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rah Zombie

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PostPosted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 9:45 pm


Hello here is my idea put into words for the public to see. If you like it and would like to use it ask me and don't rip it off.

Disappear and Reappear


Ana walked through two swinging blue doors. Into a cafeteria that had two columns of tables that went down the entire length of the cafeteria. The wooden floors waxed and clean except for the few scraps of food that fell from the students that sat at the tables. Almost all of the tables were crammed with the high school students that attended the high school that the cafeteria belonged to, Jeva High School.

Ana was also a student of Jeva High School she was a freshmen. Except she was rather strange. Instead of wearing make-up, putting her hair up, and wearing fashionable clothing that would show off her curves; she wore no make-up and thick black framed glasses that made her brown eyes look three times bigger then they really were. Also Ana had braces on her teeth instead of clear ones she wore thick steel colored ones, and clothes that were large, baggy, and barely matched, which today was brown. They gave her no credit of the figure she had beneath. Her thick midnight black hair was so long it went down to her waist, it was also extremely frizzy, when woren down-as it always was-it looked like half of a giant black twinke.She was also rather tall about five feet eleven inches and had good posture. Her voice was also very pretty voice when she talked it sound as if she was about to burst into song. Actually when she sang it was quiet beautiful. Except she rarely spoke to anyone, besides a few exceptions, so no one would really know it.

Ana walked between the two columns set her things on a table that was almost completely empty except for her two best friends, Jonny and Erica. Jonny was very handsome he was six feet two inches, blond hair, green eyes, and he had muscles that boasted strength but still looked rather lean. He was cool, distant, and mysterious to anyone he met, a real heart throb to most of the girls that went to Jeva. Yet he did not like being around people except for Erica and Ana. When he was with them his cool and distant exterior was gone, and he acted like the carefree, fun loving , down to earth guy he really was. Erica had pretty curly red hair and deep blue eyes, freckles that complemented her good looks. Erica liked to talk to anyone and was nice when in a good mood. Erica is also selfish and becomes quiet mean when in a bad mood. She aso had a good eye for fashion.

"Hey Erica. Hey Jonny," Ana said as she put down her worn black backpack and sat down across from Erica and Jonny whom were deep in conversation.

"Hey Ana," Jonny and Erica said at the same time. As they looked up at her from their conversation.
"Ana we have something to tell you," Erica said looking a bit guilty.
"Uh oh what happened? Did your dad cut off your credit cards," she said joking and grinned.

"No Ana her dad isn't that cruel," said Jonny smirking but his smile quickly faded as he said the next thing, "Ana Erica and I have decided to go steady we have been dating behind your back." They both looked at her quietly.
She stared at them as if she was mad but instead she began to laugh pleasently. They relaxed as they enjoyed the sound of her laugh which was quiet pleasent to their ears. "You think I woulnd't have figured it out already that you were both dating? I'm not stupid I'd have to be blind to not see your little stares and such," she said in good humor.
"Why didn't you say anything about it then," Erica said scolding.
"well I felt you had your reasons and I knew you would tellme when you were both ready," she said her stomach grumbled.
Jonny laughed, "knew it. Well why don't we finish this after Ana gets her food?" Ana smirked and got up but before she walked away she turned to them and bowed saying, "I Ana give you both my blessing my you be happy."

When she straightened she saw Erica rool her eyes and Jonny as well. Then she walked to the lunch line, which was rather short today, and got a a ham sandwhich, water and french fries. As she walked back to the table she saw Jonny's arm around Erica they looked at each other lovingly. she smiled she was glad they were happy but she also saw the guys and girls were glaring them. This is going to be a problem but if they have true feelings towards each other they'll make, she thought since she was looking at the table she did not notice a large round portal appear in front of her as she took one step inside. At that same instant her friends had looked over at her and saw the portal and she was pulled in and she dissappeared her face had looked surprised as she entered the portal. Surprised she was as she was suddenly dragged into a portal. Her sight was over whelmed with a bright light, when she closed her eyes and opened them she was still in the cafeteria. Except a sudden sadness over took her and she fell to the ground crying as if she had lost something extremely precious.

As she cried and sobbed loudly she noticed that her clothing had changed. She stopped sobbing but tears still fell quietly from her eyes as she stood up and examined herself. What am? Is this belly dancer get-up, she thought. Her top was a black bra it was completely covered in iridescent peacock sequins and beads with turquoise sequin and bead desigins, which looked hand-stitched, on the cups of bra. There was also a belt that was hand-stitched similarly to the bra on the front and back of belt. The belt held in place a black silk skirt that went down to her feet but had a slit that went up one side and showed her leg from the middle of the thigh down when she walked. Her legs were hairless and smooth her feet had no shoes and there was a gold anklet on her ankle. On each of her wrists were gold two bracletes that had swirls in their design. Her nails were manicured she then spotted a simple thick gold ring on her ring finger. It was shiny and smooth without any designs on it what so ever. When she looked at her friends who were already at her side she noticed that she could see 20/20 but didn't have her glasses on or even contacts. Licking her tounge over her teeth there were no braces and her teeth felt straight. Her hair was still waist long but it was silky, though it had volume it was not frizzy. She moved her hand through her hair lifting it a bit it cascaded back down.
She looked around everyone was staring at her astounded. Then she noticed she was still shedding tears.
Erica and Jonny had instantly risen and walked over to her with concern on their faces.

"Ana are you okay," asked Erica as she looked her over astounded as well.

"We need to leave now Erica come on ana," he said seriously as he took both girl's hands and left the cafeteria with them.

((There chapter one complete>.
PostPosted: Thu Mar 22, 2007 6:31 am


What could've...


