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Posted: Sat Jul 16, 2005 12:26 am
I made a thread not too long ago as a test of others' roleplaying abilities. I am going to post up all of their posts in here along with my first two posts that started the thread. ^^
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Posted: Sat Jul 16, 2005 12:27 am
It's finished. I graded everyone's entries. And I'm almost disappointed. No one failed. Damn. I would've had such fun too. <.< Anyway, everyone's entries are going to be put back into their posts. So then others can read what each person submitted. Quite nice entries. I even made one of my own. And went extremely overboard with writing it. ^^" Enjoy~ Quote: Let's just see everyone responses. This will have a single post that I would like to see how everyone's responses would be on this. As in, it is a roleplay thing. You will make one post. I will record it and review it. No changes. No help by me for you. If you can't do it, then you should reconsider even trying to join the roleplay. I'll have a discussion thread up again sometime later. And you could always just hang out in the OOC thread till you get ultimately annoying to me. Consider the following in your post: Grammar and spelling content. Many of you have nothing to worry about in this area. (Tei. Try your best here, kay? I will not be harsh on you here because I understand with you. 3nodding ) The flow of your post. It can't just jump from one point to the next. You can't be in one place, and then suddenly it is the next day and you are somewhere else. What happened? How'd you get there? What did you do in the time that elapsed? If you were asleep, then did you dream? If so, what was the dream about? The tenses of your post. Now even though this may be covered by the grammar part, I must state it again. It must be in the past tense. When one reads your post, it didn't just right then happen. It doesn't make sense to put something in the present tense. All actions are of the past tense. (If you are truly an idiot, things in dialogue and monologue are in whatever tense is needed. More than likely present tense.) Perspective. Third-person perspective. No "I walked up to you" crap. "He walked up to the other young man in the blue and white collared shirt and brown slacks." That is but an example that I thought up right on the spot, but I at least made it interesting. As was described above, description. "He walked up to the man." Really? What man? There could be many men. And where was he? In a room? In a lea? (meadow for those who don't know.) Come now. Be descriptive. If that is too difficult, you probably aren't cut out for roleplaying with the intelligent. At the moment, that is all that I will consider. Favouritism will not play a part. Just because you are a friend or an enemy, does not mean that I will grade differently. Further, you can try to say that you are in some other guild and I could just view your posts there. That is not the point. I can view my own member's posts here if I so pleased to. I would just like to see what all of you have. No profiles are required for this. But you are expected to describe your character in your first post just a bit. As would be expected of you in your first post in any other RP. The next post will be the post to reply to.
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Posted: Sat Jul 16, 2005 12:31 am
((Since this is addressed to multiple people, this will be addressing you as you. Not in the third person. It will make it just a bit easier to respond to I guess.)) ((Neither of your characters can view eachother. This is as if it is only happening to you. So do not respond to someone else's post.)) On the shore, everything seemed peaceful. Waves rolled onto the shore and tickled your toes with its gentle foam. Shells shone brightly on the shoreline in the noon high sunlight. You had a blanket rolled out behind you with a boom box and sun tan lotion on the side. In the distance there were fins gliding along the water. They belonged to the dolphins native to this beach area. Skates could be seen swimming just off of the shore under the water. Though things were not peaceful under the gentle waves. About a mile out to sea on the ocean floor, something was happening quickly. The ground was breaking open and exposing the magma beneath. It's been four decades since the last earthquake. Many had forgotten about such happenings on such a peaceful island. But it seemed the past was coming back. As the ground broke apart quicker, the water began to become choppy. Waves lost their gentility. The dolphins quickly swam away from the area and further out into sea. The skates soon followed them. Magma seeped into the water and the ground began to shake violently now. The ocean looked as if a thunderstorm was raging with the insanity the waves were showing. The water began to rapidly heat from its comfortable temperature of 27 degrees Centigrade to higher than fifty degrees centigrade already above the site of the cracked open earth. The surrounding water was slowly rise along with that temperature. Furthermore, the dormant volcano in the center of the island began to let off black smoke. It wasn't going to be dormant anymore. An explosion shook the island furiously as the once dormant volcano burst its dried inner shell. Lava had yet to flow down its sides, but it was only seconds before that would take place. You remember two things while all this is taking place. One is back near the center of the island where your hotel room is, and the other is off the island. Both you care about. ((What those two things are is up to you. It could be a family member as both, pets, or even something like a briefcase of money versus your own a**. XD It all depends on you.)) But you can only choose one. To risk nearly impossible chances of making it back to your hotel room alive to retrieve your item and hoping that the lava misses your hotel, or get your a** on the rescue chopper that is parked just to your left and is prepped and ready? All up to you. ((If you do choose the safe route, you still have to have a good paragraph with descriptions, thoughts, maybe some dialogue, and everything else you would probably find in a normal post.)) ((Have fun, kiddies. I'll be watching.))
