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Dr. Valentine Vice Captain
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 Posted: Sun Apr 29, 2007 10:49 pm
Some of you fags have seen this before, but here it is, my old comic from 2004. http://www.loveandhotsauce.net/index.php?User=0&Mode=1&Flanger=9I am thinking of starting on Vol. 2 and I'd like to know what you think of the old one, if you have any problems with it or suggestions that I can keep in mind when embarking on a new chapter.
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Posted: Tue May 08, 2007 9:34 am
Okay, I suppose I get the message.
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Dr. Valentine Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue May 08, 2007 11:43 am
I think you should start a volume two. Because volume one was hilarious. Especially issue eleven. XD I loved that.
The whole restaurant thing reminded me of Seindfeld, but way better, and more profane. heart Also, the mostly greyscale with some colour works well. I have nothing at all negative to say about it. 3nodding
But one more thing-- What's Second Life? Like a chat thing? o:
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Posted: Tue May 08, 2007 1:35 pm
I think it's a difficult style to critique
It's very stylized and, being 3-D, already fairly polished
So it's hard to suggest ways to modify it
Frankly I think that the content is funny, but the style is unimpressive
It's stuck between comically simple and complex, and I don't like the feel of that
So the only thing I could suggest to completely fix it is a complete style rehash
But if you want an easy change, I'd recommend necks, the lack of necks on the characters is v. distracting.
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Dr. Valentine Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue May 08, 2007 8:15 pm
Nozomi I think you should start a volume two. Because volume one was hilarious. Especially issue eleven. XD I loved that.
The whole restaurant thing reminded me of Seindfeld, but way better, and more profane. heart Also, the mostly greyscale with some colour works well. I have nothing at all negative to say about it. 3nodding
But one more thing-- What's Second Life? Like a chat thing? o: Second Life is an online game thing, but without the game part. It's a massively multiplayer online chat program with fully customizable 3D avatars and a full 3D world. Also it sucks and is extremely lame.
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Posted: Tue May 08, 2007 9:18 pm
Dr. Valentine Second Life is an online game thing, but without the game part. It's a massively multiplayer online chat program with fully customizable 3D avatars and a full 3D world. Also it sucks and is extremely lame.
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