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Lidiya Kustov

PostPosted: Sun Nov 26, 2006 12:29 am


Questor Information
Username: Lidiya Kustov:
Mule SN's: Lidiya K Kustov
IoDM Newbie? (Y/N): Y
Serum: Brown Shire Horse, a Schleswiger Heavy Draft if you're feeling especially elitist


Lidiya Kustov's character building thread

Crit me, crit me, crit me with your rhythm stick!


Huge changes made. Older, more accurate and less rose-tinted description of appearance, personality scrapped and altered totally, significant background changes.

Crit to your hearts content and feel free to just tear it apart.


"If she was a plain, disillusioned 30 something housewife who became a dominatrix to spice up her life, then I might be able to do more than laugh at the whole concept." heart Loved this idea. Adopted it.

More to come.

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BEFORE ---and--- AFTER
Name:: Lidiya Klementina Kustov
Age :: 35 ((born feb 12th 1971))
Height :: 6' 0"
Weight :: 202 lbs.
Serum:: Schleswiger Heavy Draft. May be subject to change if there's enough in opposition to another horse.

Character Appearance::

In terms of appearance, Lidiya is your typical ‘rubenesque’ plus size woman. Big and curvy.

She’s a big girl, tall and ‘thick’ Fat but not too fat. Well… that depends on your opinion of course. Some would call her fat, but she prefers the terms ‘voluptuous’ and ‘cuddly’.

She has a large bust, and yes, before you ask, it is sometimes painful when she is active.

Language skills::

Lidya's understanding of English pretty much spot on, unless you talk to quickly or keep changing topics. Her written English is grammatically sound, and though she does not have the vocabulary she would like, nobody can really complain - she's not trying to be a novellist. Her spoken English is not so perfect, butchered by a thick accent which some may find difficult to understand, and often spoken somewhat slowly as she thinks about her words.

Character Personality::

Bubbly and playful, loud and giggly, Lidiya is fun-loving and jolly, and at times, something of a slight tom-boy. She sometimes has a rather dark sense of humour, and while not quick to anger, is rather unpleasant when she is.

Character Background::

Lidiya was born on February 12, 1971 in St.Petersburg, Russia (Then known as Leningrad, USSR) to her Parents Nikolai and Tatiana. She has an older sister, Natalia.

She grew up in the city and received a relatively good education due to the then communist nation’s all-out drive to beat the west on as many frontiers as it could. In 1998, aged 27, she emigrated to marry an American computer geek whom she met over the internet, and lived with him in Miami, Florida for their four-and-a-half-year marriage.

Eventually bored and disillusioned with her husband due to his tendency to pay more attention to his computer than he did to her, she left him to live by herself and promptly hit the bars and clubs to celebrate being single again. She made a collection of friends who opened her eyes to some of the more ‘out there’ sources of fun, and soon decided that she quite liked one of them in particular.

In early 2005, she began offering her services as a dominatrix to fellow patrons of her favourite clubs, and then slowly but surely expanded her range wider as she grew more confident.

When she is not at ‘work’, she lives in quiet anonymity in a pleasant, suburban house – keeping her work life behind closed doors, for obvious reasons.


Why she is chosen and how she is tricked::


Lidiya is chosen by Dr. Moreau because she is physically and mentally healthy, and above all, easy to get hold of. Her height and build also make her an ideal candidate for the serum he has in mind: The Shire horse.

Getting Lidiya to the island is easy - a simple case of contacting her and hiring her dominatrix services, then telling the world that the helicopter crashed into the sea to become another victim of the Bermuda triangle. As such, she comes dressed in dressed for the job she thought she'd be here to do, only to be kidnapped and be put on the missing presumed dead list.

Wearing on arrival::

A 3-quarter length leather trench coat
Black Lingerie.
Shades.
High-heeled, thigh thigh-high platform boots.

In her bag::

Four pairs of handcuffs.
A stethoscope.
One leather whip.
make-up kit.
Several changes of clothes, ranging from the more practical shirts and pants, to the more exotic corsets and a PVC nurses uniform.
Another pair of boots - minus the heels.

Ideal 100% transformed appearance::

Lidiya would be an anthro - a humanoid with equine features.
Though her body would not be much larger, if at all, Lidiya would be a lot taller due to her feet and, most significantly, her neck. She'd be slightly heavier and perhaps slightly bulkier too with a little more muscle, courtesy of those shire horse genes.

