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 Posted: Wed Apr 11, 2007 9:23 pm
This is the poem I rote to my boyfriend for his birthday. heart
"Untitled"
When I look inyour eyes
I see things hidden there.
From dark secrets to passion,
from deep anger and love.
Your eyes shine with
determination to show
people who you really are.
When your lips are pressed
against mine I feel like
I'm on top of the world.
Your lips are soft and
sweet, but also strong
and powerful. You drown
me in love and passion,
and your kiss is what
ties it all together.
When I hear your
voice call my name,
I melt down down into
myself. You make me
feel so special, and
when you say
"I love you"
I know that your strong,
deep voice is the one I
want to hear for the
rest of my life.
When you genty run your
hands up and down my body,
I can honestly say
that you are perfect for me,
and I am perfect for you.
I run my fingers up and down
your body, hearing you
breathe and relax
at my touch.
When your skin is touching
mine, the heat between us
radiates like the sun.
The passion we cherish,
the love we share,
is what holds me together.
When you touch me,
I feel like the most
beautiful girl in the world.
Your body pressing against mine
in the heat of the moment.
I feel comlete bliss and pull you
closer to me, so I'll never
lose you again.
~Copyright~ Aubrey Rose Santangelo 2007
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Posted: Fri Apr 20, 2007 5:41 pm
You've laid your heart bare....and what a beautiful sight it is. Your words of love to him are powerful and true. Keep up the good work, I am looking forward to it! ^_^
Sin, Halo_Rising mrgreen
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Posted: Tue May 01, 2007 3:38 pm
im not a big fan of songs without rhyme schemes, but other than that, it is very good
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Posted: Tue May 22, 2007 3:38 pm
It's better than what I would have written, my mimzy is my boyfriend.
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Posted: Thu Jun 21, 2007 6:16 pm
I thought that was really really good! Very nice job. Keep up the good work! mrgreen
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Posted: Fri Jun 29, 2007 11:41 am
That was really wonderful, and I liked how descriptive you were.
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Posted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 7:55 pm
*sigh* your love for him must be greater then the heat of a thousand suns. keep up the good work.
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