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 Posted: Tue Oct 17, 2006 7:09 pm
This is a bit of a thing that I'm just writing here in the text box of Gaia instead of tweaking and editting and re-arranging. Me in my deadliest as well as more pure form.
We'll see how it goes. And yes, I'm hybriding poetry and prose. Sleeping
I can't sleep again. You should be beside me, and yet so many miles away you lie in a similar position.
On our sides
we breath
in one another
I should be able to sleep and something tugs at my heart. I ache. I want to hold you in my arms.
I bury my nose
into your chest
and sigh
I can't have you in my arms yet. Time and space seperate us at this point.
You press a
kiss
to my forehead
I will be strong. For me. For you.
Finally
I sink into you
eyes flutter closed
I manage to fall asleep with my hand outstretched
waiting for yours
to slip into
my own.
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Posted: Tue Oct 17, 2006 10:55 pm
Wow. I love the way this was written, and I guess I kind of related to it. Love it. heart
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Posted: Tue Oct 17, 2006 11:13 pm
I'm gonna go broke... too many people are doing great stuff and getting cookies from me...
*robs a bank*
ok... keep writing. It's all good now. and for the record, no... I would NOT rob a bank... ever... because I'd probably end up stealing it from my own account.... sweatdrop
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Posted: Wed Oct 18, 2006 9:54 am
*steals poem*
I could totally fit this into my book.
...well, no i couldn't. Because no one ever finds out, and...
DAMMIT.
OKay, but I'm still stealing this. *hands over bank of cookies*
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Posted: Wed Oct 18, 2006 11:23 am
Wow. This actually may force me to say a word I despise, but is the only way to describe it... it's cute. *Throws up*
Haha, but really, it gave a sense of falling sleep next to someone you love and did that really well. Me likey.
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Posted: Wed Oct 18, 2006 1:58 pm
o_____o Wow kids.. I really just did this because I felt that I was nit-picking everyone and I wasn't posting anything.. Maybe I will have to start a running thing.
How 'bout this.. I'll put something up in the W-I-P forum and do a new on-the-spot writing every day and then you kids can check in. Vote yes or vote no.
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Posted: Wed Oct 18, 2006 2:37 pm
go for it, chica.
this is cute, but it makes me kinda sad. crying
Just because I am Kirby, and haven't quite found that strong, sensitive fluffy pink man yet.
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Posted: Wed Oct 18, 2006 4:28 pm
rofl Oh man Kirby... that gave me some funny mental images... and nothing I couldn't say on here but I'm lazy today.
I vote yes!
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Posted: Wed Oct 18, 2006 4:32 pm
hahaa.
I mean, what better man for me, right?
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Posted: Wed Oct 18, 2006 5:06 pm
Okay okay. You guys have to be brutally honest though. And I'm going all out, kids. No more fluffy sappy stuffs all the time. We're going from the crack to the scary to the violent and back again. We'll see. I'll go get a LINK up from here in a few minutes.
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Posted: Wed Oct 18, 2006 5:41 pm
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Posted: Wed Oct 18, 2006 5:46 pm
-laughs- I mean MY stuff, Kirbs. Nat'cho
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Posted: Thu Oct 19, 2006 8:04 am
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Posted: Thu Oct 19, 2006 7:10 pm
*bristles* did you just call me a nacho?
I am not a nacho! Nachos are artery-clogging, fat- and meat-covered pointless btis of chips that....
sound really, really good right now. Great, now I am forced to eat my cotton-candy flavored self.
.....
I'll just stick with root beer. :mrgeen: Vegetarians taste like spinach, after all.
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Posted: Thu Oct 19, 2006 9:44 pm
XDDD Oh dear, I near fell out of my seat. I KNEW when I wrote that you were going to think I said Nacho. -shakes head-
Kirby, kiddo, "nat'cho" translates to "not you". Nat = not. 'Cho = You.
I tend to slur my words.
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