She would be quite strong, with her musculature having increased somewhat. Her figure would remain virtually unchanged aside from broader shoulders, with her body-fat being mostly unaffected by the transformation. She would be coated in short, fine, brown fur, save for the end of her snout,and her ankles and forearms which would be white - with her ankles being rather fluffy too.

Her blue eyes would remain, as would a long, blonde mane - though she'd now have a blonde tail too. On the whole, the only things she would keep are her figure (with the slight changes mentioned above) and her hair/eye colour.

Why this animal/plant for your character? ::
She's a big girl - about as big as they come, almost, so why not go for something big. A Horse? A shire horse is as as big as they come too. I do not believe an ironic reason would contribute anything. That, and there are still no NORMAL horses on the island.

Art of varying accuracy and quality::

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PostPosted: Sun Nov 26, 2006 7:39 pm


Okay, before I begin, let me say that Kita asked me to provide critique in my own special way, which she tells me she cleared with you.

So first off, boy is it ever obvious you're a guy by reading the character description. Second of all, showing what your AVATAR will look like at 100 percent is silly, because no one cares how good you can tektek it. While the island hasn't quite reached the cap on horses, you have Gaius, Caitlin, and Aislinn, and Aislinn has something similar to your draft horse in centaur form. Sure, there are no straight horse serums, but it's already getting to feel overdone.

Six feet tall with fat only found in the boobs and the hips? All that amazon is missing is a chain mail bikini and a broadsword. But I bet as long as she's wearing glasses and has her hair in a bun people in the university respect her, right? Let me tell you something else about female anatomy, overly large boobs, no matter what size frame you have, lead to back trouble. Sure, you can walk that sexy walk, but at the end of the day your back will be killing you.

Her personality? In a word? BORING. Oh and another word- unrealistic. Yeah, even with the dominatrix angle, which just makes me cringe. Yes, yes, Russian dominatrixes are sexy, but why not just keep them in your fantasies and come up with a realistic, well rounded character?

She's perfect and has no flaws, a born leader who is always dominant and loves making new friends to dominate! If she was a plain, disillusioned 30 something housewife who became a dominatrix to spice up her life, then I might be able to do more than laugh at the whole concept. Her only flaw is she's a terrible follower? Are you kidding me? There's no deep seated insecurity that makes her try and do these things? And the flaunting her deviance and flirting with men and women will get old in about two seconds. Knowing the other characters on the island, she won't make any friends and will likely only be met with resistence or eye rolling when people aren't staring at all the leather.

And the animal choice... She loves to dress pretty shoes and boots, so let's give her an animal that makes it impossible to wear them? What? Just about any serum would do that. That doesn't explain anything.

And what the hell is she gonna do when she gets that degree in psychology? Dominate people into revealing their problems? Call them a worthless little slug until they tell her how they feel?

That's all I can think of right now.

Sylan


Lidiya Kustov

PostPosted: Sun Nov 26, 2006 8:19 pm


Sylan

So first off, boy is it ever obvious you're a guy by reading the character description.


I am amused.

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Second of all, showing what your AVATAR will look like at 100 percent is silly, because no one cares how good you can tektek it.


I still had fun doing it though n_n

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While the island hasn't quite reached the cap on horses, you have Gaius, Caitlin, and Aislinn, and Aislinn has something similar to your draft horse in centaur form. Sure, there are no straight horse serums, but it's already getting to feel overdone.


I'm aware of this, and have considered changes, but Kitara is encouraging me to stick with my shire horse for now. I'll be considering this again when I get more opinions, and if it's really a problem, I'll go with something else.

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Six feet tall with fat only found in the boobs and the hips? All that amazon is missing is a chain mail bikini and a broadsword.


xd Yes, she's aboslutely an Amazon. She does have some fat at the waist though. I will update the description to make this more obvious if needs be.

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But I bet as long as she's wearing glasses and has her hair in a bun people in the university respect her, right?


And you wouldn't? That's like saying that only flat chested women are allowed in higher education.

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Let me tell you something else about female anatomy, overly large boobs, no matter what size frame you have, lead to back trouble. Sure, you can walk that sexy walk, but at the end of the day your back will be killing you.


The idea that big boobs guarantees back trouble is a myth. It depends on numerous factors, and it depends on your activities, lifestyle and clothing.

Also... So what? A character can't have back pains? I said she had big boobs, not that she had big boobs and did backfilps with no bra without the slightest bit of discomfort.

You are in part right, and if necessary, I will specify that yes, her boobs can sometimes give her back ache.

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Her personality? In a word? BORING. Oh and another word- unrealistic.


