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Posted: Mon Jan 29, 2007 1:37 pm

Effective as of January 29, 2007 1521pm

If you plan on submitting Mature/ Trangressive Poems, Fics, Lyrics, etc. they must be submitted within THIS AND ONLY THIS thread. If I or any of the fellow crew see incorrectly posted work; than pending the severity of the error will the post be deleted by the crew; OR the offender will be notified and asked to delete his or her post.

***A poem/fic/song that is trangressive would incorporate any number of these things****
- Extreme Violence (example: Bodily Mutilation with a chainsaw rendering the victim to a blood stump)

- Gore (example: Consumption of Post Mortal Flesh, Minutes Pass and every organ exposed, Inch by inch of entrails devoured, Blood copiously ejecting free…)

- Profanity (Sh*t, F*ck, you know...those words.)

- Graphic Sexual contentNOTHING XXX rated...keep it SOFTCORE (example: We had exilerating love in the nude) (NOT: My finger wound up in her c**t, and made her c** all over me)

Me and the crew reserve the right to remove poems that belong on this thread and were found elsewhere. If you have questions regarding if a poem belongs in this thread, post your question in the "Submiting Help" Thread.

(sue me i know i have bad grammar)

Posted: Mon Jan 29, 2007 1:50 pm

The only thing I'm worried about is the sexually graphic part... XD I'm checking with the captain's guild about it, because I know the admins can come and go within these guilds as they please and if they see anything they don't like that goes against the TOS, they won't hesitate to delte the guild. gonk
But I don't see any harm in the language and blood and gore... I'm just concerned about the sexual parts. I'll return when I've got some responses to my topic over in that other guild.
And thanks for taking immediate action as a crew member, HardKore. ^^; I need all the help I can get!!

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Posted: Mon Jan 29, 2007 1:53 pm

Lady Seinu

The only thing I'm worried about is the sexually graphic part... XD I'm checking with the captain's guild about it, because I know the admins can come and go within these guilds as they please and if they see anything they don't like that goes against the TOS, they won't hesitate to delte the guild. gonk
But I don't see any harm in the language and blood and gore... I'm just concerned about the sexual parts. I'll return when I've got some responses to my topic over in that other guild.
And thanks for taking immediate action as a crew member, HardKore. ^^; I need all the help I can get!!

I modified it, let me know if it needs improvement

Posted: Mon Jan 29, 2007 1:54 pm

For all of you who don't know what a REAL transgressive song looks like...here you go. This is one of my homeade ones.

Legions of Dead
by: hardkoreUSMC

I am the one that brings true gore!
Supplementing, the onslaught war!
Commands have been ordered
They are quartered
I leave a mountain of dead once more!

The Armies of Death Now March On
Masticating, all those who are gone
The time for carnage has come
To Murder the scum
Execute the Filthy Spawn

The Battlefields are now soaked red
Gigantic piles…of rotting dead
Feasting Upon the Skin
They’re eating again…
Necrodevourers have now been fed

They’ve came to kill you all
They’ve came to kill you all
They’ve came to kill you all

Savage Beatings now have been prolonged
Innocence is raped, the right is now wronged
The flogging of the head
Until you are dead
Six Feet Under is where you’ve always belonged!

(solo)
They’ve came to kill you all
They’ve came to kill you all
They’ve came to kill you all…
(solo)

Veins are slashed from the wrist
Muscle grinded to red paste
Consumption of Post Mortal Flesh…
Minutes Pass and every organ exposed
Inch by inch of entrails devoured
Blood copiously ejecting free…
Sinew glistens in the moonlight
Vile gases burst forth from the guts
Erupting tissues splattering high

Copyright: hardkoreUSMC '05

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Posted: Mon Jan 29, 2007 1:57 pm

That works perfectly, thank you! I'm sure so long as we don't go over the top with the mature content, we'll be okay.

Posted: Thu Feb 01, 2007 7:41 am

Frenzied Decimation
by: hardkoreUSMC

Killing them all is not enough
Their souls have survived
Their cause a broken fragment
That can’t be revived
Chase them into the firestorm
In Hell they shall be slain
Annihilation Will Be Swift
Supreme our cause will reign

Bastards they are all; damn them to hell
Gaze in their eyes as they die
Watching and Laughing as they scream
Bodies rotting where they lie
Cut off their heads; curse them forever
No mercy for their wretched kind
Stabbing and Hacking with your dagger
No life here you will find

Frenzied Decimation!

