawn looked at everybody on the ground.
"Thankyou guys."
"Return Ember, thankyou." "Return Tyranitar, Thankyou." "Return Mew, glad you're back."
All three of the pokemon were sent back to their pokeball's.
"Emma...Ella...I'm so sorry!" cried Dawn. "I'm to blame for everything..."
Dawn looked down at the ground, hair swaying in the breeze, and for the first time; cried a stream.
"It's okay...we weren't careful Dawn." said Ella. "I promise nothing like this will happen again, but we want to continue!" said Emma. "We're having so much fun." said the both of them together.
Dawn looked at them and smilied. Right after, she got up and hugged them tightly.
"Okay, will accomplish this mission...together!" said Dawn with a smiley on her face.
"Okay!" said the others in delight.
And with that, the four of them go on to finish their mission.
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Posted: Fri May 11, 2007 9:23 pm
Chapter 7
Dawn took out her Poke' Navigation to pin point where they are. When she looked at it, she was surprised at how close she actually was now. Thanks to Team Rocket, they were only 2 towns away from their goal; not much more to go. But right now, she's very tired. She hasn't had any sleep for hours.
"Um...sorry...I need to rest. You two can train while I rest, okay?"
The two look at them confused at this sudden outburst; but quickly replies together, "Haha! You, tired? That's a first!"
"SHUT UP, and good night!"
"Yeah, whatever..but you mean good morning."
"Oh my gosh, you two! What ever!!! Gosh! Now, good.. sleep!"
"Uh huh."
Dawn dug into her book bag, and took out her sleeping bag. It was dirty from the last time, but she has no time to clean it. Quickly, she sets it on the ground and falls asleep in an instant. Her sisters just stare in daze, but quickly Emma comes back to reality. Emma starts to make motions as she takes her Pokemon out. Ella comes back to reality after seeing Emma move, and quickly takes out her pokeball too.
"Ella, lets train! What better way to train then to battle?"
Before she could wait for any reply, she had thrown her pokeball and out popped her Pokemon.
"Time to battle, Mudkip!"
Quickly, it gets into a battle position. It was rearing for a battle.
"Um, sure..." said Ella in hesitant. Slow but steady, she sent out her own Pokemon.
"Piplup, were battling! Ella, lets battle over there!"
Emma points to the field over by their left.
"Fine by me!" said Ella.
The two of them start to walk to the field by their left, they are going to begin their first Pokemon battle. Their two pokemon stand next to each one, both on opposite sides and next to their trainers. Ella takes the first move.
Hmm; the opponent is a water type, so water attacks are useless, she thought.
"Okay...Piplup, tackle attack!"
Her Piplup starts to plunge at the Mudkip.
"Mudkip, dodge!" said Emma.
The Mudkip leaps up into the air, and avoids Piplup's attack. Piplup is still charging though; unaware of Mudkip jumping in the air, and quickly hits a tree. Its beak gets stuck in the tree, but it gets itself free.
"Mudkip, charge!"
The moment Piplup got its self free from the tree, it turns around to see a mudkip charging fast at it.
"Piplup, get out of the way! Don't let Emma win!"
But Mudkip was too fast. Before Piplup even had a chance of turning the other way, Mudkip had charged at it and sent it flying. Piplup struggled trying to get up, but couldn't and fainted.
"Piplup..get up get up get up!!!" "Don't just lay there, get up now!" "GET UP!" "Now..."
Before Ella could finish her sentence, Emma buts into to say something.
"...its down and out Ella..."
"What? I didn't think about that...there's no way!"
"Its not moving 'cause it fainted stupid!"
"FINE! You win!" cried Ella.
Ella took out her pokeball, and had her Piplup return.
"I'm sorry Piplup, please forgive me." cried Ella.
"Great battle!" said Emma.
"Yeah...for you maybe."
"Don't be a darn spoiled sport!"
"I'm NOT" wined Ella.
