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Posted: Wed Nov 01, 2006 3:30 pm
WARNING: Possible adult content, beware!I'll be posting my story here as it goes along, then at the end of each post, posting a word count. I know I posted the first three paragraphs, but I like them, so I'll just be sure to go about 1k words over so to make up for it. I might go back and edit them to make it more fitting...idk. I'll verify it through the site, and keep it all legit... This will mark my progress easier than I could alone. So, without further adieu (sp?) here you go: Aeternum Vale
Prologue
Flash! A glinting something passed by me in a blur, too fast for my eyes to follow. I squinted in the darkness of the forrest, eyes scanning for any perceivable amount of light to enhance my poor and suffering vision. I could just make out the outline of the stag I had been hunting this whole afternoon. I had left before noon, but I hadn't come to follow this creature until about an hour or two after mid day. The winter scene before me was completely breathtaking. Everything within the range of my sight was covered in snow, a myriad of white and green, blended together for something so remarkable, so spectacular, words could not describe it. The snow had painted a vivid whiteness over most everything. I had first found the tracks not far outside my house, and I had followed them thus far. Later, I caught a glimpse of the magnificent creature; broad shouldered, a behemoth of a buck. It would make for a beautiful kill, and the hide and meat would last for several weeks, helping my family survive this winter. Not needing to hunt, I could spend more time gathering wood and helping out in other areas where I might be needed. I slid my bow from my back, fetching an arrow from the quiver. Notching the arrow to the string, I effortlessly drew back the bow, watching it bend to the power I exerted. Silently, I prepared for the shot. My bow was known as a composite bow; symmetrical, curving in to a point, then curving back out. It gained its strength because of the way it bent, the material used to make it becoming very tense and thus very strong. The bow had a high intrinsic resistance to pressure meant that it had great range, but required a suitably strong arm to fully draw back the string. Because it was a composite bow, and because it was symmetrical, the accuracy was beyond amazing. The bull raised his mighty head, turning his head as if he meant to stare straight at me. I hadn't made a sound, of that I was certain. His ears were pricked, alert. That stare though, it was colder than the snow and ice that surrounded and enveloped the forrest. I met his stare, not daring to let my eyes waver or wander for so much as a second. The stag blinked, his ears turning back to the front as they normally were. When his head turned, giving me a clear side profile view of the deer, I released the fletching, letting the arrow fly through the air to its target. The projectile hit home, right behind the shoulder, piercing the heart straight on. Before the massive bull deer knew what hit him, he collapsed, a quick and relatively painful death. I would not have had it any other way. As I approached the fallen stag, I heard a cawing noise. Glancing up at the branch above my head, I saw a crow, though it stared intently at me. Long ago, when I was but a boy, I had found my fylgja - a creature that was characteristic and unique to each person, and seeing one was a sign of doom. Seeing your fylgja in dreams was common, but awake... that was another story. In dreams when I saw my crow, it warmed my heart. Something good seemed to always happen shortly thereafter I had the dream, as if it were a prophetic vision. I knew the crow to be my fylgja, and not just any crow, there was one white feather in the right wing, something I have never seen in any of the other birds of the same species. The bird stared straight at me, facing me. I could not see the wings. The branch it rested on was only about four feet above my head or so, and before I could think about scaring it to move, it spread its wings and leapt off the branch. The white feather. My fylgja. I turned my head, looking at the ground; this was bad. I put it out of my head, walking towards the stag. Something caught my eye... It was a figure in the distance, a rough grey outline of something. No way. It couldn't be. My feet guided me on a path my mind told me not to follow. If I was correct than the creature before me was something truly legendary, a Landvættir. This appeared to be the Dragon, for I could see the bugs and insects who breathed poison all about him. Another figure emerged, and it was none other than the Bird, whose wings were so large I could see no end to them. He was surrounded by many smaller and lesser birds as well. The third creature strode forth, the Bull who stood taller and more magnificent than anything I had ever seen before, including the stag I had just felled. Finally the last Landvættir appeared, the Giant. I was still far away, partially hidden from view.
I placed my composite bow on my back again, glancing between the Landvættir. These were legendary creatures that guarded the land, said to scare off and curse anyone that tried to invade from foreign lands. There were more than just these four, thousands if not more, but these were the most important. To stand in their presence was an honor unlike any other I had ever had bestowed upon me. I doubted they knew that I stood where I did.
I returned to my kill, flexing and stretching a bit before grabbing the antlers and beginning to drag it back to my home. Luckily, my house was not far away. I tried to move as silently as possible, but my boots crunched the snow under foot. I kept looking back at the guardians of the land, the Landvættir. Either they truly had not noticed me, or the chose to remain ignorant of my presence. I slid the stag about ten feet before I felt someone or something staring at me. It always is a strange feeling when you think you are being watched. Well, I was.
I stood slowly from my hunched and crouched posture that I was previously in when I was attempting to drag the deer. Gradually I turned to my left, coming around to face what I knew had to have been staring at me. My trepidation was not without ground, for all four of the Landvættir stood, eyes fixed on my position. I could not judge from their stares what it was to mean, their perplexed looks fooling my mind's perception of them. Had I not heard countless stories of the countless Landvættir cursing and causing ill will on men? Though they were meant to protect and guard the land, the Landvættir were still fearsome creatures.
CRACK! I spun quickly, eyes scanning the snow covered forrest. I saw nothing and figured the sound to be nothing more than some beast that was not in hibernation, though there was not a single animal I could think of that was abound in the woods. I turned back to face the Bull, Bird, Dragon and Giant, but that was not what I saw. The Landvættir were nowhere to be found, but in their stead stood another marvelous and equally chthonic being. It was my clan's hamingja, a kind of guardian angel that watched over a family or clan for generations.
She was glowing white, radiating. She wore an almost translucent dress, which billowed in the wind with her hair. She wore something else at first, something I couldn't quite make out, but I leaned in and squinted and saw that it was almost like a scarf or sash but not quite. Her hair was a very bright blonde, almost as though the white ashes from a long burnt fire had been turned into a wig. She possessed a preternatural beauty, so individual and unique that I almost would have believed her to be a spirit of some deceased princess or other nobility.
So enraptured was I that I almost did not notice her hand waving me to come forward, beckoning me to follow her as she turned. If she was calling me as such, something had to be wrong. I grabbed the antler of the stag and leaned forward, pumping my legs with each step. I leaned into the strides to counter the weight of the creature, which otherwise would have been a very real and serious problem. I do not know why I was so reluctant to leave my kill, maybe because I subconsciously believed that nothing wrong or malicious could happen to my family. I followed my clan's hamingja for what seemed like hours, but that was probably a fallacy created from my mind because of the weight I was dragging. I never slowed, but then again, nor did I increase in speed. I looked up from her for but a moment, realizing where we were. We had reached the edge of the forrest, and now, I was not far from my house. She glanced back over her shoulder to me, and though she could not speak, I could read the sadness in her eyes. A glistening tear drop that trailed a dance of grief down her cheek, as though in perfect ryhthym with some ominous funeral threnody, was all I had to see. Had I failed them? Was there nothing I could do?
