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Posted: Wed Mar 28, 2007 6:01 am
An LSX quest for a Lab 305 Raevan. Welcome. This is a quest for a Raevan. Updates: Wednesday March 28th 2007 - Started up Lab 305 Quest thread. Thursday March 29th 2007 - Updates to the Raevan page. Friday March 30th 2007 - More pages added just incase. Saturday March 31st 2007 - Another Referance Picture Added Thursday May 1st 2014 - Reconstructing entire Quest from scratch. Contents: Welcome ( YOU ARE HERE) 1st Raevan Concept LSX's Character F.A.Q Funding Rules
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Posted: Wed Mar 28, 2007 6:06 am
This is going under SERIOUS re-construction! Criticism is highly encouraged. Name: Kael Nickname: Grumpy Draws, Fluffy and Moony Gender: Male Fel Essence: Eternal Moon Magma Soul: Merged Vetala Physical looks: Facial Features~ Painfully handsome as most vampire like creatures are meant to be, but with a very obvious facial expression that reads. ‘You can either make me cry or make me wail on you.’ As the gentleman will so nicely put it. Body/Torso~ He’s very lean, but at the same time it should be noted he is not without the absence of a good muscle structure that does not make him look too silly with his skinny frame and such. He has long, gangly arms and thin fingers. Hairstyle~ Very scruffy and spiky, it is flicked upwards from the back of his neck, lick it’s been brushed upwards but at is reaches his head it flows into a wave of softly curved spikes that aim forward. Eye Colour: Left Eye~ The left eye is clouded, misty blue like it is blind for that’s where the vetala or human corpse was scarred before passing away. Right Eye~ Very dark greyish black around the edges of the iris but gets lighter to an almost silver rim around the pupil. Hair Colour: Purple blue (dark lilac or violet) at the tips of his bangs that turns to a bright green (Neon Green) as they get to the top of his head. However, some of the colourings do falter slightly, almost like poorly done highlights. Skin Colour: Light grey, however his fingers are darker grey almost black. Markings: A black, tribal like tattoo or birthmark on the right cheek just under his eyes. Height: 6’9’’ Abilities: Goes through something every time he is angered, he and Shadow call it ‘The Rage’ because he becomes so angry he will attack everything he see’s. So in reality it's more like a curse. Mental State: Schizophrenia and Multiple Personality Disorder. <---Going under review. Alignment: Chaotic Neutral/True Neutral Likes: Vinegar, Being alone, the colour gray, George Romero films, finding out more about his past, wondering his very existence and the story of Jack and the Beanstalk. Dislikes: The number 5, being touched, socialising, being made fun of, being sent into a ‘The Rage’, being called Grumpy Draws, Fluffy or Moony, being alone and the thought of going mad. Fact’s on Fel Essence: Moon Fact:Quote: The lunar magma oceanAs a result of the large amount of energy liberated during both the giant impact event and the subsequent reaccretion of material in Earth orbit, it is commonly believed that a large portion of the Moon was once initially molten. The molten outer portion of the Moon at this time is referred to as a magma ocean, and estimates for its depth range from about 500 km to the entire radius of the Moon. As the magma ocean cooled, it fractionally crystallized and differentiated, giving rise to a geochemically distinct crust and mantle. The mantle is predicted to have formed largely by the precipitation and sinking of the minerals olivine, clinopyroxene, and orthopyroxene. After about three-quarters of magma ocean crystallization was complete, the mineral anorthite is predicted to have precipitated and floated to the surface because of its low density, forming the crust. The final liquids to crystallize from the magma ocean would have been initially sandwiched between the crust and mantle, and would have contained a high abundance of incompatible and heat-producing elements. This geochemical component is referred to by the acronym KREEP, for potassium (K), rare earth elements (REE), and phosphorus (P), and appears to be concentrated within the Procellarum KREEP Terrane, which is a small