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cherrilie__x
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 23, 2006 2:13 pm


Okay, I think I should explain this song. In my story Es (main charry) leaves his friend Aoshi, because Aoshi did something really bad and Es can't trust him anymore. Aoshi never had anyone to love before because his family was bad and he had little friends, so when Es deserted him Aoshi got really depressed. This is song is similar to how Aoshi feels. This is sung to Evanescence music, kind of like Breath No More. Btw, This IS NOT gay in anyway. Juts had to clear that up....>< This can be for many other circumstances too stare

I see your shadow in the hallway
I feel you heart beating beside me
I hear your voice in my dreams
So I wont believe
That your not here with me

Please
Would you stop haunting me
If your gone just leave
Can't you see you're killing me

If I beleive
Maybe you'll come back to me
If I scream
Scream your name
Will that make me anymore insane
Please

Please
Would you stop haunting me
If your gone just leave
Can't you see you're killing me

It's hard to get over what you hold so dear
Because I've never loved for so many yeears
And I can't walk away
From these memories that won't seem to fade
Please

Please
Would you stop haunting me
If your gone just leave
Can't you see you're killing me
PostPosted: Wed Oct 25, 2006 6:24 pm


That was really good. You have your story posted anywhere? Now you have me wanting to read it.

metocloud
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cherrilie__x
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PostPosted: Sat Oct 28, 2006 6:46 am


yes! As a matter of fact, it's the first post in my jounral. I am about to post chapter one. It's Christian but the God parts don't come in till the later chapters...or maybe........I could make it sooner...I have poor planning ><
PostPosted: Sun Oct 29, 2006 11:41 am


I've given up on planning my stories. All my perfect planning goes out the window whenever I start writing.

metocloud
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cherrilie__x
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Sun Nov 05, 2006 5:48 am


0_0 same here
PostPosted: Mon Nov 13, 2006 7:16 pm


Perfect example of this: I planned out my story for NaNoWriMo, decided the night before to change it around and then five days in, had a dream a ditched the first story for my current one. I'm keeping this one though!! No more changes until NaNoWriMo's over.

metocloud
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cherrilie__x
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Sun Dec 03, 2006 2:14 pm


XD I wont ask
But yeah...I hate it when that happenes
PostPosted: Mon Dec 04, 2006 4:33 am


Es-kun
XD I wont ask
But yeah...I hate it when that happenes
It makes the already challenging seem impossible.

metocloud
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still_tipsy_chan

PostPosted: Sun Dec 10, 2006 2:38 pm


i like it very songy-full and purty-full at the same time biggrin
PostPosted: Thu Dec 14, 2006 1:36 pm


yay

thank you

cherrilie__x
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prettykitty83105

PostPosted: Thu Feb 01, 2007 5:45 pm


metocloud
I've given up on planning my stories. All my perfect planning goes out the window whenever I start writing.


I know how you feel everytime that I start one i just stop out of nowhere
PostPosted: Fri Feb 02, 2007 1:42 pm


prettykitty83105
metocloud
I've given up on planning my stories. All my perfect planning goes out the window whenever I start writing.


I know how you feel everytime that I start one i just stop out of nowhere


yes. once the planning goes away, so does the story and then I get so fed up with myself because I don't finish is.

metocloud
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cherrilie__x
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Wed Mar 14, 2007 2:28 pm


metocloud
prettykitty83105
metocloud
I've given up on planning my stories. All my perfect planning goes out the window whenever I start writing.


I know how you feel everytime that I start one i just stop out of nowhere


yes. once the planning goes away, so does the story and then I get so fed up with myself because I don't finish is.


like omg, same here! Oh, that remindes me, Kore can make a good girly girl impression 3nodding

-cough- but that's not what I wanted to say. I was going to say, now that you now Aoshi and Es better you'd have a different understanding of this awesome poem
PostPosted: Wed Mar 14, 2007 8:00 pm


yes, yes I do.

metocloud
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cherrilie__x
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 7:30 pm


Oh jah

Jeremy needs to come on RuneScape so I can talk to him >.>
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