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PostPosted: Mon Mar 12, 2007 8:43 am


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"Opera is when a guy gets stabbed in the back and, instead of bleeding, he sings."
- Ed Gardner


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talented young man raised in the lap of luxury, Basilio is now forced to change his name and leave the spotlight of the opera for a lifestyle he never would have chosen for himself. But he doesn't run from his old life alone, and is tailed constantly by three very unusual feathered singers. He seeks direction and validation, and perhaps the circus has what he's looking for within it's tents.
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asilio Emiliani / Uccello Bianco is an original character I've created especially for Cirque. I don't remember precisely what made me think of his concept, but it's probably a combination of a bunch of things I found attractive at the moment. I.E. Opera, recency clothing styles and parrots.

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lease feel free to offer comments and critiques at any time. Right now he's just a work in progress, but you can post now and I love feedback. heart
PostPosted: Mon Mar 12, 2007 8:46 am



"Any subject is good for opera if the composer feels it so intently he must sing it out."
- Gian Carlo Menotti

NAME Basilio Emiliani
ALIAS Uccello Bianco (Literally "White Bird") is what he prefers to introduce himself as.
STAGE NAME None at the moment.
GENDER Male
AGE 19

HAIR COLOR Black-brown
EYE COLOR Brown
COMPLEXION Olive
HEIGHT 5'10"
NATIONALITY Italian
LANGUAGE Italian, English, and rudimentary French, German and Russian. The last three are almost solely for the purpose of singing, though he speaks broken French with some proficiency and can understand the majority of all three when spoken to him. His accent in German and Russian is particularly atrocious should he ever try to say something in them. When he sings, however, these flaws disappear, so it's quite a shock to realize he can barely get out a sentence.

APPEARANCE Uccello isn’t a stunning beauty, but he isn’t totally unfortunate looking either. Overall he has very sharp, thin features which is most noticeable in his jaw and nose. His chin is slim and long with defined edges, and his cheekbones are high and distinct. Likewise he has a nose that is long, thin, and slightly hooked with a beaky point. His bright eyes are usually obscured by a pair of brass-rimmed glasses that perch delicately on his nose without any arms tucked over his ears. Both their eternally accurate prescription and ability to not fall unless purposefully removed (or, alternatively, knocked off with someone's fist) are magical.

He has short, dark brown hair that usually just looks black, matching his dusky complexion appropriately. It's straight with only a faint wave to it that makes the bangs curl across his forehead. It's kept a little longer than necessary, but still qualifies as short, and this length allows it to look fashionably disheveled now that he doesn't have the time to preen in the morning.

Though his build is a little awkward with skinny, long limbs and a bony structure, Uccello has a presence. He holds himself very confidently and moves like he's on stage. He talks with his hands, and makes lots of meaningless gestures with them while conversing. His voice hardly needs any help, however. He has a very powerful, magnetic voice that easily expresses emotion, and because of that he has a very hard time disguising when he's upset or angry. He speaks English very well, but his first language is distinct in his pronunciations.

LIKES Being alone in an empty opera house, performing in front of a full opera house, having an audience, hearing new music (even if he doesn't actually like the music itself), social gatherings, crowds, people, lively cities, churches, choral music, birds, water features such as canals or fountains, classical architecture, the finer things in life, plans, goals, organization.
DISLIKES Bird dander, cleaning up bird cages, overt uses of magic (he'll just opt to ignore the more subtle uses), cats, pressure to be sincere, accusations of having antiquated views, people without goals, not having a goal himself, crass people, getting dirty, his intelligence being insulted, world hopping, being parted from his birds for long.
HOBBIES Witnessing others' performances, writing extensive To Do lists, adopting new projects only to abandon them again soon after, reading "intelligent" books, researching new genres of music, keeping a journal, playing the violin, working on his French, ballroom dancing.