geologic province that encompasses most of Oceanus Procellarum and Mare Imbrium on the near side of the Moon. (This was a fact from Wikipedia.org) ~The fel essence in question is literally a hunk of Magma from the moon that has not crystallized or cooled in the length of time the moon has been orbiting the earth and is still in it's mostly liquid form. And trust me that is a lot of time. However is has become silver like the rest of the moon’s surface, despite its heat. And there for has an eternal mystery surrounding its very existence to this very day. Fact’s on Soul: Quote: A vetala is a vampire-like being from Hindu mythology. The vetala are defined as spirits inhabiting corpses. These corpses may be used as vehicles for movement (as they no longer decay while so inhabited), but a vetala may also leave the body at will. In Hindu folklore, the vetala is an evil spirit who haunts cemeteries and takes demonic possession of corpses. They make their displeasure known by troubling humans. They can drive people mad, kill children and cause miscarriages but they also guard their villages. The vetala, like the bat, is associated with hanging upside down on trees found in cremation grounds and cemetaries They are hostile spirits of the dead trapped in the twilight zone between life and after-life. These creatures can be repelled by the chanting of holy mantras. One can free them from their ghostly existence by performing their funerary rites. Being spirits, unaffected by the laws of space and time, they have an uncanny knowledge about the past, present and future and a deep insight into human nature. Hence, many sorcerers seek to capture them and turn them into slaves. A sorcerer once asked King Vikramaditya to capture a vetala who lived in a tree that stood in the middle of a crematorium. The only way to do that was by keeping silent. However, every time Vikramaditya caught the vetala, the vetala would enchant the king with a story that would end with a question. No matter how hard he tried, Vikramaditya would not be able to resist answering the question. This would enable the vetala to escape and return to his tree. The stories of the vetala have been compiled in the book Baital Pachisi. There is also a strong Vetala cult in the Konkan region, under the names of Betal, Vetal, etc. It seems, however, that the relation between the literary Vetala and this demigod's is feeble at best. (Information from Wikipedia.org) This soul will be that of the vetala and the remnant soul of the body it inhabited at the time of both their ‘death’s’ merged together. Brief Background on Soul: When alive, the name of the vetala's corpse or host was that of a young child named Badal. His family had lived in India for countless years and generations, so when the last son of the family passed away, the one's left alive were distraught. The boy had died of the plague, where at that time, had claimed other lives that where too young, old or weak to stay alive.
When he was buried, a wandering, one eye'd vetala named Yuyutsu took over the boy's gray skinned, half rotten body and started to cause havoc with his old family. Yututsu was very cruel, through the years he caused nothing but misery and grief to the family using their last son's body as his vessel. However, as the child had not had a proper burial, his soul still harboured within the body, only to be repressed by Yuyutsu's power. And it was only till the years went on, did the two souls slowly begin to merge with one another.
Two souls cannot inhabit the same body without something happening to make more room.
The two formed a half sided symbiotic relationship. Badal's soul would only appear to get Yuyutsu out of trouble or to help people he cared about. And Yuyutsu used his powers to protect his and Badal's body. Neither one cared for each other, for in a way, it was like someone had invaded their home and now to share it with the invader.
Everynight, when Yuyutsu awoke, he would find himself and Badal staring at the moon. Knowing the boy was thinking of the day's he was alive and when he himself would stare at the moon, thinking of his future. But now he stared at it, just to think of those happy memories with his family he would never have again.
