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 Posted: Sat Oct 21, 2006 9:10 pm
Alright, just so you know, my time, its 11:10 PM. And I'm gonna start writing in a second.
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Posted: Sat Oct 21, 2006 9:42 pm
I spit such ill s**t, its like powder slaps with coke
you're still a b***h, in short a jester, a joke
like that old school WB Frog, you've croked
Its a dead end street, you lose and you havn't even spoke
Get up and do your Dancing Routine*
My words slice you down like Guillatines
Leave you alive and kicking for a few extra seconds
Till Death and all its Maleficents Becons
Worse than the 13 Ghosts mixed with Merry Melodies Humor
Bursts, like when Cancer Overflows through every Tumor
Its a mix of Eli Roth with Bugs Bunny the way I strike
You're a mix of Merry Poppins and Richard Simons, ADD Dyke
Now Add up the messages, and you'll get my psyche
to some its an outcome unseen, like Irwin gettin' stung, Krikey
Now get back into your Lunch Box style, lil kiddy*
You were once hot, now its Brown Bags, similar to Diddy
but you're not Pro-Active, you're Pro-Lactive, c** in your rectum
I could hit with soft punches and still leave bruises with your weak septum
like you're defenseless, can't hold up to me running like a whitness
getting picked up on protection program, a sweet revenge sickness
I spit such fire I blow up the mic and my fingers, I'm ******** senseless
Yeah you got a Hard Knocks Life, you're living in a Dorm**
You're not even stereotyped, You'll become Crazy seeing the Norm
I can't hold true to myself, so I switch up my being
I got such mental wealth, I could help you with meaning
Since I hold bars against Criminals with multiple sentences
A whole new meaning to the Reaper being a Phantom Menace
You're too weak, you piss yourself at Goosebumps Movies
Hell, you're such a lil girl you got Nightmares from The Goonies.*
The Goonies - A movie...good movie btw.
* - still refering to the WB Frog, in his old school cartoon debues he acted dead as hell till it was only the one guy seeing him, and he sang and danced...usually was hid in like a lunch box and such.
** - He is living in a dorm right now.
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Posted: Sun Oct 22, 2006 12:17 pm
Call it a minstrel show. I'm bout to act a damn fool with it
Take my jabs, duplicate, hit you times two wit it
Spit it in your mouth no confusing it/ with a soft
Drink. Kinda like taking acid vats Fuze'ing it
With volcanic ash, claim a mask, chain of gas
Maim ya a**, then you would be going through your name at last
Paint it fast, slang a gash, supend like hanging bass
After fishing, Craft a mission. Execute and aim a blast
To his dome. Through his home. Roof is gone. Drop his top.
I am dope. He's a square. So you know I'll rock a block!
End(in) his mind. Watch him flop. Billboard. Watch him drop
I would cop his spot but wouldn't be number 1*
Blunder done. Fall avoided. Tape him up. All recorded.
Breakin news. But he isn't something that I'd call important.
Now I'll section him off. One hell of a plan
I can tell I need to hurry cause the smell of the man.
Catch the wave that wasn't dealt from his hand/Take him to the body
Shop but I think don't that you can sell him again
Let's look back at this "MC's" attack
No impact I'm mean I really couldn't tell it began
Sympathy for the retarded I ain't calling him wack
His flow slow like mistakenly putting gel in his pen
So I ain't gonna tell him again he wouldn't listen
Can't comprehend even the simplest patterns I'm dishing
Can't hear? Kick his nose and have his mini session crammed**
Cooked up his defeat now I call it a Def Jam
*Refering to Pharrell- In My Mind
**Kick (Hat, snare) Studio.. Booth...
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Posted: Mon Oct 23, 2006 8:30 am
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Posted: Thu Oct 26, 2006 1:38 am
First of all thank you both for being the only members to finish a ******** battle
MC- A lot of the bars were fillers, but overall good metaphors, something you've improved at for sure. I would've liked to see some more peorsonals but...eh
C Teezy- This is definitely one of your better written verse, except i think it would've been more fitting as a freeflow verse rather than a battle. It lacked punches, Multi's were exceptional, but Let them fit natural don't force them because you miss the punches.
Good battle, my vote goes to Chaos
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Posted: Thu Oct 26, 2006 9:53 am
Mad Lyrics First of all thank you both for being the only members to finish a ******** battle MC- A lot of the bars were fillers, but overall good metaphors, something you've improved at for sure. I would've liked to see some more peorsonals but...eh C Teezy- This is definitely one of your better written verse, except i think it would've been more fitting as a freeflow verse rather than a battle. It lacked punches, Multi's were exceptional, but Let them fit natural don't force them because you miss the punches. Good battle, my vote goes to Chaos You're very welcome.
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Posted: Wed Nov 01, 2006 4:04 pm
i gotta give this battle to malificent chaos mc just had more stronger punches teezy i liked your wordplay but your punches didn't hit hard enough and mc's metaphors tripled as multis excellent wordplay and hard punches teez i liked your verse but mc had a lil more umph in his verse
VOTE: Malificent Chaos
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Posted: Fri Nov 03, 2006 2:11 pm
ok obviously MC had more punches but C Teezy's punchlines flowed in better while MC seemed to be usin his favorite oneliners.and built the rap around them.next time try to keep it a little more organized MC. but all in all a great battle :Vote C Teezy
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Posted: Sat Nov 04, 2006 5:56 pm
Lil_Demyn ok obviously MC had more punches but C Teezy's punchlines flowed in better while MC seemed to be usin his favorite oneliners.and built the rap around them.next time try to keep it a little more organized MC. but all in all a great battle :Vote C Teezy
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Posted: Fri Nov 24, 2006 8:35 am
Yea to be quite frank with ya'll as much I dislike this cat Teezy had better punches and flow hands down.
VOTE: CTeezy
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Posted: Fri Nov 24, 2006 1:03 pm
Tec-Knowledge Yea to be quite frank with ya'll as much I dislike this cat Teezy had better punches and flow hands down. VOTE: CTeezy tec where ya been lets talk in the chat subforum
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Posted: Wed Nov 29, 2006 2:36 pm
well... i forgot about this.. but.. the score is 2-2
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Posted: Sun Feb 04, 2007 2:29 am
C Teezy well... i forgot about this.. but.. the score is 2-2 I had forgotten we had battled. Vote people!!!!
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Posted: Sun Mar 11, 2007 2:27 pm
Chaos had solid content, but Teezy definitely wins on all other dynamics including structure and flow. You can read through it once and grasp the sound of each line, plus it was a solid diss verse. Chaos' was great, as always, don't get me wrong, but punchlines alone won't always weigh better in a battle, especially on a keystyle medium.
Vote: C Teezy
s**t is legit, folks, don't fight me for it.
The Legendary Makairo has spoken!
...bitches.
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Posted: Mon Apr 30, 2007 11:44 am
E gad...
I'm in the lead by one eek
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