PERSONALITY
Uccello is very high energy. He likes to keep moving and likes to accomplish things, and without a project he becomes restless. Generally he is a very productive person who rearranges his living area often just to keep it feeling fresh and spends a lot of time out and about. He loathes staying in all day and insists he has to go do something at least once a day to feel satisfied. When he gets bored, he addresses a list of projects he keeps on hand that range from fixing things (with varying degrees of success) to trying to make a chair or a birdhouse (with often even less success).

Uccello loves company, and will choose the companionship of someone that irritates him over being alone. He's typically charming and classy, but gives off an impression of being rather shallow and spoiled, and sometimes even insincere. Uccello has a difficult time really understanding and sympathizing with people and his attempts can feel hollow. Still he feels he has to try and be nice about complaints and things that are upsetting them on a day to day basis. Unsurprisingly Uccello has, in the past, held onto very few close friends because he has a tendency to shift through interests and topics of conversation like they were going out of style.

Despite this, he's friendly and well spoken. He fancies himself an intellectual and gives off upper-class vibes while seeming very well-educated. He also has a taste for the finer things in life, which matches his aristocratic airs, and he likes to indulge himself regularly. Uccello certainly likes to have fun (and has a shockingly high alcohol tolerance for his stature) but usually he keeps a good balance between work and play. Although often irresponsible with his money and in his personal behavior, he’s good at not letting his poor judgment hurt his responsibilities. He will show up for practice and work on time no matter what and won't sacrifice his duties.

Though typically a happy person who knows how to enjoy the small moments, Uccello seems like he will never be totally satisfied in life. He has incredibly high standards for himself, his lifestyle and the company he keeps, but he tends to gravitate towards things that don't live up to there fairytale ideals. He often hated the life he led in the opera, but saw it as the closest thing to gaining satisfaction. He's a little self-destructive in this respect, as he’ll keep going back to what makes him unhappy as if this time things will be better. His golden standard has recently become his old life in the opera, and he can't seem to accept that he really is happier in the circus with no money and with these people he would have never spoken with before. Realizing this will be a gradual process.

Before running away, Uccello felt as if he had his life all mapped out. After losing it all, everything he had taken for granted was severely shaken. By nature Uccello is a planner and thrives on having goals and a mapped out future. This was something that Lord Monteverdi and the opera always provided him with, but now that he's without a target beyond "don't get caught" Uccello feels lost and unstructured. At his core he's an emotional wreck and needs organization to help him regain the illusion of being in control, which was always his crutch when his life was not really his own. He's apprehensive about his new path with the circus, but despite his reluctance he doesn't resent it or blame it for his being uprooted. If anything, it saved him.

Uccello has a few problems with the foreign setting that is the cirque. His strict upbringing has taught him that women are delicate flowers, and the ladies of the circus are anything but. He's frequently scandalized by what they do (and what they wear) and feels the need to be the gentleman in every situation. He bows and kisses hands and pulls out chairs, and even when he's been told to knock it off he stubbornly persists. Another problem he frequently has is with the use of magic. He's used to magic being quiet and subtle and all around easy to ignore, but that's rarely the case in cirque. Large displays of magic and obviously nonhuman people can easily spook him and leave him feeling tense and on edge.

HISTORY Anything that appears { like this } indicates information that Basilio doesn't know.

Basilio Emiliani was born to very humble beginnings as a member of the lower factory-going city-dwelling class. His parents abandoned him to the care of the mother’s much older sister when Basilio was only a toddler, but he didn’t totally lack love even without parents. His three older cousins and aunt and uncle were a decent stand-in family, though re remained a little separate from them. But soon Basilio found purpose in the local cathedral to fill what holes in his life remained. While not totally possessed with religion, he was gifted with a stunning voice that the church’s chorus helped to hone. Because of his skill, he was invited up to perform as part of the chorus in a cathedral in the richer city districts, and it was then that at nine years old he was discovered by a wealthy parishioner, Lord Ottavio Monteverdi. Lord Monteverdi was the owner of Venice’s grandest opera house, one that people all over the tiny world flocked to, and even some not of their world. He saw talent in the young boy, and after a year of courting the family (and a few healthy monetary donations) custody of Basilio was signed over to him. He promised that it would be the best life that the child could ever hope for.

