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 Posted: Fri Nov 10, 2006 7:14 pm
A little note: RavensBloodyTear is my fav poet if you would like any info on her PM me
im such a tease, RavensBloodyTear is my pin name so thanks and enjoy...
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Posted: Fri Nov 10, 2006 7:16 pm
RED red is the color of the blood running down the open wound in my wrists
red is the reminder of every thing i had and all that is to come
red is the tears staining my face with imprefection the tears that symbolize
what i have done the tears that leave atrail from the eyes that watch blood
flow from the wound of love....down the palm slowly makeing it's way to
the finger tips that once wrote the sweet words of serenity watch one drop
after another fall a memory in each drop the first of when i met an angel
the second when i lost my angel one after another drops unfolding the
supressed memories of all that has happend and all that will never happen
because of the color red that now flows no more through the vains of not regret
but sorrow..... RavensBloodyTear
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EloraEnchanted Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Nov 11, 2006 1:28 am
Need to break it up a little.. the words kind of run together and you lose sight of what you are reading. other than that it is awesome! i like how the meaning loops around to the first sentence..
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Posted: Sat Nov 11, 2006 7:54 am
RisikaVampier RED red is the color of the blood running down the open wound in my wrists
red is the reminder of every thing i had and all that is to come
red is the tears staining my face with imprefection the tears that symbolize
what i have done the tears that leave atrail from the eyes that watch blood
flow from the wound of love....down the palm slowly makeing it's way to
the finger tips that once wrote the sweet words of serenity watch one drop
after another fall a memory in each drop the first of when i met an angel
the second when i lost my angel one after another drops unfolding the
supressed memories of all that has happend and all that will never happen
because of the color red that now flows no more through the vains of not regret
but sorrow..... Very Good cool
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Shad0w_Frost Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Nov 11, 2006 11:20 am
EloraEnchanted Need to break it up a little.. the words kind of run together and you lose sight of what you are reading. other than that it is awesome! i like how the meaning loops around to the first sentence.. alright i will fix it up a lil
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Posted: Sat Nov 11, 2006 11:23 am
Never letting go Today I saw you fall, yesterday I seen you cry.the day before I seen you begin to break. Withevery tear my hand was there to brush up against your cheek and take them away. With every weep my voice softly sang "it's alright, I wont let anything happen to you." With every sob I held you in my arms told you to be calm. I looked you in the eyes you looked back in mine and said " I love you with all that I am, hold me close never let me go." I held you closer. Listened to you breath comforted you in this time of need like a mother to a child. Finally breaking the silence I said " I love you and nothing will change that, we went through a lot but there will always be a spot for you in my arms and my heart."You smiled and laid your head on my cheast I kissed it as you listened to my heart beat we sat there together two souls brought into one entity. I watched you fall today stood next to you picked you up looked you in the eyes and say "no worries I will not let you fall completely." RavensBloodyTear
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Shad0w_Frost Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Nov 11, 2006 5:05 pm
RisikaVampier Never letting go Today I saw you fall, yesterday I seen you cry.the day before I seen you begin to break. Withevery tear my hand was there to brush up against your cheek and take them away. With every weep my voice softly sang "it's alright, I wont let anything happen to you." With every sob I held you in my arms told you to be calm. I looked you in the eyes you looked back in mine and said " I love you with all that I am, hold me close never let me go." I held you closer. Listened to you breath comforted you in this time of need like a mother to a child. Finally breaking the silence I said " I love you and nothing will change that, we went through a lot but there will always be a spot for you in my arms and my heart."You smiled and laid your head on my cheast I kissed it as you listened to my heart beat we sat there together two souls brought into one entity. I watched you fall today stood next to you picked you up looked you in the eyes and say "no worries I will not let you fall completely." Good stuff My Story is kinda like that But, it didn't end well....Or perhaps it hasn't ended yet, only time will tell.