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Posted: Sat Jul 16, 2005 12:48 am
Clair had no idea why she was on the beach. She didn't tan, she burned. She didn't like sand. The sun was beginning to hurt her eyes: a painful reminder that she needed to get prescription sunglasses next time she went to the optometrist's office. She groaned as she pulled herself upright, tensing as her abdominal muscles screamed at her-- she must've done too much while attempting to break her speed record in swim. A sigh escaped her lips as she thought about a nice, relaxing massage from her physical therapist. She was roasting in the hot sun, and Clair slowly stood up straight. She began to wonder if sun tan lotion made any difference to her skin whatsoever. It was about time for her to head in, anyway. Gathering her things, the young woman prepared to return to the hotel in which she was staying. She tossed sand out of her towel, idly tossing it around her shoulders. She carefully placed the different bottles and accessories strewn about her small nest in her beach bag, and quickly moved herself towards the pavement of the sidewalk an eighth of a mile to her west. A low groan sounded from the waves, causing Clair to look back. She squinted, placing a hand on her head to keep her hair in place as sudden, unnatural winds began to pick up. The hiss of steam and bubbles breaking the water's surface startled her, and she began to make her way towards the sealine again, curious. A young child who had been playing in the water suddenly let out a cry of surprise, and flailed her way back to the dry sand. She exhaled in relief upon feeling the parched sand on her skin. Clair moved closer, intrigued by her sudden outburst. She didn't get very far, though, as other swimmers began to grumble in discontent and move towards the shore, as well. When Clair looked out to the sea again, it was devoid of all forms of life. No plants grew in this part of the water, and even the skittish fish had left. Families began to mumble amongst themselves, each deciding, in turn, to leave. The waves grew larger and darker, their ominous presence only doubled by the fact that the sun was now hiding behind a thick cloud cover. Clair stepped back, her full intention to be to return to the hotel where she was staying. She barely made it to the first intersection when loud sirens began to blare. To her surprise, she noted the plumes of black smoke and volcanic exhaust rising to the darkening sky. Suddenly, a violent rumble shook the island, and Clair cried out as she clawed around for something to hang on to. Her savior came in the form of a lamp post, and she gladly latched her arms around its sturdy frame. The people around her were crying out in terror and running to the airport and local marina. Clair herself felt the urges to do so, feeling trapped and increasingly claustrophobic on the island. She couldn't stay here, that much she knew, but with the hordes of people rushing to the only exits..? There was little chance she'd make it off the island at all. She suddenly exhaled, remembering the stash of antique books that had been the purpose of this vacation. She clenched her teeth at the thought of losing the one-of-a-kind volume set, a treasure from an archaeological dig somewhere in Europe. But at the same moment the thought it her, magma began to flow freely from the mouth of the volcano. The sight spurred Clair into action, and she took a sharp left to the rescue chopper that had landed moments before. Rescue workers were shouting at her to get in, grab hold-- do something to get out of the way of the impending doom that had gripped the very core of the island. Clair blew out another sad breath. They were only books, and books could be replaced. She could only hope that the magma wouldn't completely destroy the island. She pushed off from the lamp post, grasping onto the arm of one of the rescue workers. They patted her shoulder and set her down on the seat, buckling her up as if there was no way to do it herself. The takeoff was beautiful-- Clair tried to remember the last time she'd ridden a whirlybird. It had been a long while, that's for sure, but she somehow recalled that last time being under more pleasant circumstances. She shook her head. Her family was off the island, and they were irreplaceable.
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Posted: Sat Jul 16, 2005 1:06 am
Dash woke up abruptly from a sudden movement. His eyes weren't really open, but he sat up anyways, his lucious blue hair falling to his not-so-broad shoulders. He stretched to his fullest extent as he let out a loud, long yawn. After doing so, he shook his head and rubbed his eyes. People began to come away from the water, but as to why, he didn't know. Soon, everyone broke into syncronized run, leaving Dash in a very confused state. To make matters worse, everything practically went pitch black. Gazing up to the sky, an eclipse took place. Funny, he hadn't heard anything about an eclipse coming around this time of year. Very casually, he stood up as he threw on his unbuttoned shirt. The shorts he wore were very worn in, faded and probably should've been used to keep some hobo warm than for clothing. He hadn't brought anything down with him to the beach, then again, it was a waste of time coming. All he wanted was a nap, but his girlfriend was nagging him about every little thing. He had to get away and the beach was the only place he could come up with. As he walked towards the streets, he looked left and right. Everyone looked so frightened. One woman with a one piece swimming suit and a feathered hat on fell backwards as she pointed towards