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i really hope this is in the right topic center or whatever... if its not.. im really sorry and ill move it right away! crying

this is a poem i wrote about izumi one time in my english class... i had just finished volume ...5 i think? for some reason the whole life story of izumi really touched me.. that one chaptor in volume 5

it touched me so that i was think about it all day during school the next day... and how i get my feelings out is by writting somethimes... its really the only thing that can truely get all my emotions out.. besides drawing

but anyway this is a peom about how izumi committed suicide on the train tracks... if you read that chaptor again im sure it would help you understand the meanings of my words.. look at the pictures carfully in that chaptor.. it will help




"Say My Name"
Chesa5


Lights blinking
Footsteps across
The look on your face
As if it was no loss

I feel tears streaming
And the train steeming
Just call me back
And you'll understand the meaning

Why do you stand there
With a smile on your face
When your son is before you
Witnessing such a disgrace

I scream and yell
But you don't say a word
I guess the screaming of the train
Is all that could be heard

Say you want me
Say you need me
Take me back
Love me, feed me

Spinnning spinning
My mind goes black
And i fly away slowly
Without looking back

You still stand there
Eyes so wide
A hats all thats left
And the tears that I cried

Lovely!
I luv it(so sad too) but rather touching.
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woot! 4laugh

thank you so much for the support!

gosh u guys r so nice!!!

i just read the last volume this weekend.. so im thinking about writting another one about what really happened from lios moms point of veiw

but seriously you're great... 4laugh

you're better than me mrgreen

eek wow.. im so proud to touch u so!

Oh my god! That seems to fit Izumi's feelings so well. I absolutely love it. It made me tear up a bit.