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 Posted: Thu Dec 07, 2006 11:12 am
mmm, I feel the need to explain this poem before i post it up. This is the poem i wrote when me and my (now ex)boyfriend got into a fight a broke up. (For some odd reason he thought it'd be really cool to tell me that he was hollow, so thus the reason for this poem ^^) I dont think its one of my absolute BEST poems, but i've decided to post it anyway. =]
Enjoy.
THE HOLLOW MAN
Hollow man
with your heart of ice
How does it feel to be alone?
Hollow man
with your non existant soul
Have you realized what you've done?
Hollow man
With your emotionless smile
Did you see the look in her eyes
when you told her those lies?
Hollow man
With your immature opinions
Was there a time where you could be open
Hollow man
With all your insecurities
one day you'll see what your emptyness has done to me.
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Posted: Wed Dec 13, 2006 5:00 pm
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Posted: Tue Dec 19, 2006 4:31 pm
Nice poem. I think it's great.
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Posted: Sun Dec 24, 2006 10:53 pm
When I think about it... that's kinda depressing.
But well-crafted 3nodding
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-Resurrected Writer- Crew
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Posted: Wed Apr 04, 2007 5:14 pm
Dead Ed When I think about it... that's kinda depressing. But well-crafted 3nodding
yea, sorta, it was ment to be a scornful "I'm better than you i hope you die" kinda outlook on the hollow man. xP
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Posted: Fri Apr 06, 2007 8:16 am
Dead Ed When I think about it... that's kinda depressing. But well-crafted 3nodding Of course it's depressing. The hollow man himself is depressing. I still like it though.
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Posted: Sat Apr 14, 2007 2:33 pm
thats pretty good smile
i wish i were the hollow man sometimes....
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