A Slice of Life (updated Tuesday, October 01, 2007 8:00 pm)

[Xiphy]

*Edited

The poems are going to get less personal now...  

[Warrior Phantom]

that's pretty good mrgreen  

[Little Red Hobo]

Aww, I am speechless whee  

[Xiphy]

Uea, the only sad thing is, she's not in love with me! Hahah, yea, I'm a loser...but it's ok!^^

*edit*

This was the first poem I had in the first post..


When I Think About You

I think about,

Curiousity, how it can kill a cat
Happiness, how your smile can bring that
Electricity, how your love runs like how electricity runs through an unprotected wire
Love, how you've given it away and still have more than enough
Space, how big the space between us is
Errors, how you can lack that
Yesterday, how it only seemed like it was yesterday  

[Red_World04]

xDD Arent we all?  

[Xiphy]

Totally.  

[Little Red Hobo]

Best way to make one feel better, lol  

[Xiphy]

You know it cool  

[Nickolaous Tarasov]

That was sweet Verm ^_^  

[Xiphy]

Sweet huh? XP  

[Infinity-Nevermore]

Totally sweet. whee

 

[Xiphy]

If You Were Here...

Would I just stand here
with that look on my face
Or would I forget my fear
and give you warm embrace
Will I take your hand
place it in mine
go walking in the sand
and feel everything is just so fine
Might I be speachless
or say something new
Would it be careless
to say "I Love You"

It doesn't have a good flow to it, I wanted to have some sort of rhyming, so I was limited in my words.  

[Red_World04]

whee Love it, but you dont have to use rhyming to it. It'd be more heart felt if you wrote the words that best went with it

PS- you spelled speechless wrong xDD  

[Xiphy]

Why don't you be quiet you! I did write this just last night, I was tired you know...  

[Red_World04]