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Orianna Dulcina

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PostPosted: Fri Feb 23, 2007 12:15 pm


Questor Information
Username: Orianna Dulcina
Mule SN's: Anna Lee Ramsey
IoDM Newbie? (Y/N): Y
Serum: Serum 54 - Zebra mouse
CODE for your quest banner(s): N/A


Updates 4/24/07:

I'm finished, or so I hope. I'll probably have to do more, but for now I need comments.

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PostPosted: Fri Feb 23, 2007 12:20 pm


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~Scientific name~ Lemniscomys barbarus
The Zebra Mouse (also known as the African Striped Grass mouse) originally comes from North Africa. Which includes: Senegal, Tanzania, Morocco, Algeria, Tunisia and Sudan.
The colouration of the Zebra mouse is a lovely mix of earth tone browns interspersed amongst the black stripes that run from head to tail on its sides and back. Their tail is as long as the body (sometimes longer). Be careful though, their tail is very fragile.
A full-grown Zebra mouse is 3-4 inches long.
The Zebra Mouse is an entertaining pet to watch, but can be a problem to handle. Because of his or her quick speed and agile body, this rodent can easily escape someone trying to handle it. To effectively handle this creature, one should cup the mouse inside the hands. As a word of warning, picking up this mouse by its tail can be extremely harmful and painful as it may slide off. In this occurrence, the tail may never grow back. The Zebra Mouse makes a good pet for children because of their easy care and amusing antics. But this pet should be watched, not handled! This creature is active at different times throughout the day and night. They are extremely active and can often be found climbing over each other, hanging or diving from perches and climbing implements, or scurrying and playing amongst toys. If a Zebra Mouse becomes startled, they will usually spring about their cage. This creature is also known to be able to jump approximately two feet straight up into the air. This particular breed doesn't give off an offensive odor, as most rodents are known to do.
The Zebra Mouse originates in almost all areas of North Africa, with each region housing a different version of coloring for the breed. It has taken on many names throughout its life, such as the African Striped Grass Mouse, as well as distinct names in many other languages. The Zebra Mouse makes its home in semi-deserts and in brushwood and grass. In the wild, this creature is often a source of food for many birds of prey, snakes, and any other starving animal. Because the Zebra Mouse becomes active as soon as the day breaks, they are not hard prey to find. This rodent begins its day early so it can forage for seeds, fruit, or dig up plants and roots.
A zebra mouse's teeth are always growing. They always need something to chew on or they will end up with overgrown teeth. You may use blocks of soft wood or paper towel tubes.

Orianna Dulcina

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Orianna Dulcina

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PostPosted: Fri Feb 23, 2007 12:35 pm


~The Person Behind the Mouse~


~Name~ Anna Lee Ramsey
~Nickname~ Mouse
~Age~ 21
~Height~ 4'11''
~Weight~ 135 lbs.
~Hair~ Straight Brown
~Eyes~ Gray
~Distinguishing Marks~ Anna has a little mole near her right eye. She also has a beauty mark above the left side of her mouth.
~Likes~ Anything shiny, sunflower seeds, veggies, singing, and dancing.
~Dislikes~ Getting caught, anything sour, rust, anything dull, noisy people, and needles.
PostPosted: Fri Feb 23, 2007 12:45 pm


~Who is the Mouse~



~Job/Career~ Thievery
~Education~ Anna got through most of her high school years but in her junior year she was blamed for stealing from the photography department, and though she knew had stole the gear she didn't tell and was kicked out of school. Unable to pay her way into another school, Anna didn't finish high school.
~Physical appearance~ Anna likes to where more loose clothing though she always wears a pair of tight shorts and a tight shirt under her clothing in case she needs the run away quickly. Anna I more often, then not, seen wearing no shoes, though she does wear a anklet on her right leg which has a small key on it.
Anna wears her hair loose normally though she sometimes pulls it back in a loose ponytail.

Anna has bright round eyes which sometimes make her look like a little child. Anna has remarkably strong legs from all her years of running, though she has just as much arm strength from helping out the elderly near where she lives.
~Personality~ Anna tends to look on the brighter side of things, always looking for the silver lining. She will only steal when she feels it wont hurt who she's stealing from.
~Habits/Hobbies~ Anna has the habit of playing with her hair when she is lying. She also has the habit of nose twitching slightly when she is deep in thought.
Anna's hobbies include collecting coins that have been flattened and finding new and interesting way of hiding from people.

