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 Posted: Sat Nov 11, 2006 6:49 am
Nope, it's not only at night. (Though, technically, when it's day here it's night in other countries...) But we want to hear your poetry.
It can be random, it can be written once before. It can be a haiku, a limerick, a sonnet, a free verse, as long as we have SasuSaku in it.
So, have fun!
I guess I'll start with a poem I have on my Chem notebook. The first stanza's derived from a Sakura caption from the Naruto Artbook. The rest I did by myself.
Change
Love and friends,
scattering flowers
running through them
is the young girl's way of life.
Facing the sun
that shines upon us
A great cherry blossom
nobly opens up.
But spring ends too,
as do all things.
Childhood is left behind.
The delicate flower
wilts at the cold of
The beautifully harsh winter.
Her love is received, and
he is grateful.
The cherry blossom falls.
Endings are beginnings,
and the tree begins to blossom.
Weather hardens her resolve,
and she blooms once more.
Hardier than ever,
she'll take on his cold again.
Her healing hand,
and her gentle touch,
will melt all ice.
The cold wind mingles
with the cherry blossom
of spring.
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Posted: Sat Nov 11, 2006 6:54 am
::claps:: That was amazing, I'll have to get to work on some..or go dig up my old ones. x.x
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Posted: Sat Nov 11, 2006 7:37 am
Tenshi, that was a VERY beatufil poem! <3
Unfortunately, poetry is NOT my forte. >__> At all.
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Posted: Sat Nov 11, 2006 7:56 am
<3 Then you just do the classic:
Cherry Blossoms are pink
Ravens are black
We all see her wink
He must be back. <3 (Wow...That was bad. x///X)
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Posted: Sat Nov 11, 2006 11:49 am
Lol, I have one. I wrote it in school one day when I was bored. <3 I did most of my poetry last year, and no inspiration this year.. :/
Blossom
Look far,
think widely.
Sleep tight,
my little blossom.
Soon,
you will awaken.
Not in Konoha,
but in my arms; safely.
My imagination for this one.. :3
Even Above and Under
Over sea,
and under stone.
You come to me,
when I'm alone.
Above the clouds,
and in the mids.
Hearts are beating,
when it is time.
Besides the kiss,
and the cold stone.
You're the one I miss,
the one I've always known.
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Posted: Sat Nov 11, 2006 2:09 pm
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Posted: Sat Nov 11, 2006 5:24 pm
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Posted: Sat Nov 11, 2006 5:29 pm
*__*
Beautiful work you two!
And I agree with Iia. If I were to write poetry -- Bleh. I wouldn't even try. More like forced to in school. >>
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Posted: Sat Nov 11, 2006 5:41 pm
I just wrote this one. n.n Birdie Go Bye Bye
She ran to that place.
She knew it would happen.
She ran to that place,
Birdie can't go bye bye.
He walked slowly to that place.
Rememberance, he wished to be gone.
He walked to that place.
Birdie must go bye bye.
They collided with each other.
Tears were spilt, words spoken.
They collided with each other.
Birdie don't go bye bye.
Sleeping on the bench.
Awaking when it's too late.
Tears in her eyes as she thought,
"Birdie went bye bye."
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Posted: Sun Nov 12, 2006 5:05 am
They're all so beautiful! heart I suck at poetry so yeah... sweatdrop
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Posted: Sun Nov 12, 2006 5:25 am
That was awesome Fading! biggrin
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Posted: Sun Nov 12, 2006 6:34 am
Thanks, I liked your's better though. >.< It's a little easier to write poetry when your muses Are Sasuke and Sakura. x3
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Posted: Sun Nov 12, 2006 9:35 am
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Posted: Sun Nov 12, 2006 2:53 pm
x3 I wrote a waka. Cherry Blossom Mist in the air, the smell of flowers near.
Cherry Blossoms everywhere.
Which is mine? And a really crappy poem. Raven Call Me
Dearest raven in the dark
Let me be your light.
Dearest raven call me when you need me
And I will shine through.
Call me, shout my name, let me hear you.
Scream my name, then you'll feel me.
Raven call me, dearest bird
And I will be your light.
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Posted: Sun Nov 12, 2006 3:36 pm
I liiiiiiike it. :3 Untitled
Like a fire in winter,
I can be smothered in coldness.
Like a candle in darkness,
I can be covered by darkness.
But remember this:
As a fire warms the winter,
and a candle leads through darkness,
I will always be there to lead the way. Weird poem I know, and I can't think of a sutible title.
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