No, nothing could be wrong with them. I am sure that she was leading me home because I had been gone too long, maybe because she was worried that I had gotten lost, the snow fooling my otherwise uncanny knowledge of the area that surrounded my homelands...I awoke with a start, sitting up quickly. It was just a dream. I must have hit my head or something. The bull deer I had killed lay next to me, and I grabbed it both antlers, pulling it home. Fenja would be so proud of this. I bet that in a winter or two Veseti or Vasad could get a much larger buck than I had ever dreamed of. It wasn't that long of a walk, for luckily I had not had to wander too far off. I approached the clearing at the edge of the forrest, looking up and spotting a raven, no two, circling over my house. Something about it seemed familiar, as though it had already happened before. My vision faltered and I dropped my head, temporarily letting go of the antler in my right hand and rubbing my eye. When I lifted my head again, I saw the hamingja. I stared for a second at the luminous and seemingly celestial being before me. I blinked just once, and when I reopened my eyes she was there but only for a second. The wind howled, and when it did she dissipated, evaporating and dissolving with the breeze. I shook my head, it was just my imagination. A waking dream, a vision of something that had not faded from that short nap in the woods was all. I had returned from a day of hunting, long and worn out from the hunt, the stalk, and the kill. I am a finely skilled marksman, and even better with a sword, MY sword, which was named Laevatinir. I was looking for my wife, Fenja, to show off the stag I had killed. It would make for some fine supper for a few days. I laid the stag outside, for as cold as it was, it was fine from insects or anything that might otherwise try to infect my kill. I opened the door and stepped inside, lovingly awaiting the warm fire to heat my frozen fingers. I had removed my coat and laid it on a chair to the right of the door. I called their names, one by one, wondering why no one answered. I started to panic, surely at least one person was home, Veseti or maybe Fenja. Gods, don't let her be right, my family's hamingja. Glancing about, I noticed the room in disarray, and it wasn't until then that I noticed the blood on the floor.... Chapter I
It is a dark time indeed, Baldr's death so tragic and yet we all knew it was but a matter of time. It was foretold, but even I didn't want to believe it. Baldr's death, along with the birth of those monstrosities - the parasitic vermin from that damned Loki's loins - we all knew it was coming. Loki, the author of woes, tricked Hod, Baldr's brother, and the foolishness of the blind prevailed. With a twig of mistletoe, Loki successfully broke the last boundary. Fimbulwinter was upon us, and it was but a matter of time until things got worse. Mani and Sol fought for their lives every day, only barely inching away from the persecutors. How long before they were to be taken? Damn him. Loki had done plenty to ******** us over, but this was unthinkable. Damned jealousy. Every now and then, we can hear his screams... the bitter and wretched screams. Sigyn could only sit so long before she had to empty the bowl that caught the poison of his punishment, and in those few horrified seconds, the earth itself rumbled with Loki's pain. It served him right. That b*****d. I was there the day his son was turned into a wolf and viciously attacked his brother. The eidolic screams as brother literally ate brother, it was almost unbearable... But I never looked away. I had met Baldr once, and never before had I been so inspired. His beauty was remarkable, and nothing short of magnificent. When we parted, he called me friend, and since then I was happy again... It had been so long since I was last truly happy... Not since that winter oh so long ago... I had returned from a day of hunting... I was a finely skilled marksman, and even better with a sword, MY sword, which was named Laevatinir. I was looking for my wife, Varandi, to show off the stag I had killed. It would make for some fine supper for a few days. I laid the stag outside, for as cold as it was, it was fine from insects or anything that might otherwise try to infect my kill. I opened the door and stepped inside lovingly awaiting the warm fire to heat my frozen fingers. I had removed my coat and layed it on a chair to the right of the door. I called their names, one by one, wondering why no one answered. I started to panic, surely at least one person was home, Veseti or maybe Fenja. Glancing about, I noticed the room in disarray, and it wasn't until then that I noticed the blood on the floor.... The cold harsh wind attacked my face. Fimbulwinter was upon us, but nearly over. In fact, by week's end the snow will begin to melt. That's how it was predicted, of course, so I'm just speculating. Maybe the snow was better. Flames gorging on everything in sight, until only ashes remains isn't that great a thing to be looking forward to. Someday, someone should write poems about the world ending in either fire or ice, and oh the irony if his or her name ended with either of those elements. I often wonder that kind of nonsense to myself, and maybe one day it will happen, but who knows? I pulled my fur lined leather coat a bit closer to my skin. The cold was bad, but the heat would be worse. My gloves were also made of leather, lined with the hair-or is it fur?-from a stag. Actually, it was the stag I had brought home that treacherous and cursed day. Often I had wondered why my sons were no with me... Why hadn't a valkyrie chosen them, why weren't they Einharjar like their father? Hel, that cold heartless b***h has my family, and I don't think she is going to give them back. What if, on this upcoming fateful day, which I'm sure is soon, when the armies march onto Vigrid, if that harlot has raised my sons- Veseti, the elder; and Vasad, the younger - back to fight against me? Could I handle that? Raising Laevitnir, my trusted sword, against one of my beloveds? The thought was too much, and I shied away from it before it could deal me more grief. Crunch! Crunch! The snow ached under my thick heavy boots, and with each step I crushed the powder under my weight. Valhalla was within sight, just over the crest of the next hill, but I couldn't bear myself to go now. I didn't feel like rushing to supper, I don't feel like I could stomach it. Clank! Clank! My sword, Laevatinir, was in its sheath on my back. The sheath itself was silver, with black runes bearing down the middle. Odin had hung from a tree for nine days to gain the knowledge of the runes, and it was from him that we learned those beauties. The sword was mighty, somewhat heavy, but I have successfully learned how to wield it with one or two hands, depending on the situation, and how dire it is. Training or something basic like that, I will go two handed, because I don't need a shield; however, if I'm sparring, I'll wield Laevatinir with my right hand, and a shield with my left, easier to defend and parry that way. Essentially, a good parry or block could be life or death, and with the Great War so near upon us, I had taught myself how to survive in any possible situation. Well, as best I could anyways. Laevatinir was forged by the dwarves, the same ones who forged Gungnir, Odin's mighty spear. I walked a bit farther, arbitrarily noticing the water in the stream at the bottom of the next valley. On second glance, it was a beautiful creek, and I made my way down the steep hill to get a closer look. Staring into the water, I was enraptured. It had an odd calming effect on my body, and seemed to ease my restless and troubled mind. I sat at the water's edge after taking the sword and sheath from my back, under an ash tree, my right arm resting on a raised root. I laid my head back on the tree and while it wasn't the most comfortable thing ever, it was relaxing. My mind drifted from the thought of my dead children, to the good memories-the ones that could bring a tear to my eye if I wasn't so masculine. Every now and then, in the comfort of my private quarters, I would shed a tear or two. I've witnessed several of the other men, maybe a dozen, who had similarly retreated to their residences with teary and bloodshot eyes. Time flew by so fast that I nearly missed dinner. I got up slowly, and hitched my sword back on to my back. I tightened the leather strap, and then began my trek up the hill. My knees ached and so did my heels. All day long, the Einharjar trained and sparred every day, all day, until Ragnarok come. I hiked up the hill, and smiled as Valhalla bloomed into my vision. For the rest of the march, I was enamored, unable to take my eyes off that amazing building. The way the light hit the corners, and oh how it shined, I would definitely miss this place. I pushed through the doors, and took a random seat. I glanced around to see if I knew anyone around me, but my closest friend was a few tables away. The Einharjar are the unsung heroes, and we have formed something of a brotherhood. All of us were one. We had all come from different times, places, and sure, we may not always get a long, but what mattered was the brotherly love. We would risk our lives for each other, and we would die for each other. That is what defines us. Andhrimnir, the cook of Valhalla, cooked every supper in the same kettle, Eldhrimnir, with its magical powers. The boar, Sæhrímnir, was beyond special. Every night Andhrimnir would cook and prepare him, and yet he would be restored and returned to life. The mead, however, was prepared from Heidrun, a goat, and is also prepared by Andhrimnir. Andhrimnir was by far the strangest man here. One must never upset nor disturb the cook, especially when he is preparing any of his fine meals. To put Andhrimnir in a bad mood was to put every person in Asgard in a bad mood, well at least those dining with us in Valhalla, and that is not, by any means, a wise idea. When the cook is mad, everyone can easily get angry. He unifies us, and it is at dinner that we truly come together. Unlike other nights, I did not join in on the festivities. Normally, we would talk of our spars, constructively criticize each others fighting techniques, and offer helpful hints and tips when we could. I tried to be overly analytical sometimes, if only to encourage greater performance. We needed to be at the top of our physical abilities to fight the best we possibly can. We will lose, and I know that, but by gods we will take as many of them to Hel with us as we can. I listened in as the men around me laughed and joked, bragged and lied. They had their fun while they can, and that’s fine. Let them have it while they can; it is only for so long until our bloody demise, they deserve it. Breaking away from the chatter, I glanced up at the tables where the gods sat. Odin, with Frigg at his right, and valkyries surrounding him on every other side dined at the most magnificent table in Valhalla. Thor, with the colossal Mjollnir sitting next to his chair, near his right leg, dined with his golden haired wife Sif and his sons Magni and Modi. I saw Tyr and Vidar, Vali and the most beautiful goddess of them all, Freyja. Many a night I had gazed up at Freyja, longing with desire. She was of such beauty that people fought for her, died for her, tricked, bribed and stole for her. I've often noticed many staring at her, the other men and even some of the gods. Around her neck she word Brisingamen, a fabled necklace that was almost equal to her beauty. Brisingamen had been stolen a few times, in an effort to try and win Freyja over… Sad really, but to some it seemed that her beauty was so great they had to have her, at all costs. To sit amidst them, everyday, it was an honor. The gods before us had done some of the most marvelous things ever, for instance, Thor had competed against Old Age herself and managed to bring her to a knee before he fell. Thor had also lifted the Midgard Serpent, known as Jormungandr, almost into the sky. He also had a quick temper about him, and was known to attack on a whim. Just recently he had kicked a dwarf into Baldr’s funeral pyre for running in front of him. Thor also had a bit of a prejudice against giants, but knowing the way our deaths would be dealt, it’s easy to see why. It was unfathomable to sit next to these men and women every day, it would be a shame when they were gone. I smiled up at Odin, and Baldr came to my mind, that day when he had offered his wisdom and guidance to me. We all missed him, and most mourned for him daily. I felt sorry for Odin, losing one of his sons, his most beloved son at that, at the hands of Loki. To my never ending surprise, Odin stared back through his only remaining eye, for the other he had given to Mimir and his well in exchange, so that he might have all the knowledge and wisdom of the world, and let loose a small grin. 2019 words. This is the last edited version of Chapter I, hoping to have Chapter II done by 10 or so tonight.
