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 Posted: Wed Sep 27, 2006 3:21 pm
Why did this happen?
Why me?
Why can't I just wake up from this life?
This dream has become a nightmare.
Does this story have an ending?
With a blood stained shirt I'm screaming,
Why can't I just wake up from this life?
I wish I were dreaming.
Look what's happened.
Look what I've done.
And now you're bleeding.
And I'm to blame.
Let's walk together 'til this ends.
My blood stained shirt and distorted smile.
We're dying from love and you're bleeding
This is all that I've got and I've given it all to you...
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Posted: Fri Sep 29, 2006 6:59 am
Honestly? I don't really care to read it, but I did anyway...
Not bad..
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Posted: Sun Oct 01, 2006 2:55 pm
walk with my pain
soaked in the rain
scream till u die
blood soaked shirt heavy with my tears
hold me now to die with my fears
poems r awsome!
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Posted: Sun Oct 01, 2006 6:09 pm
To be honest?
It sounds typical.
lil_emo_girl_13- Your poem is worse than the OP's. Really, it doesn't even seem like you're trying.
Good poetry is from the heart.
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Posted: Sun Oct 01, 2006 7:05 pm
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Posted: Mon Oct 02, 2006 2:21 am
I second the agreeing with Isel motion.
Seems like every man and his dog writes forced regurgitation nowdays.
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Posted: Mon Oct 02, 2006 3:55 am
xLIZA I second the agreeing with Isel motion.
Seems like every man and his dog writes forced regurgitation nowdays.
BARK BARK HOWL
I CUT MYSELF ALL DAY AND BLEED FOR YOU
WHINE WHINE WHIMPER
~My Dog
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Posted: Mon Oct 02, 2006 5:39 am
I think we can all agree, these aren't gonna be winning no litterary prizes anytime soon....
We should have a bad poetry thread.
Anyway, heres my addition to the bad poetry fest.
There once was a man named Ray
Who fashioned a c**t out of clay
But the heat of his p***k
Turned the clay into brick
And tore all his foreskin away
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Posted: Mon Oct 02, 2006 3:16 pm
Rellik San I think we can all agree, these aren't gonna be winning no litterary prizes anytime soon.... We should have a bad poetry thread. Anyway, heres my addition to the bad poetry fest. There once was a man named Ray Who fashioned a c**t out of clay But the heat of his p***k Turned the clay into brick And tore all his foreskin away
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Posted: Mon Oct 02, 2006 6:20 pm
Isel Rellik San I think we can all agree, these aren't gonna be winning no litterary prizes anytime soon.... We should have a bad poetry thread. Anyway, heres my addition to the bad poetry fest. There once was a man named Ray Who fashioned a c**t out of clay But the heat of his p***k Turned the clay into brick And tore all his foreskin away I think I know the one you mean lol.
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Posted: Wed Oct 04, 2006 8:27 pm
lil_emo_girl_13 walk with my pain soaked in the rain scream till u die blood soaked shirt heavy with my tears hold me now to die with my fears poems r awsome!
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Posted: Wed Oct 04, 2006 8:29 pm
Isel xLIZA I second the agreeing with Isel motion.
Seems like every man and his dog writes forced regurgitation nowdays.
BARK BARK HOWL
I CUT MYSELF ALL DAY AND BLEED FOR YOU
WHINE WHINE WHIMPER
~My DogI love you.
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Posted: Thu Oct 05, 2006 4:13 am
Vlair Nitefell Isel xLIZA I second the agreeing with Isel motion.
Seems like every man and his dog writes forced regurgitation nowdays.
BARK BARK HOWL
I CUT MYSELF ALL DAY AND BLEED FOR YOU
WHINE WHINE WHIMPER
~My DogI love you.
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Posted: Thu Oct 05, 2006 3:33 pm
Isel Vlair Nitefell Isel xLIZA I second the agreeing with Isel motion.
Seems like every man and his dog writes forced regurgitation nowdays.
BARK BARK HOWL
I CUT MYSELF ALL DAY AND BLEED FOR YOU
WHINE WHINE WHIMPER
~My DogI love you. If I recall wasn't the first some rough trick named Jim, who you met when he was on probation?
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Posted: Thu Oct 05, 2006 5:38 pm
Rellik San Isel Vlair Nitefell Isel xLIZA I second the agreeing with Isel motion.
Seems like every man and his dog writes forced regurgitation nowdays.
BARK BARK HOWL
I CUT MYSELF ALL DAY AND BLEED FOR YOU
WHINE WHINE WHIMPER
~My DogI love you. If I recall wasn't the first some rough trick named Jim, who you met when he was on probation?
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