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 Posted: Sat Mar 03, 2007 5:37 am
ok im writing a song now and im at a lost for words and i want to add alot more to the song but idk what else to say so if any1 can help that would be great. The song aint that good cuz its not finished but anyways heres the song
Name:My happiness ran away
I woke up one morning
feeling like s**t
i didnt know why
but i wanted it to end
so i thought a slit
on my arm would help
it didnt meke me better
just worst...
My happiness ran away
it was replaced with an
endless depression...
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Posted: Sat Mar 03, 2007 1:28 pm
ok, so how does the music go tho? I want to help 3nodding
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Posted: Sat Mar 03, 2007 7:50 pm
pals dont care
neiter to they
the one
that got me into this
how will my happiness come back?
well, first i to earn it
new friends
it'll pay off
until the one morning
a year has past
but the past didnt leave me...
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Posted: Tue May 01, 2007 3:40 pm
id like to help, but i always had trouble working on other people's songs.
ill try, but it may take a while
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