something in the sky. Dash looked up and everything made sense to him now as black smoke came from inside a dead volcanoe. A dark cloud had been forming around the top, swirling slowly, but began to pick up speed. A bolt of lightning shot out from the cloud, blowing up a car with a family of four inside as a loud thunder crack bellowed from the monster, shaking the ground intensly. Dash was barely able to maintain his balance as his grabbed on to a tree. A helicopter landed near him towards his left, he was safe. Letting go of the tree, Dash began his way towards the helicopter and stopped after a few steps. "A-Angela..." He whirled around just in time to see lava spew forth from the volcanoe with his hotel not too far away from it. Now was the time to make a big decision, it was either save Angela or save his own skin. Glancing back at the helicopter, he shook his head and took off for the hotel. Hordes of people were going in the opposite direction of him, he was like a tiny trout trying to go up a strong current as he ran into people, knocking them down. Finally breaking away from the crowd, he took a sharp right for the hotel, nearly losing his balance into a nasty fall. Weaving between abandoned cars and bikes, the ground grumbled with fierce anger. There was nothing Dash could do to keep his balance as he flew forward. It would've been a fatal fall had he not quickly fell into a roll, but he didn't walk away from it perfectly fine. Shards of glass just happened to be where he landed, as he rolled, they dug themselves into his back. He slowed down in speed as blood began to drip down his legs. The hotel was right there, he was going to save her. Placing his right hand on the cold railing, he pulled himself up the stairs slowly, the blood flowing a little more freely now. As he reached the top of the flight of stairs, he jumped at room number "205." He banged on the door repeatedly until a petite asian girl opened it. (She's 16, Dash isn't a ***** -_-) Her eyes were filled with beauty, confusion and fear. She was about to say something just as Dash had grabbed her arm. At that exact moment, something erupted from beneath the sea, making it's way up to the surface. The sea seemed to turn a faint red. Shaking his head, Dash tugged on Angela as he made his way down the stairs. "D-Dash! What the hell is going on?!" There was no time to explain anything, they reached the bottom of the stairs and ran like hell. The lava had already hit the backside of the hotel and was catching up to them fast. Meanwhile on the beach, lava had already begun to creep up on to the shore line. Dash became a little light headed, losing a bunch of blood was never good for anyone. Weaving once again through the cars and bikes, they rounded the corner, the corner that sealed there fate. Three more helicopters had come to the rescue and were already in the air flying away slowly. Dash fell to his knees, tears formulating in his eyes. The earth shook more and more, the swirling cloud above the volcanoe circling faster and faster. Dash screamed with all his might. "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!" His voice was drowned out by a loud thunder crack, which was followed by a neat little light show of lightning bolts. All of which managed to hit the helicopters...everyone was dead except them. The lava from the volcanoe and the lava from the sea circled around the two, Dash's eyes were hollow, Angela clinging to him, crying. There was no escape, nothing they could do. As the lava reached Dash's knees, he closed his eyes. His heart raced, almost as if it were jumping out of his chest and back. He let out a shreek of pain as the lava began to eat him alive. Angela screamed soon after. Jumping frantically into the sea, Dash quickly woke up as his shreek continued. People eyed him oddly as if he were crazy, his shreek faded away as he left his mouth open. He looked around, there was no lava, no cloud and no eclipse. Angela ran into the sea and looked at him, bewildered. "Dash? What's wong?!" Dash looked into her eyes, they were filled with beauty, confusion and fear. He sighed as he took her into his arms and held her like he had lost her. "It's...nothing. Just a bad dream..."
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Posted: Sat Jul 16, 2005 8:17 pm
Holy s**t. The concussions of the underwater fissure made the earth tremble beneath Deirdre with a monsterous force. She stayed still, propped up on her elbows in the sand, waiting for the tremor to receed, worried out of her skin... but when the shaking stopped, she knew all was not well. The creatures in the ocean were still panicking. Deirdre stood and gasped as she looked out to sea... underneath the waves was red hot flowing magma. Now was definately not a good time to be at the beach. She snagged up her boombox and beach towel quickly, running towards off-shore. Her fast footfalls took sand in divets, throwing its granules up into the air behind her. Deirdre wondered what Michael would have to say about this! No doubt he had felt the tremor in the hotel room and... Holy ********. Another concussion shook the earth beneath her, almost throwing her off her feet. She dropped her items in shock, staring up at the dormant volcano in the distance. Dormant? Dormant?? Those damn tour guides and travel agents had said the volcano had been dormant for hundreds of years... and now, now it was ******** exploding??!! Michael. Michael, she had to get him, she had to... she... Someone was yelling at her. Deirdre's head whipped around. There on the beach was a helicopter. It's propellers were spinning wildly, obviously ready for take-off. She wondered why