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Posted: Thu Nov 02, 2006 6:17 pm
Chapter II That smile pierced my brain. All through dinner and the trip back to my quarters, it was all I could think about. Odin, the All Father, who is more heroic, powerful, and all knowing, actually acknowledged me. I’m just an Einharjar, and he is the leader of all the Gods-all the Æsir-and yet he could bring himself to notice my face in a crowd of nearly half a million. It lit a fire in my soul and I was now ready to fight. I would kill Fenris, that evil and voracious wolf, myself if need be. I glanced up at the sky, and for once, I was comforted by the stars. Thos magnificent celestial bodies who stared back at me. Staring into the sky, I saw Mani in his chariot, barely escaping the gluttonous Hati, who will soon devour the moon. It truly was a shame, but we all had our duties. We will fight, we will die, but we will do this honorably, valiantly, until our blood rains from Asgard. We would dine with Hel in Niflheim, the land of the ice and cold, the land of the dead. That is what it would take, but we would be vigilant. Silently, I thanked Mani for his courage, and finished my walk home. I rushed to the bodies and screamed in anguish. I wanted to scream until my vocal chords snapped and blood gratefully filled my throat. “What should I do?” my head bellowed at me. I lifted her head and pulled her to my chest, now down on both knees. I threw my head back and with tears falling down my face, howling again.I took one last look at the moon and smiled. Opening the wooden door, I retreated into the darkness of my quarters. Mani’s light painted the walls, coloring the small two roomed shell. The ethereal ambience from the moons light sombered the dreary residence. Asgard was a somber place now, though it had never been all that happy of a place, it was worse now. When everyday and any day could be your last, it didn’t take long to wear down whatever happiness you could hope to find. When you’ve lost all that you’ve loved, and you’re only fighting because you know that it is right, that you’ve got to defeat evil, it’s easy to loose hope. Somehow though, we have managed to persevere. I shied out of my tunic and chain mail, laying them on a small wooden table. The bed – if you could call it that – was a bit small, but having no company or need to share it suited me fine. I laid down and closed my eyes, trying to drift into sleep. All I could think about was my family. My forlorn family… Getting up from her, reluctantly, I checked on the boys. Veseti was in his 19th winter, Vasad was in his 17th, to bring them both down, when I had trained them to skillfully fight with sword and shield, would take either many men or great stealth.
I looked up the hall from where my wife lay butchered, and my vision blurred. I stumbled, and had to catch myself from falling on the table. I could see blood and a limp arm lying in the hall. I started my way up the hall, but had to stop. I could not bear to see either of my sons lying dead. I had to see if they were alive though, and as I looked through the doorway I could tell that no heart was beating in their chests. I dropped to my knees again and cursed the gods. “WHY HAVE YOU FORSAKEN ME?!” I went back to my wife, and it wasn’t until then that I noticed the bloody footprints. It was the only lead to where my family’s slaughterer could be found. The prints led out the back door, which was almost never used. I raced out the door, staring at the ground hoping like Hel that I wouldn’t lose track of the blood. Sadly, the tracks disappeared in the ankle deep snow. It didn’t matter though; I didn’t need the tracks to find that bloody b*****d. I looked up, and in the falling snow I saw him standing in front of me.I woke with a start, drenched in sweat. My heart was racing like one does when engulfed with rage. I cried a bit, the dreams always seemed so real, and nothing I could do could prevent the dreams or the rage and hatred that followed it. No matter what I tried, it wouldn’t fade, the vivid dreams of my one true horror. To this day, I hold myself responsible for their demise, and no matter how many times my friends try to convince me otherwise, I can’t bring myself to let the feelings go. Maybe it was time… NO, I couldn’t handle the loss of the only thing I had left. I didn’t have so much as a portrait to remember them, though I did have the band I gave her, it was something at least. I had the necklaces their mom had made for them which were each a half of a circular shaped emblem. The emblem was a dragon and it stood for the bravery and courage we lived our lives by. I fastened the two together and placed them on a single strand, and I never took it off. It glistened with sweat, and in the moonlight… wait, where was the moonlight? I heard a knock on the door, and rose quickly. I threw on my clothes; the tunic and chain mail fitting tightly over my chest. I slipped on the leather boots lined with fur, like my gloves and coat, and tied them tight. I stumbled into the main room, and slowly turned the knob. The news I heard when that door opened was the worst I had heard in years. Skoll, the brother of Hati, the other wolf who chased one of the celestial bodies, was closing in on Sol and in a matter of moments she was doomed. The Einharjar stood as one, 432,000 men staring at the sky. Every single one of us, all of the men who would defend this land, stood in the surrounding valleys with their necks craned, leaning back slightly just so they could get a better view. We gaped in horror as Skoll closed in on her. We could see the panic in her eyes, the fear and abhorrence as the wolf’s gaping jaws closed in… I could feel her pain and despair as if it were tangible. It took me back to that one day, two years ago. I stared in disbelief, they had said that morality would disappear, but I did not think we as a human nation could be this crestfallen. The b*****d standing before me was no stranger, he was my damned brother, and he was covered in the blood of my family…Even her horses Arvak and Alsvid, the noble steeds, were trembling with trepidation. The jaws began to eclipse the entire chariot, and the consternation and distress spread through the men, all of them. Four hundred and thirty-two thousand men stood trembling as the scene played before our eyes. She was helpless, and even with all of our combined power we couldn’t do anything. I could hear the shouts, the anguish, the discontent was tangible and yet we could only stare on. She screamed, oh how she screamed, and it was an unfathomable horror. I unsheathed my sword and screamed out in vain, “WHY? How could you do this to me?!” He turned slowly, an about face completely military style. His head was bowed, and a sick smile crept across his face, and I wasn’t prepared for what he was about to say.I gawked with the rest of us Einharjar as the jaws moved further into the jaws of the beast. A few in the crowd roared in rage, their voices cracking after sustaining some of the longest battle cries I’d ever heard. Others shouted their pledges to slay those foul beasts. I wondered how Mani was faring, he wasn’t in sight now, but who knows if he was even alive now, he could very well be dead already. It was a heart wrenching thought, but it was one I had to contemplate. If he couldn’t survive, then we were surely doomed. These were the final signs, Fimbulwinter was almost over, and if Sol and Mani were devoured, Ragnarok would be upon us in a matter of days, if not hours. I burned with anger, Odin had smiled at me, and since then I had told myself I was ready to fight. Now would be the greatest time to prove my heroic achievements, and yet I was unable to so much as lift my sword to help. She screamed over and over again, and each note pierced our ears as much as it pierced our hearts. He raised his head and grinned, the sickest, most evil grin I had ever witnessed. It sickened me, and I could only think of what else he might have been done to my loves. This b*****d was my brother and yet I could not decide what to do. Part of me wanted to slaughter the demon, the archfiend, rogue, villain, hellion… any of these words could replace the person standing in front of me, the man I once knew was gone, this person was but a shell of the man, a fiend who had possessed my long lost sibling.Before now, men had been too masculine to weep in front of others; it was something reserved for only the most intimate occasions, alone in the solitude that we longed for. Now, the Einharjar wept openly, no longer ashamed of the tears they had suppressed until they were safe and secure away from the sight of anyone else. I stared in amazement, no longer able to shout or cry, nothing I could do was worthwhile. Finally, when we thought we couldn’t take it anymore, Arvak and Alsvid began to pull out of the jaws. Maybe this was just a close call, a preview of what would come. This was but a grotesque and surrealistic occurrence, it would be worse when it actually happened. Bloody, sadistic, macabre and morose- that was how it would be. With a sigh of relief, we began to disperse, satisfied with another day’s living. But a quick and frantic burst of movement caught our eye, and as one we turned to witness the horror one last time. His rant began with the rise of the Sons of Muspell, and ended with his own personal anguish. It was the stuff of bad stories, the ones you would sit around a fire with road weary travelers and make up as you go along. As he ended, several of his friends, who I had known since we were young kids, began to enclose around me. I drew my sword, and prepared for the fight of my life, a vengeful chance to return the favor that these heartless bastards had bestowed upon me. They would all pay, they would all die.In the last few seconds, Arvak and Alsvid had panicked, stumbling into each other and losing their balance. They had, for one fleeting second, interlocked legs during mid stride. It appeared to happen surreally; first the horses stumbled, their heads flinging wildly. Then, they began to fall, and they neighed harsh and frantically. It was almost unbearable to watch, but we had to, it was as if Hel herself held our heads, fixed in that one position, not even daring to let our eyes wander. Skoll closed in and the very light from their manes, the light that illuminated our entire world, was fading away. With one last nightmarish scream, one that would last with us forever, Sol and her divine beauty disappeared into the wolf’s jaws, never to light our lives again. And into the darkness we went.
