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Posted: Fri Feb 02, 2007 3:50 pm
Live Life
Why do people hate the living?
Everyone has a purpose, a reasoning.
We were put on this earth,
For something that we’re worth.
To feel life, experience emotions,
Look at one’s beauty, move like the ocean.
Coming together as one
Not throwing it away, or saying that we’re done
Fulfill it as it’s most,
Spread it from Coast to Coast.
Life is important,
Life is tough, but we’ll get through it no matter what!
You were given’ the gift of life
Don’t abuse it or only live in strife,
Open your eyes and explore
You haven’t seen all of it, there’s a lot more
Give life a chance
Don’t be dramatic, keep life at a balance…
If there isn’t any reason why we’re alive?
Why would we be here just to die?
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Posted: Sun Feb 04, 2007 2:12 pm
That's pretty good though you may want to proofread over it...one of your lines doesn't make sense. Other than that, good message and flow.
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cherrilie__x Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Mar 14, 2007 5:58 pm
metocloud That's pretty good though you may want to proofread over it...one of your lines doesn't make sense. Other than that, good message and flow. Yeah, same here. I like more depressing poems but hey, you're putitng out a good message And Amber, I am upset with you. You never told me your were all active in this guild WITHOUT me! gonk
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Posted: Wed Mar 14, 2007 7:40 pm
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cherrilie__x Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 7:41 pm
Oh, I HAD to ask eh? So you'd go off and have fun without telling me? Shame!
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Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 5:50 pm
Umm...yeah. I'm just introverted like that.
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cherrilie__x Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Mar 18, 2007 9:58 am
what did I tell you about using big words!?
Kore: to my knowledge introverted means something like withdrawn or reclusive
shuddap! gonk stop making me feel stupid!
Kore: 4laugh
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Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 2:39 pm
Kore's right...you should listen to him more.
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cherrilie__x Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 5:43 pm
Kore: Yeah, like the time I time I told you you should see Brokeback Mountain-
((sorry this is like an inside thing))
SHUDDAP! gonk
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Posted: Tue Mar 20, 2007 2:58 pm
maybe you shouldn't always listen to him...
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cherrilie__x Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Apr 26, 2007 7:29 am
Well, he IS pretty persuasive....
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Posted: Thu Apr 26, 2007 4:14 pm
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cherrilie__x Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed May 09, 2007 5:24 pm
....-kicks Kore- no more listening to YOU!
Kore: ow o.o
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Posted: Thu May 10, 2007 3:01 pm
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cherrilie__x Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu May 10, 2007 4:50 pm
^.^ Now all I have to do is be able to say no to Es >.>
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