she had not heard it, but realized with a bit of a shock that she could hear nothing over the rumbling and spitting of the volcano just a mile or two away. The man in the helicopter was waving at her frantically, shouting... though she could hardly make out his words through sound, nor sight... for she had left her glasses at the hotel room. She strained her ears... something about leaving... leaving now... the last helicopter on the island... Deirdre swallowed. She had to get Michael. She took one last look at the helicopter, and ran as fast as her feet would carry her towards the hotel room. Michael had felt the first shockwave as well from his spot on the bed. Immediately, he stood up, abandoning his work on his laptop, and rushed over to the window to look outside. When he pulled aside the curtain, he almost let out a shriek. The ocean was red underneath! He threw open the door to the balcony and stepped out onto it. Why the hell had he let Deirdre go out to beach alone?! He had known better! Not that he had expected anything like this... but, but well he knew better!! Michael sniffed the air. What was that? Smoke? Michael turned to look inland from his location on the balcony. This time, he did let out a shriek. He had turned just in time to watch the volcano spit forth it's first gush of lava. The red hot goo flew up hundreds of feet into the air, cascading down the sides of huge slanted expanse... He forced his feet to move as he rushed out of his hotel room with only one thought on his mind... Deirdre. There he was! He had come out of the hotel and had started toward the beach, meeting her in the middle. Deirdre pumped her legs harder and leapt into his arms. Michael snatched her easily and squeezed her tight. Oh, the feel of her skin and flesh... she was so soft; the light in her brown eyes was so beautiful and the shine of her hair in the sunlight was so enchanting. Thank God he had not lost her... Michael savored the quick embrace with much relish. "We've got to get away from here!" he shouted, putting her down, hands staying about her hips. Deirdre took his hand in her own. "Follow me!" she shouted, once again on the move. The two ran back towards the beach. Michael might have objected, save running towards an exploding volcano was likely not a good instinct either... "Oh my God... no...!" Deirdre breathed, eyes fixed at a point in the sky. Michael looked up and let his jaw go slack. A helicopter was flying... away. "That's the last one!" she cried. "What?" Michael said, aghast. "The last one!" Deirdre cried again, her eyes filled full with tears, hand clutched onto his so tightly it hurt. Michael pulled her into his arms, squeezing her tight again, her head buried in the side of his neck as she sobbed. His hands caressed her back, hoping to soothe her... as though death was soothing... He bit his lip and held her firmer. "I love you," he whispered gently in her ear. Deirdre raised her head to gaze into his luscious blue eyes. "I love you too," she whispered back, a hint of a smile upon her lips. The two nuzzled and shared a kiss, the inferno of death coming to envelop them.
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Posted: Sat Jul 16, 2005 8:21 pm
Three days in paradise....that third day, T.J. woke up and found himself sitting back and relaxing at the beach. He could feel the waves seemingly kiss his feet and giggled a little every time the current brought a wave in. It was the best three days he'd had in a long while. Everything looked so beautiful. The calm breeze kept him cool from the sun, but wasn't strong enough to really bother his short, dark brown hair. Since he had a light complexion, it was safe to assume that he should've been getting ready to head back to the hotel, but he lingered a bit to enjoy the view surrounding him. The calm blue water seemed to rock the sealife with a gentle lullaby, lulling everything slowly back and forth. The sight itself could make someone relaxed enough to fall asleep. Perhaps that's why he had fallen asleep in the middle of the day. But he still didn't know what woke me up. He thought it could've been the waves at his feet, but....wait....the waves weren't that close before he fell asleep. Suddenly, the water seemed to burn his feet, and then shock set in. He could see peril in the water as all sealife fled further out to sea to avoid something horrible. Something that was happening right there, right then. He could see what was happening in the water and froze for a moment. All of a sudden, he jumped up, and his simple, blue swimshorts fell down a little, so he pulled them back up and pulled on the strings a little to tighten them, and then he took off running toward the hotel. He could hear someone calling from behind him as he was running. He didn't care. He couldn't leave the island without--Suddenly, he could see the mountain behind the hotel erupting. It was no longer just a mountain. It had returned to its volcanic state once again, and then he saw it. The eruption wasn't just from the top of the volcano. He saw a hole in the side of the mountain. The hotel was devoured by an explosion of nature's fury. He was too late. He couldn't save--He awoke to the phone ringing. It rung twice. Apparently, someone had the wrong number and soon realized the mistake and promptly hung up. He started to cry, but soon stopped. It was a dream. Nothing bad actually happened. Brandon was staring at him with worry in his face. T.J. put his arms around him and set his head on Brandon's shoulder. He said that it was all just a bad dream, and told Brandon to just let him cry for a bit. He'd be better then, and he'd tell him about the dream...
