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 Posted: Thu Nov 16, 2006 1:04 pm
ok this is the reposting of my second writing the reposting of the first on is on the shadowzone i hope you all like it and please feel free to leave your comments and thoughts. "Daring to dream, I leave this world and enter into one which I control. Here I can be anything which I wish, and bound by nothing but my mind. There is happiness in every breath I take, and never alone am I. For in this place I have my angel... and though my demon shows, she is not afraid. She walks by my side, and comforts my soul. And for this gift she walks unharmed in the land that darkness rules. For all who wish her foul must first pass through me, and thouhg I stay in this forgotten world, her kindness is my strength. But no comes the dawn, and the moon gives way to the sun, and as I awaken, I long for the day in which I shall see my angel in this world as well." 
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Posted: Thu Nov 16, 2006 1:06 pm
Kool, This is my favorite one so far. cool
Keep up the good Work.
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Shad0w_Frost Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Nov 16, 2006 1:10 pm
heck yeah these on rocks....i can't wait to see what you put out next...i've heard the way you talk...you got a way with words that outta sight....keep it up forreal
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Posted: Fri Nov 17, 2006 10:24 am
Yes I must agree =^.^= You have a way with words <_< More than anyone knows tehehehe I myself think..... AWSOME ^^ *huggles* I do wanna see more o_O Here and there tehehehe
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Posted: Sat Nov 18, 2006 12:37 pm
utopian world... everyone wants it and dreams for it... some actually find it, because what they choose is what makes them happy and it's all they need.
I guess that means utopian worlds exist, but they are every individual's world...
ok, it's too much bla bla. I feel like I'm talking stupidities that everyone knows anyway, and says: "duuh, so obvious, just shut up!"
I'm a little too tired now to think of better things that are worth for your work. Me apologizes.
But I wish I had the angel by my side... *sigh*
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Posted: Sat Nov 18, 2006 1:46 pm
lol you no need to apologize for anything....you speak good words, and thank you for commenting on what i wrote, i glad that you along with everyone else like it....and just so you know...you would be the someone's angel because you;re not a demon
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Posted: Sat Nov 18, 2006 1:55 pm
Jdness lol you no need to apologize for anything....you speak good words, and thank you for commenting on what i wrote, i glad that you along with everyone else like it....and just so you know...you would be the someone's angel because you;re not a demon you make things sound so nice.
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Posted: Sat Nov 18, 2006 2:05 pm
because they can be.....it's all in how you look at things and how you take them....you can't let mean people bother you....if someone doesn't like you and they say somethin bad don't let it bother you because what they say does't matter, and the people that really know you know that's true about you. you must be like a duck when it comes to mean people....ducks have an oil on them that when they go in the water it just slides right off of them...and that's how you must be...and the mean things of people will be the water...that they won't stick to you and hurt you...and no matter what there will always be atleast one niice person for everyone that knows me....and the people that know me in person also know they have someone that will help them out...so once you stop listening to the mean people, you;ll see all the niice ones ^-^
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Posted: Sat Nov 18, 2006 2:08 pm
that is the truth....i know you;ve been there for me alot, and i'm glad because i dunno where i'd be if it wasn't for you...and you know i'm there to help ya out...and if anyone else needs help too, well i'll do my best to help them out
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Posted: Sat Nov 18, 2006 2:34 pm
@ Jdness: it is really true, but sometimes bad things really hit on you. Sometimes because you're already hurt by something else and this is another hit that inevitably affects you.
And there is the other variant when mean things that you are told are actually... true. That's the most painful thing. But most of the times such words won't come from your friends even if they are true. It's enough that you realize it.
but true friends are so rare to find. when you think you have found them, in the end they prove not to be. Although they are generally so nice, they have some dark side that you just can't live with...
so true true friends hide under rocks very difficult to find... sweatdrop
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Posted: Sat Nov 18, 2006 3:01 pm
yeah that's true, when it's true it does hurt...but if they were real friends then they would say it in a way to hurt you. and as for real friends being under rocks...welll as far as i can tell...you got 2 of em at the least ^-^
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Posted: Sat Nov 18, 2006 3:03 pm
yup yup i concur....2 friends definitaly...maybe even more biggrin
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Posted: Sun Nov 19, 2006 5:42 am
I am really happy and lucky to have those 2 real friends! Thank you guys!
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