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 Posted: Thu Nov 02, 2006 11:54 am
My local regional chapter of NaNo has a post that asks, 'What is your first sentence?'
I find it fun to read others first sentences and though I'd pass it along here:
What is your first sentence?
for me, the NaNovel is 'Eperdu' and the first sentence is:
I never thought I was gay.
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Posted: Thu Nov 02, 2006 12:06 pm
Mine is because of a dare I heard about in the big Gaia NaNo thread...
"Where the hell are my pants?"
XD
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Posted: Thu Nov 02, 2006 1:01 pm
Quote: Soren woke to candlelight, the gentle glow drawing him out of sleep and into a world tinged with gold and warmth.
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Posted: Thu Nov 02, 2006 1:15 pm
Quote: Cassie sighed, tired of the rambling about sex and abstinence, and played distractedly with the band of Andy's watch. He turned his head to look at her, smiling. "Bored, Cassie?" he whispered. Nothing spectacular. xd
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Posted: Thu Nov 02, 2006 2:29 pm
Hahaha my first sentence is pretty short. xd "Which way was it again?"
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Posted: Thu Nov 02, 2006 2:31 pm
I've got the shortest one so far...
"What's that?"
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Posted: Thu Nov 02, 2006 2:34 pm
misakyra I've got the shortest one so far... "What's that?" Now we just need someone with a first sentence of "What!?" or something like that. xp
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Posted: Thu Nov 02, 2006 2:55 pm
My first sentence is:
The road stretched out into the dark going both ways.
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Posted: Thu Nov 02, 2006 3:47 pm
BlackDeathDragoon misakyra I've got the shortest one so far... "What's that?" Now we just need someone with a first sentence of "What!?" or something like that. xp Or "Yo!" Fewer letters. XD
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Posted: Thu Nov 02, 2006 4:50 pm
Mine is "Yo!"
...No, my mistake, that's a lie.
Mine is actually much less creative:
I rolled my eyes a bit at my mom as I jumped into the orthodontist’s chair.
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Posted: Thu Nov 02, 2006 5:49 pm
My first sentence is:
"I hate Target."
And it's true in real life as well!
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Posted: Thu Nov 02, 2006 6:29 pm
Lupe_Oceana Mine is because of a dare I heard about in the big Gaia NaNo thread... "Where the hell are my pants?" XD
So my first... few sentences are:
Crap.
Crap. Crap. Crap.
Where the bloody hell are my pants?
So I've got the shortest yet. xD
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Posted: Thu Nov 02, 2006 6:36 pm
Mine is boring. I wish it was humor now. Darn. xD
"Although it was a warm day, he pulled his cloak tight about his shoulders."
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Posted: Thu Nov 02, 2006 7:43 pm
So far mine is:
"In the March of 3016 a beautiful baby girl was born into the loving arms of well-off parents."
But I'm not sure if I'll change it later on or not.
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Posted: Thu Nov 02, 2006 7:47 pm
Quote: My first sentence I wrote was, "Every one has their stage." Last year my entire novel came together around my first sentence, and this year I can't stand my first sentence, or my entire intro at that. Which probably has something to do with the fact that I'm 3000 words behind....I'm thinking or finding a new plot and scrappy everything already. Ahhh!
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