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 Posted: Sun Dec 17, 2006 6:21 am
I'm not very good at poetry, but i do like to write it.
dont hate it to much ^^
Alone
Its cold here, inside my head
All my dreams are lost or dead
Broken hearted, so depressed
This is my story, you know the rest
I'm all alone in this world of hate
Misery, despair, seems my fate
Lokking for a friendly face
My broken heart begins to race
The darkness is all around me now
I need to get out, please show me how
Within the blackness, a hint of light
Giving purpouse, a reason to fight
It disapears, no more hope
No touch with reality, no way to cope
Save me from this eternity
Save what little is left of me
Don't pretend, it only hurts more
I beg you to Open, or close the door
I dont want to be alone with the memories of you
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Posted: Mon Jan 08, 2007 4:40 pm
Hmm, I like it. I hope you don't feel too pressured to rhyme, because it isn't necissarily a part of poetry to do so. You pull it off alright, though, and congratulations.
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