Boring is a matter of opinion. Just because she's not a tortured soul, hopeless romantic, her mother killed infront of her eyes, was molested as a child, had a failed pregnancy or the daughter of a mafia boss, doesn't mean she's boring to RP with. Sometimes normal minds are needed. As for unrealistic.... ?
I know plenty of people like this.

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Yeah, even with the dominatrix angle, which just makes me cringe. Yes, yes, Russian dominatrixes are sexy, but why not just keep them in your fantasies and come up with a realistic, well rounded character?


You needn't really cringe - you like roleplay too, don't you?

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She's perfect and has no flaws, a born leader who is always dominant and loves making new friends to dominate! If she was a plain, disillusioned 30 something housewife who became a dominatrix to spice up her life, then I might be able to do more than laugh at the whole concept. Her only flaw is she's a terrible follower? Are you kidding me? There's no deep seated insecurity that makes her try and do these things?


That would be rather amusing. I could consider that, but... Where did I say she was perfect? Will write more on personality soon.

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And the flaunting her deviance and flirting with men and women will get old in about two seconds. Knowing the other characters on the island, she won't make any friends and will likely only be met with resistence or eye rolling when people aren't staring at all the leather.


Ofcourse it would. Doing anything constantly will get old. If needed I can type out more things that she would say or do.

She's not going to be wearing 'all the leather'. Nobody wants a dominatrix? She won't be one. As I said, it's her job, not her permanent way of life.

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And the animal choice... She loves to dress pretty shoes and boots, so let's give her an animal that makes it impossible to wear them? What? Just about any serum would do that. That doesn't explain anything.


Yep, s**t reason. I have no good reason. Do I need one? I don't believe in fate, and I see no need for a bitter irony.

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And what the hell is she gonna do when she gets that degree in psychology? Dominate people into revealing their problems? Call them a worthless little slug until they tell her how they feel?


Prison psychiatrist. Her study has nothing to do with her job. That would be like saying that women funding their English degrees by working in strip clubs are going to write erotic literature for magazines.

Thanks for your crit, several things have been taken into account and may be changed heart
PostPosted: Sun Nov 26, 2006 8:22 pm


I don't know why I bother.

Sylan


Lidiya Kustov

PostPosted: Sun Nov 26, 2006 8:24 pm


Sylan
I don't know why I bother.


Why? You've been helpful to me.
PostPosted: Sun Nov 26, 2006 8:26 pm


HAY

HAY MARK

HAYHAY

You're a moron. heart

Kitara Kata


Lidiya Kustov

PostPosted: Sun Nov 26, 2006 8:28 pm


Kitara Kata
HAY

HAY MARK

HAYHAY

You're a moron. heart


What? For discussing things?
PostPosted: Sun Nov 26, 2006 8:31 pm


You're not discussing, you're just trying to defend yourself and your character.

Face that facts that Lidiya is not a good character. Make changes. If you can't make changes and listen to others when they take time out of their lives to crit you when you ask for it, gtfo. o_O

Kitara Kata


Lidiya Kustov

PostPosted: Sun Nov 26, 2006 8:35 pm


Kitara Kata
You're not discussing, you're just trying to defend yourself and your character.

Face that facts that Lidiya is not a good character. Make changes. If you can't make changes and listen to others when they take time out of their lives to crit you when you ask for it, gtfo. o_O


I said I was making changes. O_o
PostPosted: Sun Nov 26, 2006 11:16 pm


Thanks again for the crit. Sorry if my reply left you, Sylan, thinking I'd just ignored it all and thought you were stupid. Honestly, I didn't, and I did start making changes right away - and more will follow.

I was rather confused when people took offence from my intial reply to Sylan.

Fact is, I'm not a gaia person at heart, and there are things about this place that honestly confuse the hell out of me wahmbulance . Here in this community, it seems everyone is rather more quiet than I am used to. It's rather alien to me right now, so if my etiquette doesn't fit in with everyone else's, you know why. I spend most of my time in a very different community where people are far more open to more... perhaps... 'aggressive' debate, and don't take offence to such things or hold grudges. Here it seems things are different.

Sorry. I wasn't aware of that.

Rest assured that I DO take notice of your crits and I DO make changes. Just because I challenged some of them, it didn't mean automatic disagreement and ignorance.

I've made specific mentions of things I'd neglected before, and put greater emphasis on things you seemed to miss or gloss over, and given further consideration to changing the serum, though I still need more opinions on this. I've expanded on her personality a bit more, but as for the accusation of her being boring - I honestly don't know what you want. You have to tell me. Obviously there are aspects of your crit that I DO disagree with at present, and believe that changing them to suit you would leave me with a character that A: I hate. B: I don't understand, and can't play.