And as Ottavio promised, it was a vast improvement. Though he was worked hard and practiced long hours, as soon as lessons were over he was readily pampered and given whatever a preteen boy could want. However, he was also enlisted to be his guardian’s assistant in the dark magic he dabbled in. To Ottavio’s disappointment, his young prodigy wasn’t quite as gifted of a magician as he was a singer. In fact, he showed almost no arcane ability at all. Regardless, life went on like this, but after his debut Basilio became a minor celebrity whose name only continued to grow. As a result, in his teens he developed a taste for the expensive. Lonely and isolated, he threw himself into the lifestyle of a lush and Ottavio encouraged the behavior. He allowed Basilio to fall into an insurmountable pile of debt, and it became clear that leaving the opera house would never be an available option. Basilio resigned himself to this fate and didn’t change his behavior or try at all to work out from under Ottavio’s thumb. He was practically the Lord Monteverdi’s property.

For years Ottavio’s pet project had been a collection of many large parrots, which he thought he could make to sing so well as to replace a human. But his experiments were all failures, often with horrifying results. Because he was no use in the lab, Basilio’s job was mostly to care for the animals prior to experimentation and then clean up afterwards, which was sometimes a gruesome task. After some rough spots with these chores he became steadily more comfortable with them and grew to like the birds. At the age of eighteen, Basilio was still hopeless with magic, but he had become an even more spectacular and greatly renowned singer, and still a useful helping hand in the experiments. { But meanwhile, Ottavio knew that he was missing a key element in his formula, and had come to the conclusion that by fusing a human soul to the parrots they could become almost human themselves. His initial candidate was Basilio himself, but he was bringing in audiences and money. Though in reality, for all of Ottavio’s practical business-mindedness, when it came to actually planning the inevitable murder of his charge... he simply couldn’t. Basilio really was like a son to him after so many years. }

It was around then that Basilio was introduced to Brigitta Cardia, a famous young female opera singer from a rival company. The two kept their distance at first, but Ottavio encouraged Basilio to socialize with her and enjoy his youth. He had so few friends anyway, and perhaps another singer would understand the life he had to lead. His guess was correct, and Basilio and Brigitta quickly became fast friends, much to the chagrin of those in charge of her career. As they had feared, the close friendship turned into a whirlwind romance, but both of the singers were very happy with the situation for a time. Brigitta was hot-headed, so she and Basilio fought frequently, and their on-again-off-again relationship was a popular source of gossip amongst their peers.

Still, it was wonderful, at least until the night of her disappearance a few months after the start of the affair. That evening she was to visit Basilio so they could make up for a most recent and public argument, but then she appeared not to arrive at the home Basilio shared with Ottavio. Dejected, he went downstairs to the laboratory to complete his work for the day and saw the dead and maimed body of Brigitta with Ottavio standing over a desk a few feet away. He seemed totally unconcerned, and, if anything, excited. { By killing Brigitta and bonding her soul to the three remaining birds, he had succeeded. They were not making pleasant noises, but they sounded beautiful and human. He was sorry it had to be someone so close to Basilio, but he figured would explain the situation in the morning and all would be well. }

Basilio was devastated and threatened to turn him in, but Ottavio said that he belonged to the theater and would do no such thing. He told him at the very least he would be arrested as an accomplice, and in fact would probably be held solely responsible for the murder since he was Brigitta’s lover and they had been last seen arguing. Ottavio commanded him to clean up the mess and that he was to help dispose of the body. Terrified of what would happen if he didn’t obey and equally numb over what he had witnessed, Basilio thought he had no choice but to comply. He was sent alone to drop Brigitta's body in a distant canal.