Orianna Dulcina

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Orianna Dulcina

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PostPosted: Fri Feb 23, 2007 1:01 pm


~Of Mice and Men~


~Family~


~Mother~ Lillian Cane Ramsey was a drug addict and an abuser of peoples kindness. Lillian would sit on the side of the road with her little daughter and ask for money, enough to feed herself and the child though she never did. The money was quickly gone and no one seemed to be able to find what Lillian had done with it. The cops searched her house close to once every week, but they could never find anything to put her away. Until her daughter hit the age of five and her mother got caught with cocaine.

~Father~ Anna doesn't know who her father is. Lillian said she was with so many people at the time that it was hard to tell one from the other.

~History~


~Past~ Anna almost died as an infant, but death never got her. The people who lived with her mother took care of Anna making sure she was fed, and helped her get over the withdraw she went through, because of her mothers drug use. When Anna was five her mother was taken away from having cocaine, the people who had lived with them said they where Anna's aunties and uncles.
As Anna got bigger she became stronger and her aunties and uncles even made sure she got into school. When she was twelve her aunties and uncles left the house because they could no longer support Anna, so she learned to support herself. Though she couldn't get a job she she learned from some of the older boys how to pickpocket. At first she was in their little gang and was only aloud to keep just enough to feed herself from day to day.
When Anna was fourteen she realized she wasn't going to get any taller, though she didn't mind any. She was able to run fast then any of the boys she knew, and could quickly get away if anyone tried to chase her, because she had stolen from them. Anna never stole too much so it was easier for her to cover where she got the money from.


~Present~ Anna lives in a homeless shelter and only steals so she can get extra money for food.
Anna finding it harder and harder to get good money from pickpocketing, decided it was time to find other easy ways to earn a few bucks. Anna begins then to go to medical testing clinics to be a sort of test rodent for the new drugs.

~On The Island~


Why she's on the island?
Told she is going to be a subject for a new drug. Did trust it complete but didn't complain when they told her she would get a good amount more of money if she went to their labs for the testing.
PostPosted: Fri Feb 23, 2007 1:06 pm


~The Reason For The Mouse~



Why a Mouse?
The reason I picked a mouse was because of two reasons.
1. Her height. Some people who are short are called mouse, though there are also those who are tall and called the same thing, I thought her being short would be better for her.
2. In eastern areas there is an animal stereotype of mice being thieving creatures. It is were I got the title of my quest to be 'The Thieving Mouse'.

Orianna Dulcina

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Orianna Dulcina

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PostPosted: Fri Feb 23, 2007 1:08 pm


~The Treasure Trove~


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PostPosted: Fri Feb 23, 2007 1:09 pm


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Orianna Dulcina

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Orianna Dulcina

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PostPosted: Fri Feb 23, 2007 1:11 pm


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PostPosted: Fri Feb 23, 2007 1:13 pm


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Orianna Dulcina

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Orianna Dulcina

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PostPosted: Fri Feb 23, 2007 1:16 pm


[editing]
PostPosted: Mon Feb 26, 2007 10:01 am


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Orianna Dulcina

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Chhayawolf

PostPosted: Mon Feb 26, 2007 12:01 pm


WHAT?! No one is bothering to help critique this poor girl? Chhaya to the rescue! *heroic pose with a towel for a cape*

I know what you mean about going gentle with critiquing i'm the same way myself for better or for worse. I'd saaaaay, the first thing that really sticks out for me (aside from extremely minor grammar errors) is that her history is a tad short in my opinion. Maybe elaborate more on the grizzly details about what got her into hurting poor animals as well as why her grades were getting worse. One example being doodling and daydreaming in class instead of taking notes *living example*. Also i'm craving for her likes and dislikes even if they're something simple like napping lol. I hope that's a gentle but informative start for ya!
PostPosted: Mon Feb 26, 2007 4:53 pm


Yes!!! Thank you so much. I'll get started working on that right away.

Orianna Dulcina

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5,850 Points
  • Citizen 200
  • Person of Interest 200
  • Elocutionist 200

Orianna Dulcina

Eloquent Lunatic

5,850 Points
  • Citizen 200
  • Person of Interest 200
  • Elocutionist 200
PostPosted: Tue Feb 27, 2007 1:09 pm


It needs more work I bet but I can't really think of much else.

I guess when I can think of it I'll change it.
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