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 Posted: Tue Feb 13, 2007 2:15 pm
I'm bored, ******** bars.
(Feel free to do less or more, that's just a figure.)
Original lyrics only.
Accept and post first.
If you have a specific topic you'd like to put to use, feel free to state it and post, regardless if I reply accepting the terms or not.
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Posted: Tue Feb 13, 2007 2:29 pm
I'll battle you as long as it is audio. xd
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Posted: Tue Feb 13, 2007 2:39 pm
Chibi Squall Strife I'll battle you as long as it is audio. xd Can't do audio, bro.
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Posted: Tue Feb 13, 2007 4:44 pm
im up for it topic The Holocaust you down
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Posted: Wed Feb 14, 2007 1:48 pm
You didn't need to wait for me to accept or change the thread's title. Go ahead and post, rip s**t up.
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Posted: Wed Feb 14, 2007 2:58 pm
oh iight ima hit this up again tonight with my verse
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Posted: Thu Feb 15, 2007 8:06 am
Accepting this battle is like walking into Auschwitz(Death Camp)/
You about to go on multiple death marches just to kill your conscience/
Speaking your mind to KITTY like ANNE FRANK writing conflicts/
Let your father outlive you and re-write your whole diary of hot s**t/*
Your not looking forward to this horrible and cruel rhyme/
The SYSTEMATIC KILLING of Makairo you call this verse GENOCIDE/
Feed you candy shock your body then shower you in poison/
Kill yourself like Hitler then realize your whole operation was pointless/**
Call my flow the Nazi party with Hitler as my right hand man/
Leaving you speechless speaking German on your a**/
Streifen Sie Sie von Ihren Gewinnen zwingen Sie dann, mit dem Rest jener Verlierer zu schwimmen ab/
(Strip you of your wins and force you to swim with the rest of them losers)
Frieren Sie Sie zum Tod hacken Sie dann oben und sehen ein, wenn ich das beste dieses Verlierers erhalte/
(Freeze you to death then chop you up to see if I get the best of this loser)
Invading your home taking all of your rights/
The Secret Annex got burned down by my spit nowhere to run in the middle of the night/
Spill the beans*** without putting up a fight/
No sneezing, coughing or weezing, pissing and shitting in pots to shed some light/****
Force you into my Durrty Ghettos getting diseases/
Poor living conditions contracting TYPHUS and SCABBIES*****mumps and measels/
For most of you this verse will get you embossed/
Then write a book Mak of how you survived my lyrical Holocaust/
*Kitty was the name of Anne Frank's diary. Her father Otto outlived her and re-wrote some parts of her diary and sold it worldwide.
**In death/concentration camps Jews were starved and fed candy which shocked there bodies to death. Many were given shower privelagews, but didn't know the shower shot out poison. Hitler killed himself and almost everyone who has heard of the Holocaust has thought of it as pointless.
***In the Diary of Anne Frank her and Peter Van Daan were carrying many bags of beans up and down the stairs of the Secret Annex which they spilled by mistake.
****During certain times of the day and night in the secret annex they could make no noise of any sort of fear of being caught. They also couldn't use the bathroom they often had to go in pots and pans.
*****The ghettos that the Jews were forced to live in had por living conditions many people contracted diseases. Anne Frank died in Bergen-Belsen she died of a disease called Typhus and also Scabbies.
