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`ShivA

PostPosted: Thu Feb 08, 2007 6:08 pm


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These will be the concepts that Shiva thinks up!
Concepts may be used with permission however, what I am questing for, or what I am helping someone quest for may not be used.






Current Interest::
Neutralized Alkahest ~ Soul-search in progress.







Updates:
May 13 Still alive. Updated things, trashed stuff, etc, etc. Going to research a new soul.

October 09 Added the soul I would like to quest for.

July 09: Ezra Kiss will be updating Zayne as a guardian. [coming soon]
Lately I have received comments of having an unsatisfactory Fel Essence, and it was also brought to my attention that the souls I had picked were unusable. The Fel has been replaced with Neutralized Alkahest and soon, the soul should be updated.

April 09: I would really like some feedback. : Anyways, I put in a writing sample link; I'll be updating things on that page soon.
I'll be updating several parts of the thread like the Raevan, perhaps the guardian...
Finally, I updated the worth of my offer using lowest mp prices.

August 08: Thread name change, banners, and edited fel/story. Added writing sample.

June 08: New guardian and Raevan info added.
PostPosted: Thu Feb 08, 2007 6:26 pm


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UNDER CONSTRUCTION!




NAME : Ezra Kiss
GENDER : Male
AGE : 22
OCCUPATION :: On-call investigation/researcher; researching and solving strange or abstruse cases.
RACE : Human

LIKES : Ezra likes overcast days, bright objects, investigating strange cases or searching for lost objects. He also loves to read and put what he learns into use- whether it’s telling someone information or showing them the how-to. He likes to exercise and often free runs whenever he needs to think.

DISLIKES : Ezra hates possums, and freaks out when they approach him or make noises. He doesn’t like talking in front of big crowds and often ends up tripping over his words when he needs to. When criticized, he gets frustrated easily if he cant figure out how to learn from it. Things that are sweeter than usual, seafood and radishes are not his thing; he faints from the latter.

LOOKS : With silver hair that contrasts his lightly tanned skin, Ezra stands 5'10'' and looks younger than the average 22-year-old. His smooth, black-streaked hair is cut into side-swept bangs at the front and messy or tied up in the back. His ears are adorned with multiple earrings on each side. A thin chain around his neck sports a sapphire pendant with an engraved quote. His eyes are a gradient of blue: ice blue to a darker blue towards the pupil. He has a lean body and dresses with sparse or pale colors.

PERSONALITY : Ezra is somewhat socially awkward. Though he loves being around people, he usually ends up saying something strange en-conversation. He becomes shy around people he finds attractive and becomes antsy if talking to them. Clueless as to how he should act sometimes, his curiosity gets him into sticky situations. Being a bookworm, he is sometimes found reading at social outings, but his attentiveness to his surroundings causes him to jump into random conversations.
He is a natural nurturer. However, while he is working, he gets into a mode of complete seriousness. In this state, his senses are heightened and it is hard to snap him out of it; only when he is done with the work does he relax. However, this state of being drains him and he often gets sick from ignoring his needs.

HISTORY : Ezra Kiss awakened one morning to find that he had been given a clean slate. After checking out of the hospital, he was given some government-issued documents and directions to penthouse that he was told was his own. He was also supplied with a fairly large bank account linked to a false name. With his memories wiped and no knowledge as to why, he spent several months in therapy, trying to remember anything from his lost past. However, whenever he came close to recalling anything, he experienced splitting headaches and sudden physical weakness. For the next year, Ezra worked at a café near Lab 305 and often spotted half-bodied characters floating in and out of the strange building. Out of curiosity, he often attended some lab-hosted events and discovered the ethereal beings to be Raevans.
A few years after working at the cafe, recuperating and figuring himself out, he started taking action. Spurred by an instinctual passion for investigation, Ezra started examining an ambiguous case of some local killings. He broke laws regarding intrusion of personal property and hacked into a database (subsequently causing chaos for the police) in lieu of his hunt. He caught he serial killer, but in the process was detained for his own crimes. After explaining his methods and case logic, he befriended a detective from the Special Investigations Force who quickly realized the potential and valuable skills Ezra possessed. With a bargain, Ezra was excused from the prison as long as he worked for the Force. Currently he has been set up as an undercover officer at the cafe, and is on on-call duty.
Through his work advantages, he tries to recover his past bit by bit.

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`ShivA

PostPosted: Thu Feb 08, 2007 6:27 pm


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PostPosted: Thu Feb 08, 2007 6:29 pm


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Neutralized Alkahest
Alkahest is said to be the strongest solvent, able to dissolve anything. However, not only is it barely affecting the glass vial; a piece of metal that has been experimentally immersed in it floats, barely affected.

