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I'm writing something right now that I hope to get published officially when it's done. I put the first chapter on fictionpress.com for now, until then though. I've showed this to three people [three of my best friends, who are good critics] and they all said its really good.
Thought I'd get some other people's opinions.
It's a horror story, by the way.
My style is somewhat similar to Stephen King.
http://www.fictionpress.com/~inadreamscape
Scroll down to list of stories and click the only one thats there.
I'd love reviews on it on fictionpress, but tell me what you think on here anyway if you don't feel like reveiwing.
Thanks, peeps.
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Thought I'd get some other people's opinions.
It's a horror story, by the way.
My style is somewhat similar to Stephen King.
http://www.fictionpress.com/~inadreamscape
Scroll down to list of stories and click the only one thats there.
I'd love reviews on it on fictionpress, but tell me what you think on here anyway if you don't feel like reveiwing.
Thanks, peeps.
<333