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Posted: Sat Nov 04, 2006 9:57 am
Chapter III And just when we thought things couldn’t possibly get worse, of course, they did. Our world was devoid of light, the wolves having devoured both of the major celestial bodies, the moon and the sun-Mani and Sol. Mani’s demise was no cleaner or less brutal than Sol’s, but he never screamed. He knew his fate, and he fought like hell to survive, but when his time came, he bowed his head, and said his goodbyes. Well said isn’t quite the word, he bellowed his last farewells, “WITH MY LAST BREATH, YOU WILL RUE THE DAY!” While these weren’t exactly the best words, I suppose with a massive wolf that has been chasing you since the day you were placed in the sky and forced to race against fate itself, there wasn’t exactly time to formulate a great last line. We nodded grimly as the wolf closed in, and we swore that both Hati and Skoll would pay… It wasn’t long after that the stars themselves, those beauties that had both tormented and later pleased me, disappeared. I’ve no idea what happened to them, but all the world was now devoid of natural light. We lit fires, and prepared for war in relative darkness. The gods were more introspected than I ever remembered seeing them, and it was sickening to think about. Our hope was being tested, and we knew it, but sometimes it was just so damn difficult to remain ever vigilant. No one voiced a complaint, but all of the Einharjar felt the same way. Suddenly there came a rumbling, as if all of Yggdrasil had been pick up and violently swung about. Few of us managed to retain our seats, but most hit the deck. Thor brimming with anger stood up slowly, gripping Mjollnir with a clenched fist, but Odin shook his head no and bid him to sit. The time would come, but it was not now. We didn’t need to ask what had happened, we all knew, the trees and mountains had fallen. Fetters had been broken, and the two creatures we all wished to remain locked up forever were now loose to wreak havoc on the worlds. Loki and Fenris, vile father and son, were bound as punishment, one for murder and one for the potential to kill. Now, as prophecy foretold, the world began to tear itself apart, and one could only wonder if the Yggdrasil tree, a beautiful ash, had also fallen. If every other tree and mountain, why not the one that supported the very world? Then, almost as if a veil had been lifted from over our eyes and heads, as one all four hundred and thirty-two thousand men realized what else had been set free. Naglfar, a ship made out of the nails of dead men and women, would let loose its moorings and set sail from Jotunheim shortly. This is why we trim the nails of the dead, so that they might not add to the building of this ship, which all mankind did not wish to see built. Captained by the giant Hrym, this monstrous ship would carry the frost and fire giants to Midgard, from Midgard they would march and decimate everything they saw. Under Surt’s command they would march across Bifrost and gather on the plain Vigrid, which stretched one hundred and twenty leagues in every direction. And at once, the roosters, the gold, the red, and the rust colored one all at once crowed, and it was then official; Ragnarok had begun. Eggther sat, strumming his harp, no longer smiling grimly as he was accustomed to, but now, in tears as he heard Fjalar, the red rooster let loose its cry. Eggther was the watchman for the Giants, and he was deeply saddened at these events. He was a bard, a peaceful musician, and unlike most of the other giants, he was not as hot blooded or ready to kill as everyone else. Likewise, at the Bifrost Bridge, Heimdall, the never sleeping watchmen of the gods, snatched up his horn Giallar and let loose a mighty blast. The golden rooster, Gullinkambi, had crowed but minutes earlier, and Heimdall had to pause, as if in disbelief. When he realized the rooster could not have been mistaken, he blew his horn, and likewise, was devastated. It was in that moment, that split second of time when they fulfilled their duties with sorrow in their hearts that they seemed to be as one - brothers in the cause. Though they would probably never meet, and probably never know the equal and tragic distress with which they carried out their obligations, their triste was equal and overwhelming. No one was looking forward to the coming war, with the exception of a few, Loki, Fenris, and Hel. It was there, with her, that the final rooster crowed. The rust red rooster crowed, and it was in that time that Hel began to gather her undead army. Soon she would raise the dead themselves to fight, as the Gods had their Einharjar, Hel had her dead. Comparably, their numbers were close; the Einharjar making up a slightly larger portion, but then again, the Gods didn’t have the Giants to back them. Now, with the three roosters crowing, and Eggther and Heimdall filling out their duties, other creatures in the worlds began to muster. The light and dark elves, ogres, dwarves, and all other creatures readied for the battle. It wasn’t even; the light and dark elves would help both sides, on an individual basis and choice. No whole nation sided with either, so it was hard to tell how even or uneven the numbers and division was. The ogres were mostly going to side with the Sons of Muspell, and the dwarves would side with the Gods… well except those that the gods, specifically Loki, had crossed, for they no longer trusted either side. The forces were gathering, and the war was not far off. In every part of every world, everyone readied for battle. In Niflheim, Hel mustered her forces, and it was aboard ship they went. Setting sail, they would cross worlds and join together with Loki soon enough. In fact, that was her first stop. The undead men she gathered, having long since been dead and destroyed, were not as able fighters as the Einharjar. Their bodies ached with every conceivable pain, for they had not been training these long years. Their bodies were decaying, for she picked the cruelest and most evil hearted men. Alas, Hel had run out and been forced to take some of those less willing to fight against the gods, but she need not worry, their souls were hers, and they were not going anywhere. It wasn’t until now, that we truly felt the pressure of the situation, the direness of it. Every creature that had invaded our nightmares as kids, those hateful, blood thirsty demons who we had always secretly wished were fairytale monsters were unleashed and set loose upon every and all worlds. Who knows the destruction they could and would do? Down in Midgard, Jormungandr stormed the beach, his massive body crushing everything underneath him. His tail flashed back and forth like a whip, decimating everything in his path. Crack! The Midgard Serpent’s tail snapped into a building, leveling it with a single swing. His fangs dripped his deadly poison, and purple haze began to cloud all of Midgard. Entire villages were flattened in seconds, and as he moved on from place to place, not a thing was left alive. His wrath seemed unparalleled, until Fenris joined the game. Fenris, who had been bound by the fetter Gleipnir, had been able to break every restraint placed on him. They had then made Gleipnir, in hopes that its magical power would be able to hold him. He wouldn’t be fooled, and as a guarantee he wouldn’t be deceived he demanded that an arm was placed in his mouth. If he was in fact tricked, he would bite it off. At first no one was willing, but Tyr came forward and placed his arm in the wolf’s mouth. Tyr has missed his arm ever since, now the one armed god of war. Fenris’s jaws are so large, that he can open the bottom of his mouth to the ground, and the top to the sky. He then devours everything in his sight. This was exactly what he was doing at this very moment. These three disgraces – Jormungandr, Hel, and Fenris – are all plagues from the loins of Loki, his gift unto us. Loki had never been so happy to be free, as soon as his restraints were loose; he sat up and ripped the snake, which had dripped poison on his face for so many years, in half. He glanced over at his loving wife, Sigyn, who had sat by his side for the entire time. She had held the bowl over his face, catching the poison, but now no longer having to sit her protecting him was ready for their vengeance. They both knew that the prophecy foretold Loki’s daughter would pick them up in her ship, and they would sail on until they gathered forces with Surt’s army. Loki and Sigyn sat idly waiting for a vessel to sail into their view. It wasn’t long before Jormungandr – the Midgard Serpent – and Fenris to join together. They traveled as one, destroying everything equally. Jormungandr would fight Thor, who once tried to kill the Midgard Serpent but failed because of the cowardice of a giant he happened to be accompanied by at the time. Fenris was after Odin, who having been betrayed and bound, was ready for his revenge. Back in Asgard, the Einharjar listened as accounts of these two’s obliteration swept in. Survivors, who had managed to cross Bifrost in time, gathered in Valhalla and told tales of their woe. Between them, they had attacked Alfheim – the home of the elves – Midgard; several of the other worlds, and were now on their way to Asgard. Based on these survivor’s tales, they would soon gather with Hel’s army and trek the final stint of this malignant and devastating journey. I sat, horrified by the power that these two seemingly possessed. The stories grew worse and worse, and finally I had to leave, no longer able to listen to more. I was glad that it was not I who had to face these creatures, yet saddened because of how the duals would end. Not many were going to be walking away from this, the survivors had escaped them once, and they wouldn’t be so lucky next time. We had already dined, and I retreated to my quarters for what may have been the last time ever. Who knows when I would return? Maybe never, and I wanted every second I could have to reminisce and remember the great times with my family. I cried, I drank, and I remembered. Odin himself designated several of the Einharjar and two valkyries – Mist and Svava – to equip the survivors with whatever armaments they desired. As they were of many races; elf, dwarf, and human, they all had a bit of a choice to what they could use. The women were asked to help serve meals, and were taught basic first aid so that they might be of use in healing or tending to those who were significantly injured in battle. If they could stop the bleeding in a wound, or put a splint on a broken bone, the men might be able to fight just a tad longer, and in reality that was all they needed. None of us would survive, but if we could prolong their lives, we might be able to pull ahead. Wishful thinking, but everyone did as they were told. No one questioned the All Father. Yet deep in the realm of Muspellheim, Surt’s army began to stir, and even in the last strides of Fimbulwinter, the heat grew unbearable. In that moment, the winter of winters was over, and now came the reign – the reign of fire.