Finally after many years, the last of the family had died. It left Badal grief stricken and Yuyutsu outraged he had no more human's to toy with! This sadness and anger, finally led to a condition that is nowaday's called 'The Rage'. The boy went off on a rampage that lasted for five day's, before finally, not able to take how much pain he was causing the people around him, Badal, through sheer will power, through himself and in doing so, threw Yuyutsu, into the river. Where both of them died as a merged soul, forever wandering the earth alone.^Going under reconstruction and review. What will the Raevan be like when he is brought into this world?: Confused and curious about what he is. He'll not want to be touched but at the same time he'll not ever want to be alone, so he'll be frustrated and angry most of the time which will probably confuse and maybe frighten the people around him. Due to his split personality he'll have two side's of his person. Kael (who would be Badal's soul) and Leak (who would be Yuyutsu's soul), Kael being his normal, confused, frustrated self and Leak being the side of him in 'The Rage'. Angry, bloodthirsty and without a shred of doubt, Evil. However he will ONLY appear when Kael is provoked or angered immensly, because that's how 'The Rage' works. Other than that it will be up to his environment and surroundings to ensure what sort of person/Raevan he develops into. Reference Images: Body/Hair/Eye/Skin ReferanceTattoo Referance
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Posted: Wed Mar 28, 2007 6:14 am
THIS IS GOING UNDER RECONSTRUCTION. Criticism is highly encouraged. Gaian Name: Lightning Shadow X Name: Nickame(s): Age: Birthday: Gender: Female Height: 6’2’’ Weight: 16 stone (14 pound = 1 Stone) Shoe Size: 7 Ethnic Group: Caucasian/British Appearance: Hair Colour:Eye Colour: Likes: Dislikes:Difficulties: Personality: Occupation:
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Posted: Wed Mar 28, 2007 6:17 am
F.A.Q Questions that you ask me or I ask myself (Yes I can get THAT bored) And this is all where extra info you want to know will go. Q: You say in Kael's profile that he likes to 'find out more about his past', I thought Raevan's forgot everything because they where reborn into their new bodies. So can you explain that?A: Yes I can, I remember reading somewhere in the thread or the guild that the guardian of the Fel Essence is supposed to have dreams of the captured soul's past. Well this is basicly it. Stacey will ALWAYS write down her dreams, sort of a compulsive little hobby of her's and Kael being as curious as he is will find the book and read through it but he won't understand it totally or maybe at all. And he is just a genuinely curious creature that want's to know more about himself Q: Why does he like (or will like) George Romero films?A: Probably because he has a strong connection to death and such and also because George Romero is awesome. ~~~~~~~ Everyone is free to ask any question they want.
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Posted: Fri Mar 30, 2007 4:55 am
FUNDING ... This Raevan is probably a full custom (apart from the clothing and accesories, Kyou can go to town on designing those >D). So let's just see how we go. *knows that sounded SO weak* Donators:None Current Funds:0/6,000,000,000
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Posted: Fri Mar 30, 2007 4:55 am
Rules
Criticism will only be allowed when the title says so.
Lab 305 and it's art belongs to Kyou.
Any guest banners made for this thread will be copyrighted to it's owner.
If any art is used without permission I shall send Kael to find you and rip out your spinal chord.
Have fun and chat amongst yourself.
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Posted: Fri Mar 30, 2007 11:22 am
I love you raevan concept. Kael seems so interesting with the two personalities. I would love to see how his character would develop! <3
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Posted: Fri Mar 30, 2007 11:47 am
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Posted: Thu Apr 26, 2007 10:06 am
UPDATE: LSX needs to add more things to her character and raevan design and maybe another raevan design as a back up character if things don't go well with the first one. heart
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Posted: Sat May 05, 2007 1:31 pm
CAN ANYONE HELP ME WITH THE FEL ESSENCE FOR MIELA? ;-; I NEED IDEAS
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Posted: Sun Jul 01, 2007 9:47 pm
I like your ideas because they are very different and in the realm of possible. Like how your characters have realistic flaws, the split personality thing for one. It really gives your characters depth and a strong foundation to build upon. So yes, your Kael is very unique and your second one is interesting as well, yet I believe I saw someone else talking about a Queen Bee soul as well. If I find where it was, I'll let you know.
-Edit- Ah yes, I found it! It was Niksia. Though I'm not quite sure if she's actually committed to that soul yet.
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Posted: Tue Jul 03, 2007 2:23 pm
I like your fel essence idea for the first Raevan. It's one of the more unique ones I've seen and you've also explained how it differs from "typical" moon magma.
