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Posted: Sun Oct 08, 2006 2:27 pm
''What?" Uchiha Sasuke asked. A little boy tugged on his shirt and looked up at him with sad eyes.
"Have you seen my mommy?" asked the upset little boy. Sasuke had not. He however couldn't very well just LEAVE him there...could he?
"...No..." Sasuke said. Then with an exasperated sigh, Sasuke took the little boy by the hand and said, "Come on...Let's go find her..." After a half hour or so, they found her. It was a rainy day in Konohagakure so the boy's mother was frantically looking for him the whole time hoping he hadn't caught a cold in the rain. After their reunion, the mother and boy thanked Sasuke and the both went on their way. Sasuke was cold so he went to get a cup of hot cocoa.
"How may I help you sir?" asked a perky waitress as the cafe. As he ordered his cocoa, he noticed the waitress studying his face...He figured she was trying to place who he was.
"Uchiha Sasuke..." he said.
"I knew it! You were all over the news!" Then she remembered the headlines..."Uchiha clan massacred! Only Itachi and Sasuke Uchiha survived." "Oh...I-I'm so sorry. I-"
"That's all right..." Sasuke said..This sort of thing happened to him a lot. The waitress soon returned with his cocoa and he sipped it quietly. Then another waitress approached him. This one wasn't as bubbly and outgoing as the other, however. She seemed shy and nervous...Was she blushing, Sasuke wondered.
"Umm...Uchiha-san...I was wondering if...Well, would you go out with me sometime?" She asked now redder than ever.
"Sorry...but no, you're not my type." He said. That was very true...NO girl was Sasuke's type, he hadn't told many people but he was gay.
"Oh..." She said, the disappointment in her voice was evident. "Well, umm...Enjoy you hot chocolate then." she said as she began to walk away. Sasuke apologized and said goodbye to her as he paid the other waitress and left. He began to walk home and continued to sip his cocoa. It was very cold and rainy today. If it were a few degrees colder it would have been snowing! He continued to walk home when he bumped into someone and spilled his cocoa all over him.
"Aah!" Said the blonde boy. Sasuke looked up at him and saw the most beautiful boy he'd ever laid eyes on...Blonde hair, icy blue eyes, a great body too. Not ripped but not chubby either. He had these weird markings on his cheeks like whiskers...But somehow that made him cuter.
"Oh, I'm sorry! I should have watched where I was going." He said to the blonde shinobi as he wiped off his jacket.
"Yeah, you should have." Said the blonde.
"Umm, I'm Uchiha Sasuke, who are you?" he asked.
"Uzumaki Naruto...Look, Sorry I snapped at you...I have a tendency of doing that." He said. Then he got a good look at Sasuke. Those eyes, that hair, the creamy, pale complexion...He was beautiful, thought Naruto. Then Sasuke looked up At Naruto and their eyes met. It was magical. Then Sasuke looked away and hid behind his bangs as he blushed a little.
"Umm, Would you like to come back to my house and dry your clothes off, you might catch a cold in this weather." Sasuke said not making eye contact.
"Yeah...Thanks, Sasuke." Naruto said. Sasuke took his hand and looked at Naruto questioningly as if to ask if it was all right. Naruto just looked at him and Sasuke took it as a yes. They went back to Sasuke's place and Sasuke waited in the living room as Naruto changed. Naruto looked around Sasuke's room a bit. He took his clothes off. Geez, what a mess, it soaked his shirt, pants and underwear. But just before he could put fresh clothes on...
There was a noise at the window.
He gulped. As if he weren’t nervous enough! He moved towards the window slowly and opened the drapes and saw...
"ITACHI!!!" Naruto yelled. Upon hearing this Sasuke barged in to see what had happened. It turns out Naruto had just seen Sasuke's training dummy. He dressed it up as Itachi for kunai practice. Naruto just stood there naked, staring at Sasuke embarrassed. Sasuke was looking at Naruto like a deer caught in the headlights. He was so embarrassed and turned on all at once. Naruto was frozen. He just ran and grabbed a towel from on top of Sasuke's dresser. Sasuke didn't say anything but he noticed a bulge coming out from the towel...
Sasuke just couldn’t resist any longer…
He walked closer to Naruto, looking him in the eye. Naruto just looked longingly back at him. Even though they had only met that afternoon it was as if they had both known each other forever and had been waiting for this for a lifetime. Sasuke just put his hands on Naruto’s chest. He could feel Naruto’s heart beating faster and faster, much like his own. They both looked into each other’s eyes, and Sasuke leaned in closer and Naruto gently fell backwards onto Sasuke’s bed. Sasuke brushed his lips against Naruto’s. Then he did it with more force and more still until they were both making out. Each of them had beads of sweat trickling off them from the heat of the moment alone.
Sasuke couldn’t believe it.