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Posted: Thu Feb 15, 2007 9:11 am
Durrtyboi Accepting this battle is like walking into Auschwitz(Death Camp)/ You about to go on multiple death marches just to kill your conscience/ Speaking your mind to KITTY like ANNE FRANK writing conflicts/ Let your father outlive you and re-write your whole diary of hot s**t/* Your not looking forward to this horrible and cruel rhyme/ The SYSTEMATIC KILLING of Makairo you call this verse GENOCIDE/ Feed you candy shock your body then shower you in poison/ Kill yourself like Hitler then realize your whole operation was pointless/** Call my flow the Nazi party with Hitler as my right hand man/ Leaving you speechless speaking German on your a**/ Streifen Sie Sie von Ihren Gewinnen zwingen Sie dann, mit dem Rest jener Verlierer zu schwimmen ab/ (Strip you of your wins and force you to swim with the rest of them losers) Frieren Sie Sie zum Tod hacken Sie dann oben und sehen ein, wenn ich das beste dieses Verlierers erhalte/ (Freeze you to death then chop you up to see if I get the best of this loser) Invading your home taking all of your rights/ The Secret Annex got burned down by my spit nowhere to run in the middle of the night/ Spill the beans*** without putting up a fight/ No sneezing, coughing or weezing, pissing and shitting in pots to shed some light/**** Force you into my Durrty Ghettos getting diseases/ Poor living conditions contracting TYPHUS and SCABBIES*****mumps and measels/ For most of you this verse will get you embossed/ Then write a book Mak of how you survived my lyrical Holocaust/ *Kitty was the name of Anne Frank's diary. Her father Otto outlived her and re-wrote some parts of her diary and sold it worldwide. **In death/concentration camps Jews were starved and fed candy which shocked there bodies to death. Many were given shower privelagews, but didn't know the shower shot out poison. Hitler killed himself and almost everyone who has heard of the Holocaust has thought of it as pointless. ***In the Diary of Anne Frank her and Peter Van Daan were carrying many bags of beans up and down the stairs of the Secret Annex which they spilled by mistake. ****During certain times of the day and night in the secret annex they could make no noise of any sort of fear of being caught. They also couldn't use the bathroom they often had to go in pots and pans. *****The ghettos that the Jews were forced to live in had por living conditions many people contracted diseases. Anne Frank died in Bergen-Belsen she died of a disease called Typhus and also Scabbies. IM FEELIN IT
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Posted: Thu Feb 15, 2007 9:43 am
SP4D3Z LOCC Durrtyboi Accepting this battle is like walking into Auschwitz(Death Camp)/ You about to go on multiple death marches just to kill your conscience/ Speaking your mind to KITTY like ANNE FRANK writing conflicts/ Let your father outlive you and re-write your whole diary of hot s**t/* Your not looking forward to this horrible and cruel rhyme/ The SYSTEMATIC KILLING of Makairo you call this verse GENOCIDE/ Feed you candy shock your body then shower you in poison/ Kill yourself like Hitler then realize your whole operation was pointless/** Call my flow the Nazi party with Hitler as my right hand man/ Leaving you speechless speaking German on your a**/ Streifen Sie Sie von Ihren Gewinnen zwingen Sie dann, mit dem Rest jener Verlierer zu schwimmen ab/ (Strip you of your wins and force you to swim with the rest of them losers) Frieren Sie Sie zum Tod hacken Sie dann oben und sehen ein, wenn ich das beste dieses Verlierers erhalte/ (Freeze you to death then chop you up to see if I get the best of this loser) Invading your home taking all of your rights/ The Secret Annex got burned down by my spit nowhere to run in the middle of the night/ Spill the beans*** without putting up a fight/ No sneezing, coughing or weezing, pissing and shitting in pots to shed some light/**** Force you into my Durrty Ghettos getting diseases/ Poor living conditions contracting TYPHUS and SCABBIES*****mumps and measels/ For most of you this verse will get you embossed/ Then write a book Mak of how you survived my lyrical Holocaust/ *Kitty was the name of Anne Frank's diary. Her father Otto outlived her and re-wrote some parts of her diary and sold it worldwide. **In death/concentration camps Jews were starved and fed candy which shocked there bodies to death. Many were given shower privelagews, but didn't know the shower shot out poison. Hitler killed himself and almost everyone who has heard of the Holocaust has thought of it as pointless. ***In the Diary of Anne Frank her and Peter Van Daan were carrying many bags of beans up and down the stairs of the Secret Annex which they spilled by mistake. ****During certain times of the day and night in the secret annex they could make no noise of any sort of fear of being caught. They also couldn't use the bathroom they often had to go in pots and pans. *****The ghettos that the Jews were forced to live in had por living conditions many people contracted diseases. Anne Frank died in Bergen-Belsen she died of a disease called Typhus and also Scabbies. IM FEELIN IT yeah we actually studying the holocaust in school so what better topic
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Posted: Thu Feb 15, 2007 12:02 pm
Pretty good. Flow wasn't all that great, but content with regards to the topic was superb.