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Posted: Sat Jul 16, 2005 8:26 pm
It had all been such a lovely day... tropical birds "singing," and a gentle breeze had been slowly putting him to sleep. He had just been lying there, on the beach... taking in the sun without a care in the world. He wasn't very good looking, and the tan he was getting wasn't exactly helping that problem. His face had been scarred... it was either an intense case of acne years ago, or he had lost a fight with a straight edge razor, nobody quite knew what happened except him... and he didn't want to talk about it. His hair was short, and the color put (yellow) corn to shame. His eyes were a dirty brown, and his nose was hooked. He was not very tall, only about 5.5 feet, which was made even more obvious by the towel he had been lying on and how it made him look like a dwarf of some sort. He had just been lying there, not a care in the world. Not even suspecting what was about to happen. He had just decided to go to the water for a quick swim before going back to the hotel, a really nice place... he won his room in some contest, but fate would have things differently. Just after he set his feet in the water, the world shook. He stumbled back, and fell away from the water... which was damned good for him! Moments later the became hotter than... well... he didn't know exactly! "Sonofa-!" He shouted when he hit the ground. What the hell is going on here! They said this was the perfect vacation spot! Obviously there was problem that he was unaware of when he entered the sweepstakes. This is not what he had baragined for... s**t! He almost screamed it out, but decided he should save his breath. He needed to get to the hotel room, and get his things. He could already see the people rushing to the helipads, and that some helicopters were already on their way, for they were stationed on another sister island, about half a mile away. He started running... he needed to get on the chopper, and he needed his passport! He ran and ran and ran, not daring to stop... lest the volcano- "Goddammit! That's goin' too!?!" He shouted, realizing that just after the thought came to his mind the volcano started to blow its top. This would discourage most people, and it indeed discouraged him. Though he was not going to give up just yet. He kept on going... almost there now. Damn... there were a lot of people in this hotel... and they're all going to the roof too... guess I need to go there too... after I get my passport... and some cash. He thought, arriving at the bottom floor of the hotel, and making his way up the stairs to his room on the second floor. He got in rather smoothly, the halls were completely empty now, just some screaming up stairs. He got into his room, after fumbling with his keys briefly, and lunged for the small table by the bed. He ripped open the drawers, and removed both his wallet, and his passport. He figured it was enough, but right before leaving he decided to go back for a pair of pants... never know where you might get dropped off after all. After a good minute of fussing with his pants, he was able to leave his room, and stuffed all his papers etc into his back pockets. He decided to go the quick and easy way this time. The elevator. If he didn't gwt upthere quickly, they'd have to go without him... and this island wasn't going to make it through this time. He pushed they button, and waited, tapping the doors with his fingers, his knees trembling. The door opened and he threw himself in and pressed the button that was labelled helipad, he never knew why it was so bluntly labelled, but it just might have been for situations such as this. After pressing the button numerous times he let himself fall back, and sit. He even began getting hopeful... when he was suddenly aware of why you were supposed to use the stairs in an emergency. A large hunk of volcanic rock had just been sent through the air in the second explosion from the mountain. As his luck would have it, it struck the top of the elevator shaft, killing both the power in the elevator, and severing the cables that were holding it in place. Now, ofcourse there had been emergency brakes, and even emergency lights... but they wouldn't stop the large flaming hunk of semi-molten rock from falling down the shaft, and colliding with the elevator. The weight and force of the rock forced the elevator to drop at a rapid pace... from the sixth floor. Right when the elevator stopped moving, he had sprang to his feet, and was just reaching for the door open button, when the ground moved out from under him. He was being pressed to the top of the elevator, and it had started burning his bare back. For a few moments he was in agony, and almost swallowed his tongue in pain when he tried to scream out... white hot pain preventing him from screeming. Suddenly, the elevator stopped dropping... or did it? He couldn't tell... all he knew was that it hurt like hell! The elevator had hit the basement floor and the top had started to collapse downwards, at the exact moment when the bottom started to rise up. His final thoughts being "Atleast I don't have to pay for the room service..." Fractions of a second later, his body was crushed... and the elevator resembled a flaming accordian. All the others got to safety, and it was said that everyone was accounted for. Nobody had died on the island. The young man that had died on the island, was quickly covered in molten rock, being given a dark tomb to rest in eternally. He was not missed, and it took months for his coworkers to notice his absence. Only one individual noticed he was gone, and cared, the dog back at his appartment, who needed fresh food and water, and desperately needed to be let out.