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Posted: Sun Nov 05, 2006 3:35 pm
Chapter IV Surt, the fire giant in command of the majority of the army that was about to lay waste to all of Yggdrasil, the world tree. For all the years of bad blood between the giants and man, ever since Ymir was slain by Odin and his brothers – Vili and Ve – their hatred has grown exponentially. Like the fire that consumes them, so does their hatred. They spurn us like no other, and to a certain extent it is not without reason. It is because of this hate that they so readily gather arms against us. I pity them, but that will not stay my sword. Surt gazed out among his land, for he was in command and thus the land appeared to be his. He watched as his giants gathered in front of him. They stared up at him on his black throne of jutting obsidian stone. Like spires, they lined every edge of his chair, painting it with malignancy. He relaxed, placing his hands on both of the arm rests and crossing his right leg over the left, almost at a ninety degree angle. He looked out amongst his giants, and grinned. His vengeance for all the years of persecution his people have had to suffer was nigh at hand. The worlds were his for the taking, and the time was now. “BRETHREN, Lend me your ears!” He bellowed, standing up slowly, pushing himself up with his hands grasping the edge of the arm rests. Standing fully erect, he continued, “For many years, we have suffered. Our ancestor was slaughtered for them, the very ones who hate and despise us today. They wish to pity us, as if we are mindless drones! The way I see it, it is they who are drones, mindlessly conforming to whatever that old man wants. If it weren’t for Idunn’s apples, they would die of old age! That is how mighty they are. They are nothing special, unlike us. Look at what has been accomplished because of the giants. Their worlds have been destroyed, and it is OURS! Let us rise to the call, and take back what rightfully belongs to us!” With thunderous applause, the giants cheered as one. They raised their weapons – swords, maces, axes, and a few archers, less common than in other races – and roared their approval. With hate gleaming from their cold black eyes, the fire giants, the Sons of Muspellheim, grew crazy with anticipation, and began their festivities. They danced their tribal dances, and the fires rose high into the night. For now, they were going to revel in anticipation, tomorrow the fire giants would march to war. Surt had one last thing to say for the evening, and breaking up their enjoyment for but a moment he said, “REJOICE TONIGHT,” then, in nearly a whisper, “For come tomorrow, we march to Bifrost AND BURN IT TO THE GROUND!” They roared one last time, those b*****d sons of Muspell, and he sank back into his throne. Gazing out amongst his giants, he grinned like the demon he was, and thought over his impending war. All the signs were right, the sun and moon had been devoured by Skoll and Hati respectively. The trees and mountains had fallen as prophesized, as well as the monstrosities let looks – Jormungandr, Hel, Hrym, Loki, and Fenris. Everything was going to according to prophecy; it is going as he had so hoped it would. The fire giants would rule the world that was rightfully ours, after all the first two creatures were Ymir, the giant from which the world was made, and the cow that fed him and quenched his thirst – Audhumla. It is from Ymir, known as Augelmir to the giants, whom all frost giants descended from. Of course, the fire and frost giants were very different, but they were still kin. The fire giants, the sons of Muspell, would soon join forces with their long lost kinsmen, and take back the world. Odin and his brothers, Vili and Ve, killed Ymir and made the world from him. His flesh made the world, his blood made all the lakes and seas. The placed the seas all around the world, so fastening it into place. His skull made the sky, and the brothers raised it into the sky, placing a dwarf under each of the four corners. They named these dwarves East, North, South, and West. From his brains, they made all of the clouds. In making the Earth, they gave coastal lands to giants for them to live on. In the center, more inland, they fashioned a fortress and for the wall they used Ymir’s brows. They needed this wall to protect from the hostility of the giants, for when the giant Ymir was slain, the flood from his blood drowned most of the giants. A single household survived, and the new race of frost giants emerged from them. The fire giants remained in Muspellheim to this day. Sinmore, the wife of Surt, appeared by his side, and laid her hands on his right arm. He glanced up at her and smiled, staring back at his giants below him shortly thereafter. She passed behind him, and took a seat on his left side. Crossing her legs, she grinned just as evil and glanced up to her right as one more joined them. His name was Fornjot; the incarnation of fire, and his son Logi appeared by his side. Both were incarnations of fire. Fornjot was old now and he would not fight as heavily as his brethren, but he was wise in his years. Logi, hot headed and defiant, was much younger and more readily able to fight. As wildfire, he could attack swiftly and wreak havoc on all in his path. Together, these three, Surt, Sinmore, and Fornjot, ruled all of Muspellheim. Surt was supreme commander – the King of Muspell; the other two were his informers. Sinmore, being more favorable with the women, told him all and she was Queen of the Muspell. Fornjot, being old and significantly wise, offered his ancient and learned wisdom from all of the ages. Together, these three sat in their thrones, with Surt’s standing larger and more wickedly magnificent than the others. Sinmore’s, being Queen, was very dreadful, but not as large as Surt’s. Only just smaller, Fornjot’s throne was equally malignant. Logi, being too hot headed to be reasoned with most of the time, was not allowed a throne just yet. If he proved himself on the battlefield, and held all commands from Surt in the war against Asgard, then he would have his throne. He was as of now, the official bodyguard of Surt. A scuffle broke out amidst the giants below them. Looking over the small cliff, Surt could see two giants were fighting over the same giantess. He rose from his throne, and stepped to the edge of the precipice. “Be still damn it! Or I will force your lips silent for eternity. Speak again and Hel shall have your souls!” Surt commanded in the deep voice that was characteristic of him. The giants looked at each other, and one retreated into the crowd. The other turned, muttered, and turned back to the giantess. That was without a doubt the worst mistake in his life. FLASH! Surt had stepped off the precipice, landed with one knee bent, and raced to behind the giant. He stepped to the side, grabbed him by the throat, and lifted him as high as his arm could stretch. Only Logi could have moved faster than he did. Had anyone blinked they would have missed it, yet no one dared to blink. They all knew better. Surt’s charcoal black eyes gleamed with hatred, and it was but a matter of seconds before he decided the giant’s fate. “Never disrespect me.” Surt, King of the giants whispered, and then squeezed. Any of the person’s grip probably could not have crushed the throat as he did. With his clutch, he crushed the giant’s throat in a second. The giant’s windpipe was decimated, and he gripped his larynx and clawed at it until his nails ripped at the skin and blood poured from the severed wound. “Does anyone else seek to speak as this man do so now, or hold your tongues permanently?” Surt asked of his men, and those few women. Of course, no one dared to speak a word. He dropped the giant, and glanced at the blood running down his arm. It painted his gauntlet crimson, and his already darken arm, well it blended in with his natural colors. Surt retreated to his throne, and prepared for a ritual. Rituals were near forgotten, and though not necessarily magic. Surt didn’t believe the rituals would magically make all things better, what he did believe was that it was a great form of meditation. Ritualistically, he cleared his mind for the trials ahead. "Fall fires burning ‘neath black twisted boughs sacrifice, to above smoke swirling quickly towards misting clouds offering, of this blood.” Surt whispered quietly to himself, turning inward to think of the coming battles. Hundreds of thousand, maybe even so much as a million men would die. This mattered not to him, for he would burn the world down and from it he would build his empire. Surt would command the world as The Black God of the worlds. His despair was non-existent; previously he had fought against the inevitable fate as told from the Sybil’s Prophecy. His fate was such that as he won Ragnarok, the battle at Vigrid, he would die from his very own fires that purged the world of men and god alike. He would not have that; he would survive his fire and reign as The Black God. Nothing could stop him, especially since he wielded Laevateinn. Freyr’s legendary sword now belonged to him, the Sword of Revenge, and he would wield it against any and everyone. Nothing and no one was safe. Freyr would fall first, then anyone else who dared to step in his way. Surt stood up from his throne for one last time that evening. The fires burned below him, and their fire red and orange hues painted the sky. “Sons and Daughters of Muspell, lend me your ears but one last time. We’ve had our fun for this night, sleep well for we shall have to awaken early. Tomorrow we march to WAR!” Surt roared at the top of his deep voice. The war cry carried throughout the land below. The giants – also known as the Jotun – cried just as loudly. They raised their weapons for a final time that night, and bellowed all sorts of hellish battle cries. “Tonight we have dined in the fiery Muspellheim, but in just days, WE WILL DINE IN HEAVEN!” Surt finished with this, and turned away. Fornjot was old and not accustomed to staying out late with the younger generations. Logi had long since disappeared into the crowd, no doubt causing many a disturbance in the relatively peaceful festivities of tonight’s engagements. Sooner or later he would wreak more havoc than he did good, and Surt was sure of that. Until then, Surt had use for his amazing speed and prowess. He moved as fast as was characteristic of fire, devouring everything in its burning path. It was this speed Surt hoped to utilize to wipe out the Einharjar, who certainly seemed to be a problem. With Sinmore at his side he retreated to his quarters and smiled. If nights like tonight were to be the first of many, he may very well have a soon shortly. Only time would tell, and Surt would be sure it would. Maybe as he dined in Valhalla within this upcoming fortnight, he would know whether or not to expect an heir. Maybe he would have a son to call Prince; or a daughter, Princess. The giants danced into the evening and as the pyres that had burned high into the night burned out, their spirits never died down. (Total Word Count - 8064, I'm a bit behind but tomorrow's chapter shall catch me up, I hope)