News of her murder spread quickly, as there are were few places to hide bodies in this Venice and hers was quickly found. It wasn’t long before fingers were pointed at Basilio. She had been going to see him that night, and, as Ottavio had said, they were known to fight. Rumors began to emerge that perhaps she had been pregnant, or maybe she had cheated on him, or he had cheated on her. Some said she had been trying to leave him, and in a rage he had killed her. Basilio panicked, fearing Ottavio and doubting his promises to protect him from arrest. It didn’t take long before he decided he had to run. After composing and sending a quick letter implicating Ottavio in the murder of Brigitta, that same night he prepared for his escape while Ottavio was away. At the last minute, however, he decided to free the three remaining birds. He doubted that he’d be able to get them to follow him but didn’t want them suffering more though Ottavio’s continued experiments. Amazingly, however, they did follow Basilio as he fled through the alleyways. After one night of being alone on the streets, he stumbled across the Cirque du Coeur Torve as it was packing up. Impulsively, Basilio decided that this was the best way to get as far away from Venice as he could. He smuggled himself and the birds (who refused to leave his side) onto the nearest wagon and prayed he’d be overlooked until the circus moved onto whatever exotic locale was next on their list.

He was lucky and avoided discovery just long enough to get out of his own world and into the next... But a stowaway is rarely cause for excitement. Basilio, claiming his name was Uccello Bianco, begged for a job, promising to do whatever it took to not be thrown out on the streets.

WORLD Early 1800’s Regency Italy (Type B)
Uccello hails from an place that’s fairly similar to ours, but in this version of Venice, Italy around 1813, some things are a little more extreme. The signature channels of the city are present in excess. The city as a whole seems riddled with canals and streets for walking on are thin sidewalks and bridges that overhang the water. The main mode of transportation is, of course, boats. But the poverty level is higher and the world a little darker. Nighttime lasts longer and the days are foggy, and although history books tell of a world outside Venice, all the foreigners that enter the city seem to be from various other dimensions rather than the rest of Europe. One has to wonder if there is really anything beyond the city at all, or if the bridges and crooked waterways just go on for eternity without ever changing. The natives of Venice seem to care little for theorizing on this.

But the fact of the matter is that Basilio's Venice is a magical construct, a fake Venice created by some seriously powerful magician (or maybe a group of them) looking for a place to spend the rest of their days. He or she highlighted what they liked the most in Venice (the canals, the nights, the carnival) and from there it grew as humans were brought into the city to find new lives. Because of it's nature as a small unnatural pocket in time and space, it's very easy for people from other dimensions to reach it and it's almost like a bright beacon calling people towards it.

The city itself is a continuous loop, so if you walk in one direction long enough, you will eventually turn up on the other side of the city. Imagine it like a city that encompasses one tiny planet entirely, but there's nothing suggesting it has actual roundness when you're walking down the street.

Magic is uncommon, but still permeates the lives of Venice’s inhabitants. Many buildings are lit with magic and modern conveniences like automatic doors or boats that drive themselves to and fro without anyone at the helm are common. It’s a scientific art that relies heavily on charts and math, often taking place in large scale laboratories. Still, it requires a certain spark that the majority of the population does not have.

Because of magic, Venice is a little technologically slow. Magic allows for simple mechanics to happen independently, but it's still not actually science. Science is still pursued when it comes to biology and medicine (there is no healing magic) but invention is replaced by magic. Still, they would need to invent a machine to perform the actual duty... and then they could come up with an attached spell that makes the machine run on it's own. But their progression in the sciences is a little more stunted because of the unnatural nature of this Venice. Since most manual labor can be made automated, this is what causes the high poverty level.

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earthkid

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PostPosted: Mon Mar 12, 2007 8:51 am



"An opera begins long before the curtain goes up and ends long after it has come down. It starts in my imagination, it becomes my life, and it stays part of my life long after I've left the opera house."
- Maria Callas

TALENT Uccello has a spectacularly strong and beautiful voice, and sounds like he belongs in an opera house in some upscale city rather than a circus. It’s obvious that he has natural talent in excess, but he is also unmistakably professionally trained. While he can tone it down and sing at a more casual pace, he primarily revels in the drama of opera. However, Uccello does not perform alone. He comes with his very own exotic backup singers in the form of a small flock of large parrots.