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Posted: Thu Feb 15, 2007 1:40 pm
The Legendary Makairo Pretty good. Flow wasn't all that great, but content with regards to the topic was superb. yeah i know i thought about that but i coudn't get the flow as perfect as i wanted it to be so i just said ******** it lemme se if i can win on lyrical content as far as flow im done and some of you might learn something readin the verse as well 3nodding
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Posted: Thu Feb 15, 2007 5:11 pm
My flow > Lyrical Content
...bitches.
Melted flesh, scent of death, essence of maleovolent
intensions, suffer the children and prevent them
from living and survival becomes the greatest trial,
Vials of flames swallowed in addition to loaves and black water
sweetened with the bloody burning of frozen lips, flesh cracked,
Eyes cross, wetbacks and setbacks,
6 lines describe you, weak and weary, teary eyed
You fear me - alive? You clearly barely arrive
lyrically you hear me not, secretly you adore me,
Like the chosen uncle toms of the sufferage
you envy and abhore me,
You can't even count with fingers: the numbers of gods you hit,
I made a name by doing so-
Flood niggas in the Gas Chamber worse than Taj-He-Spitz,
The Nazi Maki, not so shocking: ******** Jews - who? You?
Boo hoo, your mother's soul has been snatched and attatched
to the end of a pit, filled with bloody, blackened limbs,
Your father's body parts are shredded across the running space
between the camps, I'm the cramp, makin' you believe you can't make it safe,
You never will, bound to death, round house with violence to cut your neck,
Fist to throats, halt your breathing - soon enough you shall be leaving,
This tortured world, greeting to heaven, Elie Wiesel: a Night to remember,
Poke your head out of the barracks for the snapshot,
Get clapped, not hot, you're ice cold like the snow crunching beneath your swolen, frozen toes,
Foolish, Boi, use a dictionary to learn the true meaning of words before you get burned,
"Holocaust" means an event of massive deaths, meaning slavery: my s**t - is within the topic,
Your checkered back of white whip's slashes, Salt pushed into your open wounds and gashes,
Gasses poured on the oak, wooden casket, Damage
to your family you never managed,
Plantation, string you up scarecrow,
Fair? No, like you and me in a battle: Blow
on my p***s, like your many ancestors' women did it,
Raped and loved every minute - of that clean, ivory p***s,
Ha ha, mother ********, it burns you 'cuz you're black,
Look in the mirror and see your face is raped - Mak:
The emotion exploiting fiend of Holocausts,
Like the Iraq status - you're counted as another soldier lost.
Bang!!
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The word, Holocaust, derives from Greek words, meaning complete destruction, usually by fire. By the end of the 17th century, the word came to mean a great slaughter or massacre.
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Lucky Lucifer Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Feb 16, 2007 1:09 am
That was a nice battle, well maybe nice is the wrong word when talking about the Holocaust.
Both verses were real good but I'm gonna give the battle to Mak. I think that he had better a better flow and better punches. Also he stuck to the topic well.
Durrtys was good but I wasn't fond of the rhyming in German, but I might have let it slide if it actually rhymed. And I felt that Durrtys wasn't really focusing on the Holocaust itself. The lines on Anne Frank seemed sorta forced to the topic, with Mak's verse all the references seemed natural.
Vote: The Legendary Makairo.
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Posted: Fri Feb 16, 2007 8:10 am
Lucky Lucifer That was a nice battle, well maybe nice is the wrong word when talking about the Holocaust. Both verses were real good but I'm gonna give the battle to Mak. I think that he had better a better flow and better punches. Also he stuck to the topic well. Durrtys was good but I wasn't fond of the rhyming in German, but I might have let it slide if it actually rhymed. And I felt that Durrtys wasn't really focusing on the Holocaust itself. The lines on Anne Frank seemed sorta forced to the topic, with Mak's verse all the references seemed natural. Vote: The Legendary Makairo. didn't you see the subtitles to the german but yeah i see what you mean this was kind of 1 of those topics
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Posted: Fri Feb 16, 2007 1:24 pm
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mrgreen
It was a pretty good one.
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