"Okay...what ever, lets just drop it."
Emma took out her pokeball, and called back her Mudkip.
"Good job Mudkip!" said Emma.
"Pshhhhht" said Ella.
"Wow... that's so mature."
Ella quickly ran and hid behind a tree. She had never lost at anything, so this was quite hard for her to admit defeat. She feels bad for pushing her pokemon since it tried its best, but she's mad at her sister for reasons even she can't explain. She leans on the tree and feels hopeless, there's no hope for her of ever becoming a trainer.
Emma notices Ella crying, but she decides to stay out of it. Ella would only get madder. Emma's heart had become broken, her sister was the whole world to her. For Ella to hate Emma; was like death waiting to appear for Emma. Man, too much drama, she thought. Emma decides to walk over to Dawn, and waits for her to awake so she can talk to her about it.
Half an hour has gone by, so Emma shoves her sister to wake up. Dawn glances up to see Emma, and was about to yell at her for it... until she saw her in tears.
"Emma...whats wrong?" asks Dawn.
"Ella hates me!" cried Emma.
"No she doesn't, silly."
"Yes she does!"
"Well...did something happen?"
"We had a battle. I won, she lost. She hates me for winning."
Dawn almost burst out laughing at that, but manages to hold it in.
"That's the most ridiculous reason ever!" she blurts out.
"YOU THINK I DON'T KNOW THAT?" cried Emma.
"Where is your sister?"
Emma points to the tree, and spots Ella crying while holding onto her pokeball.
"I'll have a talk with her, k?"
"Yeah..what ever..."
Dawn gets up slowly from her nap, and walks over to a tree. As she gets nearer to the tree, Ella stands up in defense.
"What do YOU want?"
"To talk to you." says Dawn in delight.
"Go on...go on..."
"Somebody has to loose a battle. Your pokrmon just needs more training, what'd you expect from a first battle? To win?"
"Actually, I did!"
"Hating your sister just because of that is really lame, in all do respects, 'mam."
"I never said I hate her!"
"Leaving her a lone and crying is a nice way to say you love her..."
"I don't know...I just feel...pathetic..."
"Don't be! You just started your journey! Okay? You're still a trainer in training!"
"Well, I guess I'm not as mad anymore..."
"Go tell Emma that, not me! You know, you made her very depressed..."
"Sorry."
"DON'T tell ME that! Emma needs to hear that!"
Ella quickly walks away from Dawn, and heads to Emma in fear. She's afraid at how she'll re-act, but it must be said.
"I'm sorry Emma...for acting like a jerk..."
"Thats fine...I don't care."
"WHAT? You don't care? My gosh!"
"I was kidding! Of course I care!" screamed Emma in surprise.
"Oh...sorry...do you hate me?"
"As long as you don't hate me."
Ella smiled, and slowly walks to hug Emma. Dawn had been watching from far away, and smiled when she saw them hug. They had apologized. Dawn walks in on that very moment, and says,
"Man, you guys are weird!"
"No were not!" says the twins in unison.
Emma and Ella both look at each other, and then giggle with a smiley.
"Lets go...two more towns until our destination! Whoo!"
All three of them leave the area, and head to the next town hopefully before night time. What adventures they'll await, who knows...and with that, they set out.
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Posted: Sat May 12, 2007 8:53 am
Chapter 8
Dawn begins to walk into the next town, only one town away from their destination. As they're walking, they start to tire down. They've been walking for what seems like...forever! Dawn decides to travel a quick way...
"Come out charizard!" exclaims Dawn.
After a bright light, a charizard appears in its place.
"Ember...will you please take us to the next city?"
The charizard stands still for a second, but then slowly shakes its head. It hates carrying lazy people, but it wanted to fly today. It likes seeing scenery. The Charizard lowers its back so the others can get on. Quickly, Dawn picks her sisters up and puts them on her back. As soon as Ella and Emma were on, she quickly jumps on her back too. When everybody was on, Ember took off to fly.
