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(Red_Paint)

PostPosted: Tue Feb 20, 2007 3:05 pm


Perfect


arrow Written February 20, 2007


Perfect
A word unspoken
A word unknown
Perfect, a lovely token

'Practice makes perfect'
A phrase that's wrong
A phrase that hurts
A phrase that's gone

'Perfect is as perfect does'
A saying people follow
A saying that digs deep
and leaves you feeling hollow

There's no such thing as perfect
Nothing is never good enough
You say you'll just fight it
You think you're so tough

Never truly eating
Throwing up alone
Making life long scars
Till you're skin and bone...


Written by (Red_Paint)
PostPosted: Sat Mar 03, 2007 9:08 pm


I like it.

It's actually really original. Strays from the overdone.

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