He had such a cute boy in his bed, naked, and making out with him no less! He was on cloud nine. He felt Naruto pulling his shirt off but he didn’t fight it. Naruto then began to unzip Sasuke’s pants when all of a sudden, the doorbell rang. “Damn it.” Sasuke said to himself on his way to the door. “This had better be Dire.”
“Hi Sasuke, What’s up? I brought scrabble!” Inuzuka Kiba said, inviting himself in. Kiba was the only person Sasuke had told that he was gay. Kiba was pretty much Sasuke’s best friend.
“Let me get this straight…” Sasuke began, trying to keep his composure. “You came over here to play SCRABBLE?!”
“Yeah, why?” Kiba asked confusedly. Akamaru barked. “WHAT?” Kiba asked Akamaru. Sasuke never quite understood how Kiba could understand Akamaru but he listened anyway.
“Sasuke, you have a guy back there?!” Kiba asked shocked.
“Yes, now if you don’t mind I kind of have something more important to do than play scrabble. No offense Kiba.” Sasuke said.
“No problem…Go get `em tiger!” Kiba said on his way out. Sasuke just rolled his eyes and headed back to his room. When he got there Naruto was gone and there was a note on his bed.
“Sasuke, Believe me when I say I’m sorry but I had to leave. I really want to see you again. Perhaps this Saturday at 6:00? I’ll meet you at that bench in the park where we met today. Bye, Naruto.”
Sasuke was sad that Naruto had left but happy that he had a date with him for that Saturday. To Sasuke…It was a good day.
To Be Continued….
P.s. yes, I did write this. How is it? Any ideas? do you like it? tell me! ninja
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Posted: Sun Oct 08, 2006 6:04 pm
This should be in the fan corner -.-
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Posted: Sun Oct 08, 2006 6:46 pm
Oh geez...I'm sorry...but, umm, how do I move it there? sweatdrop I'll move it as soon as someone tells me how.. sweatdrop
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Posted: Sun Oct 08, 2006 7:31 pm
The mods are the ones that move it, so don't worry about it. Just remember it for next time. ^^
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Posted: Sun Oct 08, 2006 7:33 pm
I will LOOSEY! Sorry again...Ummm, have either of you read it now that it's in the proper place?
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Posted: Mon Oct 09, 2006 2:46 pm
This is, like, GREAT!! Put it on Fan Fiction, then continue it! Don't forget to send Darkness a link!
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Posted: Mon Oct 09, 2006 3:16 pm
[~Heart~Of~Darkness~] This is, like, GREAT!! Put it on Fan Fiction, then continue it! Don't forget to send Darkness a link! Well, thanks to King_Cicero_IV I have a new Idea! I'll post it on gaia soon and when the entire story is done I'll post it on fanfiction...I just wanted my fellow Yaoi fans's opinions first...and P.S...I know the whole kiba and sasuke friendship thing is really ooc but oh well...
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Posted: Tue Oct 10, 2006 3:35 pm
OOOMG!!! That was so goooooooooooood!!! I loved it!!!! Continue!!!!! PLEASE!! I BEGG YOU!! Okay im done freaking out. You did a good job. Your a good writer.
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Posted: Thu Oct 12, 2006 11:12 pm
I don't mean to criticize you, but in general.....
It seems the whole cold weather; rainy or snowy, seems to be used a lot lately. I think it's a bit too cliche. I've read about three in this forum alone.
Uh... a little OOC but that's okay.... And.... they were kind of.... in a fast relationship... sweatdrop I mean..... if you want it that way, that's fine. Just stating things.
It's a great fanfic though. biggrin
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Posted: Sat Oct 14, 2006 7:10 pm
Yeah, I haven't written in a while so I had all those ideas locked up in my tiny mind so as soon as I got a chance BOOM! There they were...This is why I should never take long brakes from writing...
And to those who reallly liked it a lot...
I AM SO SORRY! THE COMPUTR AT MY HOUSE WILL NOT GO ON THE INTERNET SO I will not be able to post more for a little while! I sincerely apologize... crying
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Posted: Sat Oct 21, 2006 6:22 pm
OMG, I gt horny off tha because I could intensely imagine it in my head with all the details. Please, continue A.S.A.P.
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Posted: Sat Oct 28, 2006 8:50 pm
happy turkey jr....when i read your post i was singing along with a song i was listening to and i cracked up...my fic made you horny...lol...and i am almost done w/ the next chappie! YAAAAAAAYY!! blaugh
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Posted: Fri Nov 03, 2006 5:54 pm
so damned hot. CONTINUE IT! and when you do pm it to me please! thank you thank you.
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Posted: Sat Nov 04, 2006 4:39 pm
Hopelessly_Obsessed happy turkey jr....when i read your post i was singing along with a song i was listening to and i cracked up...my fic made you horny...lol...and i am almost done w/ the next chappie! YAAAAAAAYY!! blaugh XD Thanks, but you can call me T.J.
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Posted: Mon Nov 06, 2006 6:04 pm
Teh Happy Turkey Jr pretty much said what I was going to say....pm me when you get more parts out plz!
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