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She Wanted to Live (poem)

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gothkid82

PostPosted: Tue Feb 06, 2007 10:28 am


This is a poem that I wrote years ago.

She Wanted to Live
She sat in a dark corner,
Playing back the hatred in her mind.
They were cruel and unforgiving.
Not one of them was kind.

She felt alone and empty,
Ashamed and used;
She felt it every day.
If only someone had told her,
If someone had just shown her the way.

She killed herself that night.
She killed herself because no one was there.
No one told her the truth.
She couldn't see the light.

This poem currently lives at poetry.com:
She Wanted to Live - Poetry.com
PostPosted: Tue Feb 06, 2007 3:03 pm


Very... dismal...

It's interesting, wish it was longer...

Also, not to be mean or anything but... Poetry.com sucks... frankly, they don't look at your poems but just stuff it in a big thick book and make you pay a lot of money to get it and when you tell others that it's in there, no one is going to look... Trust me, I've written a really crappy poem a long time ago and sent it in and it said that I was selected...

SquishyMuffins


gothkid82

PostPosted: Wed Feb 07, 2007 11:47 am


[Teruko-chan]
Very... dismal...

It's interesting, wish it was longer...

Also, not to be mean or anything but... Poetry.com sucks... frankly, they don't look at your poems but just stuff it in a big thick book and make you pay a lot of money to get it and when you tell others that it's in there, no one is going to look... Trust me, I've written a really crappy poem a long time ago and sent it in and it said that I was selected...


Yeah, I know. That is exactly why I haven't really submitted anything since this one.
PostPosted: Fri Feb 09, 2007 7:29 pm


Cute. in its way.

Neo-Silicate


o_Blue_Orchid_o

PostPosted: Wed Feb 28, 2007 10:45 am


Powerfull stuff..
Like it a lot
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