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[mentee] aliira - some sketches

aliira

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Posted: Sun Feb 25, 2007 5:12 pm

AliirA's Sketchbook

general critique welcome, im also looking for a mentor willing to adopt me

i have a dA but i havent updated for a long time [my dA]

some freebie sketches i did..i hope to have more stuff soon

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Posted: Sun Feb 25, 2007 6:46 pm

Very cute.
I notice that your anatomy varies a lot, on a number of them the necks seem too thick and the arm on the bottom one is too think. I'd also like to see a more full body shot from you, just to get a better feel of your grasp of anatomy. So far it doesn't look too bad, just some little things here and there.

If you're still looking for a mentor I have some space still I think

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Sriae

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Posted: Sun Feb 25, 2007 6:59 pm

Looks good! Agreed with what Eejbeej said. I like your hands. :O

Posted: Mon Feb 26, 2007 6:30 pm

I notice that a lot of these drawings are very thin limbed: is that intentional? I'm not saying I have issue with it, but I know a lot of people will nitpick (I've been picked at it about before -_-) about a character being too 'skinny'. If it's not purposeful, you might want to flesh them out a bit. If that just how you like to draw them, more power to you. =D

I like how you do hands and love the lines you do in the hair and clothing. I can't do folds in clothing for crap. =P

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