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Posted: Sat Jul 16, 2005 8:33 pm
Miakou looked to where his hotel was, near the volcano. His passport, the only thing that proved he was an American citizen without doing fingerprints was lying on the bed, along with his suitcase. He turned back to the helicopter and wieghed the decision carefully. "Get my stuff, or live to tell the story?" He thought back to the States, where his fiance((Can't do symbols with this keyboard, deal with it)) was waiting for him. He didn't really want to go on this trip, and it had taken half the others to get him down to the beach. He strode, swiftly but carefully to the chopper. The blades were already spinning, and it was ready to take off, another ready to take its place. Stooping low, he cleared the last few feet to the Marine waiting for him. A tremor shook the island it seemed, and the volcano blew its cap. The growing pyroclastic cloud was about to come, and if they didn't take off soon, none of them would make it home alive. "GO! NOW!!" the young man to his right screamed at the pilot. "You got it buddy." They were taking off, fast, but not fast enough. If they weren't in the air soon, they'd be shipped home as statues, and Miakou wasn't willing to have that. He slammed his fist into the throttle the pilot was slowly moving up. The copter jerked violently, but his desperate plan worked. They were getting higher, faster, but the second helicopter wasn't so lucky. They had come down, just before the cloud, and the men and women aboard Miakou's copter watched in horror as they were blasted with superheated ash, gasses, and dust. The cloud barreled on into the ocean and died out, into the horizon. It couldn't last long over water, but still another terror was building in the volcano. The magma underwater had cooled to fast, and plugged that crack, building the pressure in the lava pool. A huge blast of lava erupted from the top of the mountain, and started down the slopes. The hotel the people from Miakou's hotel went first. How many of his co-workers had been killed? How many had been frozen in time as a liveing statue? Miakou didn't want to think of that. He tried to keep his thougts on Linda, but to no avail. No matter what he did, slowly but surely his thoughts would drift back to the thousands that died instantly. He fell into a light, fitful sleep, his dreams dwelling on the screams and cries of those who had the god-awful luck to be only half melted, and were left with cauterized, painful wounds, to die of the pain and stress on their hearts, or simply to fall back into a stream of the lava. "AAAAAAAHHH!!!" he awoke with a jerk, to be greeted by the slightly startled face of the man who had rushed him into the helicopter. "It's okay. We're back in the states, and your fiance is on the line. Would you like to speak to her?" "Linda called?" "Yes. She wants to speak to you." "Umm....okay," he managed to force out, wondering how she knew he was alive. Surely the news had a story on the event, but he didn't see any cameras before he left. "Can you bring me the phone?" The marine returned a few minutes later, holding a mobile phone in his hand. "Linda, honey, guess what? The volcano went boom," he joked trying not to think of his dream. "That's nothing to joke about! You could've been killed! Oh, I was so worried. I kept praying you'd live, but, I just didn't know." "You'd be surprised," he retorted, grimly,"Anyway, I'm all right. I'm somwhere in the states. I don't know where, but I slept most of the way, so, what can I say? How's the family?" "Worried half to death at the fact that you almost died. But we'll be okay. The marine that called said you were on an Air Force base in California. I can come to see you if you'd like." "Please. I won't be able to leave for a while, my passport was in the hotel, and the hotel's buried under magma and ash. That, and the nurse just walked in and is giving me the feeling that she wants to make sure nothing's broken and stuff." "Okay. I'll see you in about a day. I love you. Be careful, okay? bye." "Love you too." Miakou put the phone on the top of the crate he was using as a backrest, and stood up. "I'm all right, really." "I don't care, I have to do this, or the red cross is gonna be pissed at me." She walked over to him, stethoscope in hand, and did a minor checkover. "The mand that woke you told me you were having a bad dream. You wanna talk?" "No thanks. Some parts of my mind need to be locked up." "I hear ya on that one." She put her stethoscope back around her neck, "Well, your heart rate's a little eratic(Sp?), but you'll be all right." She turned, and walked away. Miakou sat back down and thought about the past day or hours, however long it had been. How many had been saved? And how many were still stranded on the island? He wouldn't know. He returned to a slumber, this one far more peaceful than the previous. He awoke gently, and was greeted by Linda's smiling face, her auburn locks strewn across her face, partly hiding her emerald eyes. "How do you feel?" "Good. How long were you siting there?" "I just got here. They told me we could leave whenever we wanted. And that you've been asleep most of the day." "That long huh?" he got up, and winced, realizing he had slep on a M4 carbine, "Oh, that did not make a comfortable pillow. Let's get out of here, I smell like gunpowder and juniper." "You don't like the scent?" she helped him up, and half-dragged him to the door. "Come on, walk. I can't carry you to the car." "Damn. I was hoping I could go back to sleep." They walked out to the car, laughing lightly.
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Posted: Sat Jul 16, 2005 8:34 pm
