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 Posted: Thu Jan 18, 2007 1:45 pm
The boobies are off D< The only thing I don't like about using only pen is you can't erase really bad mistakes :/
I need to scan the 573465234786 doodled from school~
I might do that tonight
I dunnnooo
Comments/crits pleaseee?
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Posted: Thu Jan 18, 2007 5:02 pm
Brilliant! I could never do stuff like this (bad at drawing people) but I do have a few comments.
Excellent anatomical correctness and line work. One thing I noticed in the top pic: The shading under boobies and on tummy seems to indicate bright sun, almost overhead. If so, then the face and neck would also be heavily shaded under her hair and because of the forwards tilt of her head. It's a minor issue though, and forgivable if the face is to be emphasised. Excellent work though!
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Posted: Fri Jan 19, 2007 2:41 pm
Actually, her face is shaded a lot in the real picture
I just have the worst scanner everr ;_____;
& thankyew for all the nice things you said~ <33
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Posted: Tue Jan 23, 2007 1:01 pm
I really love the first pic. The girl looks mysterious, yet still very happy and free-spirited. heart
The second pic is nice too, my only critique is that the hands seem a bit off for some reason...
I like your style. It's really cool! ^_^
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Posted: Sat Feb 24, 2007 8:38 pm
I think those are really good. Nice style.
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Posted: Fri Jun 01, 2007 5:52 pm
Very exquisite! I love the first drawing. It's so surreal. Shes very...dark, yet has a exemplary happiness to her^^
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