There are three of them and their species apparently has a knack for imitating the human voice. The parrots can imitate a voice with almost the precision of a recording thanks to their human-like vocal chords, but also seem to work as one single minded unit rather than individual animals. An artificially created species via strange magics, Uccello's chorus seem to be growing steadily more clever now that they can imitate speech…

But for now, that’s of no real concern to their caretaker, who treats them like his children. Long hours are spent teaching them musical parts, operatic and otherwise. For him they’re (usually) sweet and cooperative, but anyone else that comes too close may face some aggression and possessiveness. Uccello has a strange degree of awareness as to what happens when he’s not around, but it’s largely because anything said in the presence of his pets is more than likely to be repeated to Uccello.

CACATUA SULPHUREA
Adelina, Giorgina and Michelina are a set of three, perfectly identical sulfur-crested cockatoos. They're a little larger than average for their species, and, most notably, they don't really make bird noises. They imitate human speech like it was a flawless recording, though they lean more towards feminine voices and sing much better as female parts. Though gender on birds is sometimes hard to define, Uccello refers to them all as female.

After being observed for some time, it becomes clear that the strange birds are more like one personality divided into three parts. They act as one, but they have behaviors distinct to each individual animal. Sometimes, they even go so far as to include Uccello as part of their unit.

Adelina; (Id) Adelina is, by far, the least friendly of all three birds, but also the most playful. The needs of her and her unit (the other two birds and Uccello) come before anything else. She is often the first one to go on the offensive if there is a threat, and is certainly the most possessive of their human companion. People, especially females, that come too close have to face her defensiveness. She wants whatever feels good at the time, regardless of what else is going on, and will interrupt everything with her demands unless kept in check. Adelina is also the biggest eater, and seems to have a bottomless stomach.

Giorgina; (Ego) Giorgina is the most affectionate of the set and the most friendly towards strangers. If Uccello has to introduce his birds to newcomers, Giorgina is always chosen as their representative because of her typically docile demeanor. She's almost considerate in her behavior and monitors the actions of the unit so that outsiders aren't hurt. She seems aware of the needs and desires of others and seeks a balance between those and her own needs (which is to say the needs of the group).

Michelina; (Superego) Michelina is very obedient and willing to please, and of all three birds she is the quickest to learn, which is good because she assumes the role of leader. Though she may not like outsiders, she's been taught that being aggressive towards them is against the rules, so she keeps her aggressiveness in check. Michelina is obedient to the point of chastising Uccello (however she can) if she knows he's doing something he isn't supposed to. She's the most intelligent and serious of the birds.

STAGE ONE ( carnie ) Starting out as more of a stowaway struggling not to get tossed out, Uccello will probably be doing the least pleasant jobs available. Because of his background, he'd do best with the jobs that require the least thinking. His knowledge of practical skills is very poor and on top of that he's not very strong at all. Having become accustomed to an upper class way of life, he's not likely to be much good at anything requiring hard labor. It won't be for a lack of trying, however, and in his enthusiasm (and desperation) he'd rather try and fail than admit to his inability. He can play the violin expertly, however, and might do well as a background musician.

Working in his favor, Uccello is an energetic and overactive perfectionist. There's a higher chance of him overdoing something than slacking off. He does spend time practicing opera seriously at least an hour a night if not more, but sings to himself and his birds during chores anyway.

In this first stage, Uccello has no costume or stage name. He sticks to his typical regency-style clothing.
Example, and example.

STAGE TWO ( castmember ) Uccello is able to take his trio out with him and go through a humorous act involving the birds. By practicing some exchanges and motions with them, it sounds as if he and the three distinctly female birds are having fluid conversations with one another. The routine is both verbally humorous and slapstick, often with singing involved as a key element, and the theme tends to be making the three birds sound smarter and more in control than Uccello is. Though as the birds grow smarter and more and more feminine and unique in sound, some of their reactions are genuinely improvised. They are beyond actual comprehension of speech, but they like to play with Uccello and he has to keep on his toes.