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Posted: Sat Nov 11, 2006 8:29 pm
Shad0w_Frost RisikaVampier Never letting go Today I saw you fall, yesterday I seen you cry.the day before I seen you begin to break. Withevery tear my hand was there to brush up against your cheek and take them away. With every weep my voice softly sang "it's alright, I wont let anything happen to you." With every sob I held you in my arms told you to be calm. I looked you in the eyes you looked back in mine and said " I love you with all that I am, hold me close never let me go." I held you closer. Listened to you breath comforted you in this time of need like a mother to a child. Finally breaking the silence I said " I love you and nothing will change that, we went through a lot but there will always be a spot for you in my arms and my heart."You smiled and laid your head on my cheast I kissed it as you listened to my heart beat we sat there together two souls brought into one entity. I watched you fall today stood next to you picked you up looked you in the eyes and say "no worries I will not let you fall completely." Good stuff My Story is kinda like that But, it didn't end well....Or perhaps it hasn't ended yet, only time will tell. thats story didnt end well either
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Posted: Sun Nov 12, 2006 12:09 am
RisikaVampier RED red is the color of the blood running down the open wound in my wrists
red is the reminder of every thing i had and all that is to come
red is the tears staining my face with imprefection the tears that symbolize
what i have done the tears that leave atrail from the eyes that watch blood
flow from the wound of love....down the palm slowly makeing it's way to
the finger tips that once wrote the sweet words of serenity watch one drop
after another fall a memory in each drop the first of when i met an angel
the second when i lost my angel one after another drops unfolding the
supressed memories of all that has happend and all that will never happen
because of the color red that now flows no more through the vains of not regret
but sorrow..... i like it
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Posted: Sun Nov 12, 2006 6:59 am
RisikaVampier Shad0w_Frost RisikaVampier Never letting go Today I saw you fall, yesterday I seen you cry.the day before I seen you begin to break. Withevery tear my hand was there to brush up against your cheek and take them away. With every weep my voice softly sang "it's alright, I wont let anything happen to you." With every sob I held you in my arms told you to be calm. I looked you in the eyes you looked back in mine and said " I love you with all that I am, hold me close never let me go." I held you closer. Listened to you breath comforted you in this time of need like a mother to a child. Finally breaking the silence I said " I love you and nothing will change that, we went through a lot but there will always be a spot for you in my arms and my heart."You smiled and laid your head on my cheast I kissed it as you listened to my heart beat we sat there together two souls brought into one entity. I watched you fall today stood next to you picked you up looked you in the eyes and say "no worries I will not let you fall completely." Good stuff My Story is kinda like that But, it didn't end well....Or perhaps it hasn't ended yet, only time will tell. thats story didnt end well either Indeed, But it ends better than mine wink
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Shad0w_Frost Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Nov 12, 2006 12:58 pm
Shad0w_Frost RisikaVampier Shad0w_Frost RisikaVampier Never letting go Today I saw you fall, yesterday I seen you cry.the day before I seen you begin to break. Withevery tear my hand was there to brush up against your cheek and take them away. With every weep my voice softly sang "it's alright, I wont let anything happen to you." With every sob I held you in my arms told you to be calm. I looked you in the eyes you looked back in mine and said " I love you with all that I am, hold me close never let me go." I held you closer. Listened to you breath comforted you in this time of need like a mother to a child. Finally breaking the silence I said " I love you and nothing will change that, we went through a lot but there will always be a spot for you in my arms and my heart."You smiled and laid your head on my cheast I kissed it as you listened to my heart beat we sat there together two souls brought into one entity. I watched you fall today stood next to you picked you up looked you in the eyes and say "no worries I will not let you fall completely." Good stuff My Story is kinda like that But, it didn't end well....Or perhaps it hasn't ended yet, only time will tell. thats story didnt end well either Indeed, But it ends better than mine wink lol so you think blaugh
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Posted: Sun Nov 12, 2006 1:01 pm
The last note Look at her smile it’s so cold so forgiving she is finally happy now
Her skin is pail she must have been here for at least an hour
But look into her smile next to her there is a little piece of paper
This is what it said.. To those who really loved me I’m sorry I just
couldn’t be what you wanted Me to be I’m sorry you never excepted
me for what I really am this Is not how I wanted it to end don’t worrie
it didn’t hurt for long now I am finale free from everything I will miss every
One beyond what you can imagen I hope by taking my life into my own hands
I did not hurt any of you to bad at first all I was going to do is shed a little blood
But as I held the knife in my hand I got to thinking and I’m so sorry but look at
my smile you can see I am finale happy. All we can do is look at her now she looks
So beautiful and at ease look farther down the note there is a PS it would have been great
For someone to listen to me then maybe you wouldn’t be reading this last good bye. RavensBloodyTear
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Shad0w_Frost Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Nov 13, 2006 8:28 am
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Posted: Mon Nov 13, 2006 6:37 pm
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Shad0w_Frost Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Nov 14, 2006 10:48 am
*Ahem* Those weren't tears...I had something in my eye...Yeah, that's it... sweatdrop
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