Everything was so peaceful, especially the sun gleaming off the water which rippled with an angelic and relaxing sound. The animals within the water also brought gentle peace to the normally sarcastic and irritable brunette. For some reason, she felt at home here. There were very few places in the world that she actually felt at some point in time she would feel safe; however, this was one of those rare places and rare times. The beauty that surrounded her would allow her to create a peaceful place in her times of trouble. As suddenly as she felt the rush of comfort crash over her, it crumbled quickly as she opened her emerald eyes because of the shaking ground. She glanced down at the water that her pale feet had occupied and instead of a wave of beautiful clear water rushing up to meet her feet, a wave of red seeped closer to her toes. She nearly tumbled backwards, but caught herself with her natural grace, moving away from the tide of magma sweeping up at her. As she inhaled the smoke from the the air, she whipped around, her dark chocolate hair unfurling behind her as she did so. She saw the old dormant volcano shaking as if with seismic waves, smoke unfurling from its peak. 'This....is bad,' she thought, mentally slapping herself as soon as the though occured. 'Good job, genius! You're quick on the uptake!' 'Why......does stupid s**t always happen when I'm around?' she questioned, mentally. She sighed aloud as she tried to come up with a strategy for moving out of this place. She had to get back to her shop. Who would run it without her around? Certainly not that bufoon Jeleces, as he was a complete "lazy-a**". That's when she heard the blades of the chopper moving in. She glanced up swiftly, her emerald eyes setting upon the helicopter in the sky. She had just heard the loud iron beast within the air and she had guessed that it must've come from somewhere on the island due to it's rather appropriate timing. As it neared and landed on the beach, she saw that it had a couple of other survivors, a woman and a child. The pilot seemed to wave to her, telling her to come to him and board the craft. She was saved! She began to make her way toward the loud aircraft, her eyes drifting back to the hotel in which she had stayed. As quickly as she had started running, she abruptly stopped, a thought running through her head. 'Grandfather's amulet,' she thought, her emerald eyes staring at the facility. Could she make it before the building was swallowed? That was very plausible, but the more pertinant question would have been would the helicopter still be here when she returned. She glanced over to the iron beast, the pilot still waving and yelling to her. She moved quickly over to it, but made sure not to climb inside. She pulled down on the pilot's shirt, bringing his face to her level. "I have to go back!!!! Wait for me!!!" she yelled, making sure that he could hear her. The man simply nodded dumbly as she pulled away from him and ran as fast as the wind toward the pathway that had lead her down to the beach. Her hair flew out behind her as well as across her face as her bare feet kicked up sand at the fast pace she set to move toward the hotel that she had occupied for a couple nights. She nearly tumbled over a couple roots, but her natural grace seemed to kick in fast enough for her to catch herself and keep up the fast paced movement. She skidded to a stop, however, as soon as she reached the four flights of stairs that would lead her up to the hotel's front door. She was doubled-over, trying to catch her breath as she glanced up the stairs. Suddenly, she took off up the stairs, taking them two at a time. Her legs were long and lean enough for her to do so while making it look rather easy. She was still huffing and puffing a lot as she wasn't used to doing such things at a regular pace and therefore, her endurance wasn't up to par. As she was nearing the top, her foot slipped out from under her and she slid down five or so steps. She reached up and brushed the blood off her lip as she had bitten it too hard in the fall. As she glanced down to her knee, she saw the scrape upon it and got to her feet again quickly, charging up the last few stairs and through the front door of the hotel. As she burst through the door, she almost kneeled down and thanked the Lord that her room was on the first floor, but instead she moved down the hall toward her room, fumbling in her pockets in search of her keys. They tumbled out of her pocket, causing her to have to double back and scoop them up off the floor. She continued her way quickly down the hall, stopping infront of her door and trying to stick the key into the slot. It was rather difficult, however, as the hotel began to shake violently and when Evelyn glanced down the hall, she watched with a surreal nature as half of the hotel drifted away with the lava. Now awestruck and nervous, the brunette fumbled worse to get the key in. After finally getting it into the slot and turning it, she charged into the room much like a police officer would do when he didn't have a key. She dove under her bed and pulled out the suitcase that she had put under there earlier that day. As she began to unzip it, she felt the hotel rumble and shake again. She glanced up her, emerald eyes going out the window as she watched the lava approaching her location at a fast pace. She glanced down, the amulet within her pale colored hands as her sad eyes glanced back up to her oncoming doom. So, this was it. She wasn't going to make it out of the building alive nevermind even this room. She hugged the white gold and sapphire necklace to her chest as she watched the red lava start to seep through the wall near the floor. She closed her eyes tight, expecting to be carried away or incinerated rather quickly and maybe even both. One last thought crossed her mind as she waited for the end. "No regrets," she muttered, aloud as the sapphire jewel in her slender fingers began to glow brightly. ~~~~~~ Just as suddenly, she sat up, the covers falling off her slender frame as her pale face glanced out of the window. The birds were chirping and the sun was shining. It was going to be another beautiful day and the brunette sitting in bed with her heart pounding smiled a bit at the thought that she would be traveling to her shop to do work. 'What the hell was that all about?' she thought, thinking back to the odd dream. She opened her hand, her grandfather's white gold and sapphire amulet laying within her pale colored fingers. It was glowing faintly with the mysterious power that it seemed to hold. The brunette simply sighed and shook her head, knowing what the jewel had done for her. She glanced outside the window again before pulling the covers off her slender legs and slipping out of bed. She dropped the jewel on her pale yellow sheets, moving over to her dresser to remove the clothes she would wear for the day. "Note to self....," she murmured, tossing the clothing on the chair. "Never go to Paradise Islands for a vacation...." She had a small laugh about that, knowing well that her dream was a mere prediction of a time that had yet to occur. She wasn't exactly sure when such a thing would occur, but it was better to be safe and assume it would happen in her lifetime. 'Better than being incinerated,' she thought, a small smile on her face as she carried her clean clothes to the bathroom. It was time to get ready for the day.
