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 Posted: Fri Jan 26, 2007 6:38 am
far ends
pain for me
pain for you
now we see
now we through
the lies i sought
the lies you told
the ones i bought
the ones you sold
its fairly clear
theres no hope
no, not here
far away
i'll sail away
now apart
finaly room
a new start
freedom for us
awaiting me
this broken heart
Chained
jealusy rules me
honesty denies me
speak softly
oh so soft
tell me of loving
of loving lies
hurt me. break me
turn away from me
show me a heart
shatter it in blood
show it broken cruely apart
tell me why ,help me
i thought i understood
but now i see the pain
and loss of time
behind the crime
death is choice
your chains hold me
love is what binds me
you denie me
jealusy rules me
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Posted: Tue Feb 20, 2007 12:13 pm
My unbeating Heart
There are days when I want to cry,
And others to be eternally numb.
Days I wish would end with blood and tears,
And times when I want to sleep forever.
There are moments when my chest aches,
And times when I feel no pain.
Months seem to pass right by me;
And I can not say or do a thing.
Hours seem an eternity to me.
Minutes stretch for days.
My tears no longer flow now.
Blood runs not through these veins.
For only mere seconds do I ever feel alive.
Then no pain is felt as my soul dies.
A shell; a lowly unwanted shell.
That is all I shalt remain.
My heart is black, my blood cold.
I have lost all train of thought.
My soul is dieing, slowly yet surely.
One day I shall be gone.
Blood has run free from my many wounds.
It stains my skin and heart.
My eyes are growing darker.
My soul has fallen apart.
The darkness is my sanctuary.
The light no longer lives.
I only feel hell’s flames.
Now, let me tell you this:
I was once alive,
Happy with who I was.
I had a dream, I had a life.
But then it was all gone.
Many ask why I’m corrupt.
I tell them just to think.
They do not understand.
I just sigh and sulk away.
But, for your time and patience,
For you have heard my unbeating heart;
I shall give you the answer.
Then we shall forever part.
I was made corrupt by those who never think.
They just play with matches and slowly burn.
People have made me this way, unfeeling and so low.
So watch your heart and your back,
Or it will be your turn!
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Posted: Thu Feb 22, 2007 3:17 pm
Fallen Tears
Through the shadows
Through the doubt
I'm falling in and out
I feel your love
I strangles me
And makes me fall onto my knees
I feel alone like nothings good
Like you and me really should . . .
Our love was nice
It had it's price
I'm falling now
It feels like ice
Don't try to catch me don't try to save
You know your the reason I'm in this grave
I fell on in, you left me here
So that I can cry my fallen tears
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Posted: Tue Feb 27, 2007 4:13 am
Why is my heart
too eager to care
knocked back so often
it doesn't seem fair
My first lusted feelings
were for a boy on holiday
he already had a girlfriend
and lived too far away
he smoked and drank at 14 years
i should have known from then
that i was one of those people
who went for the wrong men
my next few attempts at love
were crushes on my friends
i think i forced those feelings
though i didn't see it then
and now i should be happy
for my love, he loves me too
but i feel like its too easy now.
Whats a girl to do?
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ive just re-read this and your poems, and i realise it sounds kinda like i'm making fun of you. Im not, im really not, i just can't write sad poems unless something really bad happens, which makes people feel like i don't understand or appreciate them. I do. Sorry.
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Posted: Wed Feb 28, 2007 6:08 pm
B R E A T H E
Suffocating
Falling Fast
My love WAS there
But it didnt last
You dropped me down
Into the choking hole
It took my life,
My breath, my soul
Why do i hate you?
I loved you so
You took it for granted
You let it all go
I hate you! I hate you!
Can you hear my cry?
YOu hold me, then drop me,
As i painfully die
Dont walk away
Dont leave me here
As i fade into the dark,
my last, dying tear
S A D N I G H T
"I love you." she said as she looked into his eyes
They sparkled like stars, he held her tight
She kissed his cheek and walked backwards, holding his hand
" I love you too" he smiled and kissed her back
Nothing could tear them apart, not one soul
That is, until that night, when he let it all go
HE got drunk at a party, and picked her up for a date
He sped faster and faster, the wheels spun out, he crashed by a tree, leaving his girlfriend meeting her fate
Her blood was on his face, he touched his cheek
He survived, but I died
Did he really love me?
R E M E M B E R ?
I think about you as i lie in bed
As random thoughts go through my head
Of moments today, you made me smile
But also remember, when we ran the mile?
Just your shining face, it made me laugh
Oh boy did i laugh! Sweet love did i laugh!
You make me happy, i have no doubt
And love, its you, i cant live without
You hold me up, while i am down
You make me smile, when before was a frown
You give me life, you give me soul!
You breathed me in, dont let me go.
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ok, look, the last one, you probably wont get it. at school, we have to run a mile every week for PE...so yeah..thats what the mile is. also, it may not SEEM like a sad poem, but in reality, it is.... and no, im not thinking past tense...in fact, i made it today, at school. anyway, yeah. id like feed back if you could please, anyone..
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Posted: Sun Mar 11, 2007 9:55 pm
Tears
I can’t breathe… I’m drowning. How can life sustain itself on this sea of tears? I can’t see anything… I don’t know where to go. Help me through the pain, and let me breathe again. A song, a poem, a picture, though seemingly helpful, can’t explain what I feel. I can’t speak when there is nowhere for words to go. The tears, I choke on them, I embrace them. Tears feed my soul. Tears are to me as alcohol is to an old veteran who lost the love of his life while at war for her. The tears, they are what keep me going. I am torn, and misled. Tears, salty, bitter tears.
