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 Posted: Tue Jan 02, 2007 7:06 pm
Questor Information Username: KillerGryDragon Mule SN's: Mike Dragonmire IoDM Newbie? (Y/N): Yes Serum: 54 Raptor CODE for your quest banner(s): Don't have one yet
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Posted: Tue Jan 02, 2007 8:49 pm
Last: Dragonmire First: Mike MI: D
Sex: Male Hight: 5' 11" Weight: 150Lb
Eyes: Sky Blue Hair: Blond Build: Athletic
Occupation: Unknown
Background: After the age of 18, Mike drifted from one study to the next, from one school to the next and from one job to the next. Never staying still and never working on one thing. He has a vase studies in different fields. Ranging from Bio Science to Computer Science and much more. He is smart enough to hold onto one field and stay in it but he moves on after getting a BA in it. Each job he goes to pays for the school he goes to and the studies he does.
Appearance: Hair is shoulder length. A small scar on his left eye from an unknown accident(He doesn't like to talk about how he got it). Hight and weight with in heath standards. A small muscle build on his arms and legs witch gives him an appearance of an out door track athlete.
Arrival: Plane crashes after a major malfunction of the engine.
Attitude: A bit shy but can be aggressive. Handle with care to stay on his good side. Once on his good side He opens up a bit and will be friendly with you.
Inventory:
Books: Erec Rex, Chromosome 6, Mutation, The Dragon Knight,
Monster Blood Tattoo.
Cloths: Black t-shirt with a raptor picture on it, 3 pairs of blue denim jeans, 2 red swim shorts, White T-shirt with a tiger on it, three pairs of socks, two white sneekers and a blue T-shirt shirt with an anthro gecko on it.
Bottle of Sun Screen
Brown leather Wallet: Drivers license, Pilots license, CPR Cert card, 3
Credit cards, $120.57, Pictures of him and unknown people,
Blood Donner card(Blood type AB-), Social Security Card,
A business card for a night club with a phone number written on
the back in red ink, card and an unknown blank
card(looks like water damaged it).
3 unopened boxes
A pair of black sunglasses with a wide nose ridge(nose ridge to big to fit
him. Suspect it to be a gage pair.)
A set of keys
Lighter
Info: Some items will be confiscated some will be returned. The confiscated will be the wallet and everything in it, the three unopened boxes, bottle of sun screen and the set of keys. The lighter has no fuel so we suspect it to be for show.
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Posted: Sat Jan 06, 2007 3:38 pm
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Posted: Sun Jan 07, 2007 7:24 pm
*not sure if you wanted to save the next post or not, if so feel free to delete*
All right, welcome to IODM Quester Central! I've just been looking over your thread, and I have a few suggestions to help make it better.
First of all, the way Mike gets to the island is very similar to the plot of "Cast Away." I'm sure you can come up with a more creative way to get him there.
Second of all, the fact that his favorite animal is the same serum is something that Moreau would NOT want to do. If anything, the animal is arbitrary and Moreau would intentionally NOT pick an animal the subject likes. It can be his favorite animal, but it has to be covert.
Other than that, I think you have a good base that you can work off of. Happy questing!
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Posted: Mon Jan 08, 2007 10:20 pm
I never stated that he had a favorite animal. I guess I can rework his job and the way he gets to the island.
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Posted: Mon Jan 08, 2007 11:54 pm
Well, it wasn't so much that you stated it, as I inferred it by reading. The first thing you mention in his posessions is the black tee-shirt with a raptor on it, and he has a lot of Dragon/Reptile related stuff. Sorry if the observation I made was hasty...
Good luck with your quest and rewrite, I think we need some more dinos on the island!
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Posted: Tue Jan 09, 2007 12:30 am
I did the rewrite already and the t-shits are just something that popped into my head. I have a bit of a back story on the raptor shirt. One of his last jobs was working for a museum. He needed some new cloths so he got some at the gift shop. Its also where he got the wide sun glasses. One of the people he worked with put those glasses on a display. He took them off so the "warden" wouldn't get mad at them.
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Posted: Fri Jan 26, 2007 8:57 am
Man, I would never shop for daily clothes at any gift shop, but that's because I'm cheap. XD;
Watch the raptor as a serum, since there has been a lot of new research on the therapod lineage to date and Jurassic Park is NOT correct. Regardless, research research research. It's a tough animal (I'm guessing you'll choose a specific raptor species...), but I think it can be done well if the person puts the work into it.
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Posted: Sat Jan 27, 2007 9:16 pm
I like the Jurassic Parks version of the raptor.
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Posted: Sat Jan 27, 2007 9:44 pm
The Jurassic Park version is very cool, but a raptor most likely actually looked more like this:
http://www.dinoruss.com/jim-robins-art/Fuzzy-raptor.gif
I'd still be careful with the serum - you may get the JP raptor but that Moreau can be tricky! wink
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Posted: Tue Jan 30, 2007 12:47 pm
I'd rethink how your character arrives on the island. If it is by plane crash as you put there, its less likely he'd survive in a commercal aircraft, another character on the Island (Tommy Christian) got to the island because he was able to eject from his military aircraft before hitting the water.
Not to say there isn't anything wrong with him getting that way (the plane crash) but you might want to consider that he might not be able to keep or recover any of the items in your inventory you plan on Mike bringing with him.
and definately try and narrow down which species of 'raptor' you would want, there are quite a few different species to choose from
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Posted: Fri Feb 02, 2007 10:23 pm
Hes not flying a commercial airecraft. its one of those small personnel Aircraft. and the raptor i want is the JP style raptor.
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Posted: Sat Feb 03, 2007 11:23 am
If you want the JP style raptor, it's unlikely that you're going to get it. The labs don't really alter the DNA, they just inject it. So you'll probably get stuck with the feathers and stuffs.
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Posted: Sat Feb 03, 2007 8:56 pm
Yeah... Unless there was something that would mess up the serum.
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Posted: Sun Feb 04, 2007 10:53 pm
Ah. Well i am hoping I get the JP style anyways.
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