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Posted: Thu Jan 04, 2007 1:08 pm

So, I wanted to draw my avi suddenly, what with the new look and all.
And this is what came out
I am SOSO happy with it.
I used a reference for the pose, found it in Virtual Figure Drawing Studio, it's a wonderful thing.
Anywhoo, C&C?

And yes, on HER right breast, you can see a bit of her n****e, which is why I put the maturity thing up there.

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((I copied this from the PP thread I made, so yeah. Lazy yay!))

Posted: Sun Jan 07, 2007 7:13 pm

This is lovely, Unseen! Her face looks so peaceful. <3
Critique-bits, her body is a little large for her head, that arm that's hanging downwards in particular. It seems like her hand would be reaching her near her knee, if she was standing upright. The creases where her arms meet her body extend little too far, as well, but it's not really big stuff.
You did a really nice job on this. Her hair looks wonderful, her pose looks wonderful, her over-all body language looks wonderful. Very sweet. cool

Stalking you. D=

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Posted: Sun Jan 07, 2007 8:50 pm

Stalking you. D=

This is lovely, Unseen! Her face looks so peaceful. <3
Critique-bits, her body is a little large for her head, that arm that's hanging downwards in particular. It seems like her hand would be reaching her near her knee, if she was standing upright. The creases where her arms meet her body extend little too far, as well, but it's not really big stuff.
You did a really nice job on this. Her hair looks wonderful, her pose looks wonderful, her over-all body language looks wonderful. Very sweet. cool

Thanks so much! heart
I think you're right on the arm. I didn't measure the arms exactly this time 'round, just kind of guestimated, so that could prove to be the problem. sweatdrop
Thanks again! blaugh

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