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Posted: Sun Nov 05, 2006 9:45 pm
Chapter V I sharpened my blade, Laevatinir, and awaited the impending doom. Every hour more and more people arrived. We fitted them with armor and weapons and awaited the war. I ran my coarse fingers across the sharp silver blade and thought back to the day… the day they died. I turned in a circle as men surrounded me on every side. I knew them all, for they were all my brother’s friends. We had all known each other for a while, and yet here we were, ready to kill. My brother would die, of that I was sure. I would make him pay for what he had done. He would die, and may his soul rot in Niflheim for that. I tightened my grip on the hilt of my sword; Laevatinir would not fail me now. At once they swarmed, and I turned to parry each blow. Barely did I manage to escape them all. I pivoted and parried, twisting and turning like a lithe serpent. I ducked under one critical swing aimed straight at my face, and spinning, I slung my sword across his chest. This guy wasn’t going anywhere. Narrowly missing another swing, I kicked him in the chest and then drove my sword into the man I had previously cut. Drawing the sword out, I turned again, and in one fluid motion I almost landed a killing blow on the guy I had just kicked. Too bad he was a good fighter, he parried it easily. They weren’t going to go down easily. They did at least finally decide that because of our history, they would fight fair. One at a time, but with nine full grown brutes remaining, I couldn’t see this ending well. I gritted my teeth and wiped my sword on the dead man’s shirt sleeve. I nodded for the first man to come on. He came fast, and he came swinging. The man was about six feet tall, red hair, dark eyes. He wore a brown tunic, and some dark pants, I couldn’t really tell in the fading light. Unlike the others, he swung an axe. This was going to be … fun. See, an axe is slow, so I could dodge his attacks easily. With one hand on Laevatinir, it allowed me to move more easily, but with two hands I could attack more powerfully and block his heavy hits. His first swing was over the head, straight down. Had I not moved, he would have split me in two like lumber, like fire wood. That is something I could not have, for until this man was dead, and his friends with him, I couldn’t take my revenge. I had dodged to the left, and continuing with my spinning tactics, I pirouetted in a clockwise direction and slashed him across his left arm with my sword. Lucky for me, he was slow; unluckily for him, his now severed arm lay bleeding on the snowy ground. Gripped in its hand was the axe, for it was far too large to wield with but one arm. He picked up his arm, and stumbled off the field. I began to grow with anticipation; there are two down, a few left to go. The next one closed in and he wasn’t much smarter than the previous two. He swung his ball and chain, and I narrowly avoided having a crushed skull. This time gripping my sword Laevatinir, I sliced the brute standing before me from the right side of his neck to his left bicep. I barely nicked the throat, but not sufficient to drop him; however, he did clutch his throat with both hands, dropping the mace. Feeling creative, I sheathed my sword quickly, snatched up his ball and chain, and then with a very forceful swing I drove it into his skull, crushing it in one blow. The spikes from the black metal ball poked through just about every facet of his head, protruding from the parts that hadn’t been demolished. One by one they came, and one by one they fell. I sliced, slashed, struck, impaled, stabbed, and cut everyone that got in my way. I managed to get away with barely any scrapes or scratches. I was covered in blood from head to toe, and it speckled across my face. I didn’t want to wipe it off, despite how this sounds, it was the only thing keeping me sane. It was the satisfaction that no matter what, these bastards would pay. I grinned with malevolence and ran after the last remaining people. I had but two people left between me and vengeance, and our dance would be a sweet one. I slid on the ground, using the snow as lubrication to help me slide across. I slung my sword into the knee of the man on my left, jumping to my feet. As he fell, I spun, swinging my sword with all the momentum and force I could. His head flew clean off, and the blood splattered on to the man standing next to him. The man backed up horrified, and paused for a moment. Bastards like him, so corrupted by evil that not even the beheading of their friend would stay their blind hatred. He drew his sword, and then surprised me. Unlike the others, he moved swift; his hand steady and sure. This guy would take more to finish. He attacked again and again, and I was tired after all the other people I had slain in the last few duels. It was tough, my body being worn down and beaten, but I fought on. Time and time again, dodging and parrying, I fought on. The opportunity presented itself in the form of a rock. In the snow, it was much harder to mind one’s surroundings, and because of this my assailant and would be killer stumbled on a stone. It was in this brief pause, this moment of rest from him that I seized my chance and plunged Laevatinir into his chest in a diving lunge. He went down hard, and I landed on top of him, blood pouring out of him and onto me. Slowly rising to my feet, what was once speckled and spattered blood was now drenched in crimson. I ran one hand through my hair, pushing it back and out of my face. I could feel it sticking and dampening my hair, but it did not matter in that moment. Nothing was stopping me now, and nothing would. Before night rained down and the stars lit up the sky, my brother would belong to Hel. I wiped the blade clean, trying to keep it as sharp as possible, and dried blood seems to have quite the opposite effect. I stumbled a bit, slightly hunched over. I leaned back and roared, filled with hate and grief. With adrenaline rushing through my veins, I raced after the last living figure on this horrific blood filled battlefield. I raised my sword and yelled my last heroic war cry… I glanced up from the sword and stared into the sky. With the sun, moon, and stars gone, the sky was colored with the glowing embers of the raging fires of Muspellheim. The pyres from their festivities were so great that it lit the skies in every world now that the celestial bodies are gone. It was nice having light again, but it was a constant reminder that they were moving closer. They would start their marching soon, and the only thing we could do was sit and wait. Some of us were training, but I was ready. No amount of last minute training could prepare me for what was about to happen. We’d readied our bodies for the last few years for this time. My thoughts wandered as I polished my boots, trying to keep my mind off anything important by keeping myself busy with mindless repetitive tasks. Needless to say, it didn’t work. I shouted for the last time, and dove at the slaughterer of families, destroyer or lives. He dodged to the side, and produced a long wicked black whip. Before I could turn back to face him, he snapped the whip against my back and I cried out in pain and anguish. It was all that I could do not to drop to my knees and surrender. The pain was unrivaled by anything else that had physically ever happened to me, but my emotional pain was worse. It was that pain that drove me on, and because of it I had to finish this mess. I turned and was struck again, this time across the face. The blood dripped from my face from the long gash under my right eye. It was this warm liquid that kept me going on. I raced forward, but another lashing threw me back. I fell on my back, raising myself with my left arm, and slowly rising to my feet. He lashed me again and again, but I rose every time. I would survive this, and I would bury him piece by piece. My family’s funeral pyre would burn high into the night, so bright that even the gods could not help but notice it. I gathered myself up one last time, aching from every gash and blood filled wound on my dying body. I might die in this, but by gods he was going with me. I stood, and with blood seemingly flowing from my eyes, as crimson tears, I stared him down. He raised his whip again, flinging it at me one last time, but it didn’t hit home. In the last second, I caught it in my hand, and yanked him forward. He was pulled off balance, and stumbled straight at me. I grabbed my blade up, having long since dropped it. In the last second before he was to tackle me, I thrust my sword into his chest, and fell backwards as the wait of his body landed on top of me. In his right hand was the whip, but in his left was the dagger he had killed my family with. The blade had pierced my chest, and combined with the previous wounds, I slowly sank into darkness. At first the gaping hole in my chest burned as if set aflame when he pulled out the blade, then – maybe from the snow or blood loss – I grew cold; so very cold. My hatred was fulfilled, my family avenged. Let Hel come take my soul, I need it not now. I’ll join my family and life on after this. It was in that darkness that I was first visited by the Valkyrie Randgrid. She assured me that they because of my valiant and heroic efforts I was assured a spot in Valhalla. I had wrongfully assumed that my family would be there as well. An assumption I haven’t lived down in the last few years. I let her take me by the hand, and she led me away from my mangled body. She took me to a place, a place beyond compare. Everything was so august, so beautiful that I temporarily forgot my hate and dread. I smiled, and believed everything was going to be alright. That was years ago, and thinking back I laughed. Of course she was going to trick me, she wanted me to agree, to go along with her, and I did. I let her take me from my family, as my brother had taken my family from me. Since then she had apologized, and we have talked many times. She was beautiful, but we couldn’t have had a relationship; her warrior spirit was as great as my own, and I would never be able to move on after my wife. Besides, I was but an Einharjar. And as I lay to sleep, the steady beat of marching feet, pounding drums and the occasional horn lulled me into a vivid nightmare of fevered laughs and morbid cries. I dreamed of death.