Ella and Emma are more comfortable this time when they're flying. In fact, they're quite enjoying it. As they all look down, they see houses that like like doll houses from above. It was a life - time experience for the two.
After flying for nearly two hours, they come across a pokemon center so they fly down for the day. As they hop off and call the pokemon back to its pokeball, they decide to travel in the city for a little bit. This city is basically made of water. It has rivers with boats, and fountains all over the place. Perfect place to sell boats, Dawn thought.
Before the night begins, Dawn had Ella and Emma do a practice battle with her.
"Ella, you first" said Dawn.
"K" said Ella.
With a near by field, they both get into opposite positions and face each other. Ella was destined to beat her sister and thought she could do it, but Emma had enough common sense to know she couldn't. Ella had one pokemon, and it was weak. Dawn had six pokemon, and just one could crush hers in one attack. Emma gets to the middle of the battle field to be the judge.
"This is a one on one pokemon battle. Do your best!" shouts Emma.
Dawn calls out her weakest pokemon, "Go Beautifly!"
As Hailey throws her pokeball to the ground, a great light appears and a beautifly replaces the light in an instant. Shinning with its dazzling beauty, it flies above the field.
"Go Mudkip!" shouts Ella.
As Ella throws her pokeball to the ground, a great light appears and a mudkip replaces the light in an instant. Being new to battling, it runs around the field in confusion.
"Mudkip, get into action! You're battling!"
Looking at the beautifly, it gets back into its position. This time, there's something different about it. It has a passion to take down the pokemon, and prove to Ella it's skilled. As it stands still and waits for orders, it looks up into the air and spits out a stream of water; like how a fountain looks when it spits out water.
"BEAUTIFLY GO!" screams Dawn.
In an instant, it takes off and flies around the mudkip with great speed. The mudkip tries to squirt water, but the beautifly is to fast compared to her.
"Beautifly, tackle" says Dawn.
"Mudkip, watch out!" cries Ella.
The beautifly caves in and goes for the dive. With the mudkip trying to run away, the tackle becomes more effective. Beautifly tackles the mudkip with no sweat, and sends it flying into the air. In a panic, it tries to land back on its feet; but that only makes it worse. Mudkip starts to fall down as it gets up, but keeps on trying.
"Mudkip, water gun and fast"
With all its might, mudkip sends out what looked like a water blast at the beautifly. But with an experienced beautifly, that was like being sprayed with a water gun toy. The beautifly takes its delicate wings and starts to send the water in the opposite direction, right towards mudkip. After getting hit with its own water attack, it faints to the ground.
"Mudkip is unable to move, beautifly wins the match!" screams Emma.
"Return Mudkip, great job." says Ella.
"Return Beautifly, your rock!" says Dawn with enthusiasm.
After sending both of their pokemon back, all three of them run to hug each other. They've done a good battle, despite Ella being inexperienced.
Suddenly, Dawn turns away and sees the pokemon center closing for the night.
"QUICKLY!" screams Dawn.
As the three of them run towards the center, the three of them start to scream to hold on. You could of heard their screams from a mile away, they can be loud with they want to. Nurse Joy hears their screams and holds off, just until they come in the door's.
"Just in time" she giggles as she closes the door.
"Yeah," said Emma.
About two feet away, there's an empty room. There, they decide to sleep.
"Sleep up guys, we only have 20 minutes of flying tomorrow...and then we're at the cave."
"Okay" says the twins in unison.
After a long day, they all sleep down for the night. Little did they know, there was a spy in the pokemon center with a room right next to them. They had heard all about their attempt to save the cave, so they were assigned to shut their journey down. A group you know as...the evil team rocket...except this time, it isn't the lame trio you always hear about.