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Posted: Wed Mar 14, 2007 9:54 am
For You, Dearest
These, the lasst words of a desperate man
This, my light, my love, my life, my darling
my last anguished testiment to you
crue selfish self rightous stupid b***h
stellar goddess
my reason for living
so long I forced myself to exist
through hellish unimaginable pain
for you, dearest
because i made you happy
because I kept you sane
because sometimes you helped to ease the pain
my sweet love eternal
love eternal-what a joke!
you don't want me anymore
I've no reason, right, or will to exist
there can only be torment
I'm sorry I tormented you
But I won't kill myself
you'd weep for me, you silly fool
I still endeavor to never make you cry
though I knoe I've failed miserably
maybe i should do it
but I don't want you to think I'm selfish
yet without a will to live
I'll soon cease to exist anyway
I"m sorry my one and only
please forgive and forget me
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Posted: Wed Mar 14, 2007 8:23 pm
Goodbye
(it isnt a full poem but hey...kinda dark atfirst)
Apart of me wants him to see what this is doing to me, but the other part wants him to be happy. How can you stop loving someone? Even after everything you've done for them? I want to tell him how much I love him, one last time, but would he listen? I want to die, I can't take the pain of losing him, memories, everything haunts me. I thought we were meant to be...why? Why did he have to go? Why doesnt he love me anymore? Sweet cruel fate, what plan do you have in store for me as I lie here? Will those pills I took kill me? Will they only ease the pain? Will I continue on in a dark somber?
"Stop my heart
Cease my breathing,
Dig a hole six ft deep,
And start your grieving,
say goodbye, say it now,
we can't turn back, no way, no how"
I want him back, I want to gaze upon him, not with longing, but with pride and happiness, like I once did. I want the warmth of his lips on mine, to assure me that everything is alright. I want his arms around me as I embrace him, his sweet voice in my ear. I want those exotic eyes looking at me, like they did, once upon a time. What did I do to deserve this ache in my breast? This heart-wrentching agony that haunts my very being relentlessly? It hurts as I watch him walk away. His smile caused by another girl, who is enjoying everything I once did. I do not hate her, nor do I despise her, I am the very sin of envy when I look upon them. I'll shed my tears alone, away form everyone. I wont allow them to see what pain I harbor behind these eyes. Sweet maiden of night, cloak this land with darkness, the moon being my torch to light the way. I shall tempt death, gamble my very life, just to see if I am still alive.
"Stop my heart
Cease my breathing,
Dig a hole six ft deep,
And start your grieving,
say goodbye, say it now,
we can't turn back, no way, no how"
I want them to be happy, I want them to love each other without guilt. It hurts everyday, everytime I see them, but they deserve a chance at love. Time may heal deep wounds, and turn them into faded scars, and the memories, ghosts of the past may haunt me, but I will never take away the time I had with him. I still love him, oh how light I feel when I am around him, but I love the feling, I love, so much to be around him. Maybe one day, it wont hurt to thing about him and the time we spent together. May he be happy and live a good life...
"Stop my heart
Cease my breathing,
Dig a hole six ft deep,
And start your grieving,
say goodbye, say it now,
we can't turn back, no way, no how"
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Posted: Thu Mar 15, 2007 11:01 am
wow guys some beautiful writing ... heart
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Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 5:18 am
I looked at the night sky.
It reminded me of a person,
who was shining like them, glowing,
like them, bright like them, happy like them,
sparkling like them, beautiful like them,
cool like them, shimmering like them, calm,
like them, pretty like them, wonderful, so as
amazing, fantastic, terrific , active and mostly
attractive..........
I thought it was like you.
But I knew there was a big difference,
between you and the stars.
I see millions of them in the sky.....
While you, I can see you as my only one,
in my whole loving heart.
Suddenly time has passed and you tricked me,
I looked at the night stars, and I thought it would
make you come back to my arms, but I saw
the stars' light was gone, the sky was dark,
so as you were gone in my heart,
and my heart, so so dark........ heart
You asked me if I were to choose
two important things, that only one
I can pick. You asked me if I were to pick between
you and life. I picked the most valuable, precious thing to me.
I chose life, and you suddenly walked out on me.
And when you walked out on me, you never knew
that you were actually my whole life.............
heart
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Posted: Tue Mar 20, 2007 1:07 pm
Feeling Better Now
"I love you," you say
"I love you," you say
I can't say it back
I wont say it back.
"I'll never hurt you," you say
"I couldn't hurt you," you say
I want to say I love,
I feel a little too late.
"Are you happy?" You ask
"No," I answer
You didn't hear me,
You didn't listen.
"Having fun?" You ask
"No," I answer
You just nodded you head
You didn't care.
"Why are you doing this?" You ask
"I never loved you," I reply
I never did and I'm sure
You never did either.
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Posted: Tue Mar 20, 2007 8:50 pm
sure is sad also.... oh my gush. i cant take it i love all of ur poems here.... heart
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Posted: Thu Mar 22, 2007 6:10 am
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Posted: Thu Mar 22, 2007 7:45 am
>< ill add more if i could. ill jus have to think.... blaugh
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Posted: Fri Mar 30, 2007 7:47 pm
wow so much talent in these forums.
remember poetry doesn't always have to rhyme.
and one of my own:
"Liability"
Apology accepted
though you lied and broke my heart
it's all my soul can do
to forgive you.
The solidarity
I thought we shared
was deception masqueraded as love.
Your formidable words
were Siren ballads
filled with deceit
and as I stood waiting
your songstress kept writing
and in so doing kept me at your heel.
The dancing grew old
and you saw it, too,
as your steps stumbled
and hate no longer guided you
You confessed all your sins and begged for redemption
and I forgive you
and I still love you
but I wonder
am I still a liability?
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