"What the hell just happened?" Erica asked Ana, who was still wearing the sameclothing. They were in a large public park that was across the street from the school. There was a playground on the side that faced the school. The playground had old rickety swing sets, squeaking teeter(sp?) toters(sp?) and rusty slides. All three were sitting on the swing sets.

"I-i don't know. I just saw a breight light then I was back here in the cafeteria," Ana said while in the swing set.

"How can you not know! You disappeared for two minutes, and came back gorgeous. You even have a tan," she exclaimed as she got out of her swing. Jonny was silently sitting on his.

"Actually this is my natural color. I just used make up to cover it up," Ana said as Erica pushed her on the swing.

"Yeah I know but your skin looks darker then the last time I saw you without the make up--" Erica cut off and stopped pushing.

"What the hell?!" Erica exclaimed in horror.

"Whats wrong Erica? What? What is it?" she asked as she stopped her swing and turned around to look at her.
Jonny got up to see what was wrong with Erica when he saw it too. He stared at her with the same experssion.

"Wh-whats wrong?" Ana asked worried, "come on this isn't funny you---" Jonny cut her off by taking off his sweater giving it to her. "Put it on now," he said seriously.

"Your back....there are two scars," she whispered.

Ana looked at her in confusion then horror."No....No!" Ana exclaimed as she put on the shirt in a hurry.

"We should go now and deal with this somewhere more private. Something as big as what happened today is going to create a giant fuss and you know it. I'm surprised we weren't followed here," he said lookingback at the school.

"Alright then to Ana's place. Your parents are on another trip aren't they?" Erica asked Ana.

Ana nodded absently she was in shock again.

"I'll call up Richard he'll come pick us up," Erica said whipping out her cell. "Hello Richard you wouldn't mind coming and picking us up? We're at the park...yeah. Regular...... Okay. Bye," she said and hung up.

"Ricahrd's coming he said he was close by anyways. Look there he is," Erica said as a black car rounded the school. It stopped infront of the playground. A man with gray hair in a black suit and tie came out of the drivers seat and opened the passenger door.
"Hello misstress, Ana, and Jonny. You have changed Ana," he said smiling at them.

"Yeah thanks," Ana said as they all entered the car. It had black leather seats and just enough room for them. Erica was in the middle of Jonny and Ana who had gone in last.

"Take us to Ana's please Richard,"Erica said in dimay.

"Yes madam," Richard said as he got in and buckled up. When he began to drive everone was quiet.

rah Zombie

Intermediate Gawker


rah Zombie

Intermediate Gawker

PostPosted: Fri Mar 30, 2007 8:55 am


(Continuation of chapter two)


"Here we are madam," said Richard as he pulled up to a black victorian stlye house. There were two large weeping willow trees on either side that shaded the house from the front. There was also a white picket fence and gate that opened up to a mini side walk. The walk led up to the porch.

"Thank you Richard," Erica said as they all pilled out of the car.

"Your welcome madam may you all have a good day," Richard said then drove off.

They all walked up the side walk to the porch. Ana took out a spare key from the bottom of the top step's board. She opened the door to complete darkness. The light from outside lit a few feet infront of them. Enough to show a soft white carpet.

"It's so dark in here Ana what are you emo," Erica asked taking off her shoes and walking in first without further thought.

Ana shrugged, "the light doesn't seem to want to come and I have pretty thick curtains."

"Wht are they brick?" he asked taking his own off and walking in also taking his shoes off. Ana shut the door and they were in complete darkness. Erica clapped a rythm, Jonny continued it adding one part and then Ana finished with a single calp neither ever skipping a beat. Suddenly the room was lit to show a very large living room. A big screen tv was against the southern wall. Infront of the tv were a few couches, love seats, and recliners. There was also a sort of trunk that was open to a game cube and controller. A fire place on the eastern side of the room. A couch and a few recliners were also in front of the fire place. The western wall had a large window that was covered by a large and thick amber curtain. The door they cam through was also there. North was plain an open doorway that was obviously the entrance to the hallway. Jonny sat in a love chair and Erica sat down on his lap.

"I'll be back later, I'm gonna go change. Don't be making out when I come in," she teased leaving the living room.

~~~~

She came back and as she entered she heard someone sort of gasp as if taking a deep breath. She looked over at Jonny and Erica whom looked flush. She rolled her eyes not seeing Jonny's quick blush. Ana was wearing a large white t-shirt that went down to mid-thigh, black sweats, and pink loafers. Though everything else was still the same. The ring on her finger still there.

"Okay so now that you're done. I need to say that I'm married," she said as she sat down casually on a love chair.

"What?! How on earth did you get married so fast is that even possible?!" Erica said raising her voice in panic. Getting up at the same time. Jonny just grabbed her shoulders and messaged them to cool her down. She sat down on his lap again. Jonny staying calm.

Jonny seems to be taking this too calmly, Ana thought staring at Jonny.

"You're not taking this seriously enough Ana. Really how can you be married? Though since you have that ring it must mean that you are. You never wear anything on that finger," said Jonny reminicing(sp?).

"Actually I'm in shock. I mean I see a white light, dissapear, and then I look like this," Anan said mentioning her drastic make over which had not faded.

Erica interupted saying quietly, "I remember you once said you would change your look when you feel in love and were loved back but how can that happen......"

"In only a few seconds?" Ana interrupted she was about to say more when the door bell rang, ding dong.
PostPosted: Wed Apr 25, 2007 3:11 pm


Announcement to my readers.....You should check here at most once a month because I tend to change or edit already written in posts....
So yeah at most check once a month......

rah Zombie

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