This act is a nice side show or an opener to a larger performance as things are being set up. The props needed are minimal and preparation is quick and easy. Uccello continues to attentively keep up with personal practice of his art and may spend more time as a musician during large performances. Additionally, realizing that singing alone won't do anymore, and that he has to be really interesting to make it big, Uccello begins to work on becoming more athletic. Identifying it as properly bird-like, he takes an interest in aerial hoops and practices at that with his usual determination.

Uccello adopts a Venetian carnival costume to wear on stage. It's the same white and yellows as his birds, and the primary feature is a mask that reaches halfway down his face, leaving his chin and mouth exposed. However, it does feature a long, sharp nose like a beak.

Mask, with glasses worn over or under it? No gold markings/trim around eyes.
OR
Alternative mask, except it would be in white. Smaller beak than the above one.
Costume and hat, but again primarily white with some yellows.

STAGE THREE ( headliner ) Uccello will be ready to once again embrace having a large audience, but he'll need to have worked very hard to make an opera solo interesting to a circus audience. Uccello applies a similar routine as last time to a more dangerous-seeming situation with the aerial hoops. He'll never be a true contortionist, but his comedic timing is well suited for another clown-like act.

He sings with his birds, and between numbers converses with them and does jokes as last time with them being portrayed as in charge and of a superior intellect. Though choreographed carefully to make it look improvised, a lot of the exchanges and reactions can be genuinely ad-libbed thanks to the quick wit of both Uccello and his birds. While he's on the aerial hoop, the three cockatoos perch on the hoop or him and move around to keep out of his way as he goes through the act. Rather than aiming for graceful, beautiful movements, Uccello's act is designed to make it look like he is constantly in danger of falling off only to catch himself in a variety of complicated poses, seemingly all by accident.

In addition to his act, Uccello will have begun to go through some changes in relation to how he handles his birds. While they always considered him part of their unit, he wasn't on the same wavelength as them until now. Uccello starts to lose himself as he grows in popularity and works more with the birds, and the lines between what they feel and what he feels blur. He refuses to be separated from them, and under times of duress he may even slip up and talk about something they did as if it were actually him. It will become increasingly hard for Uccello to determine where he stops and the trio begins, and he'll be frightened by the slippery slope he's found himself on. The birds themselves will have become almost too humanlike in their innate intelligence and emotional capabilities, and the question of whether they or Uccello are in charge no longer has a clear answer.

Uccello's costume, though just as gaudy in its own right as his last one, has to be designed with his more athletic act in mind. The cloth is kept relatively close to his body and his mask no longer sports the large beak that could potentially get in the way. Still, he keeps to the Venetian Carnival theme and still dresses all in white with bits of yellow.

Hat, but white, with pale yellow feathers/trimming. It's intentionally dropped (and sometimes caught) throughout the act.
Costume, but almost all white with some yellow highlights. Beneath the high-waisted coat, he wears more acrobatic appropriate tights.
Mask, but checkered yellow and white.

REFERENCES
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Carnival_of_Venice
http://www.phototravels.net/venice/venice-carnival.html
http://www.delpiano.com/carnival/html/strand2.html
http://travel.webshots.com/album/549189743MipCit?start=12

Mask: http://www.masksvenetian.com/images/ccanov-kbill-nm021-slge.jpg
PostPosted: Mon Mar 12, 2007 8:55 am



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earthkid

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PostPosted: Mon Mar 12, 2007 9:03 am


Closing post!

Comments and criticisms are welcome as I work on ironing him out. heart
PostPosted: Tue Mar 13, 2007 7:21 pm


Wow! I like him already! biggrin He looks like an awesome character and his background is really neat. I like that he's not adapted from another story of yours. Characters that are created specifically for the Cirque seem to fit into it better and become stronger concepts more easily than characters that are from somewhere else.

I could draw parallels between the birds and Sarava, or between Basilio's musical history and some of his appearance to Iosif, but I don't think that's very fair of me. He's a really cool character and his act fills a niche that's not really thought of yet. I'd love to see him make it into the game.

--->FILL IN HIS LIKES, DISLIKES, AND HOBBIES. Please?

Oh, and it's off-topic, but could I commission you for some avi art?