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Posted: Mon Nov 06, 2006 9:22 pm
Chapter VI I could not think about anything else. In fact it wasn’t until the Valkyrie knocked on my door that I pulled myself out of my self disillusionment and came back to the earthly world. I glanced up through the tears and sat Laevatinir to my side on the bed. I ran a hand through my hair and stepped across the threshold to open the door. Slowly I turned the knob and peeked outside. I saw her in all of her glorious battle armaments and smiled softly. She stepped in and pulled her helmet off. Setting it on the table, she glanced up at me through her long shiny blond hair and I could see that she was crying. In that heartfelt moment I was at a loss for words, and sank dumbfounded into the chair. Randgrid stood before me in all her marvelous beauty, and I couldn’t think of anything better to say then, “Randgrid… why are you here?” The tears came much more swiftly now, and she sat down on a stool, the only other seat in this room. With a heart throbbing of sadness and regret she whispered what she had come to tell me. “When I picked you out on that battlefield years ago, I knew it wasn’t right. Your family had just been taken from you, and yet, I did it anyways. I took you, when I could have just as easily left you to return to your family. Looking back now, I wish that is what I would have done. You fought so bravely, so valiantly and yet you fell. We needed fighters like you, those who were so courageous that they could stand face to face with the giants and never back down. I’m sorry…” I didn’t know what to say or think, just the warm salty drops of sadness running down my cheeks. I ran my hand through my hair one more time, holding my throbbing head in both hands. I put my hands over my face, too caught up in my thoughts to even attempt to think about anything else. With each waning second, I began to get a hold of myself. She sat and sobbed quietly; I didn’t even notice when she got up, walked over in front of me, and placed her hand on my head. She pulled me in to her, and I laid my head on her belly, wrapping my arms around her waist. It was in that moment, that a substantial truth came to me. Staring up at her, I could manage only a whisper, “It is ok…” Despite my grief of having been separated from my family, I had moved on without ever knowing it. That is what really had brought tears to my eyes, because I had moved on and felt bad because I thought I had wronged them. I still loved my wife and my boys, but I would probably never see them again. I couldn’t grieve for ever. With my eyes unwavering, my right arm slid up her back, the left arm sliding just a bit farther down than her waist. I tilted my head back and leaned up, anxiously awaiting a kiss that shouldn’t be. She met me half way, and when our lips touched for the first time, it was like a fire that had long since burned out and suddenly being rekindled. It was a salty kiss, from the tears that had spilled down our faces, some catching on our lips. I didn’t care; I lost myself in the passion. She was wearing a blue and white skirt, split on the sides for easier movement. The cut went high up her thigh, and revealed some of the most beautiful legs he had ever laid eyes upon. We kissed again, and again, until we were consumed with desire. She slid back her skirt as she climbed into my lap, wrapping her legs around me. I can honestly say that I had never been so eager for something so wrong. And then we lost control. I slid my hand up her back and slipped her blouse off. It wasn’t long before we were together in every possible way imaginable. I pressed both my hands to her shoulder blades and pulled her into me. I buried my face in her chest and grinned, tonight would be marvelous. I am a very strict gentleman, following all the codes of honor and respect. I would never dishonor a woman or myself by speaking of our relations, so you are not privy to know about this. I will let you know that it was beyond amazing, and never in my last few years here had I been so satisfied. Even in our society, some things were considered taboo, and this was definitely one of them. We didn’t care in those few hours of intense and exotic fulfilling passion. I realized how much I have always secretly wanted her. Ever since she had taken my hand and led me from the death that I was bound for, I had longed for her. No longer, she was mine, if only for the night. If we were destined to have but this one night, then damn it, I would make sure I had one memorable night. A night that would make me remember forever this moment of breathtaking, heart rending satisfaction. The time flew by so fast that the time when the sun traditionally would have risen was almost upon us. We lay in my bed and because of its small size; she lay on top of me. We hadn’t bothered to return our clothes, we lay nude. I wanted to return to what we had done all night, but my body was worn out, and we both had a long day ahead of us. Who knows when we would get another chance like this; who knew if after tonight we wouldn’t be punished for our actions? I wished I could suspend time so as to prolong this pleasure. I gazed into her perfect emerald green eyes until I was so lost and astray that it didn’t really matter. Those beautiful jade orbs which enraptured me so; oh how I wished that this would never end. Damn Surt. Damn Loki. Damn them all. I had to fight against fate itself, I had to survive and continue what may be the best thing to happen to me since I lost my life. What if I could find the Norns, if I could find them, maybe I could alter my fate? Skuld would be the one I had to face, and beg her to let me survive. I would do whatever it takes to ensure my survival. Skuld ruled over the future and each string was a person’s life line in their eternal loom. If I was to survive, I had to make damn sure my string was not cut to short. It was rumored that there were even more Norns then just the three everyone knew – Urd, Verdandi, and Skuld – it is said that those Norns would control the fates of everyone and seemed to be unique and individual. The Norn who had decided my life at the time of my very birth; she was the one I had to find. Both of them were crucial if I wished to endure. Maybe if I could convince them I needed to live then I could try and work things out with Randgrid. She was by far the most beautiful Valkyrie in my opinion, and every second spent in her presence was astounding. At first I felt bad because I had lost my wife. It’s been almost three years, and I couldn’t move on until tonight. It was her magnificent beauty and excessive affability that made me so readily wish to never leave her side. We could fight together, we could die together. She was as much of a warrior as I was, and it would be an honor to die together on the battlefield. I kissed her again and I cherished how her lips were so soft and supple. I ran my hands over her body, pausing at her chest for a moment. Her form was amazing, and I was engrossed by how much I could care for her. It was but a short time, and yet I felt like we had been connected forever. She reminded me so much of my late wife, Fenja. Physically they didn’t look the same, but spiritually and emotionally they were identical. I could easily see how I had fallen for this woman, this Valkyrie, this paradigm of magnificence. Something about her didn’t seem right, though it wasn’t a bad thing. We both had our secrets, and maybe one day we could share everything, but until then, we’d be fine. Together we could do anything, but for now we would certainly be fine. Every second I was slowly falling in love with her. Something seemed amiss. Tomorrow, if at all possible, I would consult the Norns about my fate, and then look into what troubles may lie unnoticed. We talked as we lay, of better times and better places. Asgard was a wonderful place, but without a doubt it was sad and somber. We laughed, joked, and kissed. Her laugh was more wonderful than even the songs of love sung only by the Sirens. I knew not of these creatures, but I had met a traveler once who said that the Siren was a beautiful maiden who lulled travelers into their own demise. If there ever was such a wonderful sound, the kind that Bards sang of, it was the sound of love. At times I wished I could have been a bard, to sit and play musical instruments until my fingers ached. Singing songs of love and heartache, I often felt my heart was torn in two, the side of me that wanted to be a poet and the side that wanted to be a warrior. It was this fervent duality that devastated my emotions. How is it one could long for a peaceful existence of love and happiness; then turn and want to drive your sword, in my case Laevatinir, straight into someone’s undeserving heart? I often wondered if I could be both. It was certainly an interesting idea that I tried to envision regularly. One day I would figure out how to be both. We lay in introspective silence for a while, thinking of everything that had happened in the last few hours. We tried to figure out our feelings for each other, if there was any. I knew how I felt, well so I thought. I longed for her, yet I figured it was but a feeble attempt at an ever fading sadness. We were star crossed, destined to fail. Hel, it was but a matter of days before our entire world’s impending doom and subsequently our deaths. How could something so good feel so wrong? I could not live like this, we had to survive. It was but all we could do. We must survive to ensure the love and happiness I had so recently received. I could not go back to living a loveless and triste life. I stared at the battle maiden on top of me; the heavy blanked falling just below her shoulders, and vowed a pledge. “I will not die, we will live on. I will fight to survive until there is not a breath left in my body. Of this I promise you, Randgrid.” I wanted to love her for as long as I could and then even longer. The cold whisper of my gut told me I was wrong, but oh how I longed to be right. (12,019 words. This is an idea I had, maybe trying to introduce a bit of romance and mystery here. )
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Posted: Tue Nov 07, 2006 6:37 am
read. adored. commented.
Though the sex scene was a liiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiite much for me,. You should mark that or something...
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Posted: Tue Nov 07, 2006 12:04 pm
KirbyVictorious read. adored. commented. Though the sex scene was a liiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiite much for me,. You should mark that or something... Thanks, will do.
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Posted: Tue Nov 07, 2006 2:11 pm
NOW he does it. *mutters*
Kidding. wink
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Posted: Tue Nov 07, 2006 3:37 pm
KirbyVictorious NOW he does it. *mutters* Kidding. wink lol my sex scene was actually closer to a no-sex sex scene... wasn't really any explicit action.
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Posted: Tue Nov 07, 2006 4:28 pm
you're joking, right...? I mean, it's not as bad as one of the books I've picked up by mistake ( The Notebook, *shuddershiver*) but for Catholic school-girl me...*makes a face* Well, whatever. Post more, huh?
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Posted: Tue Nov 07, 2006 5:07 pm
KirbyVictorious you're joking, right...? I mean, it's not as bad as one of the books I've picked up by mistake ( The Notebook, *shuddershiver*) but for Catholic school-girl me...*makes a face* Well, whatever. Post more, huh? I'm gonna finish Chapter VII then I'll post that up. Blah the only thing I talk about it nudyness. Well and breasts but that's about it.
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Posted: Tue Nov 07, 2006 7:58 pm
yes, but think about all the kids we have in this guild...isn't someone hereabouts only 11? Yeah...?
Yay, chapter....seven? twelve? I cannot read Roman Numerals.