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Posted: Sat Jul 16, 2005 8:36 pm
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Posted: Sat Jul 16, 2005 8:39 pm
Water flew from his short blond hair as he shook it dry after swimming in the water. Tristan walked slowly over to his royal blue towel with white hems. He sat down and kept his knees up so then he could prop his slender arms upon them. His skin was lightly tanned and used to the sun's beating rays. As his wet black with blue flowers swimtrunks slid slightly further down and showed more of his thigh, it became apparent that he had no tanlines. He was not naturally that color, but instead liked to get thorough sunbathing at times upon the island. It was his home after all for three years now. And if anyone saw something and made a complaint, it only showed that they were foreignors and probably shouldn't have come at all. Though, today was different for Tristan. He only wished to swim than look out to the sea. His mind raced with recent thoughts, with recent events. His boyfriend proposed to him. Just yesterday, his six month long relationship that was filled with hard work and determination finally moved up to the next level when Tristan's boyfriend, Alex, proposed to him. The thin silver band on his right ring finger presented proof and sparkled in the sunlight. A smile had been on his face ever since the night before. His hazel eyes sparkled with tears that soon rolled down his small cheeks and onto his already wet swimtrunks. He was so lost in thought, that he didn't even realize the first tremor the island received when the ocean floor began to crack apart. Though, when the high pitched alarms began to sound, he jumped to his feet. "What's going on?" His voice had a tinge of a British accent, but for the most part it had become much more tropical. His swimtrunks had come undone slightly for they were velcro instead of button up and showed about an inch down from his waistline. The skin was the same color as his belly, arms, and legs. The tan was completely all over. Tristan ran over to the nearby helipad where a couple of marines were stationed and were waving at people. His shorts slid much further down. He stopped by one of the marines who seemed to be clearly six foot and showed that Tristan was just about 5'8". "What's going on here, sirs?" He asked the question as he pulled the swimtrunks that had fallen around his ankles when he stopped up to his waist once again. He pushed the velcro together. "The island is in need of immediate evacuation!" "You dun have to yell." Tristan looked back at the hotel his boyfriend worked at. He worked in the basement and he may not have heard the sirens. The young man began to walk away from the helipad when a marine with brown eyes and a blue cap covering his hair grabbed Tristan's left arm. "You need to stay here." Tristan jerked free and gave a quick flash of his left middle finger. "This is my home. And I am 19. I dun need to do anything you say." Tristan began to walk toward the trail through the light jungle. When he saw the black smoke spewing from the top of Mount Saikih, Tristan broke out into a run toward the hotel. He passed many people - both friends and tourists - on his way to the hotel. But not a single person in the crowds was his fiance. Worry beset his small face as he made it to the front of the hotel. He grabbed ahold of the side railing as a large tremor shook the island. When it subsided mostly, he ran up the steps and into the front lobby. It was empty except for the baggage carts and papers everywhere. But there weren't any signs of life. Tristan ran for the basement stairs and took them two at a time. All he cared about was getting to his fiance, and it hadn't even crossed his mind of what mattered inland - his dying mother that wished to see him one last time prior to her death. Tristan made it to the basement and looked around the dark, desolate place. The lights had gone out. Luckily, there was a set of flashlights near the door of the basement in case there was ever a case of power outtage. He grabbed the closest one that happened to have a shaft colored aquamarine. He tapped the head of the flashlight and a wide white beam shone forth from it. Tristan hurried around the basement looking around for Alex. He stopped when a bright sparkle caught his eye. He turned toward it and there lay a man with a silver band on his right ring finger. "Alex!" Tristan ran and slid down into a kneeling position next to his fiance and lifted up his head slowly. He caressed his cheek softly. "Alex! Please. Get up. We have to go. Please?!" Alex opened his eyes slowly to see the worry present in Tristan's face. "What's going on, Trist?" "Mount Saikih is erupting. We have to go. Can you stand?" "I can sure as heck try." Alex grabbed ahold of Tristan's arm and pulled himself to his feet. He shook himself of the shivers and the two quickly hurried out of the building. The volcano hadn't erupted yet, but it was only a matter of time until the rain of hot ash and the flow of magma began. They ran and stumbled their way to the helipad as they saw a helicopter start to take off. Tristan grabbed ahold of the landing leg and pulled himself into the chopper, quickly turning around to reach for Alex. Their hands latched together as the copter started to fly away. Hot steam arose from the sea and in the center it was a deep red. Alex held on as tight as he could onto Tristan's arm. One of the marines was holding Tristan around the waist to help steady him. "Don't worry. Alex. I've got you. We'll be fine." "I'm getting dizzy, Tristan. I think I bumped my head when I fell earlier." "Alex! Don't you dare let go!" Alex's hands became slippery with sweat and he slipped down Tristan's slender arm. Tristan's right hand held firmly with Alex's left hand. Tears streaked Tristan's face. "Don't give in. Stay with me. Alex!" Alex lost consciousness and his hand relaxed. He slipped from Tristan's grip and fell into the steaming water. Tristan tried to tug away from the marine to dive after Alex. "Nooooooooo!!!! Alex!!! Let me go! I want to be with him! Let me go right now!!" Tristan broke down into tears and the marine brought him into the chopper. "Alex. No...." Sobs shook the young man as the helicopter made it back to the mainland.
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