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 Posted: Tue Oct 03, 2006 12:55 pm
Fly upon your black wings
And look for better days
Don't allow your thoughts
to encage you any more
Crawl upon your hands and knees
Looking for a brighter time
But you're a prisoner in your own mind
And no one's there to save you
It's time you came to see the truth
And allowed your heart to speak its mind
Maybe then you'll finally see
You were never so alone
And maybe then you'll finally see
That brighter world for you and me
Let your words unleash themselves
Maybe we can be free
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Posted: Sat Oct 14, 2006 4:17 pm
asfkjasd
I loff you. So much. This is great!
Two mistakes only: But your a prisoner in your own mind
And no ones there to save you
"your" to "you're" and "no ones" to "no one's"
Elsewise, perfect and lovely! Another wonderful poem by the wonderful, the amazing, the ever-worthy-of-my-flattering, Deadside Dreams!
Gawd, I'm so melodramatic sometimes. Someone stop me.
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Posted: Sat Oct 14, 2006 7:25 pm
Thanks for pointing that out. Fixed 'em.
I'm glad you like my work. ^^
If you like, I could give you the link to my DeviantART page. I've got some 50-odd pieces up there.
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Posted: Fri Oct 20, 2006 12:25 pm
oooh, that would be just lovely. Please do?
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