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Posted: Tue Nov 07, 2006 8:00 pm
Chapter VII I rose from my bed, pulling the covers up on her so as not to expose her body to the cold. Gods, she was so beautiful; her golden blonde hair falling all about her. I touched her shoulder, and never wanted to leave. I stood and turned my back, I feared that even another second would prolong my suffering; any more than absolute necessary was masochistic at best. I threw on clothes in a rush, strapping on my boots. I fought myself from looking back over my shoulder to the Valkyrie that lay in my cot; the battle maiden who had ripped me from my death and subsequent return to my family. I was still torn between her and my previous life, and I knew not what to think. I placed the thought out of my mind and smiled at the wonderful night I had just spent with Randgrid. Sliding my sword back in its sheath and strapping it on my back, I ran a hand through my hair and opened the door. I turned back in time to see her sit up, the blanket falling to her waist. I grinned and stepped out, beginning the short trek to Valhalla. The world outside was dark, the light only from the fires we had built to brighten our area enough to see what we had to do. Because of this the sky was the most morbidly beautiful thing I had ever laid eyes upon. It was painted red and orange, with the obsidian plumage rising high into the vast emptiness above me. It saddened me, but it was masochistically aesthetically pleasing. I smiled as the august building, the magnificent hall, bloomed into sight. Passing through the front doors, which were so large they could be considered gates. Come time for that final battle, we would march through any of the massive doors, all four hundred and thirty two thousand of us. I glanced about until I noticed one of my few friends, Leif. He was a large man, standing well over six feet. He had long blonde hair that fell wildly about his shoulders. His eyes were cold piercing sapphires that seemed as though they could freeze a man if he glared wickedly enough. As I approached him, he rose and wrapped his mighty arms around me. He seemed to be as thick and muscled as a sturdy tree. It wasn’t uncommon for him to embrace his friends like this; he did it all the time. In the years since I fell on that winter field, we had become close. We trained together, and we grew in strength and cunning together. Had I trained with him like this before that fate filled day, I would never have fallen. That day I could take eight or nine men, today I could take two or three times as many men twice their size. I laughed heartily at his expense; he was equally clumsy as he was a brute. We fed, and I asked him something completely unexpected, “What do you know about the Norns?” At first he stared at me perplexed, and then I think he understood. He filled me in on all that he knew, and subsequently filled in a few wholes in my comprehension. He asked me why, but I only told him the bare minimum – I was going to attempt the heretofore impossible – I was going to change my fate. Then he did something totally previously inconceivable, “I want to help.” At first I declined, fought adamantly against any kind of involvement but with his oxen like strength came his equal and unflinching stubbornness. In the end, I could use his help. He was a fast thinker and a more than capable fighter, when it came down to it, without him it was almost suicide. With him, however, was just more like excessively dangerous. Besides, he said he wanted to change his own fate, according to him – “By Gods, if you’re going to get to survive this, so do I. You simply can not have all the fun and leave me in Niflheim with all those old stiffs.” At this we laughed, and laughed and laughed. I drank some of my mead, glancing up at the Gods where they sat. There came a sudden sound, a horn was being blown. At first we thought it signified that Surt’s army was upon us, but no, it was too soon. Then the gates flew open and there stood a sight for sore eyes. Freyr and the rest of the Vanir stood before us. Previously the two clans of Gods, the Vanir and the Æsir, had fought constantly, even going so far as to take hostages. Freyja stood and crossed the threshold to her husband Freyr. Other Vanir gods and goddesses who stood there included: Gerd, Skadi, Njord, Kvasir, Lytir, Hoenir who was actually an Æsir hostage, and Heimdall who wasn’t a Vanir but traveled with them to report on Surt’s movement before returning to the Bifrost Bridge and continue his watch. They took their seats amongst the Æsir. As the gods of Fertility, the Sea, and Prosperity, they seemed to be directly opposite of the Æsir who were gods of War. When Odin shook hands with Njord, the Einharjar cheered loudly. Amidst this chaos, I watched my Valkyrie lover, Randgrid slip in unnoticed. We smiled, and then turned back to the joviality. It was a warm feeling to see the gods reunited in Asgard. The Vanir, who reigned from Vanaheim, traveled a long way to be here. Together, we could fight Surt’s army, though I felt bad, Freyr would be the first god to fall. I looked over to Leif, and nodded. In this disorder, it would be the easiest to sneak away. If we waited any longer, it might be too risky. We rose, slipping through the other Einharjar who talked and joked with each other. They had risen to their feet to clap at first, then to chat. In fact, we were some of the few who hadn’t stood up. I slipped out one of the side doors and trekked back to my quarters. We would need supplies. I looked back and saw Leif was doing the same. Great minds think alike. Back at my small place, I gathered a few supplies – food, canteen for water, and various items that could be used for medical needs if necessary. I threw all of these in a cloth sack, brown, with a white drawstring. I was rushed, so I’m sure I forgot some things I might need. I had my sword, the bag of supplies, and I grabbed my bow and quiver. I didn’t know how much trouble we could expect, but I wasn’t going to take any chances. Leif was great with any melee weapon in his hands, but he was absolutely no good with a bow. His depth perception was off when he tried to use a bow. I strapped the bow and quiver to my back. Long ago I fixed a way to fit everything on my back without feeling cramped or uncomfortable. I opened the door and looked back over my shoulder, this trip I was going on… I may or may not return. I took one last look at my quarters, in these past few years I had grown attached to this place. I turned away and closed the door behind me. Standing just outside the door I took another glance at the sky, and then began walking. I stared at the ground, with Fimbulwinter over, most everything was damp from the melting snow. The ground was a collage of black, brown and green. The mud covered the bottom of my boots, and I sighed; that would be hard to clean off. I met up with Leif and together we traveled towards Bifrost. The Norns were said to reside in one of two places… Legends had it that either they lived near Bifrost Bridge, or that they resided near a well at the bottom of the Yggdrasil tree. We had to go to Bifrost first to get to either of these places, so that was our first stop. It was about a day’s trip, but we were two strapping men who could easily make it. Time flew, mainly because we didn’t have so much as a single celestial body to judge time by. We couldn’t use the sun, stars, moon, our shadows, or anything that we had traditionally used all our lives to determine an approximate time. Landmarks passed, and based off of our mental perception, we were soon near a stopping time. Traveling this far into the countryside, there were no fires or establishments. No buildings, camps, or villages. We stopped for what we thought was the night, and built a fire. Our eyes had adjusted to the darkness, and we made our fire from some wood that had managed to stay dry. I left to hunt something to eat, and it wasn’t long before I spotted a rabbit. The rabbit was either very brave, or very foolish. At night, this small creature had more predators than at any other time, and sadly for it, I was one of them. I notched an arrow, and aiming as closely to it as possible. The arrow flew and the rabbit fell. The fire popped and crackled as the logs burned down. As the flames rose, little orange sparks flew up and out of sight. There with myths that said these specks were actually tiny winged people. Supposedly if anyone could catch one before they disappeared or burned out, something marvelous would happen. We called them pyreflies, and had long since given up on catching them. Often, I had watched my sons when they were but wee little ones chase the pyreflies about. Leif and I watched as the pyreflies danced into the night, twirling and rotating. We watched as they pirouetted and we laughed, remembering our futile attempts when we were but kids. We sat and talked, reminiscing of our adventures in life. We talked of love, of life, of happiness and of sadness. We told jokes, we made fun of each other, and we laughed. Laughter was important to us, it kept us grounded and down to earth. When we laughed, we were reminded of our lives and how happy we once were. I lay back, placing my head on my folded coat. This fire would keep us warm through the night, so I could use my coat as a pillow. Laying back, I smiled and thought of the night I had with Randgrid. I thought for a long while before deciding to tell him. Leif and I had rarely kept any secrets in these last few years. “Leif, you’ll never guess what I did last night.” “What is it this time?” was all he cared to say. “Remember how I told you that I always wished Randgrid would come visit me one night, so we could talk and maybe…” “Yeah…” Then he caught on. He shot up, poised on one elbow. He stared at me in the dark and then said, “No…” I grinned sheepishly and said, “Yeah. She came by last night. We talked, she apologized for stealing me from my family. I don’t think I’ve cried that much in quite some time.” “You’re telling me she came by your quarters, and you only talked… then cried? You’re a manly man, my friend. Excessively masculine.” “You didn’t let me finish, you big oaf. After that, she came over and placed her hand on my head, and I pulled her close. You know that skirt she always wears… well.” I finished with a short chuckle, and laid back staring at the pyreflies as they danced into the night. Leif just stared at me in disbelief. He asked a hundred questions, none of which I cared to answer. Finally, all he said was, “…You lucky b*****d…” As I laid to sleep, long since tired from the day’s trip, the fire burned high into the night. I stared at this one pyrefly, and in my delusional state between consciousness and dreaming, I thought the miniature fire fairy whispered to me, but surely I was just imagining it. She flew up and away, twirling and pirouetting into the night, but her words echoed throughout the last vivid moments before sleep claimed me as her own. “All is not as it seems…” (14,095 words now)
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