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 Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 4:30 pm
::Something's Missing::
I feel that all
Are pushing down on me
I feel you all
Your hands on me
Why do you push
That which is different
Away with pride?
Am I that insignifigant?
Quit following the others
Join me
Be who you want to be
Show them that...
...That you're no liar
I feel it all
You pull on me
I can see it all
Your hands on me
Why pull me in
When you know
I'm ruined again?
Am I that unnoticed?
I'll never follow
Not now
All see me and smile a fake
But I know that...
That something's missing
Someone's missing the real me
((comments are loved))
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Posted: Fri Mar 23, 2007 6:36 pm
I LOVE ur poem! heart better then mine anyways
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Posted: Tue Apr 10, 2007 5:45 pm
Ah very good much better than your others 8.5/10
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Posted: Thu Apr 12, 2007 11:07 am
I love this poem! I can feel your dilema and I think that you expressed it well! It is Some of the best poetry I've read, and there is a lot of good poem writers out there! I know how you feel too, after reading that poem it is clear like the nose on your real face (cause I can't really see ur face on gaia XD) that you are dealing with people who are with everyone else and can't be themselves because they are too afraid to start a new trend or do something different. And then they poke fun at the first person they see being different. Very nice! I hope you write more!!!!!!!
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