Massacre all of their spirits
Their souls have not survived
Their cause a mental figment
That cannot be revived
On Earth We Now Return
In Hell they have been slain
Mortification Will Be Swift
Supreme Our Cause Will Reign

Bastards they are all; defile the corpses
Quarter them head to toe
Watching and celebrating with the onslaught
Dissection will be slow
Rip off the faces; curse them eternally
No remorse for the heathen race
Mutilating without limits
Torture without taste

Kill them all!
(Solo: Kore)

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Posted: Fri Feb 02, 2007 4:03 pm

Dang those are all really good. Have you ever thought about selling your lyrics? XD You could make a pretty damn good profit from that. I tried my hand once with lyric writing but... I dunno... It's different from poetry. And I just can't seem to do it. I love your style of writing though!

Posted: Sat Feb 03, 2007 10:47 am

Lady Seinu

Dang those are all really good. Have you ever thought about selling your lyrics? XD You could make a pretty damn good profit from that. I tried my hand once with lyric writing but... I dunno... It's different from poetry. And I just can't seem to do it. I love your style of writing though!

Thanks biggrin
Idk, at one point I was, but I never jumped at it. (i've been writing for about a year or two so it took me awhile before i developed my style and flavor. (so don't beat urself up wink )

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Posted: Sat Feb 03, 2007 12:06 pm

Demon Killer
By: hardkoreUSMC

Creature Suffer
I watch you die
As you pay for your sins!

Feel your skin
Burning on the stake
Purging the demons within!

The ministry hath declared
Your soul a heathen one
Execution is fair!

From God you ran
Your trespasses great
You were the scourge of man

You always knew
He was watching
And yet your distance grew

Knights Templar
Hunted you down
They traveled long and far

(Chorus)
Feel the pain of redeeming grace
Angelic flames kiss your face
Your soul is now cleansed from evil
Your destinies will not upheavel

Serpent in scales
Satan is detected
His plans now will fail

Posted: Sat Feb 03, 2007 9:38 pm

I love your style. I have tryed writting but then I give up because I get to a certain point and can't get no further, lol. The one time i even get close to getting a good song is wheni am singing in the bathroom but buy the time I get out I forget it all. I think I will get bath cryons and write it as i go, lol. But anyways Good job

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Posted: Sun Feb 04, 2007 9:36 am

For Extreme gore....

Mortician Lyrics

Six Feet Under lyrics

For a mix of war/satan/gore/violence

Slayer Lyrics

For more satanic stuff...

Deicide Lyrics

For VERY Offensive (YET HILARIOUS) stuff...

a**l Cunts Lyrics

STEP 2
1. Practice
2. Harness your inner feelings (ie. when you get mad/sad etc) b/c the BEST poetry/lyrics happen when you want to express your feelings
3. Creativity, read some of these and don't be afraid to "Cross the line" as far as boundaries. Like I wrote some of the most immoral, despicable, bad stuff, but that is how i got good.

Posted: Wed Feb 07, 2007 10:00 pm

Blood-Sodden Ballad
by: hardkoreUSMC

Damned and cursed at birth they die
Executed wretched miserable scum for all eternity

Blasphemed the world upon conception they did
Until savage blood sodden labor butchery was there infraction reticified

Maniacal fetal homicide made sin graphically reversed
Medieval weaponry employed for grotesque slaughter quick

Womb structure altered into unholy rancid gore
True murder terror found its form!

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Posted: Fri Feb 16, 2007 11:09 pm

You know all of these poems are really quite nice. I can see that you made this Thread especially for yourself haha. Which isn't a bad thing, you adapt the environment as you see fit. I like that.

Posted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 3:04 pm

One Poet

You know all of these poems are really quite nice. I can see that you made this Thread especially for yourself haha. Which isn't a bad thing, you adapt the environment as you see fit. I like that.

Well not just soley for my use tho, if you write stuff like this you can post it here.

Thanks tho

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