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Posted: Tue May 15, 2007 11:28 pm
---------------- ~*~ Fan Review ~*~ ---------------- Love it so far! Good to see it's pretty literate, I hate reading fanfics rittn lyk dis.This isn't really related to your fanfic, but just a question anyway; would it be a good idea or bad if a fanfic was started where everyone can add a few chapters each? I know it's a little like roleplay, but if everyone keeps in mind that it's meant to be a story, it could turn out pretty nicely. Just a thought cool Oh, and if anyone else wants to add a Fan Review without having to toil over the colours and font effects, please feel free to use the following code! [align=center][size=18][color=lightgreen]----------------[/color][/size] [size=25][color=cyan]~*~[/color] [color=violet][u][b]Fan Review[/b][/color][/u] [color=cyan]~*~[/color][/size] [size=18][color=lightgreen]----------------[/color][/size][/align]
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Posted: Wed May 16, 2007 1:07 pm
Elvenria ---------------- ~*~ Fan Review ~*~ ---------------- Love it so far! Good to see it's pretty literate, I hate reading fanfics rittn lyk dis.This isn't really related to your fanfic, but just a question anyway; would it be a good idea or bad if a fanfic was started where everyone can add a few chapters each? I know it's a little like roleplay, but if everyone keeps in mind that it's meant to be a story, it could turn out pretty nicely. Just a thought cool Oh, and if anyone else wants to add a Fan Review without having to toil over the colours and font effects, please feel free to use the following code! [align=center][size=18][color=lightgreen]----------------[/color][/size] [size=25][color=cyan]~*~[/color] [color=violet][u][b]Fan Review[/b][/color][/u] [color=cyan]~*~[/color][/size] [size=18][color=lightgreen]----------------[/color][/size][/align]
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Posted: Wed May 16, 2007 10:57 pm
Princellah Elvenria ---------------- ~*~ Fan Review ~*~ ---------------- Love it so far! Good to see it's pretty literate, I hate reading fanfics rittn lyk dis.This isn't really related to your fanfic, but just a question anyway; would it be a good idea or bad if a fanfic was started where everyone can add a few chapters each? I know it's a little like roleplay, but if everyone keeps in mind that it's meant to be a story, it could turn out pretty nicely. Just a thought cool Oh, and if anyone else wants to add a Fan Review without having to toil over the colours and font effects, please feel free to use the following code! [align=center][size=18][color=lightgreen]----------------[/color][/size] [size=25][color=cyan]~*~[/color] [color=violet][u][b]Fan Review[/b][/color][/u] [color=cyan]~*~[/color][/size] [size=18][color=lightgreen]----------------[/color][/size][/align]
YOUR TEXT HERE Sure, you could do that. ^^ Nyuh, will start later (:
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Posted: Thu May 17, 2007 5:19 pm
I'm really likin' this so far, good job 3nodding
It's amazing to see Team Rocket actually succeed with something! Wow xd
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Posted: Fri May 18, 2007 1:36 am
---------------- ~*~ Fan Review ~*~ ---------------- Princellah "Prepare for trouble." "And make it double." "To protect the world from devastation" "To unite all people into our nation." "To denounce the evils of truth and love." "To extend our reach to the stars above." "Jessie" "James" "Team Rocket blasting at the speed of light." "Surrender now and prepare to fight." "Meowth! Thats right!" "Prepare for trouble!" "And make it double!" "To protect the world from devastation" "To unite all people within our nation." "To denounce the evils of truth and love." "To extend our reach to the stars above." "Jessie!" "James." "Team Rocket, blast off at the speed of light." "Surrender now, or prepare to fight!" "Meowth! Thats right!" Pretty sure that's the anime version...I think. Never heard a motto more soaked in sarcasm than that one rofl
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Posted: Fri May 18, 2007 1:13 pm
Marsuru I'm really likin' this so far, good job 3nodding It's amazing to see Team Rocket actually succeed with something! Wow xd Thanks! Yeah, but thats only because of the fourth person helping them. xp
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