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 Posted: Tue Nov 28, 2006 9:59 pm
Forever going,
Hardly sleeping,
Take a break to catch a breath,
Slow it down,
Day by day,
Soon I'll know,
That I fell away.
Hear my plea,
Hear my cry,
Everything is passing by,
Here I stand all alone,
Behind a pane that will not bend.
Time is stress,
Exhaustion is restless nights,
Forward motion is mega deep.
To the unknown is what I fear,
Going back to what I know,
Take a break to catch that breath,
Oh how I fell away.
The old ways,
Something I knew with a familiar face,
Over came it once, howcome not again?
That bandage tells a secret,
Of how I fell away.
Now it's time to face it up,
Heading up that steep,
Forward motion is mega deep.
But no breath shall I take,
Nor break shall I wish,
Fore that is how I fell away.
Now sure if I like the ending >.>
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Posted: Wed Nov 29, 2006 1:37 pm
I like the ending. It's fitting for the poem.
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cherrilie__x Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Mar 18, 2007 11:33 am
metocloud I like the ending. It's fitting for the poem. True, true
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Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 2:07 pm
you dredged up one old post with this one.
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cherrilie__x Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 6:14 pm
yep. Im just cool like that
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Posted: Tue Mar 20, 2007 4:21 pm
or were really really bored and that was the only option.
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cherrilie__x Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2007 5:55 pm
Why would you say that unless you didnt think I was cool!?
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Posted: Thu Mar 22, 2007 1:53 pm
You can be bored and cool at the same time, you know.
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cherrilie__x Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Mar 23, 2007 2:27 pm
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 6:44 pm
*being cold and hearless* sure.
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cherrilie__x Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2007 5:45 pm
You're just like Jeremy!!!
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Posted: Fri Mar 30, 2007 7:00 am
It was meant to make you laugh....>.>
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cherrilie__x Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Mar 31, 2007 8:24 pm
LOL
xDDDD meh bad
-starts laughing at herself-
well now you got what you wanted xDDD
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Posted: Mon Apr 02, 2007 2:40 pm
*shakes head* kids these days.
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cherrilie__x Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Apr 26, 2007 7:09 am
-staggers backwards all Tamaki/Kore like- You call me a child!? Now I shall reside in the corner of the thread -runs to corner of the thread to sulk- I want a smoothie crying
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