So please! Crit more! Be harsh and this time I'll shut the ******** up about it and make my changes - THEN talk about it.

You know you want to tear me apart anyway heart

Lidiya Kustov


Sayuri_Nitta

PostPosted: Mon Nov 27, 2006 2:20 am


Yes you do need a reason why you picked said serum.
One of the things asked in the last concept contest was that exact question XD
PostPosted: Mon Nov 27, 2006 2:54 am


Sayuri_Nitta
Yes you do need a reason why you picked said serum.
One of the things asked in the last concept contest was that exact question XD


Ah, well, at the time I originally chose it was just looking for something good that wasn't already overdone - as I was only aware of Gaius then.

I think a shire fits Lidiya's character reasonably, though I have no deep, or poetic, or ironic reason for it and in all honesty if I picked something else for such a reason, I don't think it would actually make the RP any better.

I'm still sticking with shire horse for now (Mainly because Kit says I should) but I am tempted to change it to something else.

Lidiya Kustov


Bilious

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PostPosted: Mon Nov 27, 2006 4:50 am


You don't NEED a reason for a serum to be choosen- a lot of the time serums are randomly picked for people ICly- there's no real thought behind it. Hell, Billy's reason was Moureau figured something slimy would fit his slimy personality when choosing, and it was simple as that. Honestly, it's not hte animal that makes the character etcetera.

And Lidiya, your attitude has nothing to do with gaia or it's ettiquettes, rather your innability to take a critique. Sylan said a lot of really important things that are very helpfull to you, and as an innocent bystander, all I see is you getting defensive and arguing points. If there are "good points" you wish to discuss than feel free to say "What do you think of this aspect?" There's no reason to go harping on her for doign what YOU requested. There's no way for you to improve if people just lick your but and go "YAYTASTELIKECHOCOLATE!" Making changes? Cool. Awesome and more power to you! You don't have to have an attitude while doing it. We're friendly peeps here. We like to keep it friendly. wink heart
PostPosted: Mon Nov 27, 2006 5:15 am


Bilious
You don't NEED a reason for a serum to be choosen- a lot of the time serums are randomly picked for people ICly- there's no real thought behind it. Hell, Billy's reason was Moureau figured something slimy would fit his slimy personality when choosing, and it was simple as that. Honestly, it's not hte animal that makes the character etcetera.

And Lidiya, your attitude has nothing to do with gaia or it's ettiquettes, rather your innability to take a critique. Sylan said a lot of really important things that are very helpfull to you, and as an innocent bystander, all I see is you getting defensive and arguing points. If there are "good points" you wish to discuss than feel free to say "What do you think of this aspect?" There's no reason to go harping on her for doign what YOU requested. There's no way for you to improve if people just lick your but and go "YAYTASTELIKECHOCOLATE!" Making changes? Cool. Awesome and more power to you! You don't have to have an attitude while doing it. We're friendly peeps here. We like to keep it friendly. wink heart


Alright, that pretty much fits with what Kitara told me. I've suddenly got a load of new ideas bouncing around my head that I like, one of which I can thank Sylan for. I'll try and get round to posting that later.

As for not taking crits - you're probably not going to believe me, but honestly, I can. Just because I might challenge them at almost every point it doesn't mean I'm ignoring them. As for ettiquette? I love 4chan. 4laugh

As always, cheers for the comment. Have you an opinion on the 'too many horses' thing or not? Its the main thing irritating me right now, that and the fact that I've decided I'm s**t at describing my character's personality in words.

Lidiya Kustov


Bilious

Sparkly Wolf

11,200 Points
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PostPosted: Mon Nov 27, 2006 6:23 am


Well, I'd say probably be more open to whatever animal- because the labs would NOT choose somethign just because omg they'd make an awesome this or that! Unless it's a punishment or something specific that can be justified by motives and linkage to the labs (with GM approval, of course) it's definatly best to be open for anything. I believe there are a lot of horses, but most of them are tauric. I think just a regular anthro-horse would be fine personally since there's only Gaius and he does have backwings to aim for that pegasis approach. Also, something I would love to see amongst the horses is perhaps them forming their own "herd", so the more the better in that respect. 3nodding But there are a lot of other hoofed beasties out there to choose from if a GM confirms that horses are closed, but I haven't heard anything so I think you're still okay. (But you may be amongst the last if that's the case?) you might want a back-up animal or two or three just in case another horse gets on first for all the reasons stated above ^_^
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