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PostPosted: Tue Mar 13, 2007 11:01 pm


Thank you very, very much! I'm really happy to hear that he clicks. heart I agree that it's much easier to tailor a character to the setting, especially when it's something so exotic and it's-own-thing-ish like Cirque.

Hmm, you have good points there. I think I'd at least feel terrible if I didn't switch up his instrument. Somehow I managed to miss Iosif's piano playing. sweatdrop

I definitely plan on it! XD I'm just lazy, and likes/dislikes/hobbies are always the hardest part of character creation for me so I save them until the veeeery end.

Sure! Right now I'm on the verge of finishing one piece and I have a second one I've just agreed to do, so it might be a while before I can get started but... (Plus I have to enter the contest so I can actually have a shot at getting this character. pirate )
PostPosted: Wed Mar 14, 2007 11:43 am


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PostPosted: Wed Mar 14, 2007 5:56 pm


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PostPosted: Wed Mar 14, 2007 7:35 pm


Maybe Violin or Harpsicord? It's probably a good idea to think about what things do and don't exist in his world. Like, I know Lu has no idea what a piano is and was totally lost when Iosef tried to explain one. I like how you noted that he doesn't like big displays of magic. Could you elaborate on this?

I'm honestly a little confused by his world. Magic replaces science? I understand that it's pre-industrial revolution, but would the industrial revolution even occur? It seems like they have magic that negates the need. Is the world kind of stuck?

And even if it's not important, what is outside of Venice? Why do travellers only come from other dimensions? Is something sinister going on?

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PostPosted: Wed Mar 14, 2007 8:31 pm


Harpsichord is still very piano-y... so I'll tentatively say I'm leaning towards violin but I'll do research on other string instruments and see if I can find anything that's particularly associated with opera.

Basilio dislikes large displays of magic because, first off, he comes from a world where magic is something incorporated invisibly into everyday uses and things like balls of fire, illusions and calling down lightning are impossible. Secondly, he associates it with his guardian's rather messy work and enjoys magic most when he can pretend it's not there. I'll elaborate on this more in personality, hopefully.

Well, I do have further ideas for his world's origin but I thought they were half-baked so they weren't talked about yet. Buuuut since you asked... Basilio's Venice is a magical construct, a fake Venice probably created by some seriously powerful magician (or group of them) looking for a place to spend the rest of his days. He highlighted what he liked the most in Venice (the canals, the nights) and from there it grew as humans were brought into the city to find new lives. Because of it's nature as a small unnatural pocket in time and space, it's very easy for people from other dimensions to reach it and it's almost like a bright beacon. Plus... there is nowhere else in this dimension for people to come from other than Venice. The city is a continuous loop, so if you walk in one direction long enough, you will eventually turn up on the other side of the city. Imagine it like a city that encompasses one tiny planet entirely, but there's nothing suggesting it has actual roundness when you're walking down the street.

So, yes, it is a little technologically stuck. Magic allows for simple mechanics to happen independently, but it's still not actually science. Science is still pursued when it comes to biology and medicine (there is no healing magic) but invention is replaced by magic. Still, they would need to invent a machine to perform the actual duty... and then they could come up with an attached spell that makes the machine run on it's own. But their progression in the sciences is a little more stunted because of the unnatural nature of this Venice.

The use of magic makes it so that a lot of the manual labor used in most cities in unnecessary. Hence, the poverty level is very high.

I hope that makes more sense. whee
PostPosted: Thu Mar 15, 2007 1:29 pm


Aha! I like that idea a lot. smile It's really neat.

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earthkid

Vermillion Mage

PostPosted: Thu Mar 15, 2007 7:27 pm


User ImageNew version of Basilio that just needs to be described. I'm sad I have to make a new header though! The chibi is obsolete. crying
PostPosted: Thu Mar 15, 2007 10:00 pm


But the chibi is just so damn cute. :3

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Uennie
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Invisible Gekko

PostPosted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 1:10 am


This looks fantastically creative. When you're done I look forward to reading the entire thing.
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