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prettykitty83105

PostPosted: Fri Feb 02, 2007 3:50 pm


Live Life


Why do people hate the living?

Everyone has a purpose, a reasoning.

We were put on this earth,

For something that we’re worth.

To feel life, experience emotions,

Look at one’s beauty, move like the ocean.

Coming together as one

Not throwing it away, or saying that we’re done

Fulfill it as it’s most,

Spread it from Coast to Coast.

Life is important,

Life is tough, but we’ll get through it no matter what!

You were given’ the gift of life

Don’t abuse it or only live in strife,

Open your eyes and explore

You haven’t seen all of it, there’s a lot more

Give life a chance

Don’t be dramatic, keep life at a balance…

If there isn’t any reason why we’re alive?

Why would we be here just to die?
PostPosted: Sun Feb 04, 2007 2:12 pm


That's pretty good though you may want to proofread over it...one of your lines doesn't make sense. Other than that, good message and flow.

metocloud
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cherrilie__x
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 14, 2007 5:58 pm


metocloud
That's pretty good though you may want to proofread over it...one of your lines doesn't make sense. Other than that, good message and flow.


Yeah, same here. I like more depressing poems but hey, you're putitng out a good message

And Amber, I am upset with you. You never told me your were all active in this guild WITHOUT me! gonk
PostPosted: Wed Mar 14, 2007 7:40 pm


...you never asked.

metocloud
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cherrilie__x
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 7:41 pm


Oh, I HAD to ask eh? So you'd go off and have fun without telling me? Shame!
PostPosted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 5:50 pm


Umm...yeah. I'm just introverted like that.

metocloud
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cherrilie__x
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PostPosted: Sun Mar 18, 2007 9:58 am


what did I tell you about using big words!?

Kore: to my knowledge introverted means something like withdrawn or reclusive

shuddap! gonk stop making me feel stupid!

Kore: 4laugh
PostPosted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 2:39 pm


Kore's right...you should listen to him more.

metocloud
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cherrilie__x
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 5:43 pm


Kore: Yeah, like the time I time I told you you should see Brokeback Mountain-

((sorry this is like an inside thing))

SHUDDAP! gonk
PostPosted: Tue Mar 20, 2007 2:58 pm


maybe you shouldn't always listen to him...

metocloud
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cherrilie__x
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 26, 2007 7:29 am


Well, he IS pretty persuasive....
PostPosted: Thu Apr 26, 2007 4:14 pm


He's YOUR character.

metocloud
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cherrilie__x
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PostPosted: Wed May 09, 2007 5:24 pm


....-kicks Kore- no more listening to YOU!

Kore: ow o.o
PostPosted: Thu May 10, 2007 3:01 pm


GO YOU!!!!

metocloud
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cherrilie__x
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PostPosted: Thu May 10, 2007 4:50 pm


^.^ Now all I have to do is be able to say no to Es >.>
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