However, personally I find the whole schizto/Multiple Personality mental disorder thing to be rather overdone. Not only is it not conducive to a typical RP environment as other characters are greatly hindered from establishing any meaningful interaction with such a character (really, would an average, healthy, mentally stable person or character really get along with or want to interact with a mentally instable and potentially dangerous individual?)
Additioanlly, most of the times it is very poorly RP'd, or used to cover up bad RP skills (i.e. because one is unable to RP a character's personality consistently, they use MPD/split personality disorders to cover up for this lack of consistency or their own indecision at being able to decide on a single character personality).
Another reason why these "mental disorders" are oftentimes so poorly RP'd is that most people don't understand the disorders themselves--probably because most people don't HAVE it and don't interact with people who actually have those type of disorders. Not to say that you'd RP this Raevan badly, since I've never seen you RP before, but just out of my personal experience 9.99999 out of 10 people who incoporate these types of mental illnesses in their characters often do it very very poorly.
For example, webMD Contrary to popular belief, schizophrenia is not a split personality. Schizophrenia is a psychosis, a type of mental illness in which a person cannot tell what is real from what is imagined. At times, people with psychotic disorders lose touch with reality. The world may seem like a jumble of confusing thoughts, images and sounds. The behavior of people with schizophrenia may be very strange and even shocking. A sudden change in personality and behavior, which occurs when people lose touch with reality, is called a psychotic episode. With that in mind, how would you incorporate the Raevan's inability to have a sensible grasp on "reality" with his/her Multiple personality disorder?
I beg to differ with Ebony Shade. For one, having a "split personality" is NOT a "Realistic" flaw. People who actually have this "Flaw" accounts for less than 2% of the entire population. I have to wonder at how many people with MPD Ebony knows for her to consider it a "normal" trait >_>; I consider "realistic" flaws as encompassing things such as being forgetful, being overly prideful, vain, not being stick thin or perfect looking, vulnerable, being stupid, socially awkward, etcetera etcetera.
Additionally, the Raevan's power is linked to their fel essence (Laz/Eternal flames--> fire, Roux-->ice, etc). How does the fel essence of "molten moon magma" correspond to this "Rage" thing you mention?
If you are really bent on doing the whole schizto/MPD thing, I would suggest you do some more research on both illnesses and create at least a detailed description of how each illness affects how the Raevan views the world and interacts with others. Additionally, people are usually not born with MPD. Multiple Personality Disorders are usually caused by repeated trauma. What kind of trauma did your Raevan or soul suffer through to cause him/her to have this type of mental illness?webMD For MPD, the most severe type of dissociative disorder, the patient has two or more different personality states -- sometimes referred to as "alters" (short for alternate personality states) -- each of whom takes control over the person's behavior at some time. Each alter has distinct traits, personal history, and way of thinking about and relating to his or her surroundings. They might even be of a different gender, have his or her own name, and have distinct mannerisms or preferences. The person with this disorder may or may not be aware of the other personality states and might not have memories of the times when another alter is dominant. So, with that in mind, what would be the different alters that an MPD Raevan posseses? Are they aware of each other? What triggers the dominance of any particular alter? How do they interact with others? How do they interact with themselves? How many alters are there? You must know that for MPD there are a distinct and finite amount of personalities, it's not that the person can just switch their personality whenever they feel like to whatever they feel like.
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Posted: Tue Jul 03, 2007 4:28 pm
I apologize for stringing that sentence as I did. I did not mean to make MPD sound like a normal trait, you are correct it very much is not. I just wanted to help touch upon the fact that I think it's good to explore things like MPD when it comes to character creation. I find it boring and very unrealistic when characters never get sick, or injured, or are in general just perfect seeming.
So thank you for pointing out my fatal flaw of not being able to take a minute or two to read what I wrote before posting sometimes Shu. I assure you, I will put more thought into my postings in the future. And you did bring up some very valid points on this part of Lightning's quest.
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Posted: Sat Jul 14, 2007 8:56 am
I have to say thank you both for these informative comments and Shuu, I think your information will be extremely helpful and I'll work more on my concepts.
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