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`ShivA

PostPosted: Thu Feb 08, 2007 6:30 pm


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part 2.
Images may be added later as examples.



Corrupted eyes
"Eyes are the windows to the soul"- most say, but these "eyes" seem to be broken. These eyes have turned into fog-like matter that drift in the glass in the shape of a blurry eye with an odd and tiny arrow in each of the pupil- the grey lens obviously cracked and looking as if it were to shatter


Simulated Reality
Wherever you go, your surroundings seem to be mirrored as a mirage inside this vial. However, it's obvious that the image in the vial is not reality.
PostPosted: Thu Feb 08, 2007 6:50 pm


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Looking around for other choices....

Possibilities:

?

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`ShivA

PostPosted: Thu Feb 08, 2007 7:05 pm


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PostPosted: Thu Feb 08, 2007 7:07 pm


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Semi.Custom

Name: Skeith (or Aarin)

Guardian: Ezra Kiss

Gender: Androgyny preferred;


Fel Essence: Neutralized Alkahest


Soul:

Alignment: Chaotic neutral

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`ShivA

PostPosted: Thu Feb 08, 2007 7:08 pm


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In progress...
I copied it and meant to paste during the edit, but lost it... T____T;

Name: Arin or Skeith

Guardian: Ezra Kiss

Gender: Male or female, preferably androgynous.

Fel Essence: Neutralized Alkahest

Soul:

Hair color: Black with neon blue bangs,

Hair style: Coming soon.

Eye color: Neon-something. A color opposite of the bangs.

Skin color: extremely pale, or a dreamy-esque pale-blue shade.

Markings on skin: Swirls coming from the side of the body; these also go up the arms [almost looking like scars].

Clothing style: Very modern/"anime-looking". Something that has been thought up, but not a style of any particular era.

Wings: Yes.. image soon?

Horns: If necessary.
Possibly tiny little stubble-point horns?

Ears: Normal ears, or slightly pointy. I'm not really picky about this.

Accessories: Pendant of a cage, rings on the fingers, anything else you think would look good.

Personality: Wise, yet innocent in terms of attraction. He/she tries to get through things when possible, and yet submits when they realize there's no other choice.
However, catch remains that when his cage pendant is taken off, he/she is taken over by a 'nightmare' persona.

Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
PostPosted: Thu Feb 08, 2007 7:09 pm


.:Concept Illustrations:.


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Refined and colored picture coming soon~!

Possible concept (using tektek)

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PostPosted: Thu Feb 08, 2007 7:10 pm


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All together-

2 million pure
Fuzzy Penguin Slippers
Jul '04
Oct '04
Jun '04 x 2
April '04
Sept. '04
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Total (as of Oct '09 ) : around 16,980,000

Questing for: Either Semi-Custom or Custom, however, I'll focus on Semi-Custom since I probably wont have enough for a custom, evar.

Note: I'll probably be rounding worths and stuff [most to the nearest 10k or so] since the marketplace fluxes a LOT, and it would be annoying to calculate the worth if it'll change every so often.
PostPosted: Thu Feb 08, 2007 7:17 pm


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Flatsale Entry: Summer Event
F e l E s s e n c e: Independent Bioluminescence
S o u l: Maya, deity of illusions & dreams..

It was a bright summer’s day, full of heat, sweat and sun; with gnats that swarmed and thrived in heat- especially sweat.
Slap!
For the umpteenth time, Arin clouted Damien’s face, with the excuse of killing a gnat. Damien flew off his unicycle- again- and face-planted into the dirt… again. With a grunt and a weak push-up, Damien flopped back onto his butt and stared indignantly at the nearly androgynous creature that floated, smirking at him as if she had accomplished a great task. “You had a bug there,” she broke the silence with her teasing smile.
A short pause ensued in which a staring contest was held, then a streak of blonde- Damien leaped and tackled Arin. “I’ll get you for that! You have a bug here, here and here,” He growled playfully wrestling and smacking Arin. The flat-chested female finally wriggled her way out of the tussle, showering Damien with a chilling white fog. He laid flat on his back, staring up at the sky in exhaustion. The two caught their breath, sharing the same thought.
The day was lethargically humid and boring. There was only one thing to do.
“Let’s go on another adventure!” Arin’s voice reverberated though Damien’s head as her bright eyes flashed excitedly. Although she couldn’t completely control her powers of illusion, the two took the risk every now and then anyways; they were soon encased in a thick black fog as the raevan set them on another epic expedition.

The night air was suddenly dense with wet, white fog. Squinting, Damien could see a titanic ghostly black form in the harbor. Hands shot out of the mist and grabbed him, making him jump a good foot in the air, before realizing it was just Arin. “AHH! MON- oh! Arin!” he gasped and the raevan chuckled, before leading him closer to the water, toward the large black form.
Minutes later, Damien and Arin were creeping up the ramp to the ship’s java-colored deck. With a superfluous gesture and swish of his phantasmic cape, Damien leaped up onto the ships deck, brandishing his non-existent rapier. “Behold!! ALL YOUR SHIP ARE BELONG TO US!”
He was promptly met with silence, his war cry dying immediately in the thick air. The deck was eerie and devoid of life, save for the two adventurers. Peering overboard, Damien’s eyes met with dark glimmering liquid obsidian. Even the moon villainously glared, beaming down into the water, creating broken, sparkling reflections. Shivering, Damien pulled himself back to the deck. “W-we should try going inside,” the once-brave explorer stuttered and stepped towards the entrance to the ship’s hull, groping around for his companion’s arm, hand or whatever he could find. Finding nothing, he looked over at Arin, who still gazed at the mysterious waters. Grabbing her wrist, he dragged- or more like bumpily floated- her through the ominous doorway that led to the rest of the ship.
Inside the lights flickered, dangerously close to phasing out. The walls were adorned with skulls and prizes that had been pillaged from hundreds of different places. The thresholds were made of intricately carved ivory; the details looked as if they were yellowing, especially in the dim light.
Thump
The two heard something and froze up. The creepiness of the ghost ship pierced their bones. After a minute of silence, they moved on, going from room to room, picking up rapiers and shotguns to protect themselves, baubles that caught their interest, and keys. They wandered around until they reached a room which was locked. An old, weathered sign hung haphazardly from the door, reading: DO NOT ENTER.
They entered; how could they not? The mystery begged to be uncovered. They used their keys, one by one, throwing out the others until, click! The rusty lock fell open into their hands. The door immediately creaked open without any force, and a blast of light met their eyes. Shielding themselves from the sudden illumination, they walked in--
--Then dove back out. Ten or more booby-traps had been triggered. Down fell boards of spikes, bear traps snapped shut, and a bucket of moldy blood overturned and splashed to the floor. Last, axes that lined the entrance swung out to axe anyone that tried to pass. Peering in again, breathing heavily after their close encounter with death, they realized they had hit the jackpot. Gold and crystals covered the floor in piles; statues and weapons made of precious stone were littered everywhere. In the middle of all this was an obelisk with a concave top, on which rested a large, diamond sun. Oblivious to anything else, they proceeded into the room, evading the traps, set on getting their prize. It was only after they had taken the precious jewel that they finally heard it—
THUMP. THUMP… thumpthumpthump. The thing from before had found them. It let out a bloodcurdling scream behind them, all eight of it’s arms wielding different weapons.
“How dare you enter this ship!! Come… I will purge your sins- forever!!!“
With that, they screamed and ran. The weapons that they held were useless; they were left behind as the two hurdled out of the room, having to dive and narrowly miss being chopped into pieces by the still-active traps. The thumping and screeching continued close behind them up until they burst out onto the deck and dove into the freezing waters. Damien struggled his way out, releasing a chain reaction of lights that flitted through the water. Bioluminescence. Arin surfaced shortly after, the pheromones from her Fel Essence sending ripples of light throughout the water, until the light engulfed her.

The air cleared as well as the surroundings, and the two found themselves sprawled back out in their garden, where they first started. The air was hot, and the sun had yet to set.
But, the chill from their expedition of illusion came forth, as they realized the eight-armed creature that they had brought back.

Prompt-- Writing an adventure using 1 out of 2 sets of words:
Set Two Words
crystal, purge, pheromone, unicycle, java, villainous, yellow, expedition


More writing samples to be updated here!

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`ShivA

PostPosted: Thu Feb 08, 2007 7:19 pm


Reserved 14
PostPosted: Thu Feb 08, 2007 7:20 pm


.The Lab Credits.
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Taken directly from the lab:
"Idea inspired by Onodera Akira's Rokutousei Supika
Some wordings used were inspired by World of Warcraft.
Main concept are © to Kam Mew Yen aka Miaow/Kyoupiruchi.
Artworks are © Kam Mew Yen aka Miaow/Kyoupiruchi and Ray Kitsune
Thou is also not permitted to claim that this artwork was created by anyone other than Kam Mew Yen aka Miaow